The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[Natasha]

thank you so much! and by the way, it's not bad.

i really love it. =D

[justSMILE♥]

aw thanks. i kinda wrote it after i read it at 12 at night in my bed hahahah.

 

 

 

EDIT: that sounded creepy o.0

[Guest Arya]

oh my gosh. i love you guys sooo much. lol.

arya do you mind if i use the ... i guess you can call it "editting" you did to my song? haha.

and if i ever make it big i will be sure to give you guys credit. lol.

 

wow that was really sad. yet amazing.

 

Sure you can! I love you toooo, haha.

 

Yeah, it's talking about major physical and emotional abuse, haha. Thank you!

[Natasha]

thanks arya! you rule! XD

[MarcLovesYou]

Uhm. I'll just post a collection of poems and songs.

 

 

Poems

 

I Miss You Quite Terribly

 

Sweet bitterness blue..

 

Is all that I can see on your face...dripping down.

 

They scatter and go askew, falling to the ground.

 

If I could, you know I would.

 

Wipe those tears, share them and drown our fears.

 

Lets come close together.

 

Cheeks brush, kisses touch.

 

Hold you here, in my arms.

 

Let our hearts combine.

 

Has our love entwines.

 

Yet you choose them over me.

 

Leaving me behind for them.

 

I'm standing here last in the line.

 

Only trying to get a ticket to your love.

 

But the sad thing is, your leaving me behind.

 

So, I wait, slowly and sit and mope.

 

Waiting for that next train of love to come around.

 

Hoping to get a second chance to hop on with you.

 

Yet it never comes, it seems your rails are gone and my chances are gone.

 

Maybe I should've went for you and stop wasting time.

 

Who should've worried bout that fucking line?

 

Never again, will this bitterness end.

 

My heart is stuck with hate.

 

The anger is like glue and won't leave.

 

No matter how hard my love tries to scrape it off.

 

This will be the last time, I will fall for this joke again.

 

Oh it was love.

 

A deady trap from below and above.

 

 

 

 

~~~

 

 

 

 

Ready To Fall

 

Hold on, slow down.

 

Has we kiss this whole world twirls around.

 

So lets us dive in this ground and let love surround.

 

I'm standing on the rooftop ready to fall.

 

Will you catch me?

 

One moment i'm holding your hand.

 

Then the next we're both trying to stand.

 

I'm just wishing that life would stop when your here.

 

Your heart, arms and lips are my military gear.

 

When I have those, theres nothing to fear.

 

Let me drown your sorrows.

 

Life will go on, has our hearts break.

 

Time rolls on, yesterday my heart ached.

 

Why weren't you there to kiss me?

 

Am I invisible or just not being seen by you?

 

Don't leave me babe, I don't wanna be alone.

 

Memories are bitter sweet.

 

Im sitting here waiting by this fucking phone.

 

Been here for almost a million years.

 

Or atleast thats how it feels without you.

 

Now do I look for you, or do I sit in bitterness blue?

 

We laugh, we cry, we die.

 

All around me I see your face.

 

Yet where are you, but not in my arms.

 

Your true home, your true place.

 

Tears swell my eyes, I hide my head in sorrow.

 

No tommorow..no tommorow..

 

The dreams in which i'm with you...Are the best i've ever had.

 

I finally get a call, but its not you.

 

Its only your brother, whose crying in hysterical ways.

 

He tells me your days are over, and your gone.

 

I was wrong along, you had overdosed..

 

But the worse part love..was.

 

I had given you the money..I didn't know what you were doing.

 

I only wanted you to marry me...

 

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hes makes me so happy.

Shes totally mine.

Shes totally fine.

Shes divine.

I love it when we're together, wasting the time.

 

My heart was a battlefield.

She just happened to be one the conquer it.

She promises to marry me.

I know we both love eachother, everyone can truly see.

We are meant to be.

 

I don't know anymore, if there's a better place to be.

The best place i've been, is anywhere with her.

It feels so good..so good, to be in her arms.

Theres a million other girls, but all I ever want is her.

I know this for sure.

 

It's never my attention to brag, but you have to when you have a beautiful girlfriend and not a trashy hag.

When every wall starts to close in on me.

Ready to keep me safe, keep me in a better place and make this life worth living another pace.

She could break a heart with a glare.

Then put it back together with one stare, then always, she'll be here, in my arms.

Lies spread about her, but in truth, she's something better than you, wishing you could be here.

 

Would be wishing to be a goddess.

Which fortunately, is only her role, in my eyes.

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Job

 

I got told, I should get a job.

It shocked me, blank my mind away.

I felt has if I weren't gonna stay, in my home.

I'll be damned, if I start working has a cash register alone.

 

I told the person that told me to get a job, that'd i'd rather get rob.

To lose my happiness, is to get robbed of joy, and that's just what a job will do to me.

Fuck that, right now i'll piss and pee on this idea and go drink.

I don't need a shrink, I can think clear, I can come up with a great idea in a sudden blink.

I can make you tremble with a wink.

 

But not out of fear.

 

So here I am, working a job.

But i'm not exactly gonna get robbed.

I write, shit like this and it turns to fire then to gold.

Never will I stop, unless my babeh tell's me, then i'll be told.

Either way, we'll be rolling in gold and you'll be rolling in bread full of mold.

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Broken Rose

They promised their hearts..

They let loose all their love..

Let it reign to the heavens above..

Soared into arms of others, like a white dove.

 

Then were tossed away..

Sent shattering down towards the pitless ground..

Sent to sleep..sent to be left broken among their own.

Never again will they see the true light..

 

Blood stains their souls..

Taints them with agony..

Threatens them with violence..

Breeds barbaric senses into their minds..

 

Roses shall bless them however..

One last time..

A broken soul..a broken heart..a broken goal..

Blood shall seal this last kiss...

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You Wanna mess With Us?

 

Hate You

Drop Dead

I hope your bled dry

Nothing left in your skin.

 

Ripped from peice to peice.

Torn from heart to heart.

Slayed from the start.

I never wanna see your face again.

You've been playing me all along.

 

Now I wrote this bloody fucking song.

 

Don't wanna be a ass like you.

Don't wanna be a dick like you.

Don't wanna betray like you.

I never wanna you see too.

Die Alone, Live In Sorrow,

By the End of Tommorrow.

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I'm gonna rip you apart.

Tear you in two.

You messed with me from the start.

Soon, you'll be six feet under.

 

I'm getting away with murder.

I'm getting away with blood.

Their life was ended by me.

This I truly can see.

 

I'm feeling a bit dizzy.

I'm not sure who I am anymore.

Am I me, or am I a murderer?

They left me no choice, they had to die.

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Just the Start

 

 

I'm not the leader of them.

I barely believe in what they do.

But their all the love and devotion I need.

They pour their care into me, almost let me feel has if my heart is about to bleed.

 

I'm not the oldest of them.

I'm not the youngest of them.

The sun has just begun to rise.

To begin, the growth of my surprise.

 

I shall strive to become their leader.

We shall become brothers, sisters, family members.

We're all that we have left now.

Their all that I can remember, from my past and future.

When the night begins to dim, i'll let them in.

They shine my day, they wipe the pains away.

Soon, their shall be a time when I can be alone.

When all control this world, we're they do not have to worry about being safe.

I'll make it a perfect zone, that we can call our home.

 

 

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Life's Not Fair

 

In all the time that i've lived.

It seems has if the world crashed down.

Bearing itself upon my shoulders, like a burden.

That was when this thing called Love came bout.

Drifting like a boat into my sea.

 

At first she was an angel, shining down upon my stars.

Making me love sick, has if I couldn't contain it.

She was the drug, I didn't need anything just her.

In the morning she made me hung over with her kisses.

When it got cold and she held me, it has if chains were wrapped bout me.

 

Those were the best two years I had in my life.

Experiencing the word that I considered Fake.

The thing that I would thought, I would always hate.

She was the real deal, not even speaking words we expressed our love.

With her I was true to the very end, but then it all stopped.

 

So has she started to leave me, hanging me dry there.

Pouring down in the rain, dripping my heart in cold thick ice.

Reminding me of those times we spent, sitting on the busstop.

I just wished I could scream and shout, letting it all out.

Beating the nothingness in the air, has if I didn't even truly care.

 

Has I called her at night, tears dripping from my eyes.

They weren't even cold but inside, I felt has if she were ripping it out.

She stopped answering the phone, and told her friends that I cheated on her.

I lost it all, my popularity, and my love and gained..

Only gained the selfish hate, that she desired for me to have.

 

I shed my tears.

Drank the smokes and the beers.

Swooned over those full of life kisses and cuddles.

Has I placed my roses upon her eternal bed.

Has she fell asleep, six feet under.

 

She had only tried to stop dating me cause she was involved..

With things that she would thought I would be ashamed of her for.

I didn't really care, I was the jerk and wasn't fair.

She loved me and I didn't for I left her alone.

Life's not fair..and did I ruin hers?

 

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Just the Start

 

 

I'm not the leader of them.

I barely believe in what they do.

But their all the love and devotion I need.

They pour their care into me, almost let me feel has if my heart is about to bleed.

 

I'm not the oldest of them.

I'm not the youngest of them.

The sun has just begun to rise.

To begin, the growth of my surprise.

 

I shall strive to become their leader.

We shall become brothers, sisters, family members.

We're all that we have left now.

Their all that I can remember, from my past and future.

 

When the night begins to dim, i'll let them in.

They shine my day, they wipe the pains away.

Soon, their shall be a time when I can be alone.

When all control this world, we're they do not have to worry about being safe.

I'll make it a perfect zone, that we can call our home.

 

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I don't have a Second Chance.

 

Theres no second chance for me.

There's no second chance for my mistakes.

Everyone knows i'm gonna die soon.

Its one thing, any of us can see.

I watch hours go by, waiting till it's noon.

Once noon hits, my life will only go down and swoon.

 

I don't know if I want to live.

I have nothing to give.

I offer the world nothing.

My life goes round and round, in a pattern of mistakes.

If it was a movie, it'd be all bad takes.

 

So I sit here and wait, for this life to obliterate.

For my soul to shake, for my heart to bake and for my love to quake. For this life to turn to nothing, but a snow flake.

That will eventually disappear.

No one will care.

So I sit and wait,staring at the stars.

 

Knowing I have no second chance.

 

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Part 2 POEMS

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Hello Thereeee

 

Hello there, miss standing over there.

I know you really can't see me, it's clear.

But I want to be there, I want you to be here.

And has you walk towards me, I smile.

I really hope you stay awhile.

 

I get nervous, you seem so calm.

I was afraid I was gonna bomb.

That'd you think I was bad.

Why try to make you mad?

Then we met.

 

You made me smile, and you did stay awhile.

You came here and made it very clear.

That you weren't afraid to say.

"Hello there, boy standing right there."

 

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Fuck Mountain Dew

 

Mountain Dew sucks.

It's not worth my bucks.

I like what I drink.

From Sprite to Coca Cola, all of them are better, right?

 

Mountain Dew makes me gag.

Whoever drinks it is a fag.

Fucking fagbag.

You must be a fag to drink something called Mountain Suckem.

 

 

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Teenagers

 

Teenagers, the love machines.

They're troubled and hurt, stuck in the dirt.

Whether they're doing drugs.

Or they're the nerds hanging out with bugs.

 

Teenagers, the fun machines.

The killing thing, that keeps the world not being clean.

Just has I like it, cause I strike a violent pose.

Cause i'm scene.

 

Whether they're drinking beer.

Then trying to steer.

Hit my heart, or hit a fucking deer please.

Crash this place around, break it all fucking down.

 

Teenagers, the dangerous beings.

They're nothing like machines.

You can't direct us, you can't control us and you can't tell us what to do.

Chains are for a slave, not for a teenager, not for something free.

Not for what an adult, cannot be.

[Jorgi]

mymy, haven't been here in a while.

 

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a broken jaw won't stop your fake smile

but that won't stop me from trying

go for some emotion once in a while

before you forget you're alive

and you don't have to listen to a word i say

when you're 10,000 miles and a lifetime away

but i'll scream out from the top of my heart

and hope you hear me, anyway

'cause a lifetime isn't all that long anymore

when we're all left broken and heartstrings torn

i'll think of something to make you smile

as from the moment that old man cried out:

"i hope you have love left tomorrow

'cause love broke me down yesterday

i'll have love for you all tomorrow

but i'm all out of smiles for today"

i'll love you in everyway i can, if you let me

'cause i'm not me without you, please let me.

[Guest Arya]

^ I like it!

[Natasha]

mymy, haven't been here in a while.

 

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a broken jaw won't stop your fake smile

but that won't stop me from trying

go for some emotion once in a while

before you forget you're alive

and you don't have to listen to a word i say

when you're 10,000 miles and a lifetime away

but i'll scream out from the top of my heart

and hope you hear me, anyway

'cause a lifetime isn't all that long anymore

when we're all left broken and heartstrings torn

i'll think of something to make you smile

as from the moment that old man cried out:

"i hope you have love left tomorrow

'cause love broke me down yesterday

i'll have love for you all tomorrow

but i'm all out of smiles for today"

i'll love you in everyway i can, if you let me

'cause i'm not me without you, please let me.

 

<3.

[Jorgi]

Thannksss

 

I was avoiding doing work by hunting around old bits of paper.

...I'm still avoiding doing work, so naturally:

 

\\

The louder he shouts, he says the less it hurts

But that won't excuse all these broken hearts

And that black eye that looked so beautiful in the dark,

Is turning a different shade of pale in the light

Just another reminder of last night.

And it's reaching a point where "fuck you" is quite the compliment

And hasty words aren't taken the way they're meant,

When "i'm sorry" doesn't cut it like it used to

And apologies are turning into "i hate you"

I guess there's not much left to say,

When action's speak louder than words, anyway.

[Guest Arya]

^ O.O Wow. Keep avoiding work and write more! Hahahaha.

[Rogue Ninja]

Long Summer

 

She threw her life away for the chance to be happy

Where's that happiness she wanted to much?

Where's that happiness now?

She gave away her life for the chance to start again

Where's that fresh start she was working on?

Does she even know how?

 

Well it's gonna be a long summer

Her summer is only half done

She gets all of summer's uselessness

Without any of it's fun

Well it's gonna be a long summer

But maybe when it's through

She'll finally get the chance to live

The way she wanted to

 

She turned away her dream for a chance to live freer

But where's that freedom she craved so long?

Where'd that freedom all go?

She waved away her dream for a chance to smile fuller

Where'd her smiles disappear off to?

Does anyone even know?

 

Well it's gonna be a long summer

Her summer is only half done

She gets all of summer's uselessness

Without any of it's fun

Well it's gonna be a long summer

But maybe when it's through

She'll finally get the chance to live

The way she wanted to

 

Well the season's been extended

And she's longing for the fall

Motivation's been expended

She can't push herself at all

While everyone else lives she's haunted

And her life is standing still

Is this really what she wanted?

Was this worth the dream she killed?

 

Well it's gonna be a long summer

Her summer is only half done

She gets all of summer's uselessness

Without any of it's fun

Well it's gonna be a long summer

But maybe when it's through

She'll finally get the chance to live

The way she wanted to

[Natasha]

Thannksss

 

I was avoiding doing work by hunting around old bits of paper.

...I'm still avoiding doing work, so naturally:

 

\\

The louder he shouts, he says the less it hurts

But that won't excuse all these broken hearts

And that black eye that looked so beautiful in the dark,

Is turning a different shade of pale in the light

Just another reminder of last night.

And it's reaching a point where "fuck you" is quite the compliment

And hasty words aren't taken the way they're meant,

When "i'm sorry" doesn't cut it like it used to

And apologies are turning into "i hate you"

I guess there's not much left to say,

When action's speak louder than words, anyway.

 

Long Summer

 

She threw her life away for the chance to be happy

Where's that happiness she wanted to much?

Where's that happiness now?

She gave away her life for the chance to start again

Where's that fresh start she was working on?

Does she even know how?

 

Well it's gonna be a long summer

Her summer is only half done

She gets all of summer's uselessness

Without any of it's fun

Well it's gonna be a long summer

But maybe when it's through

She'll finally get the chance to live

The way she wanted to

 

She turned away her dream for a chance to live freer

But where's that freedom she craved so long?

Where'd that freedom all go?

She waved away her dream for a chance to smile fuller

Where'd her smiles disappear off to?

Does anyone even know?

 

Well it's gonna be a long summer

Her summer is only half done

She gets all of summer's uselessness

Without any of it's fun

Well it's gonna be a long summer

But maybe when it's through

She'll finally get the chance to live

The way she wanted to

 

Well the season's been extended

And she's longing for the fall

Motivation's been expended

She can't push herself at all

While everyone else lives she's haunted

And her life is standing still

Is this really what she wanted?

Was this worth the dream she killed?

 

Well it's gonna be a long summer

Her summer is only half done

She gets all of summer's uselessness

Without any of it's fun

Well it's gonna be a long summer

But maybe when it's through

She'll finally get the chance to live

The way she wanted to

 

both of you are so very amazing.

[Guest Arya]

^ Agreed. *nods*

[Rogue Ninja]

Thank you.

 

L.A.

You said you weren't coming back

And said you couldn't lie

What happened with the three of us

Was a good part of why

All of this you told me

Just to make me feel bad

As if something so trivial

Erased the fun you had

 

But you were lying or you were wrong

You haven't been gone all that long

And you're all set to come back at the first chance you get

All your friends are here

The skies are always clear

I'd put down everything I have and bet

That you'll be coming back

 

Well the moment you got home

You found nothing but cold and rain

The gray and nasty weather

That defines the state of Maine

You found yourself so miserable

So ready to return

I'm glad you hate it there so much

Maybe that way you'll learn

 

'Cause you were lying or you were wrong

You haven't been gone all that long

And you're all set to come back at the first chance you get

All your friends are here

The skies are always clear

I'd put down everything I have and bet

That you'll be coming back

 

Food that you can't get at home

Friends who won't leave you alone

It's all here, how could you ever stay away?

A place where you fit in

Better than everywhere you've been

When you come back I'll have other plans that day

 

'Cause you were lying or you were wrong

You haven't been gone all that long

And you're all set to come back at the first chance you get

All your friends are here

The skies are always clear

I'd put down everything I have and bet

That you'll be coming back

[Jorgi]

 

'Cause you were lying or you were wrong

You haven't been gone all that long

And you're all set to come back at the first chance you get

All your friends are here

The skies are always clear

I'd put down everything I have and bet

That you'll be coming back

 

Loving how that keeps coming back

 

 

this isn't meant to be a work of genius or whatnot, it's short and i'm just a-rambling along.

 

plan b

i have to admit this isn't going how i planned

although i didn't plan it very well at all

and i think i left my innocence behind

somewhere along the road

i never meant to grow up so cold

or so cynical

but i guess that's the way i goes

the way it went when i laid eyes on you

i never stood a chance

you knocked me off my feet with one glance

and one blow to the face

no, this isn't how i planned it at all

i suppose it's too late to call it off and start again

start over a new page of clichés

it just didn't go as planned after all

not at all.

[Guest Arya]

^ Both of you = <3333 Great writers.

[XslightaddictionX]

Tell Them What They Want To Hear

 

Put a mask on to fool to them in

You play this game because you know you'll win

You smile at them and say what you don't mean

When you know that your real thoughts are not "very clean"

 

Your pessimism doesn't show to the people you try to impress

You lie to make your way to the top so you can have your "success"

But your little scam won't work with me

I'm wiser to know better

you can try to the best of your ability

 

I feel sorry for how low you have gotten

I wish you could just change

But your lie sell signs are still up

And it's a matter of time before everything goes up into flames

[Guest Arya]

^ Wow. I didn't know you could write, Hel! That is really, really good.

[Guest chriz]

Teenage Tragedy

Started like a dream

ended like hell

broken in thousand pieces

and a million fights

 

 

Scream for the love

Scream for everything we have lost

Scream if you feel afraid of losing it all

 

 

 

You can hate me

and tell me that i did everything

you can tell me what ever you want

But please dont tell me we well be alright

because between you and me everything will go wrong

 

 

 

Scream for the love

Scream for everything we have lost

Scream if you feel afraid of losing it all

 

 

 

Nobody tells me how i should live my life

Nobody tells me to go left or right

Dont tell me because i will scream a thousand curses

And you wont sleep at night

 

 

 

I know it isnt perfect

[Guest Arya]

^ Whoa. That's so emotional, Chrissy. Really good! <3

[Guest chriz]

thnx

[Guest Arya]

Anytime

[Guest chriz]

When everything is dark there is still something that shines

When everything changes from black to white ...

or from wrong to right

that will be the day that my love will die

Everything feels so good but still it isnt right

Without you i dont feel the need the need to fight

 

 

 

 

it isnt finnished but im stuck so ...

[Guest Arya]

^ Ooooo I can't wait to read more of it!

[Rogue Ninja]

Loving how that keeps coming back

 

 

this isn't meant to be a work of genius or whatnot, it's short and i'm just a-rambling along.

 

plan b

i have to admit this isn't going how i planned

although i didn't plan it very well at all

and i think i left my innocence behind

somewhere along the road

i never meant to grow up so cold

or so cynical

but i guess that's the way i goes

the way it went when i laid eyes on you

i never stood a chance

you knocked me off my feet with one glance

and one blow to the face

no, this isn't how i planned it at all

i suppose it's too late to call it off and start again

start over a new page of clichés

it just didn't go as planned after all

not at all.

 

Thank you. I'm feeling kind of smug about the situation, so i had to say it again and again. =)

 

Yours is very strong.

 

And Arya, thank you as well.