Just read through the majority of this thread and wanted to tell everyone who posted something that it's excellent. I thought everything I read was very creative and unique. Thanks for the good reading!
I write a little bit myself and would appreciate some feedback, thanks guys! 8D
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This is about a suicide
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Its unreal
The pain I feel
No where to turn
For this answer I burn
What brought you to this
You've made my life amiss
Did you only think of yourself
What about everyone else
This, I can not bear
Do you even care
Your gone now
I still don't understand how
The damage is done
But it feels like it has just begun
I wish I could erase
But instead I must embrace
Its real
The pain I feel
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Sitting in St. Jude's, waiting to have blood taken, lol.
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Sitting alone, alone, so alone
With a quiet mind
But then I fall into the unknown
This pounding makes me blind
I'm screaming from inside
I can't figure out why
I feel I have to hide
All I want to do is cry
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Clock ticking
Fan spinning
Mind troubled
Life crumbled
Certainty gone
Confusion dawns
Answers dead
Heart shred
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Looking at the sky
Letting out a long sigh
Lying so still
Such a thrill
Whole body in sync
Feel my chest sink
Then rise up again
And down falls the rain
Drops slowly streaming down my cheek
The grass so sleek
Clothes clinging to my skin
Close my eyes and spin
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Do you ever see something in someone
And it just shines like the sun
You don't know what's there
And you can't help but stare
As if they are holding onto something swell
Like their own personal wishing well
With one smile
They make everything feel worthwhile
I look at you
And it's true
Your one of them
Like a gem
In you, I see so many things
And I imagine you with wings
Because I know you can fly
So high into the sky