Linney Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 that's great I don't think I've posted this one.. sooo.. here ya go. Your pain is so much worse than mine When it feels like my heart is broken And my eyes are all empty of tears I keep breathing Knowing that I'm not alone to feel like this Because somewhere you are crying Regretting that you left I know that the pain I feel Have a life of its own inside of you So I continue on Knowing that your pain is worse than mine And by knowing that I think, I'll make it somehow, without you Even though my life is so much better now I find myself missing every bit of the past But the one final part of the past Is something that I don't think about I don't want to think about when you left me So while my heart is bleeding And I just want to die I cry because there is a void inside Somewhere where you used to be Is now a hole And with each second passing It grows And soon it will outgrow me But I keep on living Knowing that your pain is worse than mine I keep on breathing Knowing that the pain won't let you breathe Cause even though I miss you with every bit of my broken heart I am glad that you feel worse than me I am glad that you aren't enjoying the fact that I've cried my eyes out Because your pain is so much worse than mine But knowing that you are crying Makes my oxygen almost fade away Because ofcourse I still love you How could I stop I can't pretend for a second That I'm not In love with the person who made me feel In love with the person who also made me bleed Because you regret leaving me But we stay apart knowing that two broken souls Cannot be one Once broken, never whole Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Faith and Linnea those are really good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 ^ thanks Matt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 sorry for double posting, but this is one of my original songs, check it out: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 GREATNESS ^^^^^^^ Good job Linney, I applaud you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 sorry for double posting, but this is one of my original songs, check it out: Thats brilliant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whooa Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Omg Linnea - That Is Sooo Cool - I Checked It Out YouTube So Now You Now Have A New Big Fan Fantastic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 GREATNESS ^^^^^^^ Good job Linney, I applaud you. thanks Thats brilliant thank you Matt Omg Linnea - That Is Sooo Cool - I Checked It Out YouTube So Now You Now Have A New Big Fan Fantastic thank you so much ---edit--- oops, I forgot to post a little something that I wrote just now, I was completely inspired by the feeling that the song "Dead & Gone" ( it was a cover though)gave me, such a free feeling, so happy, it made me feel as if I was as light as a feather Here it is: Dream There's no need to dream When your dream is impossible And when it begins to hurt You wish it would just leave Cause the pain it causes you when you realize it's not going to happen It tears you up More than anything fysical ever could The bare thought eats you up inside out And no one can make it go away Unless what you dream suddenly becomes possible There's no dream ahead of you if you choose to keep your eyes open so close them, close them You'll never see it coming The magical dream suddenly becomes real And there it is, in your arms And the power you feel It's just so real Nothing could ever make it fade Not even a thousand mistakes Cause what is left Is here and now And connect the two That's an amazing magic combined You begin to feel the air Raise you to the sky And all of your worries Have mysterically died You understand now That this must be that feeling The one that life is all about You are in heaven now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 Dream There's no need to dream When your dream is impossible And when it begins to hurt You wish it would just leave Cause the pain it causes you when you realize it's not going to happen It tears you up More than anything fysical ever could The bare thought eats you up inside out And no one can make it go away Unless what you dream suddenly becomes possible There's no dream ahead of you if you choose to keep your eyes open so close them, close them You'll never see it coming The magical dream suddenly becomes real And there it is, in your arms And the power you feel It's just so real Nothing could ever make it fade Not even a thousand mistakes Cause what is left Is here and now And connect the two That's an amazing magic combined You begin to feel the air Raise you to the sky And all of your worries Have mysterically died You understand now That this must be that feeling The one that life is all about You are in heaven now These parts are the highlights for me and I thought you did a great jawb. I thought I'd comment more on other peoples things from now on. Just a bit more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted March 19, 2009 Report Share Posted March 19, 2009 ^Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whooa Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I Cant Stop Listening To Hey Hey Violet Its Fantastic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Inside Your Walls So here I'll wait For another thought that's crazy And then I'll be a friend And let this insanity save me And let me say what I want to say to you And if I ever say you're wrong Then I'll know that I'll be too Make your move Leak out your surprise Then I'll find Truth hiding in your eyes My conscience lives With confusion And I live With our illusion Walk with me, On the road so narrow I'll be your strength I'll be your arrow Forgive yourself Don't chase your sin Push down your walls And let me in yadda yadda. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 I've written a couple lately. but nowhere near as great as you guys' work. I don't really feel like putting up where breaks and verses go etc. sorry. "Jessica" i'm in between whether i'm in between, and where i lie, i'm lost for dreams, no escape, i can't break free, of things that make me, me. broken i lay, slowing down, i'm tearing down what's left of days, and i've been so lost without, something sweet to smile please talk to me, please, i need to know what's wrong with me? please talk to me, please, i need to know what i need to be? it seems to me... that i just don't know what to do... and i never know the right words to say to keep you by me... when the day is over and i haven't spoken a word it feels like i just can't go on without you ruling my world and the times we close the curtain, hoping for tomorrow to be the greatest feeling in the world... these airwaves, just don't seem to be good for you or good for me unless we're alone in person it's been so long since i've felt anything near this love and it's just something i haven't had in a while... it's going to be, something hard for you and something hard for me but hopefully i can be yours, i'd be happy if you'd... "An Eye, Another Exercise" caged in my own thoughts i find that you keep breaking my heart and i'm drowning in guilt at how i let you break down my walls it seems that you just don't understand that i have a heart and you hold it in those hands and it's like you just don't care that i need you here, and i need you by me maybe i'm not serious enough because it's like i'm crushing my own heart maybe i don't know what you want don't you feel like you can talk to me? maybe it's all in the way that i say that i need you and i'm still crying without you maybe it's just all my fault that i let you pull me in and push me right out "Drowning" i sit and i find that everything i've ever worked for was just another way out and another thing to look forward for i'm drowning myself in perverted thoughts i can't help it seems to me i'm not worth anything and i work so damn hard towards this "nothing" i would love to bring me back to where this started i'm scared that i was just hiding from myself i'm afraid of everything it seems that i don't know what you're thinking "Like 2009" Good morning, Good morning I'm screaming "How are you?" It's cold out, It's cold out I've shivered Too long now I'm wondering I'll wonder What I'll say What you'll say We're quiet We're awkward Like 2009 I'd rather take my own time And bring us back to then To when the honesty was fluid And these times were just a matter of How? "Are You Nervous?" do i ever say the right things? or am i still just talking to myself? at this world's end I'll hopefully still be holding your hand and you've got nothing to say and it seems like you're just using me if i could read you, like you know me i'm guessing i'd find another version of me you make me jealous, like i have never been when i'm invisible, it seems i don't exist i'm so so so so sorry, i can't be perfect but i need you with me and i don't know how else to say it... you second guess me like you second guess your wardrobe you ask me if the end is something good for us both i'm so so so so sorry, that i'm not worth it but i need to be in your arms somehow, or i'll never give up ***this one is really really long and slow... i hate it, but love it. eh... "Under Oceans" i swear, this life is like an ocean. it's all smooth sailing until you reach the dark parts. it gets a little choppy and then you hit the big waves. sometimes, you lose a man at sea, and sometimes, they jump. i don't understand how the tides work yet, but i do know this: life is an ocean just waiting to toss you around and flip you upside down. but i always want you to know, if you ever fall overboard or feel like jumping, i will always be your raft. always. and i guess i just dont know how to say it but you're just so sticky sweet and i don't know how you don't see it. you're the only reason for the smile on my face and the beat of my heart loses count when you're out of trace... when i fall, i fall hard and i'm scared of the dark if i dig, i know that i'll find more than i bargained for, sadly in my mind, i'm scared, in my room, i'm scared, in your arms, i'm scared. i've done more than one can imagine to damage myself and i'm so close to isolation, in these feelings of guilt. i'm hanging on the edge of safe and forever and either way i know i can't keep smiling forever, when the day's over, i find that darkness is friend, if i weren't so scared of what it held... once i knew you as "comfort", and a few times even "love" then you pull the rug out from under me and tell me i don't make you happy you tell me you don't make me happy... assuming that you loved me once, assuming maybe twice you dont really understand exactly how much i rely on you. for hope and comfort and love and things in between. i really dont know how it happened, but for a second i was starting to believe you looked at me that way too. i mean, i know that i'm not a dream. i dont know how i could be. i understand that. i just dont get how i got to be with someone so amazing and let myself believe that they cared as much as i did and let them hurt me more than anyone ever has. i asked little of you. "just love me and be honest if you don't" and i hope to some high power out there that maybe, just maybe, i might be over you soon. you broke my heart, i don't think that needs to be explained, but it's broken. i had hoped that the clothespins i used to hold my heart together were working, they did, and for the briefest moment i felt loved. i don't understand you, or what you want... i guess i'm just meant to be... lost? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 fnarrrrrrrrr. let's leave tonight, i'll forgive you later i swear i'll try not to think, where you've been or what you've seen i'll find out later, i'll be worth it all in the end, i'm all you have in the end i'll stand, i'll laugh, and forgive you later. well i'll say it now, i thought i missed you, with your loud ways of saying goodbye, but the way we left, with no words at all, suits me just fine suits me just fine, i'll miss you later. take those lies laying down, be indifferent but be different to everyone else, i'll find out later, i will, i will forgive you later. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Ok.. so these are my lyrics for GCSE music, they're not very good Theres meant to be a duet kinda thing but I cba to highlight it all again as I've already done it in a word doc... so.. here they are Mistake Baby, don’t leave me, I just can’t do this by myself And now I’ve gone, I’ve shed my final tear And it will, take me, years to get, over you But you’ve gone, so I may as well start now But I can’t wait for you to come on home I lie awake at night and you’re not there to hold I’ve made such a mistake, can you ever take me back? I want you now but I don’t want you to hurt Everything, around me, reminds me of you Yet I don’t have the strength to, push you from my mind I’m so, sorry, for all that I’ve done and You light, my life up, with just a single smile But I can’t wait for you to come on home I lie awake at night and you’re not there to hold I’ve made such a mistake, can you ever take me back? I want you now but I don’t want you to hurt I was broken inside and you tore me apart But I’m down on my knees and I want you to need me… And now you’re back my world has brightened up I lie awake at night just to hold you in my arms You never made a mistake and I’m just glad you’re back I want you now but I don’t want you to hurt And now you’re back my world has brightened up I lie awake at night just to hold you in my arms You never made a mistake and I’m just glad you’re back I want you now but I don’t want you to hurt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 I Cant Stop Listening To Hey Hey Violet Its Fantastic haha, thanks and Mariah, wow, you write soo good! love it, especially "Under Oceans" and "Any Eye, Another Exercise". Wow. ---- Love When I've inhaled the scent of love I'll never want to exhale It's that wonderful feeling That never becomes familiar And you don't ever want to free myself from it You'd love to drown in it I've heard it's the meaning of life The one and only truth I've seen it blossom But I've also seen it stirr up the water But that fantastic feeling The one that feels so unreal It's just something I've read about Love is foreign to me So like a hunter that searches for its prey My heart is looking for the item That will make any worries fade away But is it possible to miss something That you've never had It's like missing someone You've never known But I've heard of that and it is possible So is love possible too Because I've heard of that from you Yeah I've heard of that from you Yeah I've heard of love from you And maybe that's why I began to wonder Was any of that talk true Cause I've never felt like that about you You Left Me Another day has gone and I see that you have grown You've become stronger than I've ever known You smile and it's no fear involved You cry but there is only tears of joy I wish I could feel just like you do Going around being happy But right now I can only feel blue I'd go anywhere, everywhere To feel that free Cause right now my heart is breaking And honestly, it's killing me I'd move a mountain I'd drain the sea's To get rid of the pain that came when you left me Another sunset has gone and I know you're no longer scarred I guess you found it easy, But I think it's really hard To move on to something different When you've tasted the true right part I wish I could feel just like you do Going around being happy But right now I can only feel blue I'd go anywhere, everywhere To feel that free Cause right now my heart is breaking And honestly, it's killing me I'd move a mountain I'd drain the sea's To get rid of the pain that came when you left me I guess it's true what they say That love can truly fade away And I'm sorry to say that you got off this ride That the grass truly is greener on the other side I'd go anywhere, everywhere To feel that free Cause right now my heart is breaking And honestly, It's killing me I'd move a mountain I'd drain a sea To get rid of the pain that came when you left me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itsgettingcloser Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Heres a new song my band did, we don't have a real recording of it so this was done with fake instruments in fruity loops software but you can get an idea if those chimey things were guitars ha. http://tindeck.com/listen/ikrm Heres part of it with real instruments (live clip from practice). http://tindeck.com/listen/ukjd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Just a midi file of one of my songs.. I know its not great quality but its the only format I can get out of guitar pro You should be just able to click download and open it up http://www.esnips.com/doc/3eb5d3ac-d219-45ab-b45f-4e8e23fbe82c/Generation Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 ^it says that the link is broken so.. today was a reaaaally bad day. i really don't know what went wrong, but it all just did so.. i just kinda felt like writing. and i really suck at it, but whatever, thought i could post it anyway.. ----------- your annoying voice keeps repeating itself in my head and your words couldn't be more proud it's all a joke when you say that you want to help everyone when what you really want is to make it better for yourself and to make it harder for everyone else but i don't need your help or more specific, i don't want your help and everytime you touch me it's like you're pushing me deeper and deeper harder and harder into this dark hole but I rather fall, than have you saving me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 oh baby tell me you remember me ? i'm the one who broke everything i'm the one who couldn't stand the sound of the way you made my heart sing break it down ? you're far too loud you're far too tall, but i'm tall, i'm proud we'll all fall down when what i said gets proof, gets you, gets me falling out and back in to where i came from oh you remember me. well these risks that i'm taking and the wrists that i'm breaking are doing just about enough to drown out the sound of you hating me bothered ? just a little annoying i say as i can't sort this all out i never made you proud, i will, i will never make you as proud as you make me you make me, and you break me you love me and you hate me you leave me, you complete me oh tell me you remember me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 ^wow jorgi, that was really good D: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Here is some random lines I put together, I think it flows together really nice! Well here is my first post in a long time here: Only a dark sense of digression The was a time when all darkness was gone Only a memory was left At that time, all of us were broken And what little memory we had ceased to exist It was a sad, disgusting, revolting measure It was everything to me It was that of which noting seemed to matter It was a disgrace to humanity Why is such a memory erased from a horrendous, discomforting passion? Sadness is nothing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 ^it says that the link is broken so.. today was a reaaaally bad day. i really don't know what went wrong, but it all just did so.. i just kinda felt like writing. and i really suck at it, but whatever, thought i could post it anyway.. ----------- your annoying voice keeps repeating itself in my head and your words couldn't be more proud it's all a joke when you say that you want to help everyone when what you really want is to make it better for yourself and to make it harder for everyone else but i don't need your help or more specific, i don't want your help and everytime you touch me it's like you're pushing me deeper and deeper harder and harder into this dark hole but I rather fall, than have you saving me. I agree, that day was terrible =/ And I think I know who that poem's about? Anyways, I looove it! And it's soo true too! love you<3 I wrote a little something the other day.. ---- Invisibly walked through She's the girl That no one ever sees She's the girl That doesn't dare to dream Because she's the girl That you don't know She's the girl That's never been whole Even though she's the girl Without a dream She's the girl That you'll eventually see You'll see her when it's too late You'll notice her when she has already faded away And when the emptiness is complete Full of unspoken words You tend to miss her That girl that you never got to know Because even though you didn't see her You felt her presence every day And when she's gone You feel that something has gone away And I really didn't know you But I really feel your absence The air is thicker And the wind has changed Don't ask me how I know it But I know you haven't really gone away I know you can hear me Because I feel you in my heart I know I didn't know you But I know that I miss The girl that invisibly walked through these halls --- annnd, I forgot to mention, that I uploaded one of my other studio recordings, an original, on my myspace, it's called "If sunday should come", and like "Hey Hey Violet", it is not complete yet. But you kinda get how the song goes.. http://www.myspace.com/linney94 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 sorry for doubleposting and for going totally off topic, but, Chris, you have no visitor messages? So I couldn't respond.. hmm.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicki Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 I agree, that day was terrible =/ And I think I know who that poem's about? Anyways, I looove it! And it's soo true too! love you<3 I wrote a little something the other day.. ---- Invisibly walked through She's the girl That no one ever sees She's the girl That doesn't dare to dream Because she's the girl That you don't know She's the girl That's never been whole Even though she's the girl Without a dream She's the girl That you'll eventually see You'll see her when it's too late You'll notice her when she has already faded away And when the emptiness is complete Full of unspoken words You tend to miss her That girl that you never got to know Because even though you didn't see her You felt her presence every day And when she's gone You feel that something has gone away And I really didn't know you But I really feel your absence The air is thicker And the wind has changed Don't ask me how I know it But I know you haven't really gone away I know you can hear me Because I feel you in my heart I know I didn't know you But I know that I miss The girl that invisibly walked through these halls --- annnd, I forgot to mention, that I uploaded one of my other studio recordings, an original, on my myspace, it's called "If sunday should come", and like "Hey Hey Violet", it is not complete yet. But you kinda get how the song goes.. http://www.myspace.com/linney94 Yeah.. maybe, i did exaggerate a lot , but most of it is true.. and thanks:hug: and what you wrote is really good! i like it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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