That was amazing. Well written, simple, effective, and full of melodies to my liking. Only problem I have is with the way the instruments have been mixed together. They kinda get buried beneath each other. I'm no master when it comes to audio production, but some simple touches of equalization could bring everything forward in the mix without stepping on other instruments' toes, and HOAH, I get itchy just thinking how that gorgeous voice would sound like with some real bite added to it...
This is of course coming from me and my own taste in mixing music, but yeh.
Still, MOAR.