Natasha Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 I need to write something new. those two songs i posted are probably about a year old. xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Dead Lullaby Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 Slit wrist cut my throat you say this is nothing but a joke crying from this huge stain of pain crimson blood all over me This is what i get for believing in you slit my wrist cut my throat you say this is nothing but a joke This red dress dripping my blood with this rose you gave upon dripping blood so thick slit my wrist cut my throat you say this is nothing but a joke This razor sharp from pain there really is nothing to gain silt my wrist cut my throat you say this is nothing but a joke shatter me into a million pieces leaving scars all over me from all those shattered pieces slit my wrist cut my throat you say this is nothing but a joke dying inside I will try to hide slit my wrist cut my throat this really isn't just a joke This is an old poem It's weird too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 ^ it is a bit depressing... no offense or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Dead Lullaby Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 yeah i know if was when i was pissed off and just deppressed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 19, 2007 Report Share Posted June 19, 2007 ahh. i was a lil depressing but really emotional and you let your feelings out.. which is a good thing.. so yeahhh. it was good.. other than i can really relate to this.. which is not so good because im supoosed to be over that.. but all in all it was good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 19, 2007 Report Share Posted June 19, 2007 Jana, I LOVE the stuff you post in here! It's radical <3! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 ^^^thanks Jade!!!!!!^^^ you're just awesome all in all.. hehehe... im working on a new song.. it's called "Let's Go Back" and i'll post it here in a few.. i just have to go to band practice so maybe i'll get it here tonight or tomorrow at the latest!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 i'm looking forward to that =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 Me too HURRY UP JANA!!! Please :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 ok here it is.. but i warn you.. it really sucks.. (at least i think so) sorry i took so long with this.. i had dinner with my band mates and then we played video games all night and i totally forgot to post this until now.. sorry!!! ok here we go... "Let's Go Back" Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we fix what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… And I think I won’t leave, until I can see What’s really happening.. And I think you shouldn’t be, here until we can see If this is really accuring And I wish I could be, something I wasn’t Because you see me as completely nothing… Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… So you think I won’t leave you until I see What you’re really doing.. And I think you don’t know that I can’t see What you’re really contemplating And you wish you could be something you want Because I can see that you’re really lost Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… So what do you think we should do? I think we should do nothing at all… But what if lose? what if we lose it all? I think we wouldn’t.. I think we will not fall So, let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… at all.. see! it sucks.. ick.. hahahaha! ok.. bbfn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 ok... NOT the 1st poem ive written... ive DOZENS... but its the 1st i've posted here.... ok...thought id just tell yall what its about (even tho its probly obvious) but i usually write something on each poem... so the other night i was just thinking of Granny, and then i was thinking of my Dad (its his mother) and how it must be so hard for him, and how i never really realised it at the time. Cuz, like i was close to my granmother when i was young, for about the first 10 years of my life, and then we grew apart when Alzhimers took over, and before she died (the last like 5 years), i wasnt close to her at all... not because i didn't want too... but simply because it was impossible, because she didnt even know me, well right before she died, she wasn't even awake, and if she was, she couldnt walk / talk / move alot... ok, im rambeling... sorry.... so yeah then i just started crying thinking of how hard it must have been for dad to go throught the loss of his mother and then to have to break the news to everyone... and this poem is about the moment he told me (over the phone, i was at home, and he was in grannys) and then the poem progresses to explain about what it was like for me to see my father cry (he did when the song 'On Angel's Wings' (by Karen Taylor-Good) was playing.... but the ENTIRE chapel were.... its like the song was written about my granny... i can relate to EVERY lyric... no joke) anyway, wow! i rambeled... but yeah ^^ thats why! lol so heres the poem... love suggestions for a title... You were the one who was strong And who never showed any fear, But I could hear from the voice you put on Like me, you were shedding a tear. I could tell when you answered That there was something wrong, And I knew it before you whispered “Sorry… but she’s gone.” I heard the cracks in your words As you told the ‘when’s and ‘why’s to me, But, after that it all became a blur As the phone went as silent, silent as could be. To see you cry and to see you weep Wasn’t an easy thing to see you do, But I’m not the only one loosing sleep at night You’ve suffered a lost love too. It took me those tragic days and nights To make me see the bigger view, Although you’re the parent and I’m the child You can be weak too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 ok here it is.. but i warn you.. it really sucks.. (at least i think so) sorry i took so long with this.. i had dinner with my band mates and then we played video games all night and i totally forgot to post this until now.. sorry!!! ok here we go... "Let's Go Back" Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we fix what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… And I think I won’t leave, until I can see What’s really happening.. And I think you shouldn’t be, here until we can see If this is really accuring And I wish I could be, something I wasn’t Because you see me as completely nothing… Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… So you think I won’t leave you until I see What you’re really doing.. And I think you don’t know that I can’t see What you’re really contemplating And you wish you could be something you want Because I can see that you’re really lost Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… So what do you think we should do? I think we should do nothing at all… But what if lose? what if we lose it all? I think we wouldn’t.. I think we will not fall So, let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… at all.. see! it sucks.. ick.. hahahaha! ok.. bbfn you lie. it does not suck. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 ok here it is.. "Let's Go Back" Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we fix what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… And I think I won’t leave, until I can see What’s really happening.. And I think you shouldn’t be, here until we can see If this is really accuring And I wish I could be, something I wasn’t Because you see me as completely nothing… Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… So you think I won’t leave you until I see What you’re really doing.. And I think you don’t know that I can’t see What you’re really contemplating And you wish you could be something you want Because I can see that you’re really lost Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… So what do you think we should do? I think we should do nothing at all… But what if lose? what if we lose it all? I think we wouldn’t.. I think we will not fall So, let’s go back until we can’t see nothing but our past Let’s go back until we find what is left And I think I won’t leave until we find what we had broken Let’s go back until we can’t see nothing… at all.. wow!!! that = awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 ok... NOT the 1st poem ive written... ive DOZENS... but its the 1st i've posted here.... ok...thought id just tell yall what its about (even tho its probly obvious) but i usually write something on each poem... so the other night i was just thinking of Granny, and then i was thinking of my Dad (its his mother) and how it must be so hard for him, and how i never really realised it at the time. Cuz, like i was close to my granmother when i was young, for about the first 10 years of my life, and then we grew apart when Alzhimers took over, and before she died (the last like 5 years), i wasnt close to her at all... not because i didn't want too... but simply because it was impossible, because she didnt even know me, well right before she died, she wasn't even awake, and if she was, she couldnt walk / talk / move alot... ok, im rambeling... sorry.... so yeah then i just started crying thinking of how hard it must have been for dad to go throught the loss of his mother and then to have to break the news to everyone... and this poem is about the moment he told me (over the phone, i was at home, and he was in grannys) and then the poem progresses to explain about what it was like for me to see my father cry (he did when the song 'On Angel's Wings' (by Karen Taylor-Good) was playing.... but the ENTIRE chapel were.... its like the song was written about my granny... i can relate to EVERY lyric... no joke) anyway, wow! i rambeled... but yeah ^^ thats why! lol so heres the poem... love suggestions for a title... You were the one who was strong And who never showed any fear, But I could hear from the voice you put on Like me, you were shedding a tear. I could tell when you answered That there was something wrong, And I knew it before you whispered “Sorry… but she’s gone.” I heard the cracks in your words As you told the ‘when’s and ‘why’s to me, But, after that it all became a blur As the phone went as silent, silent as could be. To see you cry and to see you weep Wasn’t an easy thing to see you do, But I’m not the only one loosing sleep at night You’ve suffered a lost love too. It took me those tragic days and nights To make me see the bigger view, Although you’re the parent and I’m the child You can be weak too. that's so sweet. i don't even know what to say, haha. it's really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 Thank you Natasha and Aoife!!!!!!! you two rock awesome.. hehehe!!! i love your guys work too!!! you are amazing writters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 thanks guys!! any suggestions for a name?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 another poem... Haunted Angel Patched up wings To cover the tares, This angel’s voice sings Although alone and scared. Her halo has faded As has the magic in her wand, Spent her whole life waiting To sing a happier song. All her while healing But never being healed, But behind her weary eyes Her secrets are sealed. We’re thankful for her being We hear her in our prayers, But when she stops believing… Just who is going to be there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 another poem... Haunted Angel Patched up wings To cover the tares, This angel’s voice sings Although alone and scared. Her halo has faded As has the magic in her wand, Spent her whole life waiting To sing a happier song. All her while healing But never being healed, But behind her weary eyes Her secrets are sealed. We’re thankful for her being We hear her in our prayers, But when she stops believing… Just who is going to be there? wow, you're really good! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 Wow Jana & Aoife, you're amazing! :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 22, 2007 Report Share Posted June 22, 2007 another poem... Haunted Angel Patched up wings To cover the tares, This angel’s voice sings Although alone and scared. Her halo has faded As has the magic in her wand, Spent her whole life waiting To sing a happier song. All her while healing But never being healed, But behind her weary eyes Her secrets are sealed. We’re thankful for her being We hear her in our prayers, But when she stops believing… Just who is going to be there? i LOVE this poem!!! omg... it's freakin' awesome aoife!!! you're amazing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 22, 2007 Report Share Posted June 22, 2007 Wow Jana & Aoife, you're amazing! :] thanks JADE!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deanfunk Posted June 22, 2007 Report Share Posted June 22, 2007 wow..there are some pretty cool material here..lemme try.. the drumbeats get me rocking the guitar strings let out a cry the crows screams for more as i begin to rock their world. the song heats up the night the air is so hot the crowd could no longer tell if i was sweating, breathing, or bleeding. the intensity is so great. so great i explode. circa march 19, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 22, 2007 Report Share Posted June 22, 2007 ^ Radical! :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 22, 2007 Report Share Posted June 22, 2007 ^agreed. dean you're awesome.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deanfunk Posted June 23, 2007 Report Share Posted June 23, 2007 thank you guys..but you are awesome too..haha..i actually have posted this poem on my blog along with other poems of mine..i'll post em here as we get along..you guys post too!!i wanna read em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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