closesttoheaven

you had your way

i was stuck in the same day

you came today

i was ready for you to stay

that's when,

you made a promise, you wouldn't fade

you made a promise, you wouldn't disappear

you made a promise, and i'm still here

you made a promise, and i'm still here

you had a way of making me smile

you made my day and it was only awhile until,

you made a promise, you wouldn't fade

you made a promise, you wouldn't disappear

you made a promise, and i'm still here

you made a promise, and i'm still here

you had your way, but it seems like you've changed

you made a promise that you wouldn't fade away

you made a promise that you wouldn't disappear

you made a promise, and i'm still standing here

you broke your promise somehow i'm still standing here

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I wish I didn't write songs that suck ass.

critique and honest opinions please?...

please listen if you have not yet!

wheres b for signature?

please listen. i wanna know what you guys think. i love them, their lyrics are great and i love the singers voice.

your thoughts?

http://www.myspace.com/personaloxygen

how many graphics can we enter?

aw, i love Jordan and Vicky!

this has to be the best cover ever. it's original and the singer's voice is super lovely

This band covered Decode-

http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=la3k5n_GpnU

i like it.

^ i liked that.

more crap once again;

morning shines in

moving ends here

a dark zone fears in

as the tears fall on our hands,

we drown in our sins

caving in lies over lives we fought for thoughts we lost in

look at what's happened to us

falling the tears from our eyes

as they flood the ground

they're drowning you goodbye

reasons for, is what we're searching for

as they fade, we wait

as they fade, we wave

don't fade away, don't fade way

not from this life

not all alone

cause things will make us change

they will change

just stay we'll change

reasons hide, searching deep inside

look at what's happened to us

falling the tears from our eyes

as they flood the ground

they're drowning you goodbye

reasons for, is what we're searching for

as they fade, we wait

as they fade, we wave

i saw you, walking in my dream

i saw you, walking my dream

you didn't tell me a thing

just told me i'm too far from you

haunting you, it's haunting you

the dream ends, it didn't mean anything

you didn't tell me a thing

moving ends

hiding us deep inside

as they fade, we wait

as they fade, we'll wave goodbye

i was kinda wondering, what is something (or things) you want to do before you die?

prepare for some ultimate crapness!

so what's going on?

we haven't walked on the beach forever

it's been so long

i think i'm going crazy

or is it just you who’s driving me insane

i made a promise

a promise that i wouldn't fade away

this is not a broken promise

cause you're the one who’s fading

i cried for your name

you still haven't come

now i'm drowning so deep, i can't breathe at all

will you come back

and say what you meant

just like you did before

my ships are sinking in the deep icy ocean

will you come and save me?

no, not this time

cause i noticed

you're too busy saving the survivors on yours

i cried for your name

you still haven't come

now i'm drowning so deep, i can't breathe at all

will you come back

and say what you meant

just like you did before

i think i know now

no one will save me

would you be no one?

i think i know now

no one will save me

will you be no one?

i think i know now

no one will save me

are you no one?

you've called your group of saviors

but you haven't called me

cause i'm not part of those who survived

you won't save me now

you can't save me now

cause now i''ve drowned so deep, i can't breathe no air at all

you won't come back

and say what you meant

it's not like before

can you guys honestly tell me what you think?

then you = fucking idiot

then you = bigger fucking idiot [for saying that to me]

i'm gonna end it there cause i'm pretty sure i'll be getting hate comments and i'm not gonna start a useless fight and be hated for uselessness.

everyone's entitled to their opinions sorry.

I don't think suicide is selfish, at least for some people. cause some people don't really have anyone at all who cares about them.

i was just wondering and i'm sorry if there's already a thread like this one.

Why do you tell me you care,

when you don't care at all

Am I what you want?

'Cause you're what I need

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

but your thoughts always come back to haunt me

And I can never let you go

I'll tell you I'm for real

so you won't have to be hurt no more

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

You're the air I need to breathe

If I don't have you,

I'll be left here to sufficate

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

I thought love was all I wanted

but I'm throwing your heart right back at you,

like a piece of rock on the ground

I need one more look in your eye,

before I can fall asleep tonight

I'm trying to fall in and out of love

Can't you just let me be?

Look at where we are now

(My thoughts you can never know)

Look at where we are now

(My thoughts you can never know)

Your thoughts are haunting me,

My thoughts will haunt you,

Then we'll realise,

that we're only repeating history,

falling in and out of love again

Crapness.

can Jeremy, Zac and Taylor sing?

do we have one? well if we don't then i think we need one. if you have any advice and don't feel too comfortable to tell anyone you know, then you could probably ask someone around here. and i just wanted to know... my english is pretty poor as you could probably tell... but wth does it mean to bench with someone?

You can't download it.

so many people said they putted it on their ipod. and i just want it for now and i will buy it when it comes on itunes.

OMFG THE NEW SONG IS AMZING!!!!

Where can i download it? please i need it on my ipod.

okay so i seriously wrote this 2 minutes ago in 5 minutes. please give me your honest opinions. i know it probably sucks. but i'm improving, right?

He whispers in her ear

The things she doesn't want to hear

He tries to make her understand

The things she cannot stand

He wants to be her hero

Though she's feared to be a zero

He tries to make her love

But she doesn't want to be his dove

Even though, she is above.

i might add on to it and change it a bit.

so quick so quick

try to focus on a way closer

we're close to ending

don't let this feeling take over your mind

(don't let go)

[Chorus]

your close to heart

but furthest thing to touch

keep our distances

keep dreaming

you have to see

this is the only way it could be

history is only repeating itself

it's only talk

why don't you try, begin some action

you can't photograph these words

learn my method.

understand my way.

is this how you wanted it to be?

(don't let go)

[Chorus]

so quick so quick

you'd wish i'd ring so clear now

so quick so quick

i won't let this water fill your lungs

(don't let go)

[Chorus]

a mask on this untold feeling

(closer now, we're getting closer now)

do you know how to live any other way?

(closer now, we're getting closer now)

[Chorus]

give me something to help for

give me something to cry for

give me something to love for

give me something to live for

tell me something i don't know

and i won't think back

i won't look back anymore

you'd wish i'd ring so clear now

so quick so quick

i won't let this water fill your lungs

(don't let go)

my second song. can you guys please tell me, is it bad, okay, or good? and if it sucks, how could i make it better? yeah, i know some lyrics are familiar with conditions lyrics.

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i hope you don't mind. i kinda seperated sentes and chnged a few things.

do you think it makes sense the way i wrote it?

You stare away like you know what you need

Like I know what you need

But you keep coming to me

You haven't been exposed to me this way

But that's okay

Please don't hang up

Please don't fade away

I'd know your grin

I'd know your cry

I'd know everything I can remember

Without any try

We've had it all

To ourselves we keep

Keep on dreaming

For new words to photograph

Even though I've got the bite

You've got the itch

Try so hard and it just seems to fit

Just keep talking

It's all plans

I'm plenty glad to listen

But I have no idea what or who you are

I'd say "I do" attitude and you just

Keep to yourself and you

Keep with all these adjustments

I've never had plans when you weren't around

We've had it all

To ourselves we keep

Don't have to try too hard

For words or photographs

Even though you've got the bite

Now I've got the itch

Just keep on dreaming

And it just seems to fit

You don't see what I see in you

You keep on looking how to find a way to love you

I don't want to break you

So soft so fragile

But you keep coming back for an answer

And I just have no idea what to tell you

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i tried to write a little something.. tell me on what you guys think please

If one day we could cross our borders

Watch our old memories

Fade to black

Start something real

And play our special song

I know it

We'd sound amazing

(amazing)

here's what I could come up with.

hope it helps.

= )

 

This is all I have, so go easy on me.

 

You stare away like you know what you need

Like I know what you need, but you keep, coming to me

You haven't been exposed to me, this way, that's okay

Please don't hang up, please don't fade away

I'd know your grin, I'd know your cry

I'd know everything I can remember, without any try

We've had it all, to ourselves we keep, (we)

Keep on dreaming for new words to photograph, (but)

Even though I've got the bite and, you've got the itch, (we)

Try so hard and it just seems to fit, (you)

Just keep talking, but it's all plans

I'm plenty glad to listen, but I have no idea what who you are, (with your)

"I'd say 'I do'" attitude, you just

Keep to yourself and you, keep with all these adjustments

I've never, had plans when you were'nt around

And I never know what words to say when you're, around, (you know)

We've had it all, to ourselves we keep, (we)

Don't have to try too hard, for words or photographs, (and)

Even though you've got the bite, now I've got the itch, (we)

Just keep on dreaming and it just seems to fit

You don't see what I see in you

You keep on looking how to find a way to love you

I don't want to break you, so soft and fragile

But you keep coming back for an answer

And I just have no idea what to tell you.

mann... you are amazing. i love this. you rock, thanks.

so once again i got myself into a bad situation.

i was talking to this guy last night. and he asked if i could write a song for him. and i told him i'd only write him a song if he wrote one for me and i was SO sure he was gonna say no.. but he said yes. and well i posted my first song in the writing thread and as you can see... i really need some help. he knows i'm really into music and he thinks i know how to write really good. i didn't want to tell him i can't write him a song anymore cause, well this guy gets depressed after every word you tell him and i didn't want to hurt him. i know this forum is filled with great people and amazing writers and you'd be the most amazing person in this universe if you could help me write this song. please. i really don't want to disappoint him because he knows that i won't.

here's the story for the song...

this guy and this girl talk to each other on the phone and online.. but have never met and live very far apart. the guy tells the girls he's in love with her. but the girl doesn't see it. she doesn't understand how he would fall in love with someone without even seeing her face. she only wants to be great friends with him, but she's scared to tell him cause she doesn't want him hurt... she doesn't know if what he says is what he really means. and she really wants to know... she wishes she would get to know the guy much better and more about him because she quite doesn't feel she knows him well enough. and maybe one day she might fall for him.

but in the song, the girl just wants to let him know that he's a great person and one day meet and just be the best of friends as long as forever is. just do everything together. she wants him to know that he doesn't know this, but he does hurt her when he says he loves her and she sees it even though he thinks she doesn't. and she can't do much about it, even though she wishes she could.

in this song, i don't want him to really see what i'm trying to say. kinda of a mystery song, you know? if that's possible..

i was thinking last night till 5:00 am about how i should write this but i got no where. but please if you guys could help you'd be really amazing. please please.

and thank you so much...

i think most marriages now days are bull shit. women marrying other men just cause they have a lot of money. have kids. and then they get divorced the next day.