Jorgi Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 i really hope not, i hate lost prophets Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 1, 2009 Report Share Posted February 1, 2009 ^Jorgi, it was awesome, as usual! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 thankyou (: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexyo Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 you guys make me happy inside.<3 am actually going through epic writer's block. i'm fighting through to pretty shocking results, but fighting nontheless: draw hearts and stars up and down our arms, 'cause the real ones are far too high for us to reach. trace those lips with fingertips; it's just too late to leave. when the rain gets loud enough, we'll stand and scream our lungs out. we'll stand and scream our lives out, out loud so they'll know we lived (at least once, if not forever) stand on the edge of rooftops, closer to the sky, that way, you said, deny the way we fall that way, we're broken but we're still beautiful alone but we're still usefull. when you figure this out, let me know when you figure me out, let me go because we're broken but we're still beautiful we're alive but we can still lose it all just let me know. bold are lostprophets Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 ^grrr.. couldn't you keep that to yourself? lets not make Jorgi unhappy. and..yes I am actually kidding. or, well, not really, but, oh well, I guess you understand. I'm just going to shut up now. Have a good day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 haha i don't even mind to be honest it's a delightful coincidence. usually i listen to music and yeah, that influences what i write, but considering i would never put myself through the torture of lostprophets its pretty amazing i've managed to pick up the same words as them. shucks, i say, shucks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 just googled it and the only thing that has similarities is "standing on the edge of rooftops" and the screaming part, even though it says "everybody scream your heart out". thank god. you had me terrified there for a bit. will have to change my writing style, more comparisons to lostprophets will make me suicidal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 oh no, relax, who cares about lostprophets anyway? you're going to be more famous than them with your lyrics! Everyone's going to be like, who's lostprophets? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexyo Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 just googled it and the only thing that has similarities is "standing on the edge of rooftops" and the screaming part, even though it says "everybody scream your heart out". thank god. you had me terrified there for a bit. will have to change my writing style, more comparisons to lostprophets will make me suicidal. google is not the end all mate. everything i bolded, was pretty close to lostprophets lyrics, not that im a lostprophets fan and would know that obviously who cares its only a coincidence, i was just pointing it out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 ah but google is my lifeline ! hah it's cool man. oh no, relax, who cares about lostprophets anyway? you're going to be more famous than them with your lyrics! Everyone's going to be like, who's lostprophets? i very much doubt that beyond belief, but it's nice to hear all the same thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexyo Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 lol yeh and im gna skullfuck jorgi as well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echelonforever Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 I wrote this for my lit class. We each had to pick a picture and write a poem about the picture. Mine was of some dried up flowers on a mountain with the sun peeking over shining on them. Here is the poem I wrote about it. I got an A. :] Beaming rays of hope Standing on the peak of the dark mountains, Shadows linger all around me. Darkening clouds hover, Draining out my thoughts , flowers grow beside me, dry, defeated, beaten down. These flowers symbolize my life, they symbolize me. The earth around me is dry, dry like the dirt The sun rises in the distance. Beaming rays of hope, Bright and strong, The hovering clouds want to overshadow it. The sun breaks through, It shines on the flowers, It shines on me. A cool gust of win blows through my hair. birds sing in the distance, I look down at the flowers, They are different. The darkness has disappeared. The flowers are rejuvenated. They have hope. I have hope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 ^ Ooooh, I like that, it sounds happy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echelonforever Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 ^thanks dear! :] It's the first thing I've wrote in aggges. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 ^ wow, sam i love that! ;D it made me happy . haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Sam, OMG, like, woow.. It was amazing, like reaally amazing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 okay, so i don't usually write , like, at all. xD but i just wrote this . uhm, it's probably sucky, it is haha . so don't be to harsh (: don't know if they're finished, but i'll post it anyway .. xD tears are burning down my cheeks you couldn't just leave it like that eyes are hurting and i'm starting to feel weak but i won't give in i won't let my guard down this was the last time you've had your way but somehow, in all my heedfulness you blurred yourself into my mind, forced yourself into my heart and you were all i could think of like i was hypnotized you showed me the way to hell and fooled as i was, i followed the path walking through darkness bleeding on the way i found out to late, it was a trap fighting my way through these demons knewing that you already had me i wouldn't give in. ------------ nightmares keep repeating themselves in a collision i see his face his damaged face bones are broken scattered scars across his cheeks i cry, i scream but no one face to look at me and i'm not asking for it either, just to notice him, save him for me cause i can't. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittleDecoy Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 i just wrote a chorus, i was really angry at someone These four walls, they're closing in You're out to get me, you're under my skin I wish i could stop it all without a fight but you're the one causing this living disaster called my life Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 okay, so i don't usually write , like, at all. xDbut i just wrote this . uhm, it's probably sucky, it is haha . so don't be to harsh (: don't know if they're finished, but i'll post it anyway .. xD tears are burning down my cheeks you couldn't just leave it like that eyes are hurting and i'm starting to feel weak but i won't give in i won't let my guard down this was the last time you've had your way but somehow, in all my heedfulness you blurred yourself into my mind, forced yourself into my heart and you were all i could think of like i was hypnotized you showed me the way to hell and fooled as i was, i followed the path walking through darkness bleeding on the way i found out to late, it was a trap fighting my way through these demons knewing that you already had me i wouldn't give in. ------------ nightmares keep repeating themselves in a collision i see his face his damaged face bones are broken scattered scars across his cheeks i cry, i scream but no one face to look at me and i'm not asking for it either, just to notice him, save him for me cause i can't. wow, hun, that was awesome I really love this part: walking through darkness bleeding on the way Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 wow, hun, that was awesome I really love this part: walking through darkness bleeding on the way aw, you really think? it means a lot, thank you hun =) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 ^are you kidding? it's great! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echelonforever Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Sam, OMG, like, woow.. It was amazing, like reaally amazing aww thanks hun. ^ wow, sam i love that! ;D it made me happy . haha hehe. thank you dear! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 ^U r welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 cross that line, pretend i've been there before, perfection is close; but not the word i was looking for. dead ends, lost friends, it can't be much further. the smoke in my eyes blind my goodbyes and i ache form the cold but not from your gaze we're not too old to forget, surely i'll never forget; well i'm waiting. but the odds are not on our side, with you by my side, the sun is finding its way through the sky we'll sit by the firelight, where i'm waiting. take to the ground, the grave the way you say my name in my ear; we're already here, already here but we can't go much further. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted February 9, 2009 Report Share Posted February 9, 2009 ^awesome lyrics I've had a hard time writing something I've been proud of for a long time, but I actually like this. Portraying a part distract my tears which blind my eyes force them to freeze I want to remember this goodbye spoken heartbreak fills my head now when I think about it I just want to forget this I don't want to remember the pain or the look in your eyes As if I stabbed you in the back A betrayel of the first degree and you didn't have the time to plea I let go when you need me the most Can not trust Can not stay Everything has to fade away a broken promise surfaced today you blamed it on me but it didn't make you feel free those hidden words which I used at times were the ones you found and I don't remember letting you know will you ever stand on your own like you do now but standing with your head held high A betrayel of the first degree and you didn't have the time to plea I let go when you need me the most Can not trust Can not stay Everything has to fade away melted promises and empty truths this will forever be the day when I explained it to you to touch upon love has never been what I've done I've always been acting portraying a part a part of a once lost and broken heart what I am doing has once been done to me I guess that's why I chose the role of always make believe It was familiar to me A betrayel of the first degree and you didn't have the time to plea I let go when you need me the most Can not trust Can not stay Everything has to fade away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.