jaseyyann Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 storm why can't you let someone else have the thunder? I'm tired of being the one standing in the rain. all the burdens of my life, the evils that tarnish my existance soak me till i drown. and i don't even bother screaming. i could reach the highest pitch, and it would merely cause an annoyance to the monsters pouring the mix of misery crushing my soul. ....yeah i was kinda mad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 ^ummmmm wow...thats almost too deep for ME to breathe...I like it though...yalls gots somes skillssssssss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 ^ Whoa, that's really good! You're talented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaseyyann Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 omg thanks lol. i didnt think i'd get that good of a response. or any. haha wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 ^ your pretty good i wish i could write like that lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mylittttledecoy Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 so simple, yet so real try to remember the last time you saw me this is happening again, i can feel it again if i ever forgot what you sound like i'd have to live with a fire inside for a lifetime ignorance isn't bliss if you know the whole story we've been through alot and it's been so crazy but the only thing you've taught is how to fake a smile i'm so lost right now in your hell of a relationship so pretensive, yet so vulnerable remembering who i was is not knowing who i am who i am is not what i wanted to be but some people change, and by some i mean me if i was ever forced to regain your image i'd have to say no thanks and move along... i'm trying to hard to be part of this story but i guess this crazy world was meant to be left alone you've taught me how to pull through alot of things but this wasn't one of them, and i'm resentful for that. so for now, to remember you i cherish you, and fake a smile... i write alooooooot aha. that's just one of my friends favourites (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaseyyann Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 ^ I love it! Especially the ending;so for now, to remember you i cherish you, and fake a smile... Amazing. +Herewegoagain: your pretty good i wish i could write like that lol thanks. i didn't think people would like it that much lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justSMILE♥ Posted November 8, 2007 Report Share Posted November 8, 2007 best friends for what reason? i want you to help me out sorry i can't, why, no reason i dont want to pout why cant you tell me? no reason oh i see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 8, 2007 Report Share Posted November 8, 2007 Bit different to what i usually do: that scar has history telling her story and the way she despised you (oh, how i despise you) that knife just missed me while backstabbers kissed me but that shouldn't surprise you (oh, how i despise you) with arrogance and lust; embarassment and trust that cannot disguise you (oh, how i despise you) extinguishing truth from lies you knew crying tears from dry eyes (oh, how i despise you) I'm a nice person really, i swear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted November 8, 2007 Report Share Posted November 8, 2007 Don't you just love all those awkward moments The ones that make you not want to breathe I just want to know that it's all okay But you'd never talk no, not for me Could you talk, No! never for me If you knew what it does to me when I think of the ways That you always like to put me down All you ever do is throw it away So now you're going down, (you know you're going down) Who would you choose, with that remote in your hand? Who do you want to be, (to be) What would you do if you had nothing left? You refuse to change for me Could you please change for me. WELLL I HAVE NO MORE CLASS TIME LEFT< SO IMMA GO EAT SOME LUNCH... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted November 8, 2007 Report Share Posted November 8, 2007 ^ I luffles yours, Jorgi and Mariah! Wow. Good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted November 8, 2007 Report Share Posted November 8, 2007 hahaha...%^ thanksssss.....sooo yeah...I'm super duper bored Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted November 9, 2007 Report Share Posted November 9, 2007 crikey it's been a long, long time since i've written anythingi'm trying to get back into it, i found it therapeutic and i'm getting a bit stressed lately but it's harddd to write anything worth reading, i'm so out of sync. nevertheless: colon close bracket i'd shout words so heavy, and throw them like rocks to your window i'd cry tears so strong, they'd break down your door i'd laugh so tragically, that every clown aches in sympathy i'd give up those shooting stars, to remember your smile i'd gather the biggest nets, to try and capture your attention i'd save the whole world from themselves, so nothing could hurt you again i'd dream the impossible, so imagination won't stop me and i'd give up myself, if that smile's for me i'd teach birds new melodies, and harmonise your morning call i'd paint something so beautiful, your eyes would never believe it i'd kiss you so sweetly, that every new romantic screamed with envy i'd hold you so gently , that smile never breaks if i had anything more to give, i'd give you my everything i'd give you it all; my everything. absolutely. amazing. stormwhy can't you let someone else have the thunder? I'm tired of being the one standing in the rain. all the burdens of my life, the evils that tarnish my existance soak me till i drown. and i don't even bother screaming. i could reach the highest pitch, and it would merely cause an annoyance to the monsters pouring the mix of misery crushing my soul. ....yeah i was kinda mad judy from iconator! natasha from cities-burn. (: love this. its amazing. Bit different to what i usually do: that scar has history telling her story and the way she despised you (oh, how i despise you) that knife just missed me while backstabbers kissed me but that shouldn't surprise you (oh, how i despise you) with arrogance and lust; embarassment and trust that cannot disguise you (oh, how i despise you) extinguishing truth from lies you knew crying tears from dry eyes (oh, how i despise you) I'm a nice person really, i swear i love you. lol. you're an amazing writer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 i love you. lol. you're an amazing writer. haha, aw thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 you're quite welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 so, you lucky (unlucky) people, i have decided to try and write something new every day as a sort of experiment-y type thing. If you happen to read anything i put and have something to say about it, please say it as i'm interested in feedback (good or bad) so i can progress and try new things blah blah blah etc. etc. to start: that sound was the pressure off my shoulders being lifted; the sound of sighing souls and tree breezes that sound is what they call too much information the sound of being told things irrelevant and frustrating i never asked for you don't say i told you so 'cause you told me so the day before and i didn't listen then, and i won't listen now no, that's no what this is about oh no, not at all not at all that voice was the one telling you it's all okay the voice of reason and insanity that voice is what i long for; with soothing tones i searched for i never asked for you don't say i told you so 'cause you told me so the day before and i didn't listen then, and i won't listen now no, that's no what this is about oh no, not at all not at all so tell me it's impossible i'll find a way to make it possible i think it's pretty improbably we'll get out of here alive; with scorned passion in your eyes and bittersweet victory in your sights i said it'd all be fine but i lied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 with scorned passion in your eyes and bittersweet victory in your sights i said it'd all be fine but i lied. amazing. especially those last lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Little poem I wrote... The Thing Is... You say I'm a freak You say I'm an outcast You say a lot of things But you see, the thing is... You say 'fuck off' You say 'go and die' You say 'leave me alone' But you see, the thing is... You've said a lot And now it's my turn So shut up and listen to me Because you see, the thing is I'm in love with you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 ^ Whoa, I wasn't expecting that last line, haha. I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 I'm in love with you...[/i] yup, wasn't expecting that ! love it though started scribbling: how to be excusably arrogant i promised i'd dress to impress, i'd blow you away with my quick wit and devilish charm, sharing stories of success. ignoring failures past and present, i'l pull out all the stops and start a new day to remember when we're old. just like those stories we were told when we were younger. and i imagined everything just like this, only with less awkward conversations and uncomfortable silences and more dancing under moonlight and wistful celebrations that i've found you. i sure hope it's you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holleh Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 ^^ That is freaking amazing! Lulz. I wish I could write well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 ^ Whoa, I wasn't expecting that last line, haha. I like it! yup, wasn't expecting that ! love it though Thanks guys. You could say I have hidden depths. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted November 12, 2007 Report Share Posted November 12, 2007 ^ james, your writing is WELL good =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 cheesey little sucky song i just typed up and thought of a second ago: Behind closed dooors, I fall to the flooor, you bring me doowwn. You tell me everything thats wrong with meee... that i already know. I aint stupid, i know im fucked up. But i wont let that ruin my meee, Because you are. In front of everyoonne, You seem so kind. Your killing my miiind. Everyday when its time to go hooome... I DONT WANNA GOOO!... AND YOU KNOOWW! That behind closed dooors, I fall to the flooor, you bring me doowwn. You tell me everything thats wrong with meee... that i already know. I aint stupid, i know im fucked up. But i wont let that ruin my meee, Because you are. Why dont you listen to me? HEAR ME OUT! i've got something to saayy. You think that you can bring me now? NOOOO! YOOUURR NOT GUNNA RUIN MY DAY. But eventuaallyyy. That behind closed dooors, I fall to the flooor, you bring me doowwn. You tell me everything thats wrong with meee... that i already know. I aint stupid, i know im fucked up. But i wont let that ruin my meee, Because you are. Gotta move on, Move on with my liiife... (gotta move on, move on, OH OH) Gotta move on, Move on with my liiife... (GOTTA MOVE ON, MOVE ON OOOHH.) ...HELL YEAH! Behind closed dooors, I fall to the flooor, you bring me doowwn. You tell me everything thats wrong with me... that i already know. I aint stupid, i know im fucked up. But i wont let that ruin my meee, Because you are. Gotta move on, Move on with my liiife... (gotta move on, move on, oh oh) (repeat till fades) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 ^ ooohhhh...that's sorta....NIFTY...haha in my words, that means rad....well, rad means rad too but nifty comes in pretty close..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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