ParamoreTotallyRules Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Hey eveybody, after my friend Kayla aka watchthesky, told me my song I wrote was really good I decided to share it with you. And I would personally like to say: Kayla, thank you so much. I really didn't think this was good at all. Thank you. I didn't believe it was that good but she says it is, what do you think? P.S. I hope I'm not sounding snotty or rude right now. WHAT'S GOING ON? I remember the queen, she looked down on me I cried in her arms, don't remember why The king he died The queen and I cried Though I don't know why I had a heart, I felt it beating Now all I see is stillness in me What's going on? What's going on? I saw the light, I saw it shining But all the light has gone straight through me What's going on? What's going on? Can you help me? Can't you see me? My prince, he came to save me (I think he did) But then I lost him to an evil bid His face is in my worst of dreams His voice is now all but screams But he's not gone No, he's not gone The dragon breathed her fire on me And it healed my broken heart She took me in, she loved me dearly But then one day she tried to kill me I had a heart, I felt it beating Now all I see is stillness in me What's going on? What's going on? I saw the light, I saw it shining But all the light has gone straight through me What's going on? What's going on? Can you help me?Can't you see me? I had a heart, I felt it beating Now all I see is stillness in me What's going on?What's going on? What's going on? What's going on? I had a heart, I felt it beating Now all I see is stillness in me What's going on? What's going on? I saw the light, I saw it shining But all the light has gone straight through me What's going on? What's going on? Can you help me?Can you save me? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caitlyn Posted November 19, 2013 Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 I really like it! And you don't sound rude! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreTotallyRules Posted November 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 Thanks! I'm better at writing songs than I am at singing them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreFreak2468 Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 ^ OMG. Stop saying that or I will come to your house and make you like your singing. I know what street you live on. (This is an inside joke between Hayley and I. Don't worry, I'm not crazy.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreTotallyRules Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 I WROTE THIS WHEN I FIRST JOINED!!!! IT WAS BEFORE YOU SAID ANYTHING AND BEFORE I KNEW YOU!!!! LOL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreFreak2468 Posted December 5, 2013 Report Share Posted December 5, 2013 ^ UMMMMMMMM Hayley you said that on November 18th. We were BEST FRIENDS by then. Wait, no we had just met then. Holy crap. It feels like we have been friends for longer than this. WOW. :) :) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreTotallyRules Posted December 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2013 ^ I KNOW!!! I FEEL LIKE WE MET LIKE THREE YEARS AGO. :D :D 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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