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storm

why can't you let

someone else have the thunder?

I'm tired of being

the one standing in the rain.

 

all the burdens of my life,

the evils that tarnish my existance

soak me till i drown.

and i don't even bother screaming.

 

i could reach the highest pitch,

and it would merely cause an annoyance

to the monsters pouring the mix

of misery crushing my soul.

 

 

....yeah i was kinda mad

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so simple, yet so real

try to remember the last time you saw me

this is happening again, i can feel it again

if i ever forgot what you sound like

i'd have to live with a fire inside for a lifetime

 

ignorance isn't bliss if you know the whole story

we've been through alot and it's been so crazy

but the only thing you've taught is how to fake a smile

i'm so lost right now in your hell of a relationship

 

so pretensive, yet so vulnerable

remembering who i was is not knowing who i am

who i am is not what i wanted to be

but some people change, and by some i mean me

if i was ever forced to regain your image

i'd have to say no thanks and move along...

 

i'm trying to hard to be part of this story

but i guess this crazy world was meant to be left alone

you've taught me how to pull through alot of things

but this wasn't one of them, and i'm resentful for that.

 

so for now, to remember you

i cherish you, and fake a smile...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i write alooooooot aha.

that's just one of my friends favourites

(:

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Bit different to what i usually do:

 

that scar has history

telling her story

and the way she despised you

(oh, how i despise you)

 

that knife just missed me

while backstabbers kissed me

but that shouldn't surprise you

(oh, how i despise you)

 

with arrogance and lust;

embarassment and trust

that cannot disguise you

(oh, how i despise you)

 

extinguishing truth

from lies you knew

crying tears from dry eyes

(oh, how i despise you)

 

 

I'm a nice person really, i swear ;)

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Don't you just love all those awkward moments

The ones that make you not want to breathe

I just want to know that it's all okay

But you'd never talk no, not for me

Could you talk, No! never for me

 

If you knew what it does to me when I think of the ways

That you always like to put me down

All you ever do is throw it away

So now you're going down, (you know you're going down)

 

Who would you choose, with that remote in your hand?

Who do you want to be, (to be)

What would you do if you had nothing left?

You refuse to change for me

Could you please change for me.

 

 

 

 

WELLL I HAVE NO MORE CLASS TIME LEFT< SO IMMA GO EAT SOME LUNCH...

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crikey it's been a long, long time since i've written anything

i'm trying to get back into it, i found it therapeutic and i'm getting a bit stressed lately

but it's harddd to write anything worth reading, i'm so out of sync.

nevertheless:

 

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i'd shout words so heavy,

and throw them like rocks to your window

i'd cry tears so strong,

they'd break down your door

i'd laugh so tragically,

that every clown aches in sympathy

i'd give up those shooting stars,

to remember your smile

 

i'd gather the biggest nets,

to try and capture your attention

i'd save the whole world from themselves,

so nothing could hurt you again

i'd dream the impossible,

so imagination won't stop me

and i'd give up myself,

if that smile's for me

 

i'd teach birds new melodies,

and harmonise your morning call

i'd paint something so beautiful,

your eyes would never believe it

i'd kiss you so sweetly,

that every new romantic screamed with envy

i'd hold you so gently ,

that smile never breaks

 

if i had anything more to give,

i'd give you my everything

i'd give you it all;

my everything.

absolutely. amazing. :uhh:

 

storm

why can't you let

someone else have the thunder?

I'm tired of being

the one standing in the rain.

 

all the burdens of my life,

the evils that tarnish my existance

soak me till i drown.

and i don't even bother screaming.

 

i could reach the highest pitch,

and it would merely cause an annoyance

to the monsters pouring the mix

of misery crushing my soul.

 

 

....yeah i was kinda mad

judy from iconator! natasha from cities-burn. (:

love this. its amazing.

 

Bit different to what i usually do:

 

that scar has history

telling her story

and the way she despised you

(oh, how i despise you)

 

that knife just missed me

while backstabbers kissed me

but that shouldn't surprise you

(oh, how i despise you)

 

with arrogance and lust;

embarassment and trust

that cannot disguise you

(oh, how i despise you)

 

extinguishing truth

from lies you knew

crying tears from dry eyes

(oh, how i despise you)

 

 

I'm a nice person really, i swear ;)

i love you. lol. you're an amazing writer.

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so, you lucky (unlucky) people, i have decided to try and write something new every day as a sort of experiment-y type thing.

If you happen to read anything i put and have something to say about it, please say it as i'm interested in feedback (good or bad) so i can progress and try new things blah blah blah etc. etc.

 

to start:

 

that sound was the pressure off my shoulders

being lifted;

the sound of sighing souls

and tree breezes

that sound is what they call

too much information

the sound of being told things

irrelevant and frustrating

i never asked for you

 

don't say i told you so

'cause you told me so

the day before

and i didn't listen then,

and i won't listen now

no, that's no what this is about

oh no, not at all

not at all

 

that voice was the one telling you

it's all okay

the voice of reason and insanity

that voice is what i long for;

with soothing tones i searched for

i never asked for you

 

don't say i told you so

'cause you told me so

the day before

and i didn't listen then,

and i won't listen now

no, that's no what this is about

oh no, not at all

not at all

 

so tell me it's impossible

i'll find a way to make it possible

i think it's pretty improbably

we'll get out of here alive;

with scorned passion in your eyes

and bittersweet victory in your sights

i said it'd all be fine

but i lied.

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Little poem I wrote...

 

The Thing Is...

 

You say I'm a freak

You say I'm an outcast

You say a lot of things

But you see, the thing is...

 

You say 'fuck off'

You say 'go and die'

You say 'leave me alone'

But you see, the thing is...

 

You've said a lot

And now it's my turn

So shut up and listen to me

Because you see, the thing is

I'm in love with you...

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I'm in love with you...[/i]

 

yup, wasn't expecting that ! love it though :)

 

started scribbling:

how to be excusably arrogant

i promised i'd dress to impress,

i'd blow you away with my quick wit

and devilish charm, sharing stories

of success.

 

ignoring failures past and present,

i'l pull out all the stops

and start a new day to remember

when we're old.

 

just like those stories we were told

when we were younger.

 

and i imagined everything just like this,

only with less awkward conversations and

uncomfortable silences and

more dancing under moonlight and

wistful celebrations that i've found you.

i sure hope it's you.

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cheesey little sucky song i just typed up and thought of a second ago:

 

Behind closed dooors,

I fall to the flooor,

you bring me doowwn.

You tell me everything thats wrong with meee...

that i already know.

I aint stupid, i know im fucked up.

But i wont let that ruin my meee,

Because you are.

 

In front of everyoonne,

You seem so kind.

Your killing my miiind.

Everyday when its time to go hooome...

I DONT WANNA GOOO!...

AND YOU KNOOWW!

 

That behind closed dooors,

I fall to the flooor,

you bring me doowwn.

You tell me everything thats wrong with meee...

that i already know.

I aint stupid, i know im fucked up.

But i wont let that ruin my meee,

Because you are.

 

Why dont you listen to me?

HEAR ME OUT!

i've got something to saayy.

You think that you can bring me now?

NOOOO!

YOOUURR NOT GUNNA RUIN MY DAY.

But eventuaallyyy.

 

That behind closed dooors,

I fall to the flooor,

you bring me doowwn.

You tell me everything thats wrong with meee...

that i already know.

I aint stupid, i know im fucked up.

But i wont let that ruin my meee,

Because you are.

 

Gotta move on,

Move on with my liiife...

(gotta move on, move on, OH OH)

Gotta move on,

Move on with my liiife...

(GOTTA MOVE ON, MOVE ON OOOHH.)

...HELL YEAH!

 

Behind closed dooors,

I fall to the flooor,

you bring me doowwn.

You tell me everything thats wrong with me...

that i already know.

I aint stupid, i know im fucked up.

But i wont let that ruin my meee,

Because you are.

 

Gotta move on,

Move on with my liiife...

(gotta move on, move on, oh oh)

(repeat till fades)

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