XslightaddictionX Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 ^ Wow. I didn't know you could write, Hel! That is really, really good. What? What are you talking about, you've complimented on my stuff before. Haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted September 24, 2007 Report Share Posted September 24, 2007 Oh, I have? My bad! I'm sorry. I didn't remember. Ignore that comment then, hahaha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted September 24, 2007 Report Share Posted September 24, 2007 When everything is dark there is still something that shinesWhen everything changes from black to white ... or from wrong to right that will be the day that my love will die Everything feels so good but still it isnt right Without you i dont feel the need the need to fight it isnt finnished but im stuck so ... o.O I liked that , =) Can't wait to hear more either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WayneFarro Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 i've wrote a few songs, i think they suck though. i'm not that good....but i'll post them next time i'm on, see what you guys think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Yeah, totally post them. I want to seeee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 i have songs, just theyre really bad xD well, my friends dont think they are, but i do xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chriz Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 they cant be that bad .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 ok, well they're not that bad. but they're heavily influenced by hayleys lyrics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chriz Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 that only can make them better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 hahah, true but its like, i get told, by everyone, even my singing teacher, that i sing exactly like her, but if my lyrics are like herz, doesnt that make me like, a wannabe hayley? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 I get bitchier the more i write, and the bitchiness turns it into a pile of rubbish. Oh well, whatcha gonna dooo ey: >> oh sorry, were you speaking i couldn't care les if you were talking if you're bitching about your last disaster or stabbing knives into my spine so no, thanks, it's fine i'll get myself back home tonight don't worry about it, it's fine now you're the last thing on my mind, now you were never worth my time back then and i swear you're not worth it now so sorry if i don't like the way you dress or how you talk 'cause you speak like a tramp and dress like a whore no i don't think my nails can dig in anymore than they already have oh what a delightful scar to have; ones of jokes gone far too far so don't worry about it, i'm fine you're the last thing on my mind you were never worth my time back then and i swear you're not worth it now well, tell me did he still love you with that black eye a trophey has never shone so darkly so tell me did he still love you with your bruised hands and the way your eyes can't meet mine (that's what i thought). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WayneFarro Posted October 3, 2007 Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 my songs are very angry, i tend to write better songs when i'm angry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
parawhore1991 Posted October 4, 2007 Report Share Posted October 4, 2007 me too. i tend to write when ive personally been affected by something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted October 4, 2007 Report Share Posted October 4, 2007 alrightyy guess im gunna post this here haha i wrote this a few days ago. i was really annoyed andin one of thoes "everyone hates me" moods. so go figure ha What if i died? ...Would you cry and wonder why? ...Would you go to my funeral? ...Would you miss me in general? If yes is to ANY of these... Then show me. Show me you care. Show me that you would miss me, And that you'll always be there. Because if you dont soon... And you wait... It just might be too late. Then you'll have to start over on an blank slate ...Without me. Forever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted October 8, 2007 Report Share Posted October 8, 2007 ^ That was awsm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WayneFarro Posted October 8, 2007 Report Share Posted October 8, 2007 i've been meaning to post my songs, i have them on my laptop and i'm not on my laptop right now, but i will post them soon i promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lavina15 Posted October 9, 2007 Report Share Posted October 9, 2007 im so not a writer but every once and a while i find myself writing...so here it is....i think it kinda scatter brained.. Stupid Equals Love Damn, I want so bad not to call you, To show that i can life without you, to show that we a just be friends.... I want to shake you and make you feel what i feel, Why cant you love me the way i love you. WHY??? I just want you to hold me...hold me..., but your not, and you wont. And i just have to expect that. i will just have to wait, a day, or a year, till i find someone that will. Cause for the first time in my life I dont want to be the victim, And Im NOT And that I am worthy of love. Your right I do deserve better. Yet im still handing you my love.... will you take it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 ah that was sweet. that kinda related to what im feeling right now hah i wrote this out of bordom. the last halfof it kinda sucks,cuz i ran out of rhymingness haha why am i so annoyed? why am i so pissed off? is there something im trying to aviod? something im trying to put off? why cant i just live my life. why am i lazy? why am i alone? am i going crazy? am i finally going phsyco? maybe its just me. maybe im doing it to myself. is this how its always gonna be? am i gonna ruin my health? i need someone. anyone. just to listen to me. stop calling me insane! i do have a fucking brain! its just malfunctioning. i want my life back. i want my sanity. it is because of the willpower i lack? is it because im never happy? im gunna stop sulking over it. move on and get over it. yet i still wonder why i feel this way... JUST a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 17, 2007 Report Share Posted October 17, 2007 light up the sky shoot a bullet for change you'll see that i'm worthwhile and not completely deranged only a matter of time before you fall from grace and let me in your world, i'll never tire of this chase you smiled at me and set my world on fire i'd burn the city for those eyes i know i'm not a liar only a matter of time before you hear my plea you'd watch me jump and yet you'd never set me free i'll never pay for a whore to sing the melody i wrote to you and so much more i'd rather tear down the door and scream in your face just so you know what i'm here for a million girls would bend in two for you to say their name i'm far too shy to learn the rules let alone play that game i'll watch her win, yeah i'd even send her the prize cause in the end you'll see right through one word can hypnotize i'll never pay for a whore to sing the melody i wrote to you and so much more i'd rather tear down the door and scream in your face just so you know what i'm here for the leaves in the autumn won't so much as flutter now you've taped my lips, not so much as a stutter i hope you're lost oh, oh i hope you're lost. i'll never pay for a whore i refuse, i refuse, i deserve it so much more i'd rather tear down the door look, look out my heart's about to break the law won't so much as flutter, not even a stutter no, no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 17, 2007 Report Share Posted October 17, 2007 hannah, i am completely in love with that. that's the best thing i've read in a while. *throws complete adoration in your general direction* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted October 17, 2007 Report Share Posted October 17, 2007 ^ ^ awesome material there! you can write my songs anyday haha im hopefully going up for this competition over here (Isle of Wight) and its like, the winner of the comp. gets to play on the platform one bandstand at the isle of wight festival it's gonna be awesome. but idk if im gonna do it yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 17, 2007 Report Share Posted October 17, 2007 hannah, i am completely in love with that.that's the best thing i've read in a while. *throws complete adoration in your general direction* thank you so much! i love writing lyrics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted October 17, 2007 Report Share Posted October 17, 2007 ^ ^ awesome material there! you can write my songs anyday haha im hopefully going up for this competition over here (Isle of Wight) and its like, the winner of the comp. gets to play on the platform one bandstand at the isle of wight festival it's gonna be awesome. but idk if im gonna do it yet. good luck! that sounds like an awesome opportunity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 17, 2007 Report Share Posted October 17, 2007 thank you so much! i love writing lyrics by any means, continue writing and posting them ! talent ahoy. read it through again, definite parallels with paramore songs- but i honestly don't care, i still love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted October 18, 2007 Report Share Posted October 18, 2007 im right there. but you dont see me. should i even dare? to try and impress you so you could see, im falling for you. cant you see? ...is it ment to be? you dont even know me well. i dont even know you well. cant you tell im falling for you? this cant be true... but it is. is it? Yes. everytime i see you my heart starts pacing... my palms get sweaty, my mind starts racing. why is this happening? you dont like me, you dont know me... im just your friend. just your friend-girl, not your girlfriend... ...i dont even wanna be your girlfriend. i just want you to see and feel what i feel. so maybe we could work this out, and see if its something real... something that would work out and not disappear. you making me fear you. for once will you be sincere? and actually sit down and talk to me? or something close to that. something down that path... i dont know how to tell you... i dont WANT to tell you... you'd laugh your ass off... and start hating me and thatd be the end of that part, of my life. but i dont want it to end. because when i look in to your eyes, i see your heart and your soul... and its telling me "yes" but MY mind, is saying no. am i reading you wrong? i bet i am. just because your nice to me doesnt mean you'll mend, my broken heart. but something inside tells me you can fix it... i just wanna figure this all out, and stop waiting for this shit, to happen. ...because ive had way too many regrets in my life already. i dont need anymore right now, i just want something in my life to stay steady. so do you like me? ill never know. untill that one day you'll tell me "yes" or "no". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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