eefie Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 ^(: pardon me, but the imprint you left and the footprint stepped is not quite as perfect as imagined. traitors fell for your voice; i'll fall for your eyes and you'll fall at my feet. i swallowed your pride when your throat was too dry, i took the blow and the black eye when you asked, who's weaker ? don't ask who knows. the buildings that fell from your gaze, the lives you changed and helped and failed, you're not enough. i screamed so you'd hear; passion is voiceless, your voice is passionless we're all hopeless till we leave and the world will fall at my feet. wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 Hah, thanks (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 i swallowed your pride when your throat was too dry, i took the blow and the black eye gah jorgi. i want your talent. :[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 jorgi, you are shit, give up on life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 ok someone told me this sounded like twilight but i havent read it so i dont know but anyway tell me the words you spoke that night. The words that changed everything. At the time when our hearts were young and naive. Tell me the story that we shared. The story that stills runs through my mind. Sing me the song we wrote with both our words combined. Now the words "the end" have been written. They have been set in stone. We are living in two seperate worlds. Not one we can call home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SANDIEGO Posted September 27, 2008 Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 I'm so excited this thread exists, I actually have these two songs copywrited =] I would absolutly love to hear what you guys think! Here's to what they say Lyrics © 2008, Bethany U. heres to what they say come and go you're never the same i wanna let you know that im lost without you baby wont you come back inside it was you and me all i had burned every bridge i built and i never looked back you promised me you would be here and you just walked away AND they were wrong when they told me you never know what you got - till its gone cause i knew exactly what i had i guess it turns out im not oh-kay did anything to please you every possible way then you came with the news i remember the day you played it like you were hurting but it was all so fake and then the lies and decieving could you feel me break my heart couldnt see and my eyes couldnt take cause it was too much to handle and this is all i can say WELL they are wrong when they tell you you'll never know what you've got - till its gone because they just havent been here to feel all that i say and theres no way to handle each and every day, but move on ... Concrete Girl © 2008, Bethany U. So you build yourself up Just to tear yourself down Or maybe give up No one would make a sound You're made up of pretense At least that's what they say You walk with your chin up Only to hide your face Well you got what you wanted Or maybe you didn't want it at all Woah concrete girl I'm watching you fall But hey there it's alright Drive up one block and make a right And hey there it's ok Tell yourself its not your fault Keep moving forward at this glacial crawl So you carpe diem every chance you get Seize the day with no regrets Your life's a typo with no delete An it's been a while since you stood on your feet So you take in each breath And you caution each step You're hanging onto hope And questioning regret Just fine the right words And sing them out loud At last I think we did it And this is how it sounds So hey there it's alright Drive up one block and make a right Concrete girl it's ok Tomorrows waiting, a brand new day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 I'm just have to write these names down: Chris, Jorgi, James, Maddie and Bethany. You guys made my day. Does it exist better or more amazing lyrics than that? I don't think so. Soo, give it up for yourself. I am clapping my hands for your gloriousness. Anyway, this is a song, or poem, thing, I wrote about The Tsunami in Asia 2004 so, I hope you like it.. The Wave In the snap of a finger The wave moved closer High and big it stretched back Nobody knew it would make Everything fade In a crowd of screams Everybody started running Most of them would later on End up gone When the wave fell in Higher and higher Chasing everything Destroying everything in its way The walls of the house Torn apart A child's toy laying Far from home After disaster he searched Starving because time's falling Finding something, not someone Two of his own struck by the wave Already found his wife, not in life But not those two And what did I do Nothing because I couldn't move Feeling the sorrow Crawl under my skin Now when I think about it The numbness was nearly not there But yet I didn't move Safe in the other end of the world The age of ten The sorrow just passing me by Now I shed my tears Writing things down Can't stop thinking What I could have done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Hah, You're probably my favorite person here. So cool. I was reading that to "Change - Deftones" and it was epic. I read it again without and it's just so different. A different picture is painted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Hah, You're probably my favorite person here. So cool. I was reading that to "Change - Deftones" and it was epic. I read it again without and it's just so different. A different picture is painted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SANDIEGO Posted September 29, 2008 Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 I'm just have to write these names down: Chris, Jorgi, James, Maddie and Bethany.You guys made my day. Does it exist better or more amazing lyrics than that? I don't think so. Soo, give it up for yourself. I am clapping my hands for your gloriousness. Anyway, this is a song, or poem, thing, I wrote about The Tsunami in Asia 2004 so, I hope you like it.. The Wave In the snap of a finger The wave moved closer High and big it stretched back Nobody knew it would make Everything fade In a crowd of screams Everybody started running Most of them would later on End up gone When the wave fell in Higher and higher Chasing everything Destroying everything in its way The walls of the house Torn apart A child's toy laying Far from home After disaster he searched Starving because time's falling Finding something, not someone Two of his own struck by the wave Already found his wife, not in life But not those two And what did I do Nothing because I couldn't move Feeling the sorrow Crawl under my skin Now when I think about it The numbness was nearly not there But yet I didn't move Safe in the other end of the world The age of ten The sorrow just passing me by Now I shed my tears Writing things down Can't stop thinking What I could have done VERY well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted September 29, 2008 Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 Linney , you're so talented! , that was beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 30, 2008 Report Share Posted September 30, 2008 This thread is just made of win, you guys, seriously. It had a lapse where i wasn't convinced (because i'm bitchy and critisize-y and whatnot-y (i include myself in this, by the way)) but it's been pulled up. The bar has been raised and whatnot. Kudos, kids ! in other news disaster struck so cautiously we never heard a sound. afraid, i was amazed, i was ashamed bt i'm aware, that this was always the end. i won't pretend, i won't perform, i will proceed; this is perfection. tension was knee-deep and tempers were frayed i'm afraid this is how it ends it ends tonight. excitement knew no bounds until you came along. enthralled, i was enticed, i was effective but i'm emotional and you don't feel a thing. so i won't fight, i won't forget, i will forgive; this is freedom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted October 1, 2008 Report Share Posted October 1, 2008 amazing. as always. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SANDIEGO Posted October 1, 2008 Report Share Posted October 1, 2008 This thread is just made of win, you guys, seriously. It had a lapse where i wasn't convinced (because i'm bitchy and critisize-y and whatnot-y (i include myself in this, by the way)) but it's been pulled up. The bar has been raised and whatnot. Kudos, kids ! in other news disaster struck so cautiously we never heard a sound. afraid, i was amazed, i was ashamed bt i'm aware, that this was always the end. i won't pretend, i won't perform, i will proceed; this is perfection. tension was knee-deep and tempers were frayed i'm afraid this is how it ends it ends tonight. excitement knew no bounds until you came along. enthralled, i was enticed, i was effective but i'm emotional and you don't feel a thing. so i won't fight, i won't forget, i will forgive; this is freedom. I REALLY LOVE THIS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted October 1, 2008 Report Share Posted October 1, 2008 VERY well done Thank you! Linney , you're so talented! , that was beautiful Thanks dear! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted October 2, 2008 Report Share Posted October 2, 2008 Try to imagine this one as a piano-ballard thingy, which gets a bit heavier during the chorus/bridge sections. Surface When you look in my eye What do you see staring back? Do you see your deepest desire? Or maybe your worst fears? But you don't know for certain Because I'm no open book... *Chorus* On the surface I look innocent But dig a little deeper And meet my inner monsters Below the surface I'm not your hero Just a complete stranger... When you hold me close What do you feel in me? Do you feel calming warmth? Or do you sense something darker? But you can't tell for sure Because no-one can read me... *chorus* You've worked it out That I'm not what I seem Kind, understanding and gentle Not words that apply to me Look for a more sinister edge For your words instead Something that's a better fit To this damaged soul you tend to... *chorus to end* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelique** Posted October 2, 2008 Report Share Posted October 2, 2008 ^ i love it!!! seriously, it's really really nice!.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted October 3, 2008 Report Share Posted October 3, 2008 I call this song "Voids" Voids Hey morning bird Bring myself back to the start For you'll bring the end Just once Will you shine for me Show mw what I'm missing Aquitted of the crime I try again No, dont speak tonight Not again --- You got me scared Tight on breathing Sorry, can you feel it? Either deceive or believe Just walk away (I wont even try) Hold me closer and pull me away I will not stay NO, WAKE UP I'm on the other side of bliss I can't care less what happens here Tell me this is over I don't wanna know My heart is racing again Beating twice the normal rate I cant fall asleep (with you scattered all over my mind) Just no more empty faith --- Filled up with nore more faith Never seems to amaze my embrace Centering my "Shoulda" "Coulda" "Woulda" way I cant be called a saint, not deserving Over and over again Can't fight this welcoming disease Your're better than me Let's try again I really miss these feelings That I'll never have again I can remember that --- Redemption (in the eyes of God) When reborn, I'll be in Hell No longer worthy Redemption (in the eyes of my heart) When failed, I'll be in Hell Falling apart I swore it would end But I can't stop Wont stop Leaves of Autumn seem to leave me Again and again Once again Can I please forgive myself After my apology, NO --- Lashing out Speaking loud enough to hear you Dazed within myself Crowded with disease Lashing out, LASHING OUT Crowded with disease Only within me Lashing out, LASHING OUT Disease us forsaken within me Lashing out at you But all I know --- Still so scared Lost within I love you Let me in ________ NOTE: The --- tells the chorus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted October 4, 2008 Report Share Posted October 4, 2008 Try to imagine this one as a piano-ballard thingy, which gets a bit heavier during the chorus/bridge sections. Surface When you look in my eye What do you see staring back? Do you see your deepest desire? Or maybe your worst fears? But you don't know for certain Because I'm no open book... *Chorus* On the surface I look innocent But dig a little deeper And meet my inner monsters Below the surface I'm not your hero Just a complete stranger... When you hold me close What do you feel in me? Do you feel calming warmth? Or do you sense something darker? But you can't tell for sure Because no-one can read me... *chorus* You've worked it out That I'm not what I seem Kind, understanding and gentle Not words that apply to me Look for a more sinister edge For your words instead Something that's a better fit To this damaged soul you tend to... *chorus to end* Amazing I can definetly hear the piano in the distance, such seriousness, wow. I call this song "Voids" Voids Hey morning bird Bring myself back to the start For you'll bring the end Just once Will you shine for me Show mw what I'm missing Aquitted of the crime I try again No, dont speak tonight Not again --- You got me scared Tight on breathing Sorry, can you feel it? Either deceive or believe Just walk away (I wont even try) Hold me closer and pull me away I will not stay NO, WAKE UP I'm on the other side of bliss I can't care less what happens here Tell me this is over I don't wanna know My heart is racing again Beating twice the normal rate I cant fall asleep (with you scattered all over my mind) Just no more empty faith --- Filled up with nore more faith Never seems to amaze my embrace Centering my "Shoulda" "Coulda" "Woulda" way I cant be called a saint, not deserving Over and over again Can't fight this welcoming disease Your're better than me Let's try again I really miss these feelings That I'll never have again I can remember that --- Redemption (in the eyes of God) When reborn, I'll be in Hell No longer worthy Redemption (in the eyes of my heart) When failed, I'll be in Hell Falling apart I swore it would end But I can't stop Wont stop Leaves of Autumn seem to leave me Again and again Once again Can I please forgive myself After my apology, NO --- Lashing out Speaking loud enough to hear you Dazed within myself Crowded with disease Lashing out, LASHING OUT Crowded with disease Only within me Lashing out, LASHING OUT Disease us forsaken within me Lashing out at you But all I know --- Still so scared Lost within I love you Let me in ________ NOTE: The --- tells the chorus Real nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted October 5, 2008 Report Share Posted October 5, 2008 ^ Thank you, I'm gonna recod myself playing it tommorrow after some practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 your morning breath tastes just like regret, and i'm trapped beneath the way you said you loved me. i far preferred your lips, to the words that hide behing them and that sharp tongue that scratches and scathes in more ways than one. i'm quite convinced i'm lost, i could swear you were once home, but there's not heart to be found here, anymore and the walls are crumbling; your gaze faltered, i must have been mistaken, afterall. despite you, i spite you, what a sight to behold. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 ^ Thank you, I'm gonna recod myself playing it tommorrow after some practice. I wanna hear it ------ Some poems or whatever that I've written.. My naked heart is crying You swore that you loved me But tore me upen and left What shall I do when love comes next -- We are helpless Against the splatter When the pieces Fall to the ground The sound is unstoppable The pain is unforgettable The day when your own heart breaks Is the beginning of a new day When you'll learn to think When you'll not be blind again Atleast not until the next love comes along feedback please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 Feed back? You are AWESOME Linney. Also I like this part the best, Theres always a part in yours I always like best... here it is! "The day when your own heart breaks Is the beginning of a new day When you'll learn to think When you'll not be blind again At least not until the next love comes along" Specifically this part! The day when your own heart breaks Is the beginning of a new day When you'll learn to think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garth. Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Ah, I wrote a poem, but it sucks. >.< Fire My fire will flicker, my fire will die, and as soon as the fog gets thicker, my fire quenches from the that tears I cry. No light from the moon, to guide my night, my fire is gone, where's my light? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted October 7, 2008 Report Share Posted October 7, 2008 Feed back? You are AWESOME Linney. Also I like this part the best, Theres always a part in yours I always like best... here it is! "The day when your own heart breaks Is the beginning of a new day When you'll learn to think When you'll not be blind again At least not until the next love comes along" Specifically this part! The day when your own heart breaks Is the beginning of a new day When you'll learn to think Aww, thank you Ah, I wrote a poem, but it sucks. >.< Fire My fire will flicker, my fire will die, and as soon as the fog gets thicker, my fire quenches from the that tears I cry. No light from the moon, to guide my night, my fire is gone, where's my light? That was great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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