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When everything is dark there is still something that shines

When everything changes from black to white ...

or from wrong to right

that will be the day that my love will die

Everything feels so good but still it isnt right

Without you i dont feel the need the need to fight

 

 

 

 

it isnt finnished but im stuck so ...

 

o.O I liked that , =)

Can't wait to hear more either :)

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I get bitchier the more i write, and the bitchiness turns it into a pile of rubbish.

Oh well, whatcha gonna dooo ey:

 

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oh sorry, were you speaking

i couldn't care les if you were talking

if you're bitching about your last disaster

or stabbing knives into my spine

so no, thanks, it's fine

i'll get myself back home tonight

 

don't worry about it, it's fine now

you're the last thing on my mind, now

you were never worth my time back then

and i swear you're not worth it now

 

so sorry if i don't like the way you dress or how you talk

'cause you speak like a tramp and dress like a whore

no i don't think my nails can dig in anymore

than they already have

oh what a delightful scar to have;

ones of jokes gone far too far

 

so don't worry about it, i'm fine

you're the last thing on my mind

you were never worth my time back then

and i swear you're not worth it now

 

well, tell me

did he still love you with that black eye

a trophey has never shone so darkly

so tell me

did he still love you with your bruised hands

and the way your eyes can't meet mine

(that's what i thought).

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alrightyy guess im gunna post this here haha

 

i wrote this a few days ago. i was really annoyed andin one of thoes "everyone hates me" moods. so go figure ha

 

 

What if i died?

...Would you cry and wonder why?

...Would you go to my funeral?

...Would you miss me in general?

 

If yes is to ANY of these...

Then show me.

 

Show me you care.

Show me that you would miss me,

And that you'll always be there.

Because if you dont soon...

And you wait...

It just might be too late.

Then you'll have to start over on an blank slate

...Without me.

Forever.

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im so not a writer but every once and a while i find myself writing...so here it is....i think it kinda scatter brained..

 

 

 

Stupid Equals Love

 

Damn, I want so bad not to call you,

To show that i can life without you,

to show that we a just be friends....

 

I want to shake you and make you feel what i feel,

Why cant you love me the way i love you. WHY???

 

I just want you to hold me...hold me...,

but your not, and you wont.

 

And i just have to expect that.

i will just have to wait, a day, or a year,

till i find someone that will.

 

Cause for the first time in my life

I dont want to be the victim, And Im NOT

And that I am worthy of love.

Your right I do deserve better.

 

Yet im still handing you my love....

will you take it?

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ah that was sweet. that kinda related to what im feeling right now hah

 

i wrote this out of bordom. the last halfof it kinda sucks,cuz i ran out of rhymingness haha

 

why am i so annoyed?

why am i so pissed off?

is there something im trying to aviod?

something im trying to put off?

why cant i just live my life.

 

why am i lazy?

why am i alone?

am i going crazy?

am i finally going phsyco?

 

maybe its just me.

maybe im doing it to myself.

is this how its always gonna be?

am i gonna ruin my health?

 

i need someone.

anyone.

just to listen to me.

stop calling me insane!

i do have a fucking brain!

its just malfunctioning.

 

i want my life back.

i want my sanity.

it is because of the willpower i lack?

is it because im never happy?

 

im gunna stop sulking over it.

move on and get over it.

yet i still wonder why i feel this way...

JUST a bit.

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light up the sky

shoot a bullet for change

you'll see that i'm worthwhile

and not completely deranged

only a matter of time before you fall from grace

and let me in your world, i'll never

tire of this chase

 

you smiled at me

and set my world on fire

i'd burn the city for those eyes

i know i'm not a liar

only a matter of time before you hear my plea

you'd watch me jump and yet you'd never

set me free

 

i'll never pay for a whore

to sing the melody i wrote to you

and so much more

i'd rather tear down the door

and scream in your face

just so you know what i'm here for

 

a million girls would bend in two for you

to say their name

i'm far too shy to learn the rules

let alone play that game

i'll watch her win, yeah

i'd even send her the prize

cause in the end you'll see right through

one word can hypnotize

 

i'll never pay for a whore

to sing the melody i wrote to you

and so much more

i'd rather tear down the door

and scream in your face

just so you know what i'm here for

 

the leaves in the autumn won't so much as flutter

now you've taped my lips, not so much as

a stutter

i hope you're lost

oh, oh i hope you're lost.

 

i'll never pay for a whore

i refuse, i refuse, i deserve it

so much more

i'd rather tear down the door

look, look out my heart's about to

break the law

 

won't so much as flutter, not even a stutter

no, no.

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^ ^

 

awesome material there! :D

 

you can write my songs anyday ;)

 

haha

 

im hopefully going up for this competition over here (Isle of Wight)

and its like, the winner of the comp. gets to play on the platform one bandstand at the isle of wight festival :D

 

 

it's gonna be awesome.

but idk if im gonna do it yet. :roll:

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^ ^

 

awesome material there! :D

 

you can write my songs anyday ;)

 

haha

 

im hopefully going up for this competition over here (Isle of Wight)

and its like, the winner of the comp. gets to play on the platform one bandstand at the isle of wight festival :D

 

 

it's gonna be awesome.

but idk if im gonna do it yet. :roll:

 

good luck! that sounds like an awesome opportunity :)

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im right there.

but you dont see me.

should i even dare?

to try and impress you so you could see,

im falling for you.

cant you see?

...is it ment to be?

 

you dont even know me well.

i dont even know you well.

cant you tell im falling for you?

this cant be true...

but it is.

is it?

Yes.

 

everytime i see you my heart starts pacing...

my palms get sweaty,

my mind starts racing.

why is this happening?

you dont like me,

you dont know me...

im just your friend.

just your friend-girl,

not your girlfriend...

 

 

...i dont even wanna be your girlfriend.

i just want you to see and feel what i feel.

so maybe we could work this out,

and see if its something real...

something that would work out

and not disappear.

you making me fear you.

for once will you be sincere?

and actually sit down and talk to me?

or something close to that.

something down that path...

 

i dont know how to tell you...

i dont WANT to tell you...

you'd laugh your ass off...

and start hating me and thatd be the end of that part,

of my life.

 

but i dont want it to end.

because when i look in to your eyes,

i see your heart and your soul...

and its telling me "yes"

but MY mind, is saying no.

 

am i reading you wrong?

i bet i am.

just because your nice to me doesnt mean you'll mend,

my broken heart.

but something inside tells me you can fix it...

i just wanna figure this all out,

and stop waiting for this shit,

to happen.

 

 

...because ive had way too many regrets in my life already.

i dont need anymore right now,

i just want something in my life to stay steady.

 

so do you like me?

ill never know.

untill that one day you'll tell me

"yes" or "no".

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