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Here's mine,I know it really sucks,i'm sorry!
TITLE: Answers left unsaid.
NOTE: Please do not steal it!
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TITLE:Words Left Unsaid
Verse one.
actions speak louder then words
Ignorance leave deep scars
Even when i build up a wall
it gets shattered in a second
Did my question mean anything to you?
My question unanswered is breaking the skin
CHORUS
Did you ever conside how it felt
to lie in your bed in silence at night
memories of you end on a sour note
Did you even consider how much it hurt?
VERSE TWO
iv’e been waiting so long for you to appear
footsteps getting closer
I’m starting to crumble like stepped on roses
my hope fades as your door closes
CHORUS
Did you ever conside how it felt
to lie in your bed in silence at night
memories of you end on a sour note
Did you even consider how much it hurt?
I need something to hold on to,can it be you?
you’ve got me on the edge of a knife
I can’t pretend this is real life
My hands are slipping off this cliffhanger
someone tells me this story isn’t over
the avoided subject is collecting dust
on the verge of breaking wake me up
please don’t don’t keep me hoping for tomorrow
I cannot live like this suffering in my bed
Waiting for the answer that was left unsaid