thebrowncoat Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 New thread to decrease load times. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 not very good at all, just wanted to be the first to post ! : look how far we've come now this is where it ends; overpowered by perfection but we'll be fine. we are the mould you fit in, i'll take back what i'm owed and i'll move on, i'll walk on by, i'll break you right down. that hit, that hit came so fast, that hit, that hit will be your last, right on cue; i'll never forget you. this road goes on with no signs, this path i'm on is not mine, but it's designed to break you down. i'll hit, i'll hit so fast, this goodbye won't be our last, and i'll break you right down, right down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyute_shana Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 nice one jorgi! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 And here I thought Mr. browncoat would do one Edit: I Can Say I have no one And I thought I was happy Seems I'm going to give in after all This can't be fun I have no one I've never had a friend the last I recall I won't know why I wear a smile Since the last time I was happy I can say it's been awhile Why Did You Leave Now You're Long Gone The Independent Self Of Me Was All I Counted On The Funny Thing Is I'm Sorry I'll feed my pain Over and over again It seems that, That's what I want I won't need the rain And I won't need a friend That idea only comes to me to taunt I won't know how To make your love mine The last time I was here I can say I thought I was fine Why Did You Leave What Have I Learned? The Sympathetic Better Me Is This What I've Earned The Funny Thing Is Now I Know I Was Never Sorry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Very short poem. I'm done with this, I'm done with you, you hit me where it hurts, the disease is contagious, Forget this! I quit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_caught_myself Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Very short poem. I'm done with this, I'm done with you, you hit me where it hurts, the disease is contagious, Forget this! I quit! I like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 I like it Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 19, 2009 Report Share Posted January 19, 2009 Summers Gone The girl of summer Summer was all for her She was my night time dream or so it would seem I can say I've seen her day I can say she went away I can say my heart was hers I can say it was for her to play Summer Dreams And Everything Those Were You Or So It Seems You Were All Mine Just As I Was All Yours But Now I'm Back Behind Saying You Used To Be Mine Your care so old and young I've never had so much fun In your bright face I found The dreams that never won After so many battles You finally stopped just to submit Don't know you know They'll be there forever Now you'll never ever forget My Summer Dreams Are A Used To Be That Is You Yes That's What It Seems I Was Hers, For That I'm Sure Now I'm Thought To Be Insane Just Like Her (This is pretty much "I Can Say" version two) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 all of this is great, you guys 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted January 20, 2009 Report Share Posted January 20, 2009 Nothing Is Better Than Math Class Crossing my fingers And hoping that this will never end Hoping for everything I want I miss you now that it’s over And I can’t wait to see you today And though you are pushing away I keep on wanting you [chorus] With every move I make I can never take this heart and push it upon you Never admit to you I could never admit to you Just exactly how I feel That time of day Is all I wait for Just wanting to speak, to you What a rush What a joy It’s just only to get my hopes up [chorus] One step and I’m afraid Covering my face I try to fix myself If only I could know you But I wait for the day I still stay afraid What can I say? Are you what I want? What I need? [chorus] My heart beats much faster My movements become slower My head pounds My mouth drops And I am struck in your beauty For once in my life I feel right Only when it’s you Ack, I've a huge writer's block, so this is nothing great... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 This is a bunch of unfinished fragments to songs I never finished, or will never finish. So it may sound a bit bipolar. Fitting all the right pieces together Missing every single memory of you Just wishing you were still here To lighten up my day Another day, another night Of me wishing you away But you are gone and I feel this under coming distress I wished you were here And I wished you were gone Is there anything I can do to make things right? Is there anything I can do to make things better? In my life? Or can I forget every single bit of determination Of things that I cannot say Open your heart No more burdens to cross out my insides Is it only me alone? Nothing can cure this disease All the things I didn’t say wont go away Forget it in the end Reaching out for you You hold back as if you didn’t want to be saved Get away, as you run away If you cant stand me then why bother? Could this be it, or am I falling? My respiration could be, due to lack of communication Is this what you wanted to happen? I’m guessing not Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowCookie-x Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 i had an emotional momment. so i wrote a short thing. i don't really know what to call it. but it's true. What happens: When your is sinking so far under. And you can't stop yourself from drowning You try to find help them through the pain But all it seems to go to waste as you watch yourself fade watch yourself fade watch yourself fade i just want to hold on to you as letting go would surely mean ending my past, present and future i've never felt so afraid never so afraid never so afraid let me be free of this pain that i see and i'm drowning going under you just stand and watch stand and watch stand and watch. i love you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 i'll give up eating and take up smoking and learn to hate the life i forgot i'm living i swear i got soul, but i gave up breathing. close the door, i keep on leaving, wide open the same way i came in i swear i've got soul but i gave up believing. i heard what you said but not the meaning close your eyes and start explaining please ? i'm pleading, explain the love i keep on, keep on bleeding i swear i got soul but i gave up freedom i swear i got soul but i gave up feeling. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 i'll give up eating and take up smokingand learn to hate the life i forgot i'm living i swear i got soul, but i gave up breathing. close the door, i keep on leaving, wide open the same way i came in i swear i've got soul but i gave up believing. i heard what you said but not the meaning close your eyes and start explaining please ? i'm pleading, explain the love i keep on, keep on bleeding i swear i got soul but i gave up freedom i swear i got soul but i gave up feeling. I LOVE THIS. This time I'm serious, The way I was thinking of my new one this one kinda of gave it this melody. I love the "eeding" things to it. It's great Admit it, You Did It You know what they'll do Will only ever make or break us Will we give them our pride Have we lied, When we let them take us What were our truths And was it ever right? Are we afraid of confusion So much, That we lived in the night? The darkness of suspense I'll be too scared to admit it When did this fallacy start Who thought of this, And who did it? Listen to the sounds As they find other ways to think for you Play with your blame Find the same eyes, Deep in despise Play with the fault Like it's your game Everything will always stay the same Is this who I love The one who took my vow The one whose push grew to a shove? Your strong love Turned into a strong hate Isn't this your fashion? I've made a wrong move I'll finally admit it You've made the right move With your hateful reaction Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Jorgi, that was amazing and...ehm.. Ernie, I kinda stole one of those unfinished fragments of songs, hope you don't mind, I was inspired by it.. I borrowed this one: I wished you were here And I wished you were gone soo, this is what I came up with.. i'm talking to the image of my own reflection mirror, mirror on the wall who was it that i wanted to hold hold in my arms feeling the electric love i wished you were here and i wished you were gone so instead of having the cookie it ate itself so why did i blow it feeling so unsure memories of a person that i used to know before dear reflection of myself did i let myself drown or did i let the world drown with me stuck in the empty nothingness left Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 not very good at all, just wanted to be the first to post ! : look how far we've come now this is where it ends; overpowered by perfection but we'll be fine. we are the mould you fit in, i'll take back what i'm owed and i'll move on, i'll walk on by, i'll break you right down. that hit, that hit came so fast, that hit, that hit will be your last, right on cue; i'll never forget you. this road goes on with no signs, this path i'm on is not mine, but it's designed to break you down. i'll hit, i'll hit so fast, this goodbye won't be our last, and i'll break you right down, right down. i reallly like it . awesome jorgi (: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 ^Jorgi is the master of this thread. We others are like students. Jorgi owns us all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 I Have Cobra Pride: I have Cobra pride, Cobra Starship on the sly. Kiss my sass and Guilty pleasure, it makes me dance while under pressure. When they play music it's a hit, I love every second of it. Fangs Up high, and Starship low, I love you Cobra Starship, GO! GO! GO! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 30, 2009 Report Share Posted January 30, 2009 Did this right after I woke up when I forgot to set up my curtains. The sun awoke me It told me of what to do It spoke to me with it's glare Way up there How could it be me and you The sun crept into my room And kissed my face The understanding flash It falls so fast The sun in my place Blue skies confusion flies Up around all around the stars We'll give it what we have Even life, Anything that won't be ours Love, Above, I've had enough Of what and where and why We could never build this place Of ground and water and sky Take with you lies, Taught all over Everything fantasy learned Teach death, Teach life Teach anything I think is absurd We're the children of the sun Making right of wrong with fun We're the children that can't be won The sun is done so here's the moon Eyes, Despise all lost in skies We're taught to walk so soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 APATHETIC Look... Brown eyes bloodshot and glazed. She's been crying. Silver streaks still stain her face. Dried evidence of salene pain. Do you see it? Can you feel the salt burning behind her lids? Look... Soft lips half parted in a wordless plea. She's been shouting. Her anguished cries still echo in her soul. Even when her very voice goes silent. Do you hear it? Can you feel the skin inside her throat grow raw? Look... Bloodied hands extended out. She's been reaching. Trying to touch what she can't see. And searching for what she can't scream. Do you like it? Can you bear to see her crawling blindly in the dark? Will you help her up? Will you wipe her eyes and clean her wounds? Will you save her? Look... Brown eyes staring out unseeingly. She's been broken. Her soft lips cease to speak. Her hurt hands no longer reach. Did you want this? Could you have stopped it if you tried? If you had picked her up. If you had dried her eyes and healed her wounds. You could have saved her. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylet Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Black oceans will bring pain And the angry tide We tell time of my kind The true dreamers I will lead who ever Who ever wishes to follow I'll lead through a sea of uncertainty So we all will achieve our dreams I know others have tried before But I know what lies beyond that door A place were we can live free And just live to dream I will lead who ever Who ever wishes to follow I'll open doors That were closed before We were born to succeed And not live cowering in fear We were born to succeed And free our dreams 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Hey that's kinda cool ^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylet Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Thank you i have alot of others on the website in my sig Oh My mind it kills itself everyday So I can't take another crying No please not another dieing Oh let my troubles be my troubles Let me search through the rubble For fragments of my mind But theres some I'll never find But I'll search forever Until things get better I'll search forever I just pray things get better Oh let my troubles be my troubles Let me search trough the rubble For fragments of my mind But theres some I'll find They say everything takes time But this has taken to long But I'm still searching When I know there gone Oh let my troubles be my troubles Let me search trough the rubble But Im afraid this isn't a way to live People have taken alot and I've nothing left to give Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 I LOVE THIS. This time I'm serious, The way I was thinking of my new one this one kinda of gave it this melody. I love the "eeding" things to it. It's great Jorgi, that was amazing [/b][/i] i reallly like it . awesome jorgi (: ^Jorgi is the master of this thread. We others are like students. Jorgi owns us all. you guys make me happy inside.<3 am actually going through epic writer's block. i'm fighting through to pretty shocking results, but fighting nontheless: draw hearts and stars up and down our arms, 'cause the real ones are far too high for us to reach. trace those lips with fingertips; it's just too late to leave. when the rain gets loud enough, we'll stand and scream our lungs out. we'll stand and scream our lives out, out loud so they'll know we lived (at least once, if not forever) stand on the edge of rooftops, closer to the sky, that way, you said, deny the way we fall that way, we're broken but we're still beautiful alone but we're still usefull. when you figure this out, let me know when you figure me out, let me go because we're broken but we're still beautiful we're alive but we can still lose it all just let me know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexyo Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 jorgi....like that was pretty much a mishmash of lostprophets lyrics.......... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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