Linney Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 ^thanks sweetie, and no, you didn't exaggerate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itsgettingcloser Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Heres a new song we recorded live from practice, no vocals yet. http://tindeck.com/listen/avuc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parame Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 @: Linney: Your song was great! It reminded me of suicide a bit (i'm weird... I know, and i looked at it from that context). here's a song I wrote, and it kinda sucks... oh well Incomplete Suffering in silence as the door is halfway closed Sitting in the nothing, I feel my heart go sore I miss seeing your smile I miss taking in your words And though the days pass Faster, the clock ticks by I find myself wishing they did not When you were here, every moment would count I feel so hopeless now Incomplete without you, you’re my sky I need proof that you have been with me all along Before my heart sinks into a saddened song Again… And if you were here, then I’m sure you’d know That these smiles are just there for show Because I don’t show my weakness, though they see it all As if I’m made out of glass they see right through And I’m here, looking at photographs In the night, that mirrors my life You’re my light, snuffed out for now I need you so much... And I feel so hopeless now Incomplete without you, you’re my sky I need proof that you have been with me all along Before my heart sinks into a saddened song Again… Breathe into my lungs That burn like they had never before No matter how much I try I can’t numb myself no more Please come back to me, You’re everything I adore And it hurts, so… Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 you dont have to say you love me for me to understand i always know it forever and ever cause my heart is in your hand you're more than my best friend You're the one who matters most I'll be here when you need me when your at your very lowest because i love you i want you to know that quite simply i love you you mean more to me than anyone i love you I'll never ever leave your side because I love you If your heart gets broke, im going to be there If you're crying real hard, im going to be there, If you've got no-one left, Im going to be there, Because i'll never give up, i'm going to be there I love you I'll forever tell you that i love you I mean every single word and i i love you No-one will ever replace you because forever, and ever i love you you're the best thing, The best thing thats ever happened and i'll never ever find a better thing, a better thing than you. These words are not enough, For me to really explain These three words from me to you i tell you this in vain I love you I love you i love you i love you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hubabalou Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 ^ Thats so sweet Ross. I love it. Everyone writes beautifully on here. Its a breath of fresh air. Something I wrote just now. A storm randomly came in and I felt inspired. April Showers The rain tapped hard against the roof above her head. In the darkness she sat. Listening. Thinking. It was nights like this that she thought the hardest. With the thunder rumbling in the distance. Despite the soothing mummer of nature's soundtrack, the girl could not sleep. The drops of water hitting the shingles above her normally were a perfect lullaby, but tonight her thoughts races. They hindered her from finding rest. If she had her way, she would be outside, soaking herself and soaking in the sudden spring rain. However, she was trapped inside, knowing that if she stood in the cold downpour, she would be sick in no time. She longed to be drenched in the torrent. Encompassed by the cold air. Grazed by the true beginning of spring. Consumed by the April showers that would bring life to the barren ground. She wanted to be part of that natural way. Unhindered by human construct. But that was her problem. Her whole life was human construct. It revolved around what was known as society. What was known as proper. There was no freedom. No place to lay her inhibitions aside. None at all. The only place she would find that would be in the rain. The rain that she was not allowed to touch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 oh sorry, were you speaking i couldn't care les if you were talking if you're bitching about your last disaster or stabbing knives into my spine so no, thanks, it's fine i'll get myself back home tonight don't worry about it, it's fine now you're the last thing on my mind, now you were never worth my time back then and i swear you're not worth it now so sorry if i don't like the way you dress or how you talk 'cause you speak like a tramp and dress like a whore no i don't think my nails can dig in anymore than they already have oh what a delightful scar to have; ones of jokes gone far too far so don't worry about it, i'm fine you're the last thing on my mind you were never worth my time back then and i swear you're not worth it now well, tell me did he still love you with that black eye a trophey has never shone so darkly so tell me did he still love you with your bruised hands and the way your eyes can't meet mine (that's what i thought). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 ^Thats beautiful Jorgi Its really good I love it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Today is the day I say hooray It is now So go eat a cow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSkeleton Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 ' Many times people let me fall, but every time i stood up, stronger then before, so you can say what you want ; but your words won't hurt me, because im a fighter. © Marjanne :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Today is the dayI say hooray It is now So go eat a cow Ahahahahahahahahaha! :rotfl: :rotfl: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 you dont have to say you love mefor me to understand i always know it forever and ever cause my heart is in your hand you're more than my best friend You're the one who matters most I'll be here when you need me when your at your very lowest because i love you i want you to know that quite simply i love you you mean more to me than anyone i love you I'll never ever leave your side because I love you If your heart gets broke, im going to be there If you're crying real hard, im going to be there, If you've got no-one left, Im going to be there, Because i'll never give up, i'm going to be there I love you I'll forever tell you that i love you I mean every single word and i i love you No-one will ever replace you because forever, and ever i love you you're the best thing, The best thing thats ever happened and i'll never ever find a better thing, a better thing than you. These words are not enough, For me to really explain These three words from me to you i tell you this in vain I love you I love you i love you i love you I'm actually kinda digging this. Good job mate!:hyper: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<3WeAreBroken<3 Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Just a little somethin... Hold You In My Arms, If Even For A Short time. Thats Ok, As Long As You Are Mine. Let Me Hold You Tightly, While Our Hearts Beat In Rhythm. Breathing Lightly. Im Intoxicated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RenegadeRoss Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 I'm actually kinda digging this. Good job mate!:hyper: Just saw this! Thanks buddy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 this thread needs to become as active as it once was, live thread, liiiive ! i've been walking these streets for some time now so where have you been ? as they pass me by those rose-tinted glasses won't see a thing won't you let me in ? i missed you, i promise i promised i'd miss you explain it to the starlight that don't mean anything anymore the silence is here and it outspoke us all i can say i tried, with my hands tied and my back right at the wall the moon outshone us all but i tried, i promise i tried to promise jump over the fences hit the floor, hit my jaw and run, out run everyone threaten the sky that got us this far - too close ? closer than i'd ever thought possible so run once more the signs that say we'll never make it we'll ignore, i promise i promised it all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 I wrote this in detention, it doesn’t make much sense… It’s supposed to be screamed through most parts. Time Flow Breaks Another Memory Digging into my soul I’m slowly letting go (of everything) Change is in my heart But I can’t change what is needed If everything means something Then I’m not sure I can change God blisters, then I fall Waiting forever I fall into the dark waiting Only in likeness I fall Beckoning deceit, I fall once more See where our hearts will lead All across the deadened sea I’m waiting for it now Waiting for it now Waiting for it now Oh, the things that are broken Installs a secret in my brain Allow me to shine away All I got is all I can do, now Waiting for myself I divide, waiting for the truth And that’s all I should need Quarantine my dreams And leave me here to breathe Only in this life Digging into my soul I’m slowly letting go (of everything) And I will forecast this sin forever With nothing to follow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted May 9, 2009 Report Share Posted May 9, 2009 Have Them On My Side As you stand there in your silence With intention in your mind I was finding way to leave you By means of you behind And your matter isn't my concern As I watched you grow and burn Funny how you can hate us When you have no more to learn And have them stand with smiles on for me And let them have pity's pride And then let their hardened hearts be And then have them on my side Because every time My heart asks you You turn away From all things true The lies won't ever Leave you I know you welcome any way So you can finally go and say That none of us accepted you But all that lives with truth is true You care too much about other eyes You care too much about your face All so much you sold your soul So much you prostitute your place Kinda strange. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 Strangers on the subway I feel you take my hand in yours. I want to look at you.But I find that I can't. So,I wait for you to leave.I know you will. Like everyone you will too. Then I feel something.Strange lips touching mine. A kiss.Your kiss.Now I look... In sad brown eyes I see another lost soul. Do you know me?No. Do I know you.No. But we see each other. Now our lips part as we come to a stop. I watch you stand up.Then you walk away. Now someone new sits beside me. They smile and I wonder ,are they actually there? Yes. For the first time in a long time there is someone there. And as I move underground toward an unknown destination. I am not alone _________ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 It's been far too long since I've written something.... Before it’s too late Blustering was never my intention. We once were joyous but now there’s contravention. Being used, Abused, when I had given you support. Now it’s me who needs to be rescued. But my signal flag is non existent. It’s like being in a parallel world Your old friends are different from before. Sitting by the phone, not a ringing to be heard. I guess it’s me who will make the effort. 5 minute conversations is all that we will ever have Who knows where our childhood went? Maybe we’ll walk past each other on the street when we are older Would you know it’s me? I’m guessing no. It’s sad to see our longing dreams are not even close to a reality. They’re just dreams. Only for closed eyes to somehow see. Only dreams. But nightmares will replace them soon. Please change before it’s too late. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted May 10, 2009 Report Share Posted May 10, 2009 That is awesome.I love it! this is a song. Always...Love Do you remember me? Do you recall my face or any past embrace we shared? When we were still sixteen, I was your closest friend . I held tight to your hand I swear. CHORUS So let me take you now and tell you how I have always loved you. For even when you fell apart and broke my heart I did always love you. Are you who you used to be? Or did you fall away in every drunk mistake of then. Will you return to me? Come home you weary soul. You'll never be alone again. SECOND CHORUS Because I'll take you now and tell you how I have always loved you. For even when you fell apart and broke my heart I did always love you. Please love remember me... Don't let me fade away... From all your memories... I just need you to say... THIRD CHORUS "I want to take you now and tell you how I have always loved you. For even when I fell apart and broke your heart I did always love you. ____________ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 That is awesome.I love it! this is a song. Always...Love Do you remember me? Do you recall my face or any past embrace we shared? When we were still sixteen, I was your closest friend . I held tight to your hand I swear. CHORUS So let me take you now and tell you how I have always loved you. For even when you fell apart and broke my heart I did always love you. Are you who you used to be? Or did you fall away in every drunk mistake of then. Will you return to me? Come home you weary soul. You'll never be alone again. SECOND CHORUS Because I'll take you now and tell you how I have always loved you. For even when you fell apart and broke my heart I did always love you. Please love remember me... Don't let me fade away... From all your memories... I just need you to say... THIRD CHORUS "I want to take you now and tell you how I have always loved you. For even when I fell apart and broke your heart I did always love you. ____________ ! I'm a big fan of this one! ! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted May 11, 2009 Report Share Posted May 11, 2009 Thanx so much! I'm glad u like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Of What Liars We’ve Become I’m holding back But I can’t retain the shiver Each breath is a nuisance But I seem to retain Every thought is my witness, but I’ll die in the deceit Where is my sense, where is your pride? Savage my guilt; make me angry Tell me where I should belong Or if I’m in it for something else Save me from myself Forget me not, or I will convey myself in misery I’m not yet alone, but forgiven unto myself One more thought and broken, or still mistaken Save me for one last time, at least Break me apart and give me grief But I cannot feel your pain, anguish What could be better than this, dark? I’ll tell you what you need to know, but not everything Have I told you enough truth? Take me to hell and just hate Either way you fuck me up with your hate Damn everything you see I will not follow see, I cannot see hate Only you are in my eyes I gave it away and fell in between No sense of anger Because I feel too much for you 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 ^^^^^ You've really inspired me to write about an emotion I've felt a lot these days .... It Takes One To Know One Is this a jealous healing Or can I throw it all away Is it something else you're stealing Or can you show me all you say Yes you can give me something But I know where you stand You'll give me blessings I know But you'll take with your other hand Is it so they say you hate me Or are you lying again Is it so you take me In as a dying friend We know that all the liars Have made their way again Through all of our traps and fires They've made their way again How do they know I'm lying How does my word get out Is it trust I'm trusting? Is it trust, That need be learned about? I know there's something wrong with you Because there's things wrong in me Somewhere you view me as a stranger Somewhere you view me as your friend But all I wanted was for you not to Save for me all your anger And I wanted to be with you until the end I guess we can't have that, But who really cares We're lessons learned, Friendships burned Successful traps, In tomorrow's stares 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 Ok, before you read it and go "Oh, another vampire story", this story is not about vampires. They are in my story, and are a main part, but the story doesn't revolve around them. With that said, read read read please. Chapter One: Encounters With Vampires I held back my scream as I saw the predators’ eyes before me. He smiled, scarlet red blood dripping down the corners of his mouth. My body shivered as he crept closer, and closer; blood thirsty eyes on its prey. Flashbacks came to me. They were not my own. I saw a young blonde haired boy playing in the dark night, only to be attacked. He did not die though. Another one came. The blonde boy was older and in love with a girl. She was pretty. Deep blue eyes and bouncing red curls. It couldn’t be… She chuckled as he whispered in her ear. In another, he was sitting by the young girls’ death bed. She was pale, and there was sweat along her brow. The boy was begging and pleading for her not to die, but she was gone… The last flashback came. This time, the boy was being bitten, and he was in intense pain, I closed my eyes, but I could still see the image. “My love my Mae.” He cooed to me. “You’re alive.” “I’m not… n-no, I-I…” I was frightened by the man in front of me. “My love, do not be frightened. I have found you; you will be safe now with me.” The boy said, creeping closer, and closer. “You are safe now that we are together.” He smiled, reaching out his long slender hand. “I don’t know you…. I’m not even from here.” I spoke, trying (and failing) to sound brave. “It is I your love, Theodore Thomas.” Theodore smiled as he moved even closer. He stood about two feet ahead of me. He thought I was the girl in his flashbacks. My body shook in fright. I stepped back three steps. “Please stop, I promise I will not harm you my dear Mae. I love you.” He reached his hand to me, which made me move back even further. “I will not hurt you Mae.” “You think I’m her… the girl in your memories?” I asked, trying to not think about the memories. Yet even more came. Tears filled my eyes, as I saw the love Theodore had for Mae. I had never seen a love so strong in my life. When I saw the memory of her dying, I couldn’t help but sob. What was happening? It was like I could feel that love in my bones, through out my whole entire body. I really was her, just in a different life. How could this be? “I’m so sorry she is gone.” I said wiping the tears away that were flowing out of my eyes. “I’m so sorry I’m not her.”’ His soft features suddenly turned dark, and cold. His messy blond hair started to shake. I made him angry, and from the looks of it, that was not good. “Fine then, if you are not her, I have no business with you.” Theodore rushed to me and started for my shirt. He gripped it tightly, and started to pull me up. “Theodore.” I heard someone call. “Put her down.” The deep voice said from behind me. Theodore hesitated before setting me back on my feet. I gasped in relief. “Leave.” The man said. Since I thought he was talking to me, I stepped backwards. “No, no not you miss. I was talking to the boy who was about to murder you.” “Oh.” Was all I had managed to say. Theodore was gone before I knew it. I had another memory come into my head. This one was different. Peaceful in a sort of way I had never seen before. I saw a young man holding his daughter; she was the most beautiful baby I had ever seen. Her dark blue eyes stood out against the yellow skin. The man smiled in delight as his baby girl grabbed his finger. The memory fast forwarded to when the girl was five years old. She was even more beautiful than when she was a baby, but she was sad, then I realized her father wasn’t in the room with her; he was outside of the house, looking in. This was the saddest one. His memory went even further to show his daughter older, becoming powerful. He had made her what she was. “Adelle…” He whispered to her as she lay in pain. I shook my head trying to get back to reality. “Thank you,” I whispered to the man. “Very much” “What is your name Miss?” He asked me politely, with a smile on his face. “M- Mia. My name is Mia.” I managed to get out. “What are you doing out here Mia, its dark, and who knows what lures in these forests.” “I’m just looking for a place to sleep, I have nowhere to go. Now who are you?” I asked, curious, and half- scared that he was going to kidnap, and murder me. “Forgive me, my name is Everett.” He smiled. “Just one more question, I couldn’t help but notice the expression on your face. Are you one of the Keepers?” Everett asked me. “A Keeper, I don’t know what a Keeper is.” I admitted. “I’m not educated on the world outside of the Bible; my mother fed me the Bible by the spoon. She called me ‘Demon child’ and tried to get me to change my ways. I’m skeptical about the whole Bible thing.” I admitted, not knowing why I was telling the truth to an absolute stranger, who in all honesty scared the living crap out of me. “Why are you skeptical?” He asked me, confused obviously. “I see things, not very Christian- like.” I said, speaking my opinion. “That’s a fairly good reason. You know, you’re not the only one who see’s things as you say.” Everett “Do you?” I asked him, now curious. “No, no not me, there are five others. Just like you and I think you are meant to see them.” Everett spoke to me. “Oh… people like me.” I said, still confused. “Let me give you a room for the night. You shouldn’t be out here all alone. Who now’s what or who is out here” William looked around. “You mean like you? You don’t seem human, what does that make you?” I asked. He chuckled and said, “I’m a vampire, fangs and all.” He put his arms out, and examined his self, feet up. “Ah, that explains it then, out at night hunting humans. It must also explain the way I am about to die.” I said sheepishly. Everett shook his head. “You are honestly one of the most important people on this earth, to kill you… It’s a terrible thing. My kind wouldn’t forgive me. The whole Underground World would shun my kind for killing you. So now, you are not going to die.” “The Underground World,” I asked confused yet again. “What?” “It’s the world hidden from the human one,” He said, “Made of more creatures than you could imagine, It’s astonishing if you think about it. As I was saying before, we should get you to our coven so you can have a place to sleep for the night.” I didn’t say anything. “And don’t be afraid, none of us will…” He was suddenly cut off by Theodore, who was shouting at us. “Everett! Everett!” Theodore was shouting. “Wolves, a pack of wolves are after us!” “Take Mia,” Everett said lightly pulling my arm, and leading me to Theodore, who was ten feet from us. “Take her back to the coven. I’ll fend them off.” Everett left before I could blink. Theodore took my right wrist and pulled me along. To where, I did not know. “Wh- what’s g-going on?” I managed to ask him. This was all so confusing. “Nothing, just come with me.” Theodore said to me as we raced along. “Tell me what’s going on now Theodore. I want to know, and if you don’t tell me, I’m not going with you.” Theodore stopped us and sighed. He then looked at me, and put his hands on my shoulders. “Ok, Mia listen to me closely to me.” Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yoshy Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 ' Many times people let me fall, but every time i stood up,stronger then before, so you can say what you want ; but your words won't hurt me, because im a fighter. © Marjanne :3 that's good,Marjanne Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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