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Posts posted by Jorgi
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okay, go
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to be perfectly honest, i would pay to watch someone try and run in a straightjacket ;D
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sure thing ! let's get matching trainers.
we can run with style.
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i'm still worried.
shall i start running now or later ?
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The prospect of me getting a guitar for my birthday makes me happy.
guitaring is where its at bladddzzzz.
although my fingers are currently shredded from too much...shredding...
...yarrr.
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Here i am, about to declare how happy i am in the happy thread, and what do i find ?
This conversation.
i'm very, very worried about you two
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gangrene of the tongue ?
blimey
sounds unhealthy.
"cat got your tongue ?"
"no, gangrene actually:("
what a sad story that would be.
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Aye, your tongue looks kinda more yellow than green with that one.
Neon blue ftw
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Oh wow. I really like that pic of you!
Oh jee, thanks
Yes, I have a green tongue.
But only when eating green slush puppies.
ahaaa fantastic, go green slush puppies go <33
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Kate Nash
It's not all acoustic but her acoustic stuff is good. I love her really gritty London accent (L)!
Sorry to hijack this thread but if you like kate nash:
http://www.myspace.com/vandersmusic
go go go !
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I'm more of the "eh, it's not the best, but it's good enough" school, though I'd like to move up eventually.
I'm exactly the same ;D
I'm trying for different approaches on things but i'm still not too hot at this whole writing business, so again critique is always welcome !
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i'll have to admit
that this plan all went a bit haywaire
and no amount of wit will stop you being a liar
so set me another light
but no amount of nicotine will get me through tonight
so another shotof vodka will do me just fine
you'll do me just fine
so mr. cliché makes another appearance
just as it's too late to make a difference
so where's the surprise this time ?
it's about time you stop chasing the limelight you crave
and save your arrogance for another day
before this goes too far.
and i thought it would be quite alright
to just sit outside and talk all night
with two cups of tea with sugar and some memories of us
but that was never quite enough
so another shot of vodka will do me just fine
(this time) you'll do me just fine
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Alex Evans
yummmmm.
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I'm really quite confused as to whether i'm happy or sad, perhaps there should be an inbetween thread ? haha.
Alot of new opportunities have been opened up to me in the next few months, and i'm so excited about them beyond beleif, but these months have a heavy importance to me where i feel i shouldn't really be happy about it at all (i won't go into details) and i just feel guilty that all this is happening at a time where i shouldn't really be thinking about myself, if that makes sense ?
It kinda sucks.
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argh. man.
I guess no hands because them robotic hands are amazing these days, whereas i don't think i could cope without skateboarding/football and suchlike.
would you rather live forever or die next year ?
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Today wasn't as good as it should have been.
Hmmmn.
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It's cute! I think it would work better as a paragraph, though. I don't see the line breaks adding anything to it, and writing free verse poetry sets you up to be ripped apart by a lot of critics. Unless there's some kind of structure there that I'm missing?
Ah, no i see what you mean but block paragraphs really put me off reading things, i wasn't sure if it'd be the same way for anyone else and attempted to break it off. I'll try get a recording of it done at some point, i think it sounds better in song then on paper (although still not excellent, but hey i'm experimenting!) . Cheers
Freedom
I wake up with the morning light creeping around the curtain
It happens almost every day but even that’s not certain
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I think about the plans I’ve made and promises I’ve broken
I think of all my lofty goals and the lies that I’ve spoken
I think about my instincts but I know I’d never heed them
‘Cause giving up on life is just me giving up my freedom
I really do enjoy the beginning of your songs ! I like how you managed to keep the rhythm all the way through the verses (although perhaps some seemed a little strained ?), it had a very nice flow.
Quoted those 8 lines because to me, they're excellent
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10 - it's paramore, where can you go wrong !
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Ocean, surf's up baby the shark's might be a bit of a dilemma though.
would you rather know everything or nothing ?
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I LOVE diet coke, its all I drink.
EXCELLENT we can be best friends ;D ahahaa
Nice to e-meet you D:
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"Blimey" and "crikey" in various accents.
what fun
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I'm not very good at writing lighthearted things, but i thought i'd go for the acoustic approach for once:
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He's the kind that sings her songs that are never quite in tune
and he gets the words wrong,
but she don't care 'cause they're holding hands on the beach
with the sand beneath their feet
and she's thinking what a beautiful day.
He picks her right up and swings her round in the air
to make her scream and feel scared but she doesn't care
'cause she's enjoying ever minute spent with him by her side,
she looks to the sky when he's turned away and thanks whoever's up there
'cause no she's okay and this life would suit her just fine for now and forever,
sitting in the sun eathing ice cream and jelly together
like nothing else matters in the whole wide world.
and she knows that she's lucky to be with him
and he thinks she's the most beautiful girl he's ever seen,
and they both think they can safely say they know what love means
so she says, if love feels like butterflies and sunshine and ice cream,
then i sure am in love with you.
any comments or critisism would be ace 'cause i'm not really sure what i'm doing (;
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I got woken up at 5.15 in the morning because my fire alarm decided it needed a new battery. The noise it made was the most piercing noise i have ever heard in my life, hello headache.
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yeah but....all poems dont gotta be song-like do they? haha i only write poems not songs. i SUCK at songs. and i know thoes suck. i didnt really mean to make them poem like. i just had to let my feelings out and i showed it to my friend thats a bit poem person and shes liek "hey thoes could be poems" so...yeah ha
did ANYONE read the other one i posted? or did that suck too lol
OH my bad ! Sorry, i just automatically assumed it was a song, i reckon mainly because it's structure. But okay, here's the plan: ignore me, okay
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Booyeah, got my hair re-bleached and also did my left sideburn lol.
so yeah, i love you hair (: aha
moi:
guh.
HAPPY Thread!!
in Everything Else
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crikey mate, with that amount of running you'll be e-fit in no time,
i should start a new internet training regime
where you don't actually do any exercise, you just think about.