The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[777]

Then hey, Lets do this! We shall be a band!

[Andalix]

Yes, when I leave high school I will move there or to the States. Don't know yet!

[777]

OMG! It's actually gonna happen!! COME TO CANADA! Or I could go to the states, Your effin choice maaaan!!

 

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The Ocean

 

I know I can't breathe

I'm drowning in something black

I can only gasp for air

Every few moments

But then I'll be back

To where I started at the bottom of the ocean

 

I'm not myself now

I'm changing every time

I encounter another influence

But I still keep my mind

I wish I would go crazy

I bet this is the hardest part

I'm so far deep into my learned evils

That only a little can still save me

I want it all to end

But thinking such, Is such a sin

I don't want another friend

To judge me, I don't need no one else

To believe in

 

I'm at the bottom of the ocean

And It's too hard to swim

I'm tired of fighting the waters

[Andalix]

Okay, then...I will move to Canada... Just for you!

[777]

SHAAHAHAHAHAH This is sweetnessity!

 

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(Also all powerful mawdz, I'll edit my posts and post more, Savvy? )

 

 

 

Edit:

 

 

 

Friends

 

Look at all my friends

Everyone can think they're so cool

But I know for one they're almost

As pathetic as me

No I won't be the fool,

Here

 

What are we talking about

Why do we degrade what everyone says

Why do we label ourselves as useless

When everything else basically is

This is where their immature minds

Will determine and question their own suicide

And they'll beat themselves more and more

Until inside they've grown too tired

To find out what their role is for

 

We will wear our egos like clothes

And we'll start to hate everyone

But thats what life is

We just kind of have to wait until we're done

And we'll let our family be sad

And we'll always shoot for glory

Because all we seek is only attention

And we'll fill our own little stories

With bragging rights, And victorious fights

And we'll love eachother during peaceful night

[Andalix]

I know I am full of kindness!!lol:D:D

[Linney]

OMG! It's actually gonna happen!! COME TO CANADA! Or I could go to the states, Your effin choice maaaan!!

 

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The Ocean

 

I know I can't breathe

I'm drowning in something black

I can only gasp for air

Every few moments

But then I'll be back

To where I started at the bottom of the ocean

 

I'm not myself now

I'm changing every time

I encounter another influence

But I still keep my mind

I wish I would go crazy

I bet this is the hardest part

I'm so far deep into my learned evils

That only a little can still save me

I want it all to end

But thinking such, Is such a sin

I don't want another friend

To judge me, I don't need no one else

To believe in

 

I'm at the bottom of the ocean

And It's too hard to swim

I'm tired of fighting the waters

 

 

 

The only thing I can say 'bout that is: Wow.

[Jammer]

From the Night

 

*acoustic intro, followed by short solo*

 

Here he comes

Out of the dead of night

He's here to take your life

Don't just stand there

It's time to flee!

 

*groovy riff*

 

You can't get away

He'll track you down

No matter how far you run

Just give it up

And accept your fate!

 

*chorus*

Time to run away

Go as fast as you can

Cause he's coming for you

Out from the dark night...

 

*2nd solo*

 

Don't know what he wants

But you'll see soon enough

Watching him prey on your innocence

Makes me sick to the core

Don't wanna stand by...

 

*chorus*

 

Stood by for too long

Now I'm taking action

Watch me as I go

Doing this for you

Just so you can sleep safe

When the dark night comes!

 

*3rd solo*

 

*chorus to finish*

[777]

Seriously Mr Jammer, Write songs for money.

 

You seem to have it all right there

[Jammer]

Thanks Chris...but I doubt anyone would want my songs.

 

Letting Me Go

 

I know how much it hurts

To let go the one you love

But time is a fickle being

You can't keep him at bay

He'll soon sweep you away...

 

*chorus*

I know this pain you feel

I'm one of the old guard

I know you hate letting me go

But it's time for us to part...

(repeat)

 

To the chest like a dagger

Feel the pain like an icicle

Pressing against the vein

Seems unbearable at first

But you shall adjust to the loss...

 

*chorus*

 

Letting me go

Hardest thing you ever did

Letting me go

Bravest thing you ever did

But don't cry for me

Cause I won't forget your love...

 

*chorus to end*

 

Meh.

[Andalix]

James, i like your two lyrics/poems!!! really like them!!!

[Jammer]

I Asked

 

I asked for joy

I asked for happiness

But when I turned around

I got nothing at all...

 

I asked for redemption

I asked for desire

But when I turned around

I didn't get anything like that...

 

I asked release

I asked for the end

But when I turned around

There was nothing there...

 

I asked for love

I asked for mercy

But when I turned around

You weren't there for me...

 

*emo*

[Sanguis Dominus]

Blood On My Mind

 

I'll rip the skin from your flesh,

your flesh from your bone,

Every single piece

will adorn my twisted throne

 

I'll hang your skull from a chain

A trophy of your defeat.

As the maggots feast

On your fetid meat.

 

Got your blood on my mind.

If you try to hide

I will come find

You.

Destroy you.

Smash you up 'till there's nothing left.

Enjoy extracting your final breath.

 

The pain in your lungs filled with VX2 gas

Your time on this Earth has finally elapsed

Puke out your insides and break your own spine

I sit here and laugh as you run out of time

A merciful death I can't promise you

Though soon enough your life will be through

[my.heart.]

Blood On My Mind

 

I'll rip the skin from your flesh,

your flesh from your bone,

Every single piece

will adorn my twisted throne

 

I'll hang your skull from a chain

A trophy of your defeat.

As the maggots feast

On your fetid meat.

 

Got your blood on my mind.

If you try to hide

I will come find

You.

Destroy you.

Smash you up 'till there's nothing left.

Enjoy extracting your final breath.

 

The pain in your lungs filled with VX2 gas

Your time on this Earth has finally elapsed

Puke out your insides and break your own spine

I sit here and laugh as you run out of time

A merciful death I can't promise you

Though soon enough your life will be through

 

am i right in saying that your screenname means 'blood master' or 'master of blood' or something along those lines?

[Sanguis Dominus]

Yuhuh.

[my.heart.]

Yuhuh.

 

win. for me i get excited at latin because i took it for a level.

[brian KEEEEM]

oh star

its been so long

since ive seen you gone

and left me here

with my broken heart

 

its really not your fault oh star

you’ve lived a peaceful life

maybe tomorrow will be a better day

maybe the clouds will go away

and then you’ll shine brighter

 

oh star, how I wonder where you are

oh star, ill make a wish upon you

oh star, please don’t burn out yet

because then, ill be sadder than I am today

 

oh star

I miss you so much

please lets burn out together

ive watched from far away

as you went day by day

 

its really all my fault oh star

that ive been clinging on

but I cant bend the truth

 

oh star

lets shine twice as bright

oh star, lets fade away together

 

 

 

I didnt write this so i could make an awesome flawless poem/song/whatever, i wrote it because thats how i felt... muahahah idk

[777]

Use it^ Join me...Let's be fellow musicians. (Not in the same band but in the same superhero show)

 

Anyway..

 

Cave

Don't ask me to talk

I don't want to

You can say what you want

I can tell theres a few

Things of things

Why don't you taunt

 

I'll drive myself

And live my life

No one else will recognize me

But myself

 

I took it home

Watched it all and I thought

She had it all

Everything I had wanted

I caved in to temptation

 

I'll drive myself all by myself

I don't need no help

We only get one turn to kick anyways

So I'll daze

Into a shadow of hate

I'm under his wing

And he's blinded the bright pictures

and but it's not impossible

I'll find a way

To destroy my own say

 

 

 

Nephew

 

For all of your pain and hate

I know that I'm to blame

Theres nothing like a cool night

To hurt myself just to get things right

I've seen myself, And I don't like it

So I think I'll change

Just remember if you love me

Take every possible thing to rise above me

 

For you're my friend

And I care about you

So I'll rewind

And we'll be new

So then We can

Enjoy everything

Just for you

 

One day we'll fight

And you'll blame everyone

But thats alright

because thats normal

And it's what I've done

So if you ever find yourself

In your own spotlight of embarrassment

Remember me, And all the things I have done

And remember, You're the oldest son

 

I'm your friend

And I love you

I know it seems I don't

But someday I'll pull through

And if that day doesn't come

You can use it also

Just know that you're not to blame

And you have every right

To lose and to gain

 

 

 

 

Implode

 

I won't sell my thoughts

Just to get away

All of my intentions

Are destroyed

Have you no shame

In what you traded for fame

And it only goes so far

Through the ones who love you

Why must you show everyone that

You have nothing else to do

 

You may think of how I am nice

You should implode for once

 

I hope for a day

When you will learn

When you gain some self respect

And you give others nothing to yearn

 

All of your mentions

Include no love

They only show jealousy

Hate and pity

But theres healthy to make you happy

So you can wander about this city

And search all you want because

I know for one, That what you're looking

for is yourself

[Sanguis Dominus]

Removed due to offensive material - Ross

[Linney]

Use it^ Join me...Let's be fellow musicians. (Not in the same band but in the same superhero show)

 

Anyway..

 

Cave

Don't ask me to talk

I don't want to

You can say what you want

I can tell theres a few

Things of things

Why don't you taunt

 

I'll drive myself

And live my life

No one else will recognize me

But myself

 

I took it home

Watched it all and I thought

She had it all

Everything I had wanted

I caved in to temptation

 

I'll drive myself all by myself

I don't need no help

We only get one turn to kick anyways

So I'll daze

Into a shadow of hate

I'm under his wing

And he's blinded the bright pictures

and but it's not impossible

I'll find a way

To destroy my own say

 

 

 

Nephew

 

For all of your pain and hate

I know that I'm to blame

Theres nothing like a cool night

To hurt myself just to get things right

I've seen myself, And I don't like it

So I think I'll change

Just remember if you love me

Take every possible thing to rise above me

 

For you're my friend

And I care about you

So I'll rewind

And we'll be new

So then We can

Enjoy everything

Just for you

 

One day we'll fight

And you'll blame everyone

But thats alright

because thats normal

And it's what I've done

So if you ever find yourself

In your own spotlight of embarrassment

Remember me, And all the things I have done

And remember, You're the oldest son

 

I'm your friend

And I love you

I know it seems I don't

But someday I'll pull through

And if that day doesn't come

You can use it also

Just know that you're not to blame

And you have every right

To lose and to gain

 

 

Once again, wow

[CaughtInTheRiot]

I am just typing this up out of my head. I came up with it in the shower about 20 minutes ago.

 

It turned out to be a piece of garbage, but I figured since I can't find a pencil and I don't want to open Word then this was the best thing.

 

 

You have the chance,

Pull the trigger!

You have the chance,

Put the bullet in their head!

You have the chance,

Fire away!

You have the chance,

but there is someone watching.

 

Just finish what you've started,

it will all pass in time.

 

Now the city's in chaos!

The lights are chasing after you!

You better disappear,

but before you're done,

before you're done,

don't forget to wipe the blood from your hands,

and hit the lights on your way to hell.

[Linney]

^ good. I really like it. I could hear the drums play to the text

[purplepenguinla]

thats a scary sang i wouldnt listen to

[Sanguis Dominus]

I changed the last line to "And end their reign." on the original, though.

[my.heart.]

your posts make me feel very ill.