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something short......

 

 

Concrete Hearts

 

Concrete hearts will never break

But never love in the first place.

You might as well have a stone face to match.

So I’ll claw my way through, the incessant words,

that could scar a person for life.

 

Let tomorrow worry about itself,

I’ll manage somehow.

But tomorrow never really comes,

So what’s there to worry about?

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Midnight run

 

 

Running blind, with you behind.

Down this empty street.

Vacant memories of our destinies at my feet.

Faster now.

Don't know how you can come away with me,

when everything I've ever been is chasing intently.

So don't look back.

It might attack as we race into the night.

Away from the past that will always last in pieces of my mind.

And far away from fear that won't disappear with the times.

So hold my hand tight as we try to take flight from this place.

With a thousand ghosts that I never chose in my wake.

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civilised ? i can't believe my eyes

with lipstick marks along your arms

that said everything,

everything before you began

 

the effort you're taking,

to give back what you took

(admirable but mistaken)

the dirt under your fingernails

is proof of where you lost me

 

i'm dropping out

i'm losing out

your heart gave out

when you clawed your veins out

i'm walking out

(you're standing tall)

you were everything

i had it all.

 

civilised ? i said my goodbyes

fuck you, fuck off, fuck this

you lied.

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Okey, so I wrote my first song every today. So here we go. It's about me losing touch with my very best friend. And it's all been really hard.

 

I wish we could go back there

To the time where everything

Was exactly right

Can’t we turn back time?

And be the ones we were supposed to

 

You made my days so special

Your laugh, it made me smile

Your thoughts was almost mine

Why did it change?

Was it me, or was it you?

 

I miss the good days

I miss the bad days

I miss everything we used to be

You changed my life, you made it better

Will things ever be the same?

 

The feelings I’m left with

Can’t be described

Is it sadness, disappointment?

Or is it simply regret,

Because I let us slide apart?

 

I miss the good days

I miss the bad days

I miss everything we used to be

You changed my life, you made it better

Will things ever be the same?

 

I don’t know if you know

How much I love you, how much you mean

We always stuck together

Through everything

You were there for me

 

And because Matt is so awesome, he made a melody to it. So here's the video of Matt playing and singing it. He made it in like 10-15 minutes, he's amazing :D

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Okey, so I wrote my first song every today. So here we go. It's about me losing touch with my very best friend. And it's all been really hard.

 

I wish we could go back there

To the time where everything

Was exactly right

Can’t we turn back time?

And be the ones we were supposed to

 

You made my days so special

Your laugh, it made me smile

Your thoughts was almost mine

Why did it change?

Was it me, or was it you?

 

I miss the good days

I miss the bad days

I miss everything we used to be

You changed my life, you made it better

Will things ever be the same?

 

The feelings I’m left with

Can’t be described

Is it sadness, disappointment?

Or is it simply regret,

Because I let us slide apart?

 

I miss the good days

I miss the bad days

I miss everything we used to be

You changed my life, you made it better

Will things ever be the same?

 

I don’t know if you know

How much I love you, how much you mean

We always stuck together

Through everything

You were there for me

 

And because Matt is so awesome, he made a melody to it. So here's the video of Matt playing and singing it. He made it in like 10-15 minutes, he's amazing :D

 

ooo Beautiful Guro and Mat you ROCK

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Kinda lame but this is a song i wrote.

 

Not who I wanted to be.

 

Hold me down ...

Hold me up and I'm sinking now.

Down to darkness. It's not real.

Drenched in a blackness that I can feel.

 

And this is not who I wanted to be.

This is everything inside I wont let you see, because believe it or not this is me!

 

So now hold back the sickness.

Don't let it in.

I want you to know that this wasn't a sin.

It was just make believe .

It was only a game.

Now cover the hurt and whisper my name.

And please know...

That this is not who I wanted to be.

This is everything inside that you'll never see, because believe it or not this is me.

 

Hold me close!

Hold me now!

I'm sinking away and I don't know how.

Just let me lie .

Leave me alone.

No don't walk away baby, I want to come home.

Just let me come home.

And just know.

 

This is not who I wanted to be.

This is everything inside I don't want to see because you can't believe this is me.

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Kinda lame but this is a song i wrote.

 

Not who I wanted to be.

 

Hold me down ...

Hold me up and I'm sinking now.

Down to darkness. It's not real.

Drenched in a blackness that I can feel.

 

And this is not who I wanted to be.

This is everything inside I wont let you see, because believe it or not this is me!

 

So now hold back the sickness.

Don't let it in.

I want you to know that this wasn't a sin.

It was just make believe .

It was only a game.

Now cover the hurt and whisper my name.

And please know...

That this is not who I wanted to be.

This is everything inside that you'll never see, because believe it or not this is me.

 

Hold me close!

Hold me now!

I'm sinking away and I don't know how.

Just let me lie .

Leave me alone.

No don't walk away baby, I want to come home.

Just let me come home.

And just know.

 

This is not who I wanted to be.

This is everything inside I don't want to see because you can't believe this is me.

______

 

awwww totally awsome...it sounds like could be for linkin park ...don't ask me why

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everyone's stuff is really awesome! And now I'm baaack =) haha, jk. But, I wrote this to my vedry best friend. Vicki on here. Ehm.. it's up on youtube, got explaination and lyrics on there soo.. if you'd like, maybe you could check it out? It's called: Forgive me please Dearilee.

 

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everyone's stuff is really awesome! And now I'm baaack =) haha, jk. But, I wrote this to my vedry best friend. Vicki on here. Ehm.. it's up on youtube, got explaination and lyrics on there soo.. if you'd like, maybe you could check it out? It's called: Forgive me please Dearilee.

 

 

omg I watched your Almost Lover cover the other day and thought it might be you and it was haha

you have an amazing voice :]

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Well, those are my first songs i ever wrote, |:

I wrote this 2 songs in Hebrew and then translated to English,

So it does not sound so good.

 

Song 1#

I can not see the light

I just see them

They did not do anything

Only harmful

Cause it to be more difficult

 

I do not want to see the light

Maybe it just causes me to turn off?

Will cause it to be more painful?

Everybody just harmless,

I run away one day,

 

Why? ,

Why can not I just be happy?

Well,

I guess it was only because of

I guess it was only because of

Only because,

Everything is not okay anymore,

Since grew up, life became more difficult

Since grew up, life became more difficult

 

Song 2#

They try to be who they are not,

dont try to be someone else,

This is wrong,

dont try to be someone, because someone else,

Be yourself, only yourself.

 

she is most normal kid in school,

Neither this nor that,

Trying to be one of them,

Is not successful, but she tries.

 

She indicates the nerve of all,

Everybody hates her,

But no one says anything,

Something to get her to stop,

Everybody just live with it,

Let it be.

 

Not finished the songs yet, I just want to see what you think ..

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stoked on that, Linney !

 

 

 

i can't say i'm satisfied

with the way this turned out

when the queen of hearts promised us

our place, our time

she said it would be fine

as the house fell down around her

as those hearts smashed down

beside her

 

the books we read and

the songs we sang, in the evening

now carry a different meaning

well if they mean a lot to you

i'll believe them

 

the trees stand their ground outside

it's colder in here, in here

where the floors hold secrets

our home, our lives

that we built crashed down around us

the dreams fell down

beside us

and it'll be fine

if we believe them

 

the shadows on the ceiling

dance once more, with feeling

i knew them once, i knew them once

and i never stopped believing.

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Me And My Band Write Most Ourselves, But This One Was Written For A Road Safety Competion In School. Our Catergory Was Drink Driving So Here It Is :-

 

The wife rings, where the hell are you?

I'm in the bar just having a few.

I pick up my coat, I find my keys,

I'll be on my way as soon as I leave.

 

Chorus:

 

Don't You drink and drive.

You could get killed or knock someone down!

Don't you drink and drive.

No no no nooo.

 

My eyes are hazy,

My mind is crazy

and the road signs are a blur.

Theres people walking,

My radios talking

But I don't see any more.

 

Chorus

 

Almost made it to the top of my street,

There's a boy on a bicycle.

Tried to avoid but the night was very diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim :lol:

 

Chorus x2

 

Fade :]

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