The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[Linney]

You're very good! I'll tell you a secret, I'm jealous and I hate you for being this good.

 

Thank you sooo much Haha, I think it's the other way around

[notoriousfat67]

There is almost no one who writes in this thread

I just wrote a song and I wanted to share.

 

Inside Herself She's Bound

 

Voices echoing inside

Screaming, saying: you're behind

Walls built up around

Inside herself she's bound

Forced herself to open her eyes

So she wouldn't see the bleeding soul inside

People saying: You don't deserve to live

She is trying hard not to see the ending

 

[Pre-Chorus]

Six more steps and she will fall

Six more minutes and finished is all

 

[Chorus]

Whispers in the wind

Telling her to jump down

Failure, misfit, loser

Not a single hand reached out

Not a single tear shed for her

Save me, she thinks, but doesn't say out loud

Hopes that a miracle will pass by

Waiting for a day when the sun will shine

 

Surrounding peoples seem to adore

Living to bully, that's what they're for

Watches life through a linse

Can not find the amazing things

Patterns created to knock her down

Echoes of the shattering sound

She lives a retouched life

Where whoever wants leaves a scratch inside

 

[Pre-Chorus]

Six more steps and she will fall

Six more minutes and finished is all

 

[Chorus]

Whispers in the wind

Telling her to jump down

Failure, misfit, loser

Not a single hand reached out

Not a single tear shed for her

Save me, she thinks, but doesn't say out loud

Hopes that a miracle will pass by

Waiting for a day when the sun will shine

 

Sitting down, watching the sun

But it never shines on her

Soon to be, letting go

In belief of a better place

Where there'll always be someone

Who'd like to be her rescue

Her life is shattered like broken glass

And someone needs to fix it fast

 

Surrounding peoples seem to adore

Living to bully, that's what they're for (x3)

 

[Chorus]

Whispers in the wind

Telling her to jump down

Failure, misfit, loser

Not a single hand reached out

Not a single tear shed for her

Save me, she thinks, but doesn't say out loud

Hopes that a miracle will pass by

Waiting for a day when the sun will shine

 

I used to write a lot a long time ago, not on here cause it was before i knew of this forum but i've had writers block for nearly 3 years. i do have things i've written on this thread but they're not good because they're forced.

 

p.s. i like this.

[closesttoheaven]

okay so i seriously wrote this 2 minutes ago in 5 minutes. please give me your honest opinions. i know it probably sucks. but i'm improving, right?

 

He whispers in her ear

The things she doesn't want to hear

He tries to make her understand

The things she cannot stand

He wants to be her hero

Though she's feared to be a zero

He tries to make her love

But she doesn't want to be his dove

Even though, she is above.

 

i might add on to it and change it a bit.

[Linney]

I used to write a lot a long time ago, not on here cause it was before i knew of this forum but i've had writers block for nearly 3 years. i do have things i've written on this thread but they're not good because they're forced.

 

p.s. i like this.

 

 

Okay. Thanks

[Jorgi]

alone is the last place

that i wanted to be

and well baby i'm sure

there are things more addicting

than you can give me

but i'll take them anyway,

just incase

 

we hide our hearts under sheets

but our guns in our sleeves

with faith left forgotten

but plenty of disbelief

well, never mind, we'll survive

eventually

 

i listened well

but heard nothing

that told us we could be anything

i could be everything

if you asked, did you ask ?

just incase i misheard,

just incase

 

light hearts, dark minds

dirty hands, clean conscience

is this all ?

[Linney]

alone is the last place

that i wanted to be

and well baby i'm sure

there are things more addicting

than you can give me

but i'll take them anyway,

just incase

 

we hide our hearts under sheets

but our guns in our sleeves

with faith left forgotten

but plenty of disbelief

well, never mind, we'll survive

eventually

 

i listened well

but heard nothing

that told us we could be anything

i could be everything

if you asked, did you ask ?

just incase i misheard,

just incase

 

light hearts, dark minds

dirty hands, clean conscience

is this all ?

 

That is just, great. Me like

[Wildman]

This is the last one I wrote, and that was over a year ago, here it is:

 

My Silent Lullaby

By Ernie W

 

I am sitting here all alone

My darkness is reigning over me

Thoughts of her seem to cross my mind

My wrists are bleeding

But it's for you

Only you

I am not blessed by God

He hates me and it's your fault

What did I do for this?

I am dying here

And what a joyous feeling

Now I don't have to think of you anymore

O what a lifeless lie

I hate you

Everything I said to you was a lie

I don't love you

I hate you

But I have to think...

I'm about to die and your the last thing on my life....

Spare me the pity

I bless over you

And I forgive you

This is my end, and you let go

I love you

 

(No, I'm not emo)

[Jammer]

Untitled

 

So the lesson starts today

Teach me how to turn heads

Get the attention I deserve

Like the way you caught my eye

From across the packed court...

 

Gorged myself on your deep blue eyes

Could never forget that gaze

Would never want to leave you behind...

 

I spent all of the night

Trying to figure you out

But your soul escaped me

I spent all last night

Trying to keep you sussed

But you're still an enigma to me...

 

Walked into my life

As though you already owned it

But that wouldn't bother me

I wouldn't mind being your slave

An experience like no other...

 

*pre-chorus and chorus*

 

I'll never figure you out

As long as I walk the earth

And I'd prefer that state

We all love a good puzzle

And you're the best there is...

 

*pre-chorus and chorus again*

 

Spent all last night

Trying to figure you out

(Trying to figure you out)

But you always get away

(Always get away)

So I'm content to let you go

Let you be my enigma girl...

 

[Linney]

Untitled

 

So the lesson starts today

Teach me how to turn heads

Get the attention I deserve

Like the way you caught my eye

From across the packed court...

 

Gorged myself on your deep blue eyes

Could never forget that gaze

Would never want to leave you behind...

 

I spent all of the night

Trying to figure you out

But your soul escaped me

I spent all last night

Trying to keep you sussed

But you're still an enigma to me...

 

Walked into my life

As though you already owned it

But that wouldn't bother me

I wouldn't mind being your slave

An experience like no other...

 

*pre-chorus and chorus*

 

I'll never figure you out

As long as I walk the earth

And I'd prefer that state

We all love a good puzzle

And you're the best there is...

 

*pre-chorus and chorus again*

 

Spent all last night

Trying to figure you out

(Trying to figure you out)

But you always get away

(Always get away)

So I'm content to let you go

Let you be my enigma girl...

 

 

Me like

[777]

Well I can't wait

until I make you curious

You've made me wish so long

To be your friend

I know once we actually become

The way they are, The happy ones

Our happiness will end

And I'll hate you again

 

Nothing ever made me ashamed

Until you taught me how to be

You showed me what to like

and what to hate

I'm tired of thinking of how

to play your game

 

Now I seem to want you back again

Yes this is your game

I'm stupid so I fall for it

every single time

 

And now you'll toy with me

and you'll throw me insults

You'll abuse my thoughts

And you'll wreck my mind

 

It Seems Every Time I Feel Good

You're There To Ruin It

When I'm In The Sunlight

I Feel Alright

[Ace]

This is a song I wrote called: i need an angel.

 

V1: sometimes i feel lonely,

sometimes i don't care,

and people talk about me,

like i'm not there!

but there are words inside me,

that i can't bare,

i need a friend,

who really cares.

 

C: Sometimes i feel like screaming,

the words I hold inside,

like i'm loosing courage,

i'm loosing my pride,

i want a friend,

who really cares,

who can help me,

when no one's there!

i need an angel......

 

V2: Sometimes i want to say things i can not say,

but nothing goes my way,

i feel so sad, most of the time,

I want someone i can count on,

someone to keep me safe,

from dusk to dawn!

 

C: Sometimes i feel like screaming,

the words I hold inside,

like i'm loosing courage,

i'm loosing my pride,

i want a friend,

who really cares,

who can help me,

when no one's there!

i need an angel......

 

B: sometimes i hurt inside......

i feel like i'm telling a lie

i need someone,

who will be there

but who will that person be?

can they take the dare??!!!

 

C: Sometimes i feel like screaming,

the words I hold inside,

like i'm loosing courage,

i'm loosing my pride,

i want a friend,

who really cares,

who can help me,

when no one's there!

i need an angel

i need an angel.....

[bsngr95]

i wrote this song like this morning(1 AM) and its called "in your arms"

 

Hold me in your arms please

tell me everything’s alright

make the tears go away

sing me to sleep

 

Tell me you love me, no matter what

tell me you’ll always be there for me

hold me when I fall, carry me when I cant walk

 

I need you, oh so ever

help me to get through this

I love you, you are my help

you take all the pain away

 

Hold me in your arms

hold me tight and close

Kiss me; make it go away

just hold me

 

Be with me never leave

promise me everything

give me the world

make me better

 

Hold me in your arms please

tell me everything’s alright

make the tears go away

sing me to sleep

[Linney]

Wrote this a moment ago, don't laugh at the title please.

 

Coke Machine

 

You've got a shiny car

Nice ride, but that's not all

A pretty face to match your smile

A good reason to waste my time

 

Pre-chorus

You walked up to me, said, hey are you free

What a stupid pickup line, but It is my time

Thinking you're the one, yeah

I've seen you around

 

Chorus

You said hey, let's go home

So we'll be on our own

Thought you were so smart

But it would all fall apart

'Cuz I am who I am

And you are who you are

You're that stupid guy, with your shiny car

 

You flashed your white teeth

'Cuz that's how you greet

Smiled with your gorgeous eyes

Showed me your soul inside

Pre-chorus

You walked up to me, said, hey are you free

What a stupid pickup line, but It is my time

Thinking you're the one, yeah

I've seen you around

Chorus

You said hey, let's go home

So we'll be on our own

Thought you were so smart

But it would all fall apart

'Cuz I am who I am

And you are who you are

You're that stupid guy, with your shiny car

 

Bridge

Before it was too late

I stopped and said hey

You might be hot on the outside

But you're as cold as that coke machine inside

Go show your smile to someone else

I don't need your help

I can take care of myself

 

Chorus

You said hey, let's go home

So we'll be on our own

Thought you were so smart

But it would all fall apart

'Cuz I am who I am

And you are who you are

You're that stupid guy, with your shiny car

[777]

Love!

 

I feel so foolish trying to love you

How you like to dis respect me

But I won't place the blame on you

Because I know you love me too

The beauty I saw in you has left

But your lovely face still remains

And that's all you need to find another love

But I know that the winds of change

Will blow your way one day

and when that day comes

We can be friends once again

And we can try to avoid our inevitable end

 

All the things I've planned

All were thrown away

When you told me that you loved me

Yes I still remember that day

All the love that I can see

Has filled both you and me

And heres to you my sweet love

Just because you rise above

All the ones in my heart

yes I'll hate when we break apart

For now I'll forget you're rude

And people will think we're both new

But all they know

Is nothing that can't grow

 

 

Edit:

 

I was just fooling around with different words and I didn't really think too long on this one...It was almost like practice I guess, Which is why it's so WAAACKY!!!!

 

Ta-da!

 

All the things that cost me my pride

Definitely wasn't worth it if there was you

I knew that you, Could leave me too

But I think you think I need something

So don't pity me or provoke me

to pat my back

Because I can't be bothered to do something

So boring so begone and I'll be here

No where near, The fear that you made clear

To my eyes that were closed

But unfortunately it's me I love most

 

I don't love my friends, I would if I had some

You can ask me to count them all

But I have none

It seems I'm too shy

Or maybe no one likes me

So I'll act like I don't care

I've been doing that for so long

Theres so many things wrong with me I cannot bear

Another second living my plain life

So there comes second thoughts about grabbing the knife

but I don't want to be like them

I want to stand out

So I'll show everyone I'm sad

While I'm out and about

[Linney]

Love!

 

I feel so foolish trying to love you

How you like to dis respect me

But I won't place the blame on you

Because I know you love me too

The beauty I saw in you has left

But your lovely face still remains

And that's all you need to find another love

But I know that the winds of change

Will blow your way one day

and when that day comes

We can be friends once again

And we can try to avoid our inevitable end

 

All the things I've planned

All were thrown away

When you told me that you loved me

Yes I still remember that day

All the love that I can see

Has filled both you and me

And heres to you my sweet love

Just because you rise above

All the ones in my heart

yes I'll hate when we break apart

For now I'll forget you're rude

And people will think we're both new

But all they know

Is nothing that can't grow

 

 

Edit:

 

I was just fooling around with different words and I didn't really think too long on this one...It was almost like practice I guess, Which is why it's so WAAACKY!!!!

 

Ta-da!

 

All the things that cost me my pride

Definitely wasn't worth it if there was you

I knew that you, Could leave me too

But I think you think I need something

So don't pity me or provoke me

to pat my back

Because I can't be bothered to do something

So boring so begone and I'll be here

No where near, The fear that you made clear

To my eyes that were closed

But unfortunately it's me I love most

 

I don't love my friends, I would if I had some

You can ask me to count them all

But I have none

It seems I'm too shy

Or maybe no one likes me

So I'll act like I don't care

I've been doing that for so long

Theres so many things wrong with me I cannot bear

Another second living my plain life

So there comes second thoughts about grabbing the knife

but I don't want to be like them

I want to stand out

So I'll show everyone I'm sad

While I'm out and about

 

I looove this part:

 

All the love that I can see

Has filled both you and me

And heres to you my sweet love

Just because you rise above

All the ones in my heart

yes I'll hate when we break apart

 

[777]

Morning!

 

Well I can smell the morning air

The memories of my home town

Come back to haunt and excite me

Theres blue light all around

And now I miss my old home

And how everything used to be

Sometimes I wish I could go back in time

To the place where I never hated me

 

I'll hide

So You can't tell me

What I'm doing wrong

Or How to live

And then you'll see

That you were wrong

But thats ok

Because tommorows another day

 

What I used to see

Isn't here with me

And How I used to live

Is how I wished It'd be

But You cant win in life

So easily

So I'll be sad for another day

 

And The Voices Of Yesterday

Spoke To Me

Oh How I Miss Yesterday

Where I Used To Play

[Jorgi]

Well I can smell the morning air

The memories of my home town

Come back to haunt and excite me

Theres blue light all around

And now I miss my old home

And how everything used to be

 

that's the spot, right there.

 

 

 

smile question mark

 

i could start to run away from you and your arms and

your eyes and the way you apologised so sincerely

 

and the house that we had built could crumble

most sincerely,

to the ground and i'd mourn that loss more

than i'd mourn you

 

but what if we never know ?

those stories aren't for us to hear or understand

and i won't go straight away, i'll sit and imagine

how much i'll miss you

before your grip gets too tight and i leave

without so much as a goodbye or a tear

 

but maybe i'll wave as i drown, just incase

you see through it all, but i'll keep my head down

and my feet on the ground and hope for the best,

in everyone except myself and i'll just smile

 

because maybe.

[Defiance]

eeemmmoooooo

[Jorgi]

Yup !

[Defiance]

write something happy you shhllaaaaag! also, im not going to reading anymore, so...come to cambridge!

[777]

I decided to use a subject to practice on and uhh, Thats where this came from.

 

 

 

Greedy Kid

 

 

Are you thinking about yourself

Little child, You're the son of power

Everyone will bend over backwards just for you

Just because your dads the man of the hour

 

When will you learn

A soul destined for hell

Well you live really well

And theres nothing wrong with you

That you can't tell

 

And if you think you're the best

Look at the kids

They're all willing to learn

And they're willing to wait

But it's you that can't wait your turn

And now you have everything

Every other kids wants

 

You were born on some money

And you're the envy of everybody

So people will haunt you

Just because they jealous

And they'll never tell us

Why they're so immature

[Linney]

I wrote this song yesterday or something, and it's about love at first sight

 

Perfect

 

You painted this rose to the color of my dreams

Made the sun shine bright

You created light

 

You formed the smile on my never touched lips

Erased all my tears

Got rid of my fears

 

You picked the perfect gift for my birthday

Made the earth a special place

Forgot about your own race

 

Chorus

Created a fairytale, with shimmering joy

You are truly the perfect boy

You delt with the pressure and the cold

Showed me your hand for me to hold

All you did was to say hello

And I felt safer then I've ever known

 

You made them stop fighting over nothing

Stood there to defend

Making sure it was the end

 

You grew a path of truth and love

Made me believe life

Made me sacrifice

 

You knew what was needed, the others was thrown

You gave me your shelter

Made it all better

 

Chorus

Created a fairytale, with shimmering joy

You are truly the perfect boy

You delt with the pressure and the cold

Showed me your hand for me to hold

All you did was to say hello

And I felt safer then I've ever known

 

Bridge

Long years of waiting, for that special moment

Finally found it, perfect without a single dent

During the sun shone, you were the center

Created a sign to your heart, it said enter

 

Chorus

Created a fairytale, with shimmering joy

You are truly the perfect boy

You delt with the pressure and the cold

Showed me your hand for me to hold

All you did was to say hello

And I felt safer then I've ever known

[777]

That is massive! ^ I like it and I also thought I had the recent post in this thread...

 

Anyways Another One!!

 

 

Happily Alone Again

 

 

I spend my days, Thinking what to say

To please your ears, I never like it this way

I don't feel I need to be, Something that you like

Just to accept me

 

Well I'm In My Room, Happily Alone Again

I Wonder If This Loneliness Will End

 

It seems that I want the friends, Who are kind and mean

The ones who lie to everyone,

The one who aren't who they seem

Those are the kinds, That are always fun,

Those are the kids who don't

Like just anyone

 

I give myself my own sympathy

It's the only compassion I give to me

 

Well I'm Here, Happily Alone Again

With No Other Soul, To Happily Call My Friend

I Need An Angel, For God To Send

I Need Someone To Help Make Things Ascend

 

 

 

GAJAHHH TOO RHYMING!!

 

But it's kind of true

[Linney]

Thanks Chris (Can I call you that?)

 

I really liked this part:

 

I give myself my own sympathy

It's the only compassion I give to me

 

[notoriousfat67]

"I give myself my own sympathy

It's the only compassion I give to me"

 

I never thought id ever read something like this on here. its extremely deep, i wish this was in a song so i could listen to it.