kwik-silva Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 That's pretty cool Becks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 This is something that's been in my head for a while today, its unfinished so far. We're doing all we can But things aren't as simple as they seem Running from the truth won't scare me anymore And neither should it be from you I wish that mistake's outcome was as easy as how it began But its not, and I don't know who to blame And I can only hope for the best [Here the chorus should start, but I have nothing yet] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 I was playing some chords ( F, D, C, G ) on the guitar from a NIN song and i came up with this. The games on us We used to be the ones with all the heart We had curses over us From the very start and the blames on us Because we've failed them once again We may have left But we never stopped before the bitter end Of our life We move on in the dark Dwelling in dreams it seems We've all lost our heart Finish that song Earnie Ball. Oh and Guro, You're spectacular. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Alice Cullen} Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 so i've had writers block for about 6 months now..but i wrote this a few minutes ago. It's the second poem i've written since i've started to come out of this writer's block phase. I hate writers block! Time is passing, each moment a blur Things that were, are now just a lie So hard to find the trust again I feel hope again, yet I'm guarding my heart I can't take another disappointment, another letdown Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 The games on us We used to be the ones with all the heart We had curses over us From the very start and the blames on us Because we've failed them once again We may have left But we never stopped before the bitter end Of our life We move on in the dark Dwelling in dreams it seems We've all lost our heart this is marvellous. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Jorgi, God damnit make a song. When I seen your name it got me hopes up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Haha ! i haven't written anything [good] in so long Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 yeaaaaaaaaaaah right Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 no, really. keep your mind wide open i think i need you to think straight i need you to walk straight down and turn off the lights for god's sake, open your eyes i never followed you for fame but for the fun the chain links snapped off they were just that desperate and i'm just that desperate to win don't just stand there, fight believe me, i tried because we are everyone and you are everything throw your coins to the floor it's only change that i'm after you'll change with disaster and i'll laugh this was always how it'd start you would leave and i would lie i never meant goodbye now please don't remind me i left you behind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 throw your coins to the floor it's only change that i'm after you'll change with disaster and i'll laugh this was always how it'd start you would leave and i would lie i never meant goodbye yesyesyesYESYES. We Lost, But We'll Have Later To Win Streams of dreams And thoughts persuade me to be Not myself but someone they need And my senses fail under tensions They strain me to be And so be it I'll bleed Not that it matters I'm not selfish So then walk away Decide for you, And for them And then day dream or else stay Winners don't share their turn But the losers they learn And we've asked But the lights only listened We had a faith But that was before Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 ^High five, chris, that was fully rad. i need to stop writing about the same person, i'm not feeling okay today, the splits in my knuckles sayin' i've had enough today i left you by the roadside by the light, so you could find your way home please don't be terrified please don't make me cry you've been taking control and we've been growing old whilst they watch, whilst they cage us up and trap our hearts i can find my way out please don't fall apart please don't make this worse i wasn't prepared for anything, no, anything like you we can't make this work, we can't, so i'll walk away and you'll pick a fight please don't stay long, i won't be long. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I'm currently in the throws of awful writer's block. I've not completed a piece that I feel decently about for quite some time. I've got these idears and I've got little chunks for songs, but I cannot seem to string them together properly; or I've got a guitar part and no lyrics to put them to. Shame on you, writer's block. I shall have your neck one day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 i hate writer's block, fully and completely. i've lied my way all through today whilst you lie awake and you have taken everything you took the breath right out of my lungs and you left me dizzy. i laughed about our fortune and our fate and every single word you said; as you scratched the nicotine off your fingers and traced the wine stains on my teeth you lost me. i promised the end of everything when we ended up here and i have finished every sentence since you stole them right off my tongue and you left me speechless. i fought through the lions and the liars to stand at your side on fire; when you pray for your life on your knees and the dirt buries all of your beliefs you lost me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 The idea of forgiveness was Far far beyond all of my stares Still I've not learned one god damn thing About you So who cares Even though I tell myself, That I'm after all of this Would it ever concern you with things that I said I'm stuck before it all, Before I loved what was to miss Yet there's still a question left standing in front of you With your mind made up with the many ahead All your faces only answered a few More of a rant really, Didn't even name it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 Chapter one of my story. I hope you like it. I sighed, laying across my bed. My eyes were shut, I was trying to forget what my mom said today about moving across the country to a small town in Nebraska. I covered the pillow with my face, and screamed. Moving was the last thing I wanted to do. My life was here, I just wish my mother saw that. I removed the pillow from my face, and sat up. The empty, unfolded boxes laid up against my door caught my attention. I rolled my eyes, and got my cell phone out of my pocket, and dialed my best friend Brea’s number. It went straight to voice mail. I would catch her in the morning. I lazily got up, and got the first box.“Luna, sweetheart.” I heard my mother say about an hour or so later. I had managed to come up with an idea, if I didn’t pack, I wouldn’t have to move to Nebraska. ‘I’m sorry, I don’t speak to people who ruin lives.” I was again laying on my bed, Staring at the ceiling. Making shapes out of the dots. “Luna, I wouldn’t have done this, if I didn’t believe it was right for you Sophie, and Landon.” My mother said. We looked somewhat alike. Both had dark red hair, hers was curly, and mine was straight. She was tall, I was taller. Six- Foot exactly. We both were unusually pale, and had deep green- brown eyes. The rest of me was like my dad. “I am not going anywhere. I am staying with Brea.” I said, and turned so I was facing the window. The dark night gave me shivers. “You’d have to pack to go there too you know.” She chuckled. At least she thought she was funny. I turned back around. “You know mom, I want to say something to you, but I am not.” I said. Then she came and sat by me. “I know your upset. Your not the only one who has to make adjustments. What about Sophie, and Landon? Do you think its going to be easy for them?” Mom said. “They have lived here all of their lives too. It’s not all about you Luna.” I creased my eyebrow, and looked at my mom. “It is not. Go away. I’d like to sulk alone.” My mom got off my bed, and walked to the door. Then she turned around and said, “You know, If you don’t pack your room, I will.” She walked away. “’If you don’t pack your room, I will.’” I mimicked, and threw a pillow at my door. “Ha-ha Luna’s mad, ha-ha Luna’s mad.” Sophie came into my room. Unlike me she had dark brown curls. She stuck out her tongue. “Get OUT Sophie.” I shouted. “Leave me alone.” I got up, and ran for the door. Sophie ran off before I could get there. I sighed and slammed my door. After I sat down, and started sulking, my dad came in. “Luna, love.” He said in his British accent. “What is the matter?” He came over to my bed. “I don’t want to move. I- I want to stay here. I don’t want to be anywhere else.” My voice trembled. “I have a life here, I have friends.” “You know. I moved.” My dad said in his gentle voice. “I know. How would you explain the British accent?” I said. “When I moved I left my life behind, and you know something, I found new friends, and girlfriend who eventually became my wife.” He said. “Moving was a new beginning. Sure it wouldn’t replace my old life, but I was optimistic, and I made the best of it I could.” He said. “There are people I miss, like my mum and dad, but I can still visit them. What’s going to happen when you go off to University? You’re going to make a new start then too.” “Brea and I were planning on going to the same College.” I said to him. “When you move, you can still do that you know.” He said to me. “I don’t want to hear this right now dad.” I turned to my side, facing the window. “All I am saying is to be optimistic Luna.” I heard footsteps leaving my room. I looked to see if dad was gone, and turned back around. After a small sob, I fell asleep. I awoke to the loud buzzing of my alarm clock. I groaned and got up. After a nice warm shower, I got dressed in my usual attire, a fluffy skirt, a shirt with a crazy pattern, and a pair of old, battered Converse Chuck Taylor’s. My dad drove me to school as usual. I was still mad from the conversation last night, so I said nothing in the car. “Have a good day Luna.” My dad said. Yeah, It’s going to be a blast saying goodbye. I rolled my eyes and walked into the school to find my life-long friend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myheartisurs Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 My heart is shattered, my face hot, sticky, tears trickle down it, as I stare down at my feet. The pieces glisten as the light cascades down on them, now it's too broken beyond repair. The day you got sick it started to crack, every time you got worse, it would fissure and and split. I remember what it used to be like before, before you got sick, gave up, before you lost all hope in yourself and all those around you. How I'd wish for you to stop and realize, but you never did! And where are you now? You've left me all alone, you said I was the strongest, the fighter, the one who had to be there for everyone else. But what about me? Who is here for me? You didn't think about that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 i don't need your aggression and i don't need you the space underneath the stairs hid you the way you wanted right inside, against the corner there are no surprises here but shield your eyes the water came right in and we're going down the way you wanted i hope you know who i am; you sophisticate me and then break me you anticipate me; i am authentic i am awake and i hope you're losing (i hope you're losing) but go if you have to and i hope you lose your way well why should i care at all about the way you say my name it all sounds the same when you scream like that close your ears, shield your eyes i don't care but i'm still yours shield your pulse, close the doors i'm still yours. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Malice Eyes I thought I was safe from your knowledge But it seems even you know I am here There is no question that Lives without an answer In you, I'll never see you in fear You belong to an honor A blood, A pawner You're destined to fade away You belong to a hate A love and a fate You're just meant to fade away My humor tried to talk with you But you stared and stilled your stance I caught you off guard a few lucky times If you believe, In that sort of thing Just when I thought I hurt you A lie, Protected you from the harms of truth I couldn't see past your eyes Because I saw them before And I fell because I couldn't win anymore Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 ^I love that, Christopher! I wish I could write like some of you guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Malice Eyes I thought I was safe from your knowledge But it seems even you know I am here There is no question that Lives without an answer In you, I'll never see you in fear You belong to an honor A blood, A pawner You're destined to fade away You belong to a hate A love and a fate You're just meant to fade away My humor tried to talk with you But you stared and stilled your stance I caught you off guard a few lucky times If you believe, In that sort of thing Just when I thought I hurt you A lie, Protected you from the harms of truth I couldn't see past your eyes Because I saw them before And I fell because I couldn't win anymore this is super-duper rad, chris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Non sense! You do your thing your own way and that's how it oughtta be! You're really good too Guro. You did a few things I wished I did. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 wow, it's been a loong time since i was on here.. but.. i thought i'd post a little something.. so, here it is: and i guess this is the reason i only write songs of misguidance and oceans of tears anymore i've lost the faith i never thought i had and creating illusions of bliss is not as perfect as it seems cause i always seem to forget that i miss the heart i need wish the image of perfection would colour itself complete so every minute of every day wouldn't be a genuin struggle fighting against inner demons to win a battle that somewhere in this world has already been lost but hey, a girl can dream so when everything falls down around me when the sun is gone and the thunder is breaking the sky this girl is living in a world of plastic smiles instead of showing her wish to die don't ever say that you understand Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paramaniac Posted January 7, 2010 Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 You guys are all so good at writing poems and songs! I wish I could write like you guys haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrLittleDecoy Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 suffocating heart badly aching where did you go? feeling the raindrops hearing the thunder i stopped breathing this is not my world the angles are wrong everything’s upside down i’ve become a ghost the day you left me i died the stars are still counting the tears i cried but this can’t be the end i will stand up and make my heart mend and i will learn how to breathe once again feeling my chest aching is it really this hard to keep breathing? the waves of pain pushing me to the ground i’ve just lost something that i should have never found you, yeah, YOU were my whole world the thought of losing you seemed so fucking absurd i never thought our love could fall apart i never thought that you would break my heart the day you left me i died the stars are still counting the tears i cried but this can’t be the end i will stand up and make my heart mend and i will learn how to breathe once again once again, trying to find hope again erasing you from my memory ignoring this deep, deep hole inside of me i guess you and i both know that the day you left me i died inside but now the stars are counting the tears that dried i knew it couldn’t be the end i stood up and made my heart mend and i finally learned how to breathe once again whatever, i'm just glad i finally wrote something 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted January 16, 2010 Report Share Posted January 16, 2010 Morphine and Nicotine you set me free Dad do I disappoint you? Round the back allies that's where I call home, I'm not coming back tonight. Don't tell me that I can't 'cause I'll prove you wrong, Fuck you and believe in me. I know I'm not perfect but I'm trying to be better. Believe in me. I know, that we will never be together. But I will try, to reach your heights. They say, that we will always be together. But I'm just trying, for one more night. You're dead inside I can see I've hurt you deep, Time won't heal your scars. Your favourite weapon cries out at me, And goes tick, tock, in the dark. I wish I could tell you so many clichés If it, would help, my cause. But I'm out there, I'm far gone, I'm sleeping alone. This bed, feels, so empty. I know, that I've lost you forever. And I, will try, to stay away. One night, was never enough for me. There's clues, in the ditch, where I lay. Never got to see the world Or kiss you our last goodbye It was sudden, I hoped that I'd evolved I'm grief stricken and I've lost my hold I'll go and get, my rope. I knew, that we'd never be together. And I'm not coming back, to life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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