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waitingxforxyou

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  1. here's my feedback:

     

    Not to be mean...but if you're going to post a CD review, you may want to check to make sure your information is right. For one, you have a picture of the WRONG Paramore band. The real one can be found on Paramore.org. The guitarist is not JOHN Bynum, it's JASON Bynum. They are not from FANKLIN, Tennessee, it's FRANKLIN. It's HAYLEY, not Hailey. And you're a copy editor? Shame, shame.

  2. wrote it for the yearbook:

     

    i know it'll be sad to see you go but i know you'll be on your way to better days. so wipe the tears from your face' date=' i cant stand to see you cry today. no this isnt a goodbye but more as a "see ya later". we wont split up, we'll be friends til the end. so wipe those tears from your face cause i wont ever leave your side. i'll love you til the day we die.[/quote']

     

    i like this a lot too, except for the 'friends til the end' part. then again, since you wrote it for the year book, i guess it worked. but if you did every did it for more than a yearbook, i'd take it out.

  3. well this was weird' date=' the other night I was thinking about someone I'm really close to, but like as I was thinking about them, I had my eyes closed, so I was like half dreaming... I was seeing things while I thought. And then all of the sudden I found a way to write it. It's pretty boring but it was just weird how I saw it and wrote it within like a minute hahaha

     

    Last night when I was dreaming

    I built a bridge in my mind

    it started in sections

    and they slowly combined

    One end was yours

    one end was mine

    and it broke right in front of you.[/quote']

     

    it would be a shame if you did not add more verses to this...fantastic.

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