kris10 Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Ok so I play drums in a band and recently picked up guitar (main point is I dont play guitar alot) and i'm not that good at it but last night I just had this idea for a song and went with it. Right now it doesn't have any vocals and I will probably add a second verse later on but for now I just want to know anyones honest opinion on this song. To me its simple but good. Oh and the bridge will be changed thats just filler until I think of something better Thanks http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=01c3989e5b6c228991b20cc0d07ba4d257d023711fa0fe70 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 That was very good. Was there some piano in the background, or was is just me? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris10 Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 That was very good. Was there some piano in the background, or was is just me? its actually a second guitar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illicit Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 if i will rate you from 1-10, i'tll be 7. quite brilliant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 its actually a second guitar Oh, ok. Man, I enjoyed that actually. I saved it and put it on my iPod. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris10 Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Oh, ok. Man, I enjoyed that actually. I saved it and put it on my iPod. wow that means alot to me. you don't even know. I'm writing out the lyrics tonight. I just have tons of inspiration tonight, too bad i still have homework to do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris10 Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 heres a stream if anyone doesnt want to download it http://www.imeem.com/people/0o28HKX/music/YIZJn2m9/kristen_fernandez_untitled/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itsgettingcloser Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 check out a new song im workin on http://www.upload-mp3.com/pfiles/53865/Unknown%20Artist%20-%2001%20-%20new%20song%20idea2.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris10 Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 check out a new song im workin on http://www.upload-mp3.com/pfiles/53865/Unknown%20Artist%20-%2001%20-%20new%20song%20idea2.mp3 I like it alot. It sounds like the type of music I having been really getting into lately like kinda of ambient and for some reason the piano reminded me a bit of chiodos. I the only thing is it would sound alot better with real drums but I know that for a demo thats not necessary Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itsgettingcloser Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Yeh that piano sounds a little too similar to Chiodos, the song is in the same key, but that keyboard part will change eventually anyways it was just a rough idea. I'm no piano player. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x-Decode Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 both songs are really cool. keep going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris10 Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 ok I recorded a new version already. Hopefully its a little better http://www.imeem.com/people/0o28HKX/music/kP2i3aDO/kristen_fernandez_new_untitled/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hubabalou Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Wow! I love both of them. Jon, the piano in yours is very haunting. Kristen, I really love the second guitar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris10 Posted January 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 ok this is the last time i swear haha. I added an intro and something to the verses. http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=01c3989e5b6c228991b20cc0d07ba4d209f23bf8f4406ccd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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