FrankiePoo Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 haha, thanks btw, that was amazing! and Alannah, that was really good! Is there a continuing? *wanna read it* I'm going to post it on Mibba.com soon Thanks for liking it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 ok so i'm a bit drink and i wrote this>lol it sucks I'm not me i'm drunk you see and i have a story to sing and a song to tell for your ears to see and your eyes to hear are you ready make sure you can handle this the power of the sound it will move you move you like no other so be prepared to be memorized told you major lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Alannah: you're welcome and Jen, nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Alannah: you're welcome and Jen, nice hahaa i can't believe i wrote that *facepalm* i'm so hungover today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 ^ haha I hope it wears out. sry for being off topic. Alannah, what is your username on mibba? I joined yesterday I'm livelikeupreach. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 here is a quick one from me, not that great though. Infatuated. Unyielding dreams overpower Take me to another world A world where we exist Where we are alone and in love Why does my mind do this to me? To tease me with something never possible Night after night i am wrapped up in this false reality Only to awaken to my same old life Why does it continue to happen? And why can't i stop it? How come i'm i so infatuated with you? it's about Robert Pattinson..lol. Lame i know. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Nothing As it washes away Is it cries no more There is nothing Nothing in the world at all Nothing to cry about I want nothing in return for everything you didn't take from me You hate everything Nothing is worth it Nothing can dishonor this pain you have befallen me With that shine of terror upon your face It still shows nothing, nothing I've given all I ever could You and I You and him I'll kill him And give you nothing He is a nothing He is nothing to me This is an old one, I wrote this few years back and I wrote it in a journal I just found. And yes, I did use the word nothing quite a bit. (Nothing count = 11) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 NothingAs it washes away Is it cries no more There is nothing Nothing in the world at all Nothing to cry about I want nothing in return for everything you didn't take from me You hate everything Nothing is worth it Nothing can dishonor this pain you have befallen me With that shine of terror upon your face It still shows nothing, nothing I've given all I ever could You and I You and him I'll kill him And give you nothing He is a nothing He is nothing to me This is an old one, I wrote this few years back and I wrote it in a journal I just found. And yes, I did use the word nothing quite a bit. (Nothing count = 11) aww i like it i'm sort of having writers block at bit right now as far as poems are concerned, i'm thinking of writing a short story though. I have an idea for that in my head swirling around..lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emily ! Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Haven't posted here in a while.. [: A Thousand Broken Hearts. Smiling at the faces Of a thousand broken hearts. Love is such a spleder thing, Overrated destinies, Smiling in the dark. These messages flow through me, A thousand waves of sound. Love, the broken promise. Underated mysteries, Smiling in the dark. Our paramour of life, Dancing, Under red umbrella skies, Living up the different kinda life. Smiling at the faces Of a thousand broken hearts. Love is such a spleder thing, Overrated destinies, Smiling in the dark. These messages flow through me, A thousand waves of sound. Love, the broken promise. Underated mysteries, Smiling in the dark. Belonging is the substance Of a distant memory. These messages flow through me, a thousand broken hearts. Love is such a spleder thing, the broken promise. Smiling in the dark. It’s time for us to leave you hear, We have to get away, A infinite broken hearts, The memories remain. I’ll shy away from meaning. Meaning I run from you, always. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
closesttoheaven Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 ^ i liked that. more crap once again; morning shines in moving ends here a dark zone fears in as the tears fall on our hands, we drown in our sins caving in lies over lives we fought for thoughts we lost in look at what's happened to us falling the tears from our eyes as they flood the ground they're drowning you goodbye reasons for, is what we're searching for as they fade, we wait as they fade, we wave don't fade away, don't fade way not from this life not all alone cause things will make us change they will change just stay we'll change reasons hide, searching deep inside look at what's happened to us falling the tears from our eyes as they flood the ground they're drowning you goodbye reasons for, is what we're searching for as they fade, we wait as they fade, we wave i saw you, walking in my dream i saw you, walking my dream you didn't tell me a thing just told me i'm too far from you haunting you, it's haunting you the dream ends, it didn't mean anything you didn't tell me a thing moving ends hiding us deep inside as they fade, we wait as they fade, we'll wave goodbye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 It's not crap. ^ No Matter What Let your passions Move you ahead Allow your hatred To disappear As you lay in bed With no friend near There's really nothing that you can do The nice people you dream of It's a shame there are so few That would like to be a friend to you The faces are strange You recognize none at all You've given up on love You let yourself fall No ones here to show you their care No ones here to owe you their stare Good things can happen to those who will wait No matter what you do You always think no one will love you out there A Loved Liar You used all of us pretty well You used your evils for your benefit So long ago I trusted you I never thought this is something you'd ever do Anything now, Can't make you gone Well this is another battle we can say you won You lied to everyone's face We never put doubt anywhere in your place We really believed and loved you But that's in the past now and with All the lies I never knew I'll never Know what to do You held my biggest respect And I held you close to my heart Who would have thought you'd tear us apart It was my love that you betrayed It was the truth that never lived in you Your intention can mention Everything that's you Regardless of all of this Why do I still love you All of the lies my family never knew Forgive me, I don't have the strength I can't hurt you, I can't go the length I'll always care about the pain hiding Behind your face And you can lie It's such a simple task I loved you the most And yet you still wear your mask I still don't know what to do The words I've read Killed my trust It's dead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vorrigan Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 Ok so i cant let my friends read this but i need to get it out there and this is the writing thread right? i dont really know what it is so lets just go with poem theres a certain way you need to read it or it doesnt flow so just warning you Scars You stop me, you halt me Halt me in my tracks! I need you, I feel it Let me...No! You pulled me back! Why can’t you let me go? I’m free now It’s gone now I just hope you’re happy Nothing there but scars remaining You can see the scars! I need it, I want it It feels right, it feels! Don’t ask me To say it I can’t! I won’t! Oh no! I’m free now, It’s gone now, I just hope you’re happy, It’s gone now, I’m free I promise Oh but for the scars! I like it, don’t tell me Let me, let me please! Of course not, I’ll say it, All you want to know, But I can’t! No I can’t, What do you want to know? I’ll stop it! I promise, I can’t say it anymore! I’m free now, It’s gone now, I just hope you’re happy, But what was the point then? It’s all gone but scars remaining, Scary, so scary, You can see the scars... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 Mama Mama take my rights from me I can't stand this life anymore Mama, How can this be You've passed out you're on the floor What happened to our family What happened to our love Where did our respect and love go What happened to the morals we used to know Mama, I'm so sad again today There's nothing you or I can do this way The drinks we drink can't make us think Cause we pick up things we're ashamed of And take things into the next day What happened to my dad What happened to you being glad Where do you think I'll go And have my own problems grow Mama, What have you done today Mama, Did you want to live this way Mama, You won't be here for long Mama, I've written you this song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 12, 2009 Report Share Posted January 12, 2009 hypnotise me ? i despise you, but admire the way you move. can you talk ? the way you walk, the way you walked out on me. left to die, i survived and i don't like to brag but the way i fight, i'll save the night, the way the night saved me. close your eyes, see the lie and the heights you built us fall, shall we fall ? the way you fooled, the fools that promised it all. explain, they said, the words i wrote- they heard the way i said the words i wrote. explain everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 Jorgi hath returned. My Secret Friend Did you keep your secret Warm in lies That you had about The deepest skies Could it be I found you out Through the pain coming through your eyes You have a love that know one knows Deep beneath your face thats where it grows Did they scare the lies out of you My poor little friend You've decided today Is where your diary will end The bullet will say goodbye For you and I The only thing that reminds me now Of you, Is the blue beautiful sky No one knew, What to do When the person they hated Was never you Now they hate themselves They thought it would be fun It seems in the end my secret friend You earned what you won Goodbye my secret friend I loved you, My little friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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