The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[Locomotion]

well alot of pple said that they love to write and stuff

 

so feel free to post all your works here =D

 

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[conspiracy]

the room's dew, her sweat

smell the vodka on her warm breath

blood rush to her face

run, rush to escape

lashed at and unsafe

you'll see, just wait

itll be like nothing ever happened

 

over again

your loss

invested trust in her

robbed her for all shes worth

now youre no better

 

 

 

I wrote that about my mom a while back.. haha I used to write a lot more but then I noticed I sucked so I stopped until I needed to write something.

[rocker_chick_lc]

the room's dew' date=' her sweat

smell the vodka on her warm breath

blood rush to her face

run, rush to escape

lashed at and unsafe

you'll see, just wait

itll be like nothing ever happened

 

over again

your loss

invested trust in her

robbed her for all shes worth

now youre no better

 

 

 

I wrote that about my mom a while back.. haha I used to write a lot more but then I noticed I sucked so I stopped until I needed to write something.[/quote']

That is really good.

[MeLoN]

Ohh thats gr8 conspiracy! Ill post sum of my lyrics soon lol

[benzzz]

Thats heaps good

[HayleyP]

hmm i write but im too embarassed to post it here.. lol

[MeLoN]

^Im curious now lol! Aww too bad ur so embarassed tho

[rocker_chick_lc]

I would post something, but It has to be kinda sucky for me to risk it getting taken. Oh well, It doesnt seem like anyone else is sharing their stuff.

[FeRo]

im not much of a wirter, but i like to read that kind of stuff

 

conspiracy, thats awsome!!! i liked it a lot

[x3__kim]

So here's one of our songs, we're gonna be performing it this weekend, cause we're throwing this big party for my grandma and grandpa, and so we wrote this for them, lol, more to come:

 

“You”

Loud Whispers

 

I’m running down the sidewalk

Chasing the ice cream truck

My shoelaces are untied

I trip on my chucks

Then I’m lying there bleeding for all to see

But then you come speeding here to rescue me

You picked me up and carried me home

(You had things to do, but never left me alone)

 

Chorus

Mommy won’t let me eat the candy, she says I’m getting to fat

I sit and cry in the little corner, what’s that under your hat

You grabbed one of the sweets for me

And told me not to let mommy see

You giggled, and I laughed

We shared something special that I wish would have last

 

When you came and visited

You brought me all these toys

You put a smile on my face

And filled my heart with joy

When it was time to go home

I know I would see you again

Whenever I felt alone

You’d always be my friend

You always pinched our cheeks and called us you little babies

(You always loved us, even when we were lazy)

 

Chorus

 

Now that we’re all grown up

We’ve appreciate what you’ve done

We did so many things together

We had so much fun

Even though we don’t see each other

As much anymore

We’ll still be a family

Living rich or poor

 

Chorus 2x

 

Bridge

This song maybe just simple chords, a simple tune

But we will sing this song for the both of you

 

Mommy won’t let me eat the candy, she says I’m getting to fat

I sit and cry in the little corner, what’s that under your hat

You grabbed one of the sweets for me, and told me not to let mommy see

You giggled, and I laughed

We share something special

I know will last

[conspiracy]

that's cute <3

 

and who's "we" ?

 

and wow, thanks everybody

[rocker_chick_lc]

So here's one of our songs' date=' we're gonna be performing it this weekend, cause we're throwing this big party for my grandma and grandpa, and so we wrote this for them, lol, more to come:

 

“You”

Loud Whispers

 

I’m running down the sidewalk

Chasing the ice cream truck

My shoelaces are untied

I trip on my chucks

Then I’m lying there bleeding for all to see

But then you come speeding here to rescue me

You picked me up and carried me home

(You had things to do, but never left me alone)

 

Chorus

Mommy won’t let me eat the candy, she says I’m getting to fat

I sit and cry in the little corner, what’s that under your hat

You grabbed one of the sweets for me

And told me not to let mommy see

You giggled, and I laughed

We shared something special that I wish would have last

 

When you came and visited

You brought me all these toys

You put a smile on my face

And filled my heart with joy

When it was time to go home

I know I would see you again

Whenever I felt alone

You’d always be my friend

You always pinched our cheeks and called us you little babies

(You always loved us, even when we were lazy)

 

Chorus

 

Now that we’re all grown up

We’ve appreciate what you’ve done

We did so many things together

We had so much fun

Even though we don’t see each other

As much anymore

We’ll still be a family

Living rich or poor

 

Chorus 2x

 

Bridge

This song maybe just simple chords, a simple tune

But we will sing this song for the both of you

 

Mommy won’t let me eat the candy, she says I’m getting to fat

I sit and cry in the little corner, what’s that under your hat

You grabbed one of the sweets for me, and told me not to let mommy see

You giggled, and I laughed

We share something special

I know will last[/quote']

Thats really good, and unique!

[x3__kim]

that's cute <3

 

and who's "we" ?

 

and wow' date=' thanks everybody [/quote']

 

"we" is for all the grand children,

 

thanks

[HayleyP]

ok you've talked me into it. hehehe. this is a poem i wrote some time last year:

There was nothing I could do to help her,

She was in too deep and there was no cure.

Nobody knows why she felt that way,

Now nobody will ever know why she felt it everyday.

I couldn’t stop her from doing what she did,

Nobody could she was a real wild kid.

She knew things were never quite what they seemed,

She said she was stuck inside someone else’s bad dream.

I just hope she knows we loved her a lot,

Because she never tried to be something she’s not.

I never understood why she would teased,

They would punch and kick her whenever they pleased.

Then one day she couldn’t take it anymore,

I walked in and saw her lying cold on the floor.

She slit her wrists so bad she died,

I hope she knows we care and we cried.

I’m glad you could all make it today,

I know she would’ve wanted her funeral to be this way.

[benzzz]

ok you've talked me into it. hehehe. this is a poem i wrote some time last year:

There was nothing I could do to help her' date='

She was in too deep and there was no cure.

Nobody knows why she felt that way,

Now nobody will ever know why she felt it everyday.

I couldn’t stop her from doing what she did,

Nobody could she was a real wild kid.

She knew things were never quite what they seemed,

She said she was stuck inside someone else’s bad dream.

I just hope she knows we loved her a lot,

Because she never tried to be something she’s not.

I never understood why she would teased,

They would punch and kick her whenever they pleased.

Then one day she couldn’t take it anymore,

I walked in and saw her lying cold on the floor.

She slit her wrists so bad she died,

I hope she knows we care and we cried.

I’m glad you could all make it today,

I know she would’ve wanted her funeral to be this way.[/b']

Thats really good and sad

[MeLoN]

ok you've talked me into it. hehehe. this is a poem i wrote some time last year:

There was nothing I could do to help her' date='

She was in too deep and there was no cure.

Nobody knows why she felt that way,

Now nobody will ever know why she felt it everyday.

I couldn’t stop her from doing what she did,

Nobody could she was a real wild kid.

She knew things were never quite what they seemed,

She said she was stuck inside someone else’s bad dream.

I just hope she knows we loved her a lot,

Because she never tried to be something she’s not.

I never understood why she would teased,

They would punch and kick her whenever they pleased.

Then one day she couldn’t take it anymore,

I walked in and saw her lying cold on the floor.

She slit her wrists so bad she died,

I hope she knows we care and we cried.

I’m glad you could all make it today,

I know she would’ve wanted her funeral to be this way.[/b']

 

Wow thats beautiful..It reminds me of my sis!

[MeLoN]

Heres this song I wrote about my sister..Its kind of long *lol*

 

So she sat and she smiled but then she turned away

The picture I saw started to fade

Dreams broke apart, life flew away

And there was nothing left I could say

 

She lost grip and so did I,

We fell together through day and night

We never tried to get back up

Just sat and waited for it all to stop

 

But home wouldnt stop breaking and we hit the ground

I got smashed and stabbed by the awful sound

My heart out on the cold cold floor

I still dont know what I broke down for

 

But I broke down right next to her

We fell into the big dark world

The world we never never saw

But knew so deep within our hearts

We knew we'd fall we knew we'd break

I knew I knew cause I felt her pain

Love was there and love was pure

But never would it be a cure

To what we had and what we broke

Love was there but there was no hope.

 

I remember the day she didnt come back

She told me to tell mum she was with a friend

She said she loved me and she cared

I knew I knew she wouldnt be there

 

Wouldnt be there when Id wake up

Wouldnt be there when Id make it all stop

She wouldnt see me graduate

Or love me when the world would hate

 

She came back but she wasnt breathing

Came back home and she was bleeding

She was alive but yet so dead

No happy thought left in my head

 

I broke down right next to her

We fell into the big dark world

The world we never never saw

But knew so deep within our hearts

We knew we'd fall we knew we'd break

I knew I knew cause I felt her pain

Love was there and love was pure

But never would it be cure

To what we had and what we broke

Love was there but there was no hope

 

I stand here now and there is no rain

No fight or conflict to cause my pain

My pain comes straight from my heart

Im in the middle of an endless war

 

I lost you but our love will last

You are gone but so is my past

No more drama no more blood

On my hands to keep me strong

 

"We" is gone but "I" still lives

I live and I breath and I excist

I laugh and I smile and its all real

What you see is what you get

And what you get is ME

[rocker_chick_lc]

Heres this song I wrote about my sister..Its kind of long *lol*

 

So she sat and she smiled but then she turned away

The picture I saw started to fade

Dreams broke apart' date=' life flew away

And there was nothing left I could say

 

She lost grip and so did I,

We fell together through day and night

We never tried to get back up

Just sat and waited for it all to stop

 

But home wouldnt stop breaking and we hit the ground

I got smashed and stabbed by the awful sound

My heart out on the cold cold floor

I still dont know what I broke down for

 

But I broke down right next to her

We fell into the big dark world

The world we never never saw

But knew so deep within our hearts

We knew we'd fall we knew we'd break

I knew I knew cause I felt her pain

Love was there and love was pure

But never would it be a cure

To what we had and what we broke

Love was there but there was no hope.

 

I remember the day she didnt come back

She told me to tell mum she was with a friend

She said she loved me and she cared

I knew I knew she wouldnt be there

 

Wouldnt be there when Id wake up

Wouldnt be there when Id make it all stop

She wouldnt see me graduate

Or love me when the world would hate

 

She came back but she wasnt breathing

Came back home and she was bleeding

She was alive but yet so dead

No happy thought left in my head

 

I broke down right next to her

We fell into the big dark world

The world we never never saw

But knew so deep within our hearts

We knew we'd fall we knew we'd break

I knew I knew cause I felt her pain

Love was there and love was pure

But never would it be cure

To what we had and what we broke

Love was there but there was no hope

 

I stand here now and there is no rain

No fight or conflict to cause my pain

My pain comes straight from my heart

Im in the middle of an endless war

 

I lost you but our love will last

You are gone but so is my past

No more drama no more blood

On my hands to keep me strong

 

"We" is gone but "I" still lives

I live and I breath and I excist

I laugh and I smile and its all real

What you see is what you get

And what you get is ME[/quote']

That is really good.

[FeRo]

woah, that is really good.

[conspiracy]

wow, yeah that was really good. I could almost hear it being a song just reading it. Awesome job!

[MeLoN]

^Awww thanks =)

[HayleyP]

Heres this song I wrote about my sister..Its kind of long *lol*

 

So she sat and she smiled but then she turned away

The picture I saw started to fade

Dreams broke apart' date=' life flew away

And there was nothing left I could say

 

She lost grip and so did I,

We fell together through day and night

We never tried to get back up

Just sat and waited for it all to stop

 

But home wouldnt stop breaking and we hit the ground

I got smashed and stabbed by the awful sound

My heart out on the cold cold floor

I still dont know what I broke down for

 

But I broke down right next to her

We fell into the big dark world

The world we never never saw

But knew so deep within our hearts

We knew we'd fall we knew we'd break

I knew I knew cause I felt her pain

Love was there and love was pure

But never would it be a cure

To what we had and what we broke

Love was there but there was no hope.

 

I remember the day she didnt come back

She told me to tell mum she was with a friend

She said she loved me and she cared

I knew I knew she wouldnt be there

 

Wouldnt be there when Id wake up

Wouldnt be there when Id make it all stop

She wouldnt see me graduate

Or love me when the world would hate

 

She came back but she wasnt breathing

Came back home and she was bleeding

She was alive but yet so dead

No happy thought left in my head

 

I broke down right next to her

We fell into the big dark world

The world we never never saw

But knew so deep within our hearts

We knew we'd fall we knew we'd break

I knew I knew cause I felt her pain

Love was there and love was pure

But never would it be cure

To what we had and what we broke

Love was there but there was no hope

 

I stand here now and there is no rain

No fight or conflict to cause my pain

My pain comes straight from my heart

Im in the middle of an endless war

 

I lost you but our love will last

You are gone but so is my past

No more drama no more blood

On my hands to keep me strong

 

"We" is gone but "I" still lives

I live and I breath and I excist

I laugh and I smile and its all real

What you see is what you get

And what you get is ME[/quote']

 

holy hell thats so good!

 

i wrote this about my dear old dad:

I used to love you daddy,

For you I used to care.

So why, daddy,

Did you go and leave me there?

 

Why, daddy, did you leave?

Why, daddy, did you go?

Oh please tell me daddy,

Why you left mummy all alone.

 

I thought it was my fault, daddy,

I thought I’d done something bad.

I cried for hours, daddy,

God you made me sad.

 

I was only little daddy,

Just a little girl.

You broke my heart, daddy,

You sent my head in a twirl.

 

Now deep inside me, daddy,

Is an unbreakable hatred for you.

The kind that stays there, daddy,

And sticks to your heart like glue.

[MeLoN]

^Omg I love that ..Thats really kool..reminds me of a few things!..Its great! I can hear someone sing it ya know

[MeLoN]

Far from home

 

Sometimes, sometimes I sit alone somewhere

Trying, trying to breathe

And sometimes life doesnt seem that fair

Cause It keeps on hitting back on me.

And sometimes I fall right down

Right down that deep black hole

I fall right back into emptyness

Right back, right back..home

But home seems so unreal to me

Home's just a fantasy

A dream we once desired to live

But never will, never will

And from a distance

Home seems so perfect

From a lil distance

It feels so damn perfect

Then youre right in the middle

Blinded by the light

Of everylasting trouble

That will never leave your side

Nomatter where we go it follows

Nomatter what, it feels so hollow

Dead or alive..Alive or dead

The decisions already made up in my head.

My past is always with me

I am always with my past

However I believe and deep down know

That the feelings I then had are far from home.

[HayleyP]

you're really good.