Jammer Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 Right, these next two songs fit into the concept of a load of songs I've been working on lately...the first one I imagine as an acoustic ditty that acts as the starting point for the 'album', you could say, while the second one is found at the end and is meant as a contrast to the first one, to show that there is no peace in the world, in the end. The World at Peace Standing in the open doorway Scent of roses in the wind Seems so peaceful around here... Painted a picture Of the world you envisioned And this is what I see... Our world is at peace So come stand beside me Hold my hands And embrace this joy Of a world at peace... The World At War Explosions... Scream through the night Always find their way to you Can't hide from it This inevitable chaos Of a world at war! *chorus* This world is at war So shield your eyes Don't stare into the flames Lest they consume you... (repeat) Life... Thrown away so carelessly Impossible to comprehend This sheer scale of death Going on around me Don't wish to join them... *short solo* Tossing and turning Thoughts of fire and brimstone At my mind's forefront Lost my friends Into the maelstrom of war... *chorus* Pale faces and black clothes Lining the streets Behind the corpses of the fallen Dying for some pointless cause In a world miles away from mine Don't want to be a part of that world But there is no escape for me No escape for any of us Because these are the rules Of a world at war! *harmonised guitar solo* *chorus* Our world is at war Arming the troops And sending them Into the unknown Won't see them again But I accept this world Because I was born into this And have to live through it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 Forget. I see you in my dreams But I know it’s not right I lay awake Thinking every night But I made the same mistake again And said the wrong things So why do I keep believing That it’s not what it seems? Oh, I tried to tell you everything But it never came out The truth was hard to admit Yet I said it loud The world heard my secret And disagreed with me But I kept my head high Screaming from the trees It all just meant nothing Every single detail It was all just a lie I made the fail But I keep seeing your face Every night in my dreams And I think I know you But you don’t know what it means Yeah, I can’t forget the things we did And compliments we shared I tried my hardest to stay away From those rumours that were flared But try as I might it never worked I always got it wrong The blame was on me And it’s all in this song -instrumental- And I just can’t forget It replays in my head Everything we did And everything we said But try as I might it never worked I always got it wrong The blame was on me And it’s all in this song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 50,000 Sins Far cry from redemption But it doesn't faze him He'll keep going on and on Sucking this world dry of life Leaving sorrow in his wake... *chorus* No hope left for him With his 50,000 sins Intending to add you to them... See him coming for miles No way to escape from him No way to fight it As he comes through Wrecking everything before him... *chorus* 50,000 and rising Some lost count years back Yet he keeps adding to the list And has you in his sights So prepare yourself For the fight of your life... *chorus to end* Meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 your posts make me feel very ill. Haaahhhhahahahaha. you there, write more ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Night Lights Looking at the lights, Checking out the night And I'm ready for a fight Theres nothing wrong But I'm not getting along I'm not thinking anything right And when the sorrow comes in I can see clearly again For a little moment, One small moment I see a glimpse of life Even the pain couldn't stop myself again And when I wander along peacefully In comes the barging rain And all I get is hatred through words And All I see is this dying world Maybe for one time I won't care Find myself living life the way I want it Any where out there Nothing can't seem to keep me happy It's all so temporary It's like I'm holding a ball and chain I'm always strapped to some sort of pain Ain't a thing now that I can change There isn't anything at all that I can change And when comes the time I find myself Doing something right I'll change right away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 ^ i like that! i need to write something. i've had writer's block for like, six months. Burn the Holy removed. uhm, this offends me. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 9, 2008 Report Share Posted September 9, 2008 our get-away car sits on the driveway and reminds us how far we've come and what we've got away with well the imprint on the grass by my side is as close as we're going to get for a while at least the discouraging pages we tore out to keep the books as clean as we could are inspiring the gutters quite effectively well i'm uninspired and torn apart with exactly as many memories left as when i first started, only without you i left clues, i'm convinced, i told you wear these shoes and we'll dance because i can't resist the way you walked in and glared right at me i can't resist you, so let's get away we'll get away with it, without a doubt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 ^ grr. yer amazing. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 aw jee thanks (: haven't written anything in a good while, it's actually proving quite hard to get back into but whateverrr, perseverance and all that ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelsleadyouin Posted September 12, 2008 Report Share Posted September 12, 2008 does anyone know what this line means from the song Philia by Waltz Reprise? "You call me out, your blood" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowCookie-x Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Erm... This is random... But here we go;; I stand over you again. My angers taking over again. The split alcohol all over the floor To the match in my hand. All my broken clocks And forget me not's. I held you close Not long ago You were my lifeline Now You Pissed Me Off I found out about her And all the lies you told My heart you had broken Watching the lies unfold. Now my foots on your chest I'm trying to break you. Just so you feel And inch of the pain It took to love again. It took to trust again It took to loose again. Why is my heart shattering again? Errr Comment, maybe send me a message? taaa x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanguis Dominus Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 ^ i like that! i need to write something. i've had writer's block for like, six months. uhm, this offends me. How so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Standings The day is cracking The ground is much too strong And it appears that the very soil Seems to be very wrong Well it seems your person Has fallen and left All my worries for you Are now gone with the wind And theres nothing now To make me think again Because my sustain is too great And I'm convinced I don't need a friend I can destroy your standing And I can trip over the rocks So why don't you lay some more down While your confusion grows a frown Theres nothing here you can use Theres nothing here at all I want you to leave so smoothly And I don't want to see you fall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
travel_hymn Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 How so? Maybe because she believes in God? Honestly you should keep stuff like that out of this forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanguis Dominus Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 And Christianity offends me, 'swhy I wrote it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xletthisgox Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 And Christianity offends me, 'swhy I wrote it. but she didnt write a poem about killing people who are offended by christianity. pretty much any bashing of religion/race/sexuality etc.. should be left off the forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanguis Dominus Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 There's already a whole book written about killing everyone who isn't Christian, though, 'sacalled The Bible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xletthisgox Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 That's not the point. The book you meantioned isn't on this thread. And neither should there be poems about killing people of ANY religion. If you wanna post things like that I would sugest going to like an anti-christian forum or somethin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanguis Dominus Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 This is a poetry thread. I wrote a poem. I posted it. You can't just say "I don't like the theme of that poem, therefore it shouldn't be posted.". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xletthisgox Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 well actually I can say that, but it's the moderators who make up the rules, and if you post something against those rules... then they can remove the post. just a heads up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 There is rules on respecting people's belief's and religion, and that clearly does not respect them, Can i please ask you to remove that poem or i will do it myself, Ross Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanguis Dominus Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 You can. It's effort. 'Sides, anyone who was going to've read it must've already read it, by now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 I've had a must-write period for a couple of days. This is what I've written today, wanna comment? Do you see me when you look at me? Do you know me when you see me? Do you hear me when I talk? Just because I'm there and you look at me Doesn't necissarily mean that you see me, Just beacuse you see me, doesn't mean you know me And, just because I talk does not mean that you hear me Nothing points to the fact That you love me or notice me But I've seen you And I've known you I've even heard you But what does any of that mean in life If you can't see me? ---------- A picture of you would be amazing To hear your voice would be breathtaking I haven't seen you for eight years And that you're never coming back is my only fear I remember your smile It was holy and devine When I close my eyes I see your face in my mind But I don't know If it's real The way that I right now feel Love or hatred I just can't tell Becasue this life just feels like hell Living without you hear I'm swimming in tears Come back and return to me That would be the only way to set my pain free You my dear Is my only fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Standings The day is cracking The ground is much too strong And it appears that the very soil Seems to be very wrong Well it seems your person Has fallen and left All my worries for you Are now gone with the wind And theres nothing now To make me think again Because my sustain is too great And I'm convinced I don't need a friend I can destroy your standing And I can trip over the rocks So why don't you lay some more down While your confusion grows a frown Theres nothing here you can use Theres nothing here at all I want you to leave so smoothly And I don't want to see you fall Your best yet, imho. Love it. -- alone? all these years and we're still on our own secrets and hiding never meant so much, you hide and i'll seek. i'll find you by that old rocking chair, as it has been for always, still there the creak of its bones speak louder than words; the speech of young love is better misheard yesterday ? i've heard it's been abandoned after today with the drama that rose up and flew off, without permission or regard. it found us and we fought half-heartedly you gave in and it stopped and laughed at me; "poor child" said the dream and crept away, "can't convince nobody these days" memories ? if i recall they've best forgotten and tired just like the people that own them, so let's bury them at sunset. but they'll jump when we least expect it; they'll pounce when we most regret it i'd rather be left in pieces in peace, but choices mean nothing to fools. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 You can. It's effort. 'Sides, anyone who was going to've read it must've already read it, by now. Cheers for being so helpful, Its really appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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