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when you write do you have to stop and think [ a lot] or does it just flowwwwwww like lalalalaaaa?

is it suppose to be thought-provoking?

 

it doesn't always just flow..

some songs take me like 10 to 15 minutes to write..

others take days and a few songs took me weeks..

but i hardly ever give up.. like if i'm having a hard time on one song

i'll put it to the side then come back and finnish it the next day or so..

 

the really GOOD writters just floww...

not me! hahahha!!!

so don't worry if it takes a long time.. it's

usually better if it takes a long time because you put more

effort into it you know?

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agreed. sometimes you have to take a rest and think about it. except sometimes it's almost better not to,although it depends on what feeling you're trying to get from it.

because i know that sometimes when something happens that really inspires me (usually something that pisses me off, like something that happened earlier today), i have to just keep it flowing to make it genuine and really hit for that moment. but then a lot of times, i like to make it a little more ambiguous, so it'll apply to a lot of different situations. and to do that, i tend to use metaphors and all that, so i REALLY have to take rests to think and make it sound good. most of my reason for that would be to try to trick people, haha in case someone finds it sitting in my room or whatever. i'm not the sharing type.

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Jana....

 

 

 

 

YOU ARE RADICAL <3

 

i know right??? i'm kidding..

but Jade's the one that's MORE radical!!!

lol..

 

you all are right.. resting while writing is a great tip if you want to produce a great quality piece of work.. it's ok if it doesn't flow at first.. but it will start to. and believe me when i say it does help when your emotions are messing with you.. for example, when your mad or sad you tend to write better stuff then usual... agreed?

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i've got a new song..

 

but i haven't got a title for it yet.. any ideas? i think i'll just go with

 

"Pause, Fast Forward, Rewind"

you left my lips burning, wanting more

you left my eyes crying, searching for

something i'll probably never find...

you left my feet tapping, dancing on the floor

you left my hands shaking, holding the door

of my hospital room that you put in..

 

so run away

like you did yesterday

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would...

i want to pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind...tonight

 

 

you left my life hurting, aching horribly

you left my heart dying, beating slowly

and that's why i'm here tonight..

you left my thoughts dry, and so empty

you left my mind without warning...

and that's why i'm here tonight..

 

so run away

like you did yesterday

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would...

i want to pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind...tonight

 

don't leave me hanging by a string...

can't you just please help me?

don't run away just yet,

because this ending isn't the best...

 

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i miss you, so don't let me go

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my life.. tonight.

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i've got a new song..

 

but i haven't got a title for it yet.. any ideas? i think i'll just go with

 

"Pause, Fast Forward, Rewind"

you left my lips burning, wanting more

you left my eyes crying, searching for

something i'll probably never find...

you left my feet tapping, dancing on the floor

you left my hands shaking, holding the door

of my hospital room that you put in..

 

so run away

like you did yesterday

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would...

i want to pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind...tonight

 

 

you left my life hurting, aching horribly

you left my heart dying, beating slowly

and that's why i'm here tonight..

you left my thoughts dry, and so empty

you left my mind without warning...

and that's why i'm here tonight..

 

so run away

like you did yesterday

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would...

i want to pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind...tonight

 

don't leave me hanging by a string...

can't you just please help me?

don't run away just yet,

because this ending isn't the best...

 

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i miss you, so don't let me go

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my life.. tonight.

 

wow jana.

you're awesome. o.0

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i've got a new song..

 

but i haven't got a title for it yet.. any ideas? i think i'll just go with

 

"Pause, Fast Forward, Rewind"

you left my lips burning, wanting more

you left my eyes crying, searching for

something i'll probably never find...

you left my feet tapping, dancing on the floor

you left my hands shaking, holding the door

of my hospital room that you put in..

 

so run away

like you did yesterday

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would...

i want to pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind...tonight

 

 

you left my life hurting, aching horribly

you left my heart dying, beating slowly

and that's why i'm here tonight..

you left my thoughts dry, and so empty

you left my mind without warning...

and that's why i'm here tonight..

 

so run away

like you did yesterday

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i know i couldn't, know i shouldn't, but i know i would...

i want to pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind...tonight

 

don't leave me hanging by a string...

can't you just please help me?

don't run away just yet,

because this ending isn't the best...

 

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my mind

i miss you, so don't let me go

i would pause, fast forward, rewind...

until you're right back in my life.. tonight.

 

OMG. That's so good.

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thank you so much natasha!!!

 

and you're the one that's even more awesome!!!

 

aha. psh. yeah right. xP

thank youuu. <3

i need to write something else.

i've just been so uninspired lately.. =/

 

 

...and i love you too Jana! yay!

I have to go put you in my sig now. hehe.

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aha. psh. yeah right. xP

thank youuu. <3

i need to write something else.

i've just been so uninspired lately.. =/

 

awww... don't worry natasha!!!

something will come to you very soon!!!

and your work is always AWESOME

so don't sweat it!!! here let me give you a boost of energy...

*helps to inspire natasha again*

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awww... don't worry natasha!!!

something will come to you very soon!!!

and your work is always AWESOME

so don't sweat it!!! here let me give you a boost of energy...

*helps to inspire natasha again*

 

hehe. thanks.

maybe now i can finally write something...

...when i'm not being distracted by four IM's. o.0

hahah.

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well, write something soon!!!

because your work is radical and i love them!!! hehe...

GO NATASHA!!! :D

 

*is that MY name in your beautiful siggy????*

*jaw drops in awe*

 

chyeah OF COURSE.

I have to have the wonderful inspiring Jana in my siggy. XD

 

[thank you for putting me in yours. ily <3]

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"Brighter than the stars we are.

Laying here, sitting.

Goose bumps crawl. Bear some skin.

Upon my cheek does yours rest. Oh boy does it feel good.

Let's wake up once again, just to make myself feel better.

Let's swear no one's taking a moment away.

Drugs spreading throughout our warm bodies

Let's make it work.

Let's make it work. The adrenaline's rushing.

Feeling like I'm getting a heart attack.

Save me! Save me!

Don't look back."

 

Ehh I don't know what you consider what I wrote. But after reading it, it look like something Shaant would write.

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"Brighter than the stars we are.

Laying here, sitting.

Goose bumps crawl. Bear some skin.

Upon my cheek does yours rest. Oh boy does it feel good.

Let's wake up once again, just to make myself feel better.

Let's swear no one's taking a moment away.

Drugs spreading throughout our warm bodies

Let's make it work.

Let's make it work. The adrenaline's rushing.

Feeling like I'm getting a heart attack.

Save me! Save me!

Don't look back."

 

Ehh I don't know what you consider what I wrote. But after reading it, it look like something Shaant would write.

 

wow, that's awesome!

you should add to it.

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^Its okay Natasha boo!

I loove you. =) hehe I think I should write you a song. LOL

 

"Natsha boo boo

You're soo coo

When we're bored,

I have no clue,

Other than that I go boohoo,

Since I miss my Natasha boo boo"

 

Wow I made that up just right now, less than a minute. =)

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