haha
I actually like the way you re-arranged it.
sounds good with the guitar I had for it.
but I might not use it ever, if you want it.
I just wrote it to write, but I wasn't really planning on recording it really.
but one request I do have, is that if you ever do record it or anything, just at least give me some of the writing credit, because where I am right now, I sort of need all the credits I can get that I've earned so far.
and if you need help with the music for it, I can help with that.