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The Song/Poem/Writing Thread - Part 2

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I started writing a song about the girl I like, I plan on finishing it and making a video on youtube of me playing it, the I plan on sending it to her, not telling her it's about her just to hope she get's a hint.

 

Anyway this is what I have so far:

 

 

Daytime Star

 

You're the sunshine shining in the sky so bright

I wish I may, I wish I might

Hope this star grants my wish, daylight

And I know you're right for me

She's everything I wan't

Everything I need

She shines in the light, possibly she's right for me

Pray for my light

 

The wind blows right through me

Possibly she's right for me

She is everything

Possibly she's right for me

She's my daytime star

And I know she's right for me

 

 

Well that's what I have so far. And actually, I just came up with those last two lines right now, lol.

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I wrote this the other night because I've been tied up with all of these mixed feelings.

Between Two Souls

My heart is beating from the cuts in my wrist

I can't stop thinking of all of the time that we shared

I'm stuck in this wake, contemplating

What I'm doing, is it right or is it wrong?

My thoughts shattering the less I think of this

My heart breaks for the truth

Am I over my head for that

As my head hurts I can't stop this feeling

Is the shame of two of a kind

Thinking that I am messing this all up

I cant help but think, "is it alright?"

Mission accomplished

Things may blow up in my face

Bleeding is all that I can do

With this hole in my chest, I remember

How this all started

My heart breaks for the truth

Am I over my head for that

As my head hurts I can't stop this feeling

Is the shame of two of a kind

Thinking that I am messing this all up

I cant help but think, "is it alright?"

So if I'm having a good day

Then I'll say nothing

As my head hurts, my heart breaks for the truth

It's that shame and I'm over my head

I know that I messed up

I'm sorry but I can't help but think it's alright

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My heart breaks for the truth

Am I over my head for that

 

I love this one!

 

I was wondering if such a thread existed,thankfully I found it! Here's one of my newest creations; ever since seeing the tracklisting for Paramore,that one title,"I'm Not Angry Anymore",had been haunting me endlessly. so the song is somehow sung from hayley's perspective,how she felt when the brothers left and so on. the song is written as an interlude,that's why it's so short. 

[also i have guitar chords for it,if you want them just PM me]

 

 

I'm Not Angry Anymore
 
heartbreak,disappointment and disapproval
embarassed,angry and vulnerable
no more whirls of emotions i don't want to feel
stepped it up,turned into someone real
 
your failure fuels my power
your hatred gives me strength
thank you for everything
did you find out that
 
no,i'm not angry anymore
i realized it's time to move on and let it all go
i have all the time in this world
to hate and to love and to change and be someone else
but that time ain't now,isn't it?
 
i'm not angry anymore... [x4]
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Ok, first, my poems. (yes, I said poems)

 

HOUSE IN THE SKY

 

Give me your hand

Together we'll fly

High above the clouds and sky

Into a place where water is gold

Where you never grow hungry and you never grow old

A place where stars shimmer

And ponies can fly

Come with me

To my house in the sky.

 

LIES

 

What would you do

If you found out

That all your dreams you think about

All your hopes and wishes

Even dreams come true

Was all but a lie told to you?

 

Have you ever met a person who's

There one day and gone the next?

Has someone ever told you

All your dreams will soon come true?

Have you thought they did and then

Realize it was all but a lie told to you?

 

What if everything you held dear

Wasn't even really there?

Everybody you knew and loved

Vanished into thin are

All but a lie told to you.

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I am bored so I am writing this:

 

              Sorrow

 

She watched as her life drifted away

She sat through every painful day

She tried to sing away her pain

She tried to cry away her pain

It never worked

It was love that she needed for her to feel happy again

 

She had no home

She had no food

She had no money

She had lost her one love in the terrible war

It was love that she needed for her to feel happy again

 

She tried to smile

She tried to hide her broken heart

It was no use

After all she was dead

 

 

 

I bet you didn't see that coming. So do you get it? This women died in the war and is now very sad. She is dead while her love is still living. Sad isn't it?

 

 

 

This one is more funny:

 

          I Will

 

I will not make fun of the other kids

I will not talk when I am not supposed to

I will not be rude

I will listen

I will do my work

I will do good in school

I am the teacher

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I await the day

I finally see

The meaning of love

And all that it brings

For if makes no sense

 

Why keep falling hard?

If you can't get up?

Why have your heart broken?

When you can simply forget

 

I feel I will never understand

Why loose youself and give them your hand?

I thought I wouldn't

Until it happened to me

And now I see

You can't escape the dream

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Bullied

 

You can choose to live.

You can choose to die.

She chose to die.

She was bullied.

She cried.

Now she is an angel in the sky.

 

All of those words that were said,

Left her crying in bed.

It wasn't her fault.

She didn't mean to.

She didn't know that two little mistakes

Would put her life at stake.

 

She was beautiful.

She was talented.

But at the same time,

She was going through so much pain.

 

Did she deserve it?

Was it worth it?

Of course not.

 

You can choose to live.

You can choose to die.

She chose to die.

She was bullied.

She cried.

Now she is an angel in the sky.

 

 

 

This poem is for Amanda Todd and all of those who go through bullying. This poem is for all of those who are dead due to bullying. Know that there is someone out there that cares for you and loves you very much.

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