FeRo Posted October 8, 2005 Report Share Posted October 8, 2005 yeah, thats really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x3__kim Posted October 10, 2005 Report Share Posted October 10, 2005 very awsome..talented..wonderful to all whos shared Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 Wrote this last night :: Stuck just like me A soft warmth hides behind my eyes I cant let it slip A flowing tear behind this smile I know I cant let it slip My heart twists and turns everyday, seeing you trying to live You know you're dead Because you're filled with emptiness You know you know But you cant let it slip Just like me you cant you cant get on with this Your mask is so pretty Its so strong and pure Behind that painted picture There’s something that cant be cured Your blood is so cold now It makes your heart freeze Cant stop falling down..falling down Daddy you're stuck just like me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 great stuff Mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 Thanks Ben Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted October 13, 2005 Report Share Posted October 13, 2005 wow thats very cool Mel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted October 13, 2005 Report Share Posted October 13, 2005 ^Haha thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thinzar Posted October 24, 2005 Report Share Posted October 24, 2005 Aaah, you're all good writers. (Well, those who posted original stuff, at least.) I can't write lyrics. I get some decent tunes once in a while on guitar, but that's it. I've been trying to get myself to at least TRY writing, but I can't do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted November 1, 2005 Report Share Posted November 1, 2005 Wrote this..just now :: I see it in your eyes They say you're never good enough Theyre filled with lies Hiding behind a wall you feel so tough You saw it in my eyes They told you I was never good enough They were filled with lies Hiding behind a mask I felt so tough *I reached out my hand for you to hold Hoping we'd get through You reached out your hand for me to hold Wishing we'd get through And I dont know why everything had to fall apart Me and you we were so beautiful About to fix our world What we had was special But it was bound to crush So here I am its your birthday dear And Im all alone today Wanting to hold you tight I break down in tears We're already fading away *I reached out my hand for you to hold Hoping we'd get through You reached out your hand for me to hold Wishing we'd get through I know Ive been hanging on too long now I thought I could but I wasnt able to look Inside your heart inside your mind I though I knew what I would find But here I am I got a lock without a key And everythings telling me things will be ok Can someone please tell me what Im supposed to see Cause I think its time to walk away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Locomotion Posted November 1, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2005 thats freakin awsome mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted November 2, 2005 Report Share Posted November 2, 2005 ^Thanks dude =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted November 3, 2005 Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 I don't really write anymore. You know what's better, when somethings bothering you, and you just kind of sing a song freestyle... like making up the melody and words as you go. It would be cooler if I recorded it and kept the parts I liked, but it's a good way to get something off your mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted November 4, 2005 Report Share Posted November 4, 2005 wow Mel, good job!! i really liked this part: Wrote this..just now ::But here I am I got a lock without a key And everythings telling me things will be ok Can someone please tell me what Im supposed to see Cause I think its time to walk away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted November 4, 2005 Report Share Posted November 4, 2005 ^Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifeisrandom Posted November 7, 2005 Report Share Posted November 7, 2005 someday, i'll make us a time machine to take us back to the past. we can relive our life a whole new way. while the rest get wrinkly and old, we'll be so damn beautiful. ------ I love those eyes that never looked at me. I love that smile that never spoke to me. I love that heart that never loved me. ----- all the days i've spent wasting away in bed watching my childhood pass by me like lightening beep beep beep goes the machine next to me its the only thing helping hold onto any life left in me i cant move, i cant breathe, oh these wires are hurting me i feel so trapped in this ugly white room with no one to call to. why arent you here, beside my bed, to help take this pain away? Daddy why, why didnt you save your little girl? shes all that you had, she was your world, but you just watched her slip away who are you gunna cry to cause everything you had is gone, oh everyones gone. Daddy why, why did you just let life slip away? ------ ive written an actual song. but i dont know if i should post it. but theres a taste of some of the things i've written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted November 8, 2005 Report Share Posted November 8, 2005 ^ Thats heaps good I really like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted November 8, 2005 Report Share Posted November 8, 2005 someday' date=' i'll make us a time machine to take us back to the past. we can relive our life a whole new way. while the rest get wrinkly and old, we'll be so damn beautiful.[/b'] ------ I love those eyes that never looked at me. I love that smile that never spoke to me. I love that heart that never loved me. ----- all the days i've spent wasting away in bed watching my childhood pass by me like lightening beep beep beep goes the machine next to me its the only thing helping hold onto any life left in me i cant move, i cant breathe, oh these wires are hurting me i feel so trapped in this ugly white room with no one to call to. why arent you here, beside my bed, to help take this pain away? Daddy why, why didnt you save your little girl? shes all that you had, she was your world, but you just watched her slip away who are you gunna cry to cause everything you had is gone, oh everyones gone. Daddy why, why did you just let life slip away? ------ ive written an actual song. but i dont know if i should post it. but theres a taste of some of the things i've written. I love it!..Reminds me of my life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifeisrandom Posted November 9, 2005 Report Share Posted November 9, 2005 he won. she lost. hes happy. shes sad. he hates her even more. she still loves him. he doesnt remember her anymore. she cant get him outta her head. its like hes her life long disease ------- i'm sitting here in a daze dreaming of the day we'll fly out to LA. where some people make their dreams happen and all the rest fall behind trying so hard to catch up with the game. last place isnt so glamerous in this city. the lights, they will burn right through your skin. the fame sinks into your blood and takes over your mind. you'll loose alot that way and it'll be a shame to see what youve worked so hard for go right through your hand. dont let this non-sense go to your head so quickly or you'll just end up back at square one. ------------- oh how this akwardness kills me we were once so close but now i've lost that grip of your hand. i miss your touch that made me go wild i miss those eyes that made me melt inside & those lips that spoke such beautiful words when your arms would wrap around me so tight it was right, the safest place to be in the night but now your gone, youve left me here and that feeling of safety isnt near i've closed my doors and locked them shut so no one can get in and take my trust. -------------- Soft Spoken you cant hide oh no you cant hide now i've found out all your secrets i’ve found out your lies ive dusted off your old ugly shadows that lived to breathe when you wanted to die dust off your shadows baby cause ive found all of your lies (2x) with every word she says [she says..] the boy gets quieter with every move she makes [she makes...] the boy gets more confused when she gets up to leave [to leave..] the boy gets louder now shes gone [she’s gone..] and she didnt hear the 3 words he wished she'd hear. [she wouldn’t hear...] his words are loud but hold no meaning now cause hes the boy who cried wolf and no one will believe him no one will believe him all he wanted was for her to hear she walks home alone in the sad lonely winter air she couldnt bare. the silence tore her apart those eyes she would die for didnt say a word. now shes there, [she’s there...] at the edge of her life turning back time would never be enough cause those 3 words he didnt say made her end her life that day i may be soft spoken but my words will speak louder than your voice could yell [repeat once after me] i may be soft spoken but my words will speak louder than your voice could ever yell...[repeat again louder] i may be soft spoken (5x) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted November 9, 2005 Report Share Posted November 9, 2005 wow, really good ones!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Locomotion Posted November 9, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2005 ur stuff is awsome lifeisrandom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted November 9, 2005 Report Share Posted November 9, 2005 SOmething I wrote like today in Frenchclass lol The last great fall Today is the day Im right back at the start Stuck between lies and broken hearts You’re right beside me whispering words With every single breath you’re breaking down my world Right where Im supposed to be then you came along Inside my head screaming at the top of your lungs Walking the road Im supposed to follow But beside you it feels so hollow *One day ill build a wall that everyone can climb One day ill make myself make it all shine But until Im finally there ill hide behind my wall Standing in line for the last great fall You made it seem so big Made it seem so small You made me feel like nothing Nothing at all I thought you were the key to everything broken Thought you'd say those words that were left unspoken I thought you'd save me like an angel should You'd get me out of here like you said you would *One day ill build a wall that everyone can climb One day ill make myself make it all shine But until Im finally there ill hide behind my wall Standing in line for the last great fall So where was your heart when I felt empty Where were the stories you used to tell me Where was the solution when the question kept questioning Why weren’t you there when I couldnt stop running You’re falling down trying to drag me with you Remembering what you put me through You know you cant fix it Dont try to fix me today *Today is the day I fixed what I believe was wrong Im right back where my heart belongs I found you..you're behind my wall Standing in line for the last great fall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Locomotion Posted November 9, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2005 ^ i love that mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted November 10, 2005 Report Share Posted November 10, 2005 ^Thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted November 11, 2005 Report Share Posted November 11, 2005 All your stuff is great. I really like that one. Good stuff Mel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
myheartisyours Posted November 11, 2005 Report Share Posted November 11, 2005 This is seriously the greatest lyrics i've ever seen from ya Mel! I LOVE that Reminds me of someone.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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