Locomotion Posted September 26, 2005 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2005 hey mel that is really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted September 27, 2005 Report Share Posted September 27, 2005 wow Mel ur a great writer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted September 27, 2005 Report Share Posted September 27, 2005 ^Awww thanks u guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted September 27, 2005 Report Share Posted September 27, 2005 Thats heaps good Mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted September 27, 2005 Report Share Posted September 27, 2005 ^Thanks Its so kool getting all these comments lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted September 29, 2005 Report Share Posted September 29, 2005 lol I wrote this..Like an hour ago..I was really mad at one of those popular slobs..so I wrote this about it :: It doesn’t make you prettier You’re judging and you’re screaming It doesn’t make you prettier You’re laughing about your feelings It doesn’t make you prettier And you’re bleeding you’re bleeding yourself to sleep You never knew pain could hurt you so deep But it did it did and now you’re empty inside Crying out your bleeding eyes, your bleeding eyes tonight Throwing stuff, you feel so alive Hurting people makes you feel so alive But hun it doesn’t make you prettier Walking around in your new prada jeans Goddd its good being you or so it seems And I aint mad at you for telling lies I aint mad at your for hurting tonight Ohh godd I aint mad at you for being like you are I always knew insanity could take you that far When you stab me with that big big smile Hun it still doesn’t make you prettier I know Im up Im far ahead Things are good inside my head I know you’re down and wont get up I know it wont ever stop Its yourself you have a problem with Hurting people won’t stop your shit Still you keep it up with that big fat smile upon your face Hun it doesn’t make you prettier Doesn’t make you prettier anyway. Its not the best thing ive ever written lmao..Ohh well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HayleyP Posted September 30, 2005 Report Share Posted September 30, 2005 lol I wrote this..Like an hour ago..I was really mad at one of those popular slobs..so I wrote this about it ::It doesn’t make you prettier You’re judging and you’re screaming It doesn’t make you prettier You’re laughing about your feelings It doesn’t make you prettier And you’re bleeding you’re bleeding yourself to sleep You never knew pain could hurt you so deep But it did it did and now you’re empty inside Crying out your bleeding eyes' date=' your bleeding eyes tonight Throwing stuff, you feel so alive Hurting people makes you feel so alive But hun it doesn’t make you prettier Walking around in your new prada jeans Goddd its good being you or so it seems And I aint mad at you for telling lies I aint mad at your for hurting tonight Ohh godd I aint mad at you for being like you are I always knew insanity could take you that far When you stab me with that big big smile Hun it still doesn’t make you prettier I know Im up Im far ahead Things are good inside my head I know you’re down and wont get up I know it wont ever stop Its yourself you have a problem with Hurting people won’t stop your shit Still you keep it up with that big fat smile upon your face Hun it doesn’t make you prettier Doesn’t make you prettier anyway.[/i'] Its not the best thing ive ever written lmao..Ohh well its good. did you recently watch mean girls? cause in that she goes "calling people fat won't make me skinnier" or something along those lines. and that reminds me of that. lol.. i totally watched mean girls yesterday. haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted September 30, 2005 Report Share Posted September 30, 2005 hey thats good Mel, good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted September 30, 2005 Report Share Posted September 30, 2005 Thats heaps good as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted September 30, 2005 Report Share Posted September 30, 2005 lol I wrote this..Like an hour ago..I was really mad at one of those popular slobs..so I wrote this about it ::It doesn’t make you prettier You’re judging and you’re screaming It doesn’t make you prettier You’re laughing about your feelings It doesn’t make you prettier And you’re bleeding you’re bleeding yourself to sleep You never knew pain could hurt you so deep But it did it did and now you’re empty inside Crying out your bleeding eyes' date=' your bleeding eyes tonight Throwing stuff, you feel so alive Hurting people makes you feel so alive But hun it doesn’t make you prettier Walking around in your new prada jeans Goddd its good being you or so it seems And I aint mad at you for telling lies I aint mad at your for hurting tonight Ohh godd I aint mad at you for being like you are I always knew insanity could take you that far When you stab me with that big big smile Hun it still doesn’t make you prettier I know Im up Im far ahead Things are good inside my head I know you’re down and wont get up I know it wont ever stop Its yourself you have a problem with Hurting people won’t stop your shit Still you keep it up with that big fat smile upon your face Hun it doesn’t make you prettier Doesn’t make you prettier anyway.[/i'] Its not the best thing ive ever written lmao..Ohh well its good. did you recently watch mean girls? cause in that she goes "calling people fat won't make me skinnier" or something along those lines. and that reminds me of that. lol.. i totally watched mean girls yesterday. haha lol nope..I had a fight with this popular bitch..and my friend told her..trying to hurt people doesnt make you prettier..so I thought about it for a while..then I got angry n wrote about it lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted October 1, 2005 Report Share Posted October 1, 2005 well this was weird, the other night I was thinking about someone I'm really close to, but like as I was thinking about them, I had my eyes closed, so I was like half dreaming... I was seeing things while I thought. And then all of the sudden I found a way to write it. It's pretty boring but it was just weird how I saw it and wrote it within like a minute hahaha Last night when I was dreaming I built a bridge in my mind it started in sections and they slowly combined One end was yours one end was mine and it broke right in front of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted October 1, 2005 Report Share Posted October 1, 2005 haha thats cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 1, 2005 Report Share Posted October 1, 2005 Luvin it Conspiracy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 2, 2005 Report Share Posted October 2, 2005 Wrote this just now:: We had a family Its warm inside and yet so cold Theres something missing here I stand here now and I fear The place im calling home Home is hollow to me Yet it feels so good It feels so empty to me It feels so flipping good I look back and I look forward I look up and I look down Still I dont have the answers To anything ive found And life is so confusing cause you are not around Sometimes I cry and youre not there to hold me Sometimes I fall and youre not there to catch me Home is so confusing cause you're not around I know you're here but I cant see you I know you're near but I dont feel you I hear you talk but you're too far away For me to answer to anything you say One half is here and the other is gone Not forever but for ever so long I can always walk right by To tell you I missed you and to see you smile I know I can I know I can But its different from what we had We had you and dad and bro and me We had we had a family Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted October 2, 2005 Report Share Posted October 2, 2005 cool Mel, i already posted this on ur blog, but i guess it doesnt hurt if i tell that twice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 3, 2005 Report Share Posted October 3, 2005 ^Thnx dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted October 3, 2005 Report Share Posted October 3, 2005 ha no prob, i really like reading ur stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocker_chick_lc Posted October 5, 2005 Report Share Posted October 5, 2005 ha no prob, i really like reading ur stuff I like reading your stuff too. So I guess... What ^ said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 5, 2005 Report Share Posted October 5, 2005 ^Aww thnk u!..Ill post sumthin new up soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmOJuNkiE1612 Posted October 5, 2005 Report Share Posted October 5, 2005 Ok guys heres my first stuff ive posted here Iwrote this song today, alot quicker than usualy it only took me 15 mins Anyway here it is lemme know what ya think These letters, your letters A fire waiting to happen Burning every last letter of your lied You’re not needed anymore This time you wont be back These lies, your lies A tragedy waiting to kick off You don’t care as long as you’re centre stage This theatres shut You’re not needed anymore This tragedy, your tragedy A heartbreak waiting to happen I’m taking mine back You’ve no use for it anymore No use for all you’ve twisted and torn You’re not needed anymore This ending, our ending You’re burning out A single blue flame licks the cold breeze I’ve slipped under, theres no way up from here Follow the violent current, you deserve it You’re not needed anymore.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 5, 2005 Report Share Posted October 5, 2005 ^Luvin it Jordieboiiii..But I already told ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 5, 2005 Report Share Posted October 5, 2005 I was looking through my ms.dynamite cdbooklet just now..And she wrote this introtxt ..So its not a song..just some random text..in the booklet..and I thought it was really good..so just so its clear..this is NOT my lyrics :: Those who are afraid to fall never fly, How will you ever know if you never try? Might just reach your goals and your every dreams, You can never be sure If not you can learn from the mistakes you make, At least you'll wonder no more! The saddest thing is a life never lived, A desired task never tried, Wishing stars never wished upon, Left floating in the sky.. Dreams left as dreams, Hopes and ambitions pushed to the back of one's mind, If you never speak you'll never be heard, If you dont seek you'll never find.. Never let them tell you that you cant, shouldnt or you couldnt Never give them the satisfaction of being the reason that you wouldnt Never let their jealousy or disbelief be the reason that you dont or wont try.. Dont let the only time you ever really fly be the day you die! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 7, 2005 Report Share Posted October 7, 2005 Ok..Heres some lyrics I wrote..I posted it on my blog..So Ill just copy the whole post..thing :: ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Friday, October 07, 2005 New lyrics.. =) Hey so this is something I wrote last night, ..Its about something thats been bothering me for a while now..And so I wrote it down..Its how I felt last night..In some sort of mood..So things might be a bit different from what they are when I think clear..Just dont take it all too seriously..Just..Read it, enjoy it, love it =) Sweet Dreams. Im sending letters to you, Theyre letters with some scars Not sure what to call you, When you're cut into my heart I see your eyes in my head I imagine theyre alive I cant look in too deep What if they die in front of me? Right here, right now, What if you hit the cold cold ground And never ever wake up again It might all go wrong just because it can What will I do if you're not here tomorrow Where will I go if I cant find a home, I cant live in doubt But I know I can live without Without this by my side I want to be alone for a lil while So I want you to step away now Step away today Take the other way around But please dont go my way I dont want to be around this sister, But I dont want you to hide Just make it stop ruining my life for me sister, And every single time you bleed love, Dont come knocking on my door Make thoughts run back and forth In my head it's clear now, In my head we're not dying anymore, We just fell apart..fell apart We fell apart tonight But Im still shining bright Sister, life's still shining bright on me, Dear big sister.. I love you..And Im telling you sweet dreams. posted by MeLoN @ 4:24 PM 0 comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted October 8, 2005 Report Share Posted October 8, 2005 ^ Your a really good writter Mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 8, 2005 Report Share Posted October 8, 2005 ^Aww thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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