I still havent been able to come up with a title for this one yet. i wrote it a month or two ago, im still not totally happy with it. i want to re-write the first verse and part of the second. but the rest is pretty ok (at least i think so )
*Opens on a short chord progression using strummed octaves*
Verse-
Sometimes, the words we think
are louder when we speak
sometimes there all but silent
sometimes there nothing more
When will you see?
where i want to be
is not
where im at
right now
Chorus-
Your world's rosier at the
bottom of your glass
I need help to get through this
cause, lord im sinkin fast
Bridges are burning
Ties are being cut
Im fearing
and screaming
in words
unspoken,
Verse-
I cant take the lies,
or the sacreligion
dont try to talk
i refuse to listen
Its a vicious cycle
thats how its seeming
this vicious cycle
wont leave you breathing,
(no-no-no)
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chorus
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Bridge-
You always said,
always said,
*always said* <-------whispered
I swear i'll try
I swear i'll get better
I swear i'll try
i swear i'll get better
Imagine what,
we could weather
you be the liar
you always were
and ill be the
thorn in your side
(no-no-no)
no-no-no
*Acoustic break*
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Chorus
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Alt. Chorus-
bottom of your glass
help me get through this
lord, im sinking fast
sink-ing fast
im burning
im cutting dry
cut-ting dry
everything i thought i wanted
thought i wan-ted
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chorus
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*plays about half of the original melody and ends abrubtly*
please be honest,my writing style has changed alot since i wrote this song, ill get some new stuff posted as soon as i finish some.