XMusicDudetteX Posted May 16, 2007 Report Share Posted May 16, 2007 Can I choke your amazing song writing abilities? I love it, man! I have already told you that. But oh well! I AM TELLING YOU AGAIN. I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted May 16, 2007 Report Share Posted May 16, 2007 Haha choke....no you may not But yes super glad you liked it Always makes it seem more worthwhile when someone does :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted May 25, 2007 Report Share Posted May 25, 2007 Haven't posted in awhile so... yeah... here's something new i just had to have a little motivation from Martin (: and now i'm all done. I just need a name for it. This game it goes both ways you're good at pretending you're the one who had to feel all the pain You look as innocent as possible so i'm the one to blame this time i'm not about to apologize and run away So take off that "innocent" face and step up to play the game with no excuses to say that i'm the bad guy again today Rewind to the past and see i wasn't the only one to make mistake's (even if i do it best) you lied to me saying you'd be there till the end but instead you looked down on me from upon your perch So take off that "innocent" face and step up to play the game with no excuses to say that i'm the bad guy again today Rewind to the past and see i wasn't the only one to make mistake's (even if i do it best) So take off that "innocent" face and step up to play the game with no excuses to say that i'm the bad guy again today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted May 25, 2007 Report Share Posted May 25, 2007 Haha yes i am the motivator, glad i could help :] You know what i think of it though, and i love the idea behind it Such a good one, i knew you could do it xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted May 25, 2007 Report Share Posted May 25, 2007 Why thank you! (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 ^ Ah yeah...oooh i like that poem the meaning behind it is pretty clear, i like it...good job :] Okay i know i posted a song in here last night, but yeah seeing as i've only just started... Here's another i started writing it before the other one, and i finished it last night I'm pretty proud of it, because i didn't think i could write one as well as the one i posted yesterday Not sure which one i like more but i still like it haha Anyway it's called Twilight, the meaning may not be crystal clear But as evident from the last song that's the way i like it....a puzzle :] Here it is.... Was my life that worthless? As I faded out in the blink of your eye Mine glazed over as yours lit up You spoke so fondly of me after i had gone But i knew the truth… Better in life or death? Better alive or dead? So if i’m a sinner… Why did i spread my demonic wings in your heaven Your view is hazy, hate-filled and tainted It’s Twilight Eclipsed by your bliss starved heart (starved heart) In life, i was nothing to you Merely a stain, like a flame That was easily extinguished Your hazy view is all you knew It’s Twilight In death, i was placed among the stars Lit up like a hero That dormant flame came ablaze In fury, you will not be saved So if i’m a sinner… Why did i spread my demonic wings in your heaven Your view is hazy, hate-filled and tainted It’s Twilight Eclipsed by your bliss starved heart (starved heart) This veil of darkness (Allows no light) Like your heart (Shows no love) It’s forced and fake But i see the Twilight In my departed state As long as you’re alive I’m better off dead AAAHHHHHH Amazing. Seriously (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 AAAHHHHHH Amazing. Seriously (: Why thankyooou Jadey :] I haven't posted a new one in here for a while... Can't decide which one i like them all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Why thankyooou Jadey :]I haven't posted a new one in here for a while... Can't decide which one i like them all Post one anyoneeee haha and no problem! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 *bows down* Hahahah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Post one anyoneeee haha and no problem! =] Ah but i can't decide...CHEYENNE YOU DECIDE *bows down* Hahahah. GET UP...it's not that good, but yes you decide :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 OH FOR THE LOVE OF GOD MARTIN JUST PICK ONE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Ah but i can't decide...CHEYENNE YOU DECIDE GET UP...it's not that good, but yes you decide :] First off: WHY DO I HAVE TO BE THE DECISION MAKER?!?!?! I would love to, haha. Secondly: IT IS SUUUUPER AWESOME! I love it. SO *bows down Star Wars style* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Okay i will post two because i can't decide The first one was inspired by Demolition Lovers by My Chemical Romance So yeah but it's all my own work...just inspired haha, and it's probably the darkest one i've written, not totally hard to figure out or anything but yeah... And the second one's more personal but yeah haha ENJOY :] Collision Course Caught up in vines A tangled mess of intricate lies Trapped together eternally As red drains from the sky (A torrent of blood) Clashes against our pale skin This is how it shall end Hold my hand dear, and have no fear For we shall collide tonight An ill-fated meeting A massacre in disguise Judgement day upon us, we’re destined to die Beneath the soil is where we reside Thanks to that pile-up on cloud nine (Cold and apart now we’ll survive) Joined at the heart Blood dried up, just like the love The day we clashed Ironically was the only time we detached All it took was that double edged blade To carve us apart, how did we end up in this state? An ill-fated meeting A massacre in disguise Judgement day upon us, we’re destined to die Beneath the soil is where we reside Thanks to that pile-up on cloud nine (Cold and apart now we’ll survive) Defence and attack (Collision course) Life and death (Collision course) Love and hate (Collision course) Man and wife (Collision Course) Why must opposites attract? Have no fear Have no fear An ill-fated meeting A massacre in disguise Judgement day upon us, we’re destined to die Beneath the soil is where we reside Thanks to that pile-up on cloud nine (Cold and apart now we’ll survive) Have no fear Have no fear Stuck at stalemate, the fallout ends We both rest in the ground Separated by dust But that’s enough… Now we don’t touch Escape Alone You call it running away from life I call it breaking away from pain Going to that place i want to go Writing the things you want to know Must i paint you a picture… As proof of what i’m up to now Escape Alone Escape Alone Beneath the sun or amongst the snow I’ll never let you know about that special place i go Clouds fly by, birds soar high This is my silver lining (In a world of broken bones) It’s all i know Away from my home… I’m not deprived, just here i feel alive Clear horizon… (A blank canvas, to begin) A thousand words cannot describe this point in time All alone, a universe yet only i survive But that’s fine, now nobody can see me cry Escape Alone Escape Alone Beneath the sun or amongst the snow I’ll never let you know about that special place i go Clouds fly by, birds soar high This is my silver lining (In a world of broken bones) It’s all i know Away from my home… No distractions, no reactions Just a planet and a resident This is the solution, it works so well Break free from that mould and take a hold It’s time to fly home Escape alone Escape alone Beneath the sun or amongst the snow I’ll never let you know about that special place i go Clouds fly by, birds soar high This is my silver lining (In a world of broken bones) It’s all i know But now i’m back home… There’s nowhere for me to go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Okay i will post two because i can't decide The first one was inspired by Demolition Lovers by My Chemical Romance So yeah but it's all my own work...just inspired haha, and it's probably the darkest one i've written, not totally hard to figure out or anything but yeah... And the second one's more personal but yeah haha ENJOY :] Collision Course Caught up in vines A tangled mess of intricate lies Trapped together eternally As red drains from the sky (A torrent of blood) Clashes against our pale skin This is how it shall end Hold my hand dear, and have no fear For we shall collide tonight An ill-fated meeting A massacre in disguise Judgement day upon us, we’re destined to die Beneath the soil is where we reside Thanks to that pile-up on cloud nine (Cold and apart now we’ll survive) Joined at the heart Blood dried up, just like the love The day we clashed Ironically was the only time we detached All it took was that double edged blade To carve us apart, how did we end up in this state? An ill-fated meeting A massacre in disguise Judgement day upon us, we’re destined to die Beneath the soil is where we reside Thanks to that pile-up on cloud nine (Cold and apart now we’ll survive) Defence and attack (Collision course) Life and death (Collision course) Love and hate (Collision course) Man and wife (Collision Course) Why must opposites attract? Have no fear Have no fear An ill-fated meeting A massacre in disguise Judgement day upon us, we’re destined to die Beneath the soil is where we reside Thanks to that pile-up on cloud nine (Cold and apart now we’ll survive) Have no fear Have no fear Stuck at stalemate, the fallout ends We both rest in the ground Separated by dust But that’s enough… Now we don’t touch Escape Alone You call it running away from life I call it breaking away from pain Going to that place i want to go Writing the things you want to know Must i paint you a picture… As proof of what i’m up to now Escape Alone Escape Alone Beneath the sun or amongst the snow I’ll never let you know about that special place i go Clouds fly by, birds soar high This is my silver lining (In a world of broken bones) It’s all i know Away from my home… I’m not deprived, just here i feel alive Clear horizon… (A blank canvas, to begin) A thousand words cannot describe this point in time All alone, a universe yet only i survive But that’s fine, now nobody can see me cry Escape Alone Escape Alone Beneath the sun or amongst the snow I’ll never let you know about that special place i go Clouds fly by, birds soar high This is my silver lining (In a world of broken bones) It’s all i know Away from my home… No distractions, no reactions Just a planet and a resident This is the solution, it works so well Break free from that mould and take a hold It’s time to fly home Escape alone Escape alone Beneath the sun or amongst the snow I’ll never let you know about that special place i go Clouds fly by, birds soar high This is my silver lining (In a world of broken bones) It’s all i know But now i’m back home… There’s nowhere for me to go AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Amazing and that is no lie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 OH BOY OH BOY. I remember those! I loooove 'em! So glad you finally posted 'em! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 ^ Yeah i wrote them like 2 weeks ago I need to get back to it soon, when i have time :] AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Amazing and that is no lie. Whyyy thankyou, i haven't written anything more in a while I've had no time but i shall try soon :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Hold my hand dear, and have no fear For we shall collide tonight I love that bit...not sure why haha but i do (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted June 5, 2007 Report Share Posted June 5, 2007 Hold my hand dear, and have no fearFor we shall collide tonight I love that bit...not sure why haha but i do (: Ah yeah when they popped into my head... I was like woah that works haha, sometimes things just click and i love it But thanks again :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Busted_ROX Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Are they meant to make me laugh martin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Are they meant to make me laugh martin? No but i have a feeling you will say they do make you laugh But hey Nath when have you ever been one to be nice to someone :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Busted_ROX Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Mate do you want me to lie? Honestly they make me laugh, I mean they probo wouldnt if I didnt know you, but I do and you know I hate all this emo shit. Hey I give props when its due. Pinch of salt blud, wanna play footie tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Mate do you want me to lie? Honestly they make me laugh, I mean they probo wouldnt if I didnt know you, but I do and you know I hate all this emo shit. Hey I give props when its due. Pinch of salt blud, wanna play footie tomorrow No i don't mind if people criticize them... It's just the way you put it Nath, not very direct, you should just say that from the start Ummm maybe i dunno if i want to haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Busted_ROX Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Pinch of salt Why the heck not! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Hey boys stop fighting! x] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Martin already won the fight. End of story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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