The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[777]

I think it's great. Like the rhyme scheme and things.

 

 

It's superb.

 

Even if it is "random"

[FrankiePoo]

Thanks

I am in love with your avvi ang sigy

Axl Rose <3

[777]

:hyper:

 

Rep, And I love you.

[FrankiePoo]

xD

I love you too?

Lawl

[Jorgi]

i ran

oh, i ran and the ground followed me

i supported the trees

and i forgot you.

 

i screamed,

yes, i screamed and songbirds heard me

they sang and the rain kept rhythm

and i forgave you.

 

i laughed,

i laughed so loud at the thunder

its applause lasted for miles

and i regret you.

 

i danced,

oh, i danced elegantly with my dreams

the water carried me

and i left you.

 

but i cried,

i cried one tear dedicated to you

honest crushed me

but i don't think i love you.

 

relief is mine to keep.

[Defiance]

^^ we need to jam / write together some time.

[Jorgi]

for sure man, that'd be rad (:

[Defiance]

but you comin cambridge next time

[closesttoheaven]

Why do you tell me you care,

when you don't care at all

Am I what you want?

'Cause you're what I need

 

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

 

but your thoughts always come back to haunt me

And I can never let you go

I'll tell you I'm for real

so you won't have to be hurt no more

 

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

 

You're the air I need to breathe

If I don't have you,

I'll be left here to sufficate

 

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

 

I thought love was all I wanted

but I'm throwing your heart right back at you,

like a piece of rock on the ground

 

I need one more look in your eye,

before I can fall asleep tonight

 

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

 

Look at where we are now

(My thoughts you can never know)

Look at where we are now

(My thoughts you can never know)

 

Your thoughts are haunting me,

My thoughts will haunt you,

Then we'll realise,

that we're only repeating history,

falling in and out of love again

 

Crapness.

[777]

God dammit Jorgi, You're awesome.

[SANDIEGO]

omg wow i love all of these songs!!!

 

i put up another one on youtube

 

 

YOUTUBE.COM/IBETHANYYY

 

 

tell me what you think!

[FrankiePoo]

Poetic line of the day

 

You only have one life to live. So love it, live it, and like it.

[Jorgi]

get away,

the voice, they shout,

can't get much louder

and you might catch what they're saying

before they catch you out

 

don't worry, darling

i've had my fun

the sun won't miss me too much

and you'll miss me more

but i'm down with this town

 

(telephone whispers

that spoke my name

i heard but i am speachless

for what i have to say)

 

don't worry, darling

i've done my time

the lies won't hurt me too much

and the lines i crossed

are forgiven.

[Defiance]

^ i actually want to have sex with your mouth.

[Defiance]

oh fuck i just realised how THAT sounded, NOT LIKE THAT...for once.

[limelight]

^ HAHAHAHAHAHA that is the funniest thing ive heard all day.

[Jorgi]

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahaha !

[Defiance]

i aim to please

[Linney]

i love this. <3

especially the first two parts.

 

Thank you so much

 

 

This Is How We’ll Dance (one-shot)

 

We boarded the tour bus, ready for another tour. It was going to be amazing. Our album, Riot!, just came out and we were really psyched on touring with new songs, and maybe new fans. Zac and josh were messing around, throwing luggage at each other’s heads. I laughed and chucked some at Josh, you ducked away easily, but ended up getting hit in the head with Jeremy’s suitcase.

“Laugh while you can,” Josh told Zac, who was laughing wildly, “But one day you will wake up with half of you ass gone.”

Zac put on a look of mock horror and continued laughing. I rolled my eyes, but smiled. Those two were always fighting, but they were the best of friends. I looked at Jeremy, who was grabbing his suitcase from next to Josh and carrying it inside. He came out with a couple of eggs and threw them both and Josh and Zac. They roared in rage and turned to me. I shook my head and pointed to Jeremy, who was rolling on the floor with laughter.

“See if you can cut off my ass,” Jeremy said between breaths, “But you have egg in your hair until we take a shower”

Zac jumped on Jeremy, then Josh went on top of them. I laughed aling with them as they wrestled on the concrete.

“Hey, Hayley,” Josh called, “Come join us!”

I laughed and jumped on Josh. Jeremy grunted with the added weight. Zac grabbed my head and gave me a noogy. I yelled and got off Josh.

“C’mon guys, we need to get on the bus,” I said, fixing my hair.

Somebody mumbled “Party pooper” as they got up.

“Butthead!” I yelled and tackled Zac.

He let out an “Oomf.” As he hit the ground.

“What did you call me?” I asked, sitting on top of hit and hitting his chest numerous times. He hated that.

“I called you a hardy pooper!” he said.

I laughed and got off him.

“Never comment on my pooping again and you will remain alive,” I said and walked in the bus.

I heard him laugh. I grinned and walked to my bunk, which was already filled with the clothes I had dumped on there earlier. I noticed all my bras were missing. I looked around the room and searched every corner.

“Josh!” I finally yelled.

“What?” he asked, coming in the doorway.

“Where are my bras?” I asked.

“Um, ask Jeremy, I saw him carrying brightly colored objects earlier,” he said, pointing outside of the room.

I gave him one last glare and walked into the living area, where Jeremy was playing a Game boy. I smacked him across the head.

“Ow! What was that for?” he asked, rubbing his head.

“For stealing my bras,” I said.

He looked confused for a second and then he smiled.

“They are in Zac’s bag,” he told me, grinning.

“Zac’s bag?” I almost yelled.

“Yeah, his bag,” Jeremy mumbled.

I rolled my eyes and dug through Zac’s bag. I only found one of five.

I walked towards Jeremy and threw it at his face.

“Gah!” he yelled, “What was that for?”

“There was only one,” I growled.

“Really? Ask Zac, then,” he grumbled.

“Zac!” I called, and he poking his head out of a closet.

“Yeah?”

“Where in the bus did you put my braziers?”

“Oh, those colorful things that you wear to hold your boobs up?” he asked, “Yeah, I put water on them and froze ‘em”

My eyes widened, “Dude!”

“Yeah? I have a name you know.”

“Oh, I’m sorry Zac. Where are they now?”

“In Josh’s bag,” he pointed in the room.

I rolled my eyes. This what was what, the millionth time I’ve been in there, looking for the blasted bras?

I walked in and opened Josh’s bag, sure enough, they were there, the ice melting a soaking all of his clothes. Zac was in trouble, that was true.

I left them, nonetheless. I wasn’t about to soak my own clothes

 

 

author's note:

So, what do you think

 

Omg, amazing

 

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I don't know if I've posted this but it's an introduction to a story/book, I haven't decided yet.. Sorry it's kinda long, But here it is:

 

I always ran in the early saturday mornings. Same old path, ever since I moved to Birmingham three years ago. Round the woods, by the old pharmacy, the almost hidden path trough the other wood and then round in a half circle and back again. I had always liked to run. Feeling the wind drag your clothes and your hair. I always used the same clothes. The white sneakers, the grey sweatpants, a blue tshirt and the black windjacket. In my left pocket I had a small bottle filled to the top with cold water. In the other pocket of my jacket I had my old cellphone, which I only used for important calls. My dad had been most unwilling to give me a new phone, like the other kids at school have.

- Don't want to spend money on unneccisary things, do we? He had told me an amount of times.

At those times, I used to think of the kids at school who frowned and looked weirdly at my phone. Their whispers being so loud that I could hear them.

- Look, that girls phone is sooo old..

But while running, I didn't think of that. As soon as I started running, kicking off into my mind, all my troubles flew away with the wind. No worries at all. It was a wonderful feeling, that was only mine. I didn't invite my older brother to run with me these mornings, even though his begging. He was sad by it, because he loved running, just as much as me, if not more. But the fact was, that I didn't want to share the amazing feeling. Now I just ran past the old pharmacy with my ipod on a good volume, my heartbeats almost in the same rythm as the song that streamed into my head. My interest for running was a bit unusual for my age of 15. Not anyone else in my class liked it. There were those in school who actually disliked me for my running skills. But I had two friends that I kept close to heart. Dispites the fact that both Angela and Brian hated all sports, didn't pull us apart. In a strange way, it was like if we were connected. We didn't have much in common but we were like siblings. I loved them both to death and I knew without a doubth that they loved me too. It was not something we walked around telling eachother all the time. It was just there. Invisible and impossible to touch but the feeling was right. Oh, I forgot to tell you a detail on my tshirt. It's a white box with black letters on it, my name. Isabelle Hart.

 

 

 

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EDIT: Sorry for making such a loong post, but I just made a song, and I am kind of happy with it, and I wanted to know what you guys think.... It's called "Who I Am".

 

 

 

It is a struggle for me to hold back the tears

To keep the pain inside me without it showing

But I've taught myself to live a lie

hiding the truth deep within

 

I know it's wrong but I've been doing it for years

Making the words transparent without you knowing

Been willing to say goodbye

But that would be a sin

 

The lies i've formed within my head

Is easy to stumble out by now

Now I know how it's done

But I wish I did not know

Oh, Oh, this secret

Oh, Oh, I want it to be known

 

Don't be surprised if I fake a smile

I've done that before

In a life where nothing made it worth living

Singing made me pull through

 

I have not talked about this in a while

It is not something I adore

A time where I always kept on giving

And taking was known to you

 

 

The lies i've formed within my head

Is easy to stumble out by now

Now I know how it's done

But I wish I did not know

Oh, Oh, this secret

Oh, Oh, I want it to be known

 

I don't want to sacrifice the life I'm living now

Even thought that sorrow is eating me up inside out sometimes

 

I think I should have made a vow

Not to give you anything not even a dime

 

 

Oh, I, Oh, I

can not be sorry for who I am

No, I, No, I

am not sorry, can you understand

 

The lies i've formed within my head

Is easy to stumble out by now

Now I know how it's done

But I wish I did not know

Oh, Oh, this secret

Oh, Oh, I want it to be known

[Wildman]

New song about Hayley!

 

 

Hey Hey Hayley

 

I was thinking of you again, today

I thought of your smile

I thought of your face

I thought of you like...

Will we ever be?

 

Chorus-

Hey hey Hayley, will you come to me?

Hey hey Hayley will you show me the love?

Will you love me

Will you hug me

Will I ever know you?

 

And I wonder

Will I see you

Will I know you

Can I ever meet you?

Will my dreams ever come true?

What can I say

 

Chorus

 

God, your just so great

My, I just wanna hold you

Gracefully in my arms

Oh, there isn't anyone that is perfect/ like you

You, are, a sight for sore eyes

Bring me too, my love

Just sing to me, just sing to me

 

Chorus

 

My dear Hayley, can I love you?

My dear Hayley, is this true?

[EasyTarget]

Awww that's so cute!

[Wildman]

Awww that's so cute!

 

Thank you. I'm working on the tune, and some chords. Hopefully I can record it soon.

[EasyTarget]

Awesome.

[Wildman]

^ I'll tell you when I got it recorded.

[777]

lol, I'll wait for this one as well.

 

Make it gentle.

 

Edit:

 

 

Plan

 

I'm alone because you pulled the love

That held me from underneath

I never thought anything like this

Could ever happen to me

And now I'm alone with pain

And I'm convinced the friends

That I thought you and I could be

Has left the minds and hearts

of you and me

 

Why was this, So discrete

Why couldn't I see it

This kind of thing was held from me

It's like it was born to not reach my ears

And to secretly act without the consent of my fears

 

If this was your plan

Then it hit my heart

 

Why would you sacrifice our love

Just to get it your way

How could you trade the bearer

of my biggest love, Just to end your play

When did you decide to attack us

And to leave us with pain

Until the end of the day

 

If this was your plan

Then it hit my heart so hard

 

Let us grow old and forget this day

Bless me so that I could see

Theres another day for me

 

Lets forgive, But not because we

Can't or can

Let us dance around the beginning

Our peaceful start

If this was your plan

Well then it killed my heart

 

Another Edit:

 

It's Alright

 

You can answer your own ways

And you can decide for yourself

But we both know that one day

You'll be ashamed of what you'll say

So why don't we leave it tonight

And let it stay in yesterday

You know we're both much bigger than this

So let's not leave the pain here to stay

 

We told ourselves

That this is not good for us

So let's not hate

And let us move along

Because in the end it's alright

Our hate will fade in the night

 

I won't tell everyone

That I wanted no fun

For everyone

 

That, I will take to my grave

Instead I'll keep my head

To myself until I am dead

And I know they'll forgive me

And when I forgive them

I'll let them be at peace

Just as they left me

 

 

AND ANOTHER EDIT!?!? :

 

Little Kid

 

 

I am hurt, I live inside the pain

For now I'll think I won't love again

I heard the same song, The same song all along

The song of you, My friend

I love this feeling

This feeling of sympathy

But the funny thing is

I'm the only one giving this to me

 

I've used that line, I've used it some time before

And I'll never grow tired of it

I'll only do it sometime some more

 

I believe I'm a kid

Just a little kid inside

Because I chose everything else

And I gave all the victory to my pride

And I no longer care

And I don't want to walk around the view

The sight of myself ashamed

On my knees in front of you

But I'll live just for my act

Because it's only you

You shouldn't worry

You shouldn't worry at all

One day I'll beat myself up for what I did

But until then, I'll watch myself lose

And act like a kid

 

I apologize for making this page a little lengthy, But I did this recently and I'm making lyrics to better suit me and my acoustic guitar, So it's not all so boring...Hence the rhymes. I could be a rapper! Kind of...Maybe.