FeRo Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 wow new stuff mel!! i have been too lazy to read all the new threads out there, but ur poems are awsmoe!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 ^Thanks dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nikitask804 Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 i havent stopped by the this thread in a while...Mel you are really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 ^Aww thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted January 25, 2006 Report Share Posted January 25, 2006 Im aware this is very cheesy and it sucks, but im posting it anyway Tell me Im making you an offer that you really cant resist I stand here before you taking everyones shit I offer you my love if you just give me yours I wanna switch I wanna trade I wanna be your open door I want to be your hello so you'll never say goodbye I want you in my heart and in my mind Pressure's after me so will you answer soon? Its getting closer and I guess I forgot what to do *Believe in me because I ask you to And take my anger from me Would you turn it into love If Id tell you that it can be? Will you trust me and let me read your heart Would you just tell me we wont fall apart They say its wrong they've got me hiding Theyve got me hiding love And youre the only one who'll ever see me crying Cause you're the only one who'll ever see me fall They say, they say but I know I know what I've got right here Something Im holding onto Cause it makes me see things clear * This makes me, makes me, makes me Run away from me But you pull me right back in your own lil way Knowing I should stay, I should stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted January 26, 2006 Report Share Posted January 26, 2006 Great Mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XParamoreFanX Posted January 29, 2006 Report Share Posted January 29, 2006 Awesome Mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted January 29, 2006 Report Share Posted January 29, 2006 ^Thank you! Im officially in love with your blend <3 btw! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Brighter Conspiracy_ Posted January 29, 2006 Report Share Posted January 29, 2006 awesome song Mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted January 29, 2006 Report Share Posted January 29, 2006 ^Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Brighter Conspiracy_ Posted January 29, 2006 Report Share Posted January 29, 2006 no prob =) k so i write songs too..so im gonna post one of them..i just wrote it btw..dunno if ur gonna like but yeah..hope so NOW YOU REGRET Words kept in mind So far so good Until you realized you wasted it all away No time to come back Now you regret For the things you didnt say Now you regret For the things you didnt do Now you regret A kiss kept in mind Ashamed to say Until you found yourself all alone Once again, take the blame Now you regret For the things you didnt say Now you regret For the things you didnt do Now you regret You wasted it You lost it And you regret But life's not a game (not a game) There's no time to regret (but you regret) And that's what you forget (and you regret) Clocks tickin (and you regret) Time's up (and you regret) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted January 31, 2006 Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 I liked the repetition. It was strong, but not overdone. However, this line "Until you realized you wasted it all away " was very long and would probably throw off any meolody you tried to put the song to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted January 31, 2006 Report Share Posted January 31, 2006 K..So I wrote this last night..but Im not sure I really like it. So i'll probably rewrite this..and post it again. I like the title more than the words to it. It means so much more than what I've written. So Im not happy with it lol. ( Version 2 coming soon ) You're blind because I made you Do you remember our walk, on the green when it was Christmas? And you said things would be alright. I believed you cause you made me forget about the mask and Everything that comes with the lie. Do you remember our talk up in my room? You found out but said it was ok. Said it was fine my lie wouldn't affect you. And you promised me things would stay the same. *I’m a liar and I know when people run. And I’m blaming you for taking all the fun. I’m blaming you for not seeing every single bit of my pain, But then again you're only blind because I made you that way! I remember knowing what was wrong, But telling you would only ruin the song. So I shut my mouth and hid my soul. Waiting for you to come and take me home.. Now I know that you never came. You didn't see the pouring rain. I was lonely, soaking wet, But you never saw the gun against my head. *I’m a liar and I know when people run. And I’m blaming you for taking all the fun. I’m blaming you for not seeing every single bit of my pain, But then again you're only blind because I made you that way! You're blind because I made you, Scared because I am. Yet you believe and so do I, Because I know I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thebrowncoat Posted February 3, 2006 Report Share Posted February 3, 2006 Damn guys - this is the first time I've read this thread. These songs are all really great. Mel, yours are just awesome. I love them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 3, 2006 Report Share Posted February 3, 2006 ^Thanks a lot dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thebrowncoat Posted February 3, 2006 Report Share Posted February 3, 2006 I've also added this to the first post that started this thread, but wanted to post it here as well to be sure that everyone sees it. Due to some issues we've had with people stealing work from this forum and claiming it as their own in other places, I want to be very clear that the work posted in this forum is owned and copyrighted by the person who originally posted it. Any reproduction or use of that work in any other forum or context without the consent of the original poster/owner of the work is strictly prohibited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 3, 2006 Report Share Posted February 3, 2006 He likes the smell of the fresh paint in cans When the woman he loves has other plans He likes rapid brush strokes and the color red When all of the fights they've had run through his head He likes textured paintings with themes you can touch When his wife's infidelity's finally too much She likes the sound of a minor chord When her boyfriend pushes her because he's bored She likes distortion on electric guitars When he doesn't back down and makes her go too far she likes poignant verses and vocals that roar When he body is ravaged and her heart is sore They like their pain to be on display When it makes people feel a bit of their dismay They like the deep power and force of it all When it can be passed on through something so small They like when the colors and all of the sounds Turn pain into art for which there are no bounds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 Just wrote this.... kinda cheesy its easy for you to sit here and say girls aren't worth the time of day you dont believe in fate and love isn't true well then, this must be fake because I have true love for you I run movies in my head over, over, over again What if you gave me a chance you don't see me if you did I'd prove to you you'd never hurt like that when I force these fantasies out of my mind you still haunt my dreams day and night its hard for me to sit here and play anticipating when you'll say just maybe you've.. started to feel You'd let me show you That love is real I run movies in my head over, over, over again What if you gave me a chance you don't see me if you did I'd prove to you you'd never hurt like that when I force these fantasies out of my mind you still haunt my dreams day and night over, over, over again. you. don't. see. me. over, over, over again. you. won't. see. me. over, over, over again you. can't. see. me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 Err, I decided to post my lyrics anyway. What happened sucked, but Im pretty sure the girl learned from her mistake, and she wont do it again! So heres something I wrote last night, when I shouldve been sleeping :: I know You blew your thoughts into my direction Hoping that I'd understand What you were trying to tell me And why you say you cant. I caught your thoughts on a Sunday morning They were telling me how you felt Never would I have thought Thats what your heart held. All along, all alone surrounded by your presence And all the things reminding you of you All you've ever known is failing Falling cause you could. You cried and blew your tears my way Hoping I would understand Why we're sitting here writing That we cant, that we cant I know we can, cause we can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 ^ Great Mel. Hopefully no one tries to claim it as their own Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 Thanks Ben, and yes..Hopefully no one does. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 He likes the smell of the fresh paint in cansWhen the woman he loves has other plans He likes rapid brush strokes and the color red When all of the fights they've had run through his head He likes textured paintings with themes you can touch When his wife's infidelity's finally too much She likes the sound of a minor chord When her boyfriend pushes her because he's bored She likes distortion on electric guitars When he doesn't back down and makes her go too far she likes poignant verses and vocals that roar When he body is ravaged and her heart is sore They like their pain to be on display When it makes people feel a bit of their dismay They like the deep power and force of it all When it can be passed on through something so small They like when the colors and all of the sounds Turn pain into art for which there are no bounds This.is.AWESOME. One of the best things I've ever read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 Just wrote this.... kinda cheesy its easy for you to sit here and say girls aren't worth the time of day you dont believe in fate and love isn't true well then' date=' this must be fake because I have true love for you I run movies in my head over, over, over again What if you gave me a chance you don't see me if you did I'd prove to you you'd never hurt like that when I force these fantasies out of my mind you still haunt my dreams day and night its hard for me to sit here and play anticipating when you'll say just maybe you've.. started to feel You'd let me show you That love is real I run movies in my head over, over, over again What if you gave me a chance you don't see me if you did I'd prove to you you'd never hurt like that when I force these fantasies out of my mind you still haunt my dreams day and night over, over, over again. you. don't. see. me. over, over, over again. you. won't. see. me. over, over, over again you. can't. see. me.[/quote'] I love the last verse. I love how you wrote "You dont see me, you wont see me, you cant see me" Thats awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 READ Just to kill all the gossip:: There was a person on paramore.org that took my lyrics and posted it as their own. Things are now fixed, the person apologized and took down the lyrics. The person also explained to me, why they did it. Now there's no need to post that here for everyone to read. Its something between me and the person. It is NOT Hayleyp, as some of you thought. I dont know who started that story, but its NOT true. So dont go and bother her with it. This is the story, nothing else is true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 great stuff mel. Ehh yeah, i would never ever imagine hayleyp posting ur lyrics somewhere else. she is awsome. Well at least u know that ur stuff is good enough to steal it.lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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