MeLoN Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 ^lol. Ok: I just wrote this..about a very special person: Everything I've never wanted How come my heart's hurting when the scar is heart shaped? And my blood stopped flowing as if its been raped. How come the magic cuts like a sword in my soul? And erases every story my heart's ever told. How come my dreams always end up the same? Poisoning pretenders, the greatest cause of my pain. Your hands are inviting me to hold on While they slowly rip out my heart Crying out loud, you're stealing my love And you'll leave me here with nothing at all But before I even get a chance to fake My heart slips back into its place You made it warm and you made it work Blood starts flowing, my heart's been cured I smile and watch you smile back at me You stole my love and made it seem funny You somehow taught me to fall right down And get back up without a frown You taught me how to live this life From highs and lows to lows and highs So I guess, I now have the right to say You're everything I’ve never wanted but I truly love you anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 Thanks Mel! Yours are awesome, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 5, 2006 Report Share Posted February 5, 2006 ^Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted February 6, 2006 Report Share Posted February 6, 2006 great as always Mel... probably one of my favorites yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 8, 2006 Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 ^Thanks dude All I can Everything is different and There’s no place here called home Nowhere we can run to When we fail and we’re all alone But we’re not alone at all we Are just to scared to walk Away from what is safe and Wander off into the dark *So we laugh about it And we mess up again And I pretend like I don’t care Cause all I really can is pretend I’m 1000 miles from where I should be And I try not to put myself last place And people freak cause I’ve lost direction But I’m only driving in my head, anyway If I continue doing what I do now Well I’m not sure where I’ll end up I only live and breathe inside my mind And I have no clue how to make it stop * Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 8, 2006 Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 That one's good, Mel. I really liked it. One thing. Cause all I really can Is pretending Should that be "All I really can do is pretend"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 8, 2006 Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 ^Probably. Thats my fucked up spelling haha, I actually checked it..and I wrote "pretend" just typed it up wrong lmao. *changing it right now* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 8, 2006 Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 Transcription errors. Happen all the time. That;s why we need secretaries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 8, 2006 Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 Exactly So when are you posting up something neeeeeeeeeew? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 8, 2006 Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 As soon as i write it, I guess. I'm more of a fiction writer than a poet, so I spend more time working on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 8, 2006 Report Share Posted February 8, 2006 Oh right, thats cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 9, 2006 Report Share Posted February 9, 2006 He thinks his guitar is the best three-hundred dollars he’s ever spent. He likes the feel of the strap on his shoulder, and the way he looks so much cooler when he’s holding it. He likes how playing makes him feel like a different person, and how lately it’s been a person he likes being. He thinks the California sun shines so strongly just for him. He likes to sweat just walking out for the mail. He likes the light rays—visible, UV, Infrared, radio, micro, gamma. It doesn’t matter; he likes them all. He likes they way they stimulate his melanin-producing cells and make his skin darker. The way they heat his freshly thawed heart and keep it from congealing again. He thinks “Hey Jealousy” by the Gin Blossoms is the best song every written. Catchy, poppy, but so full of meaning. He likes that it’s realistic. “The past is gone,” the song admits. He likes that it’s optimistic. “The past is gone, but”—but, that hopeful word—“but, something might be found to take it’s place.” He thinks he’s found the replacement for his past. Well not just that, but that and so much more. He thinks the beautiful face he wakes up to ever morning is a perfect representation of the heart of the one it belongs to. He likes having someone to hold, someone to hold him. He thinks it took him so long to see it because, unaccustomed to happiness, he didn’t realize that happiness was what this person made him feel. He doesn’t think he could ever live again the way he used to. His guitar, the sun, “Hey Jealousy,”—they never did to him what they do now until the day they met. He thinks he only made it so far alone because somehow, on some level, he knew what was waiting for him. He doesn’t think he could ever live again the way he used to, and he knows he’ll never have to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted February 11, 2006 Report Share Posted February 11, 2006 COOL!! great stuff claudia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 11, 2006 Report Share Posted February 11, 2006 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 11, 2006 Report Share Posted February 11, 2006 Loving it Claudia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 12, 2006 Report Share Posted February 12, 2006 Thanks Mel! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 12, 2006 Report Share Posted February 12, 2006 From the end to the beginning Its awkward talking to you now We fell from heaven into hell Its awkward looking at you now Knowing its confusing you as well Silence rules our minds and emptiness Is taking over me tonight I wish I could cry to get it all out But this was a secret so I’ll have to hide *The walls are talking to me The ground is cutting in my feet From the end to the beginning The sky is covering my fall You wont notice this at all My wall I hear the words you told me My hears have got them on repeat I see the tales you showed me My eyes play them every time we meet You are stuck inside my mind I even tried kicking you out But its your goal to make me smile So you stay and stand your ground * You came over and said hello I smiled and said Hi to you too From the end to the beginning I’m going back to the day I met you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted February 12, 2006 Report Share Posted February 12, 2006 ^ Thats great. It makes me want to write Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 12, 2006 Report Share Posted February 12, 2006 ^Then start writing away dude lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 13, 2006 Report Share Posted February 13, 2006 Excerpt from a story I'm working on: When I look back on when I was a kid, I wonder how it was that I could ever be so stupid. How could I be so afraid but at the same time so hopeful? As my life dipped and looped and I thought I'd die if it went on another instant, how could I ever have thought that it would stop? No one's going to stop the ride for you, so you either have to hold on tight, or find a way to get off. My hands are burning from holding on for so long, so first chance I get, the very moment we zoom close to the ground, I'm jumping, even if I rip my skin and break my bones landing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeRo Posted February 13, 2006 Report Share Posted February 13, 2006 Mel, u just get better and better. Claudia, thats great, but the last bit is confusing...are u sure about it??or maybe my english isnt that good but thATs awsome as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Ninja Posted February 14, 2006 Report Share Posted February 14, 2006 Ahhhhh thanks. I let two typos get in there. I fixed them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 15, 2006 Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 Because of me Told you things arent crazy Im crazy You said we'd catch up later after therapy But I missed your call I missed your call Im back hiding behind my perfect wall Its late at night and im supposed to be sleeping but these nightmares, they keep me awake What if I keep on failing, falling? Is this gonna be another unfixable mistake? I said I wouldnt let fear hold me back But Im sitting here scared to death And oh I said Id never let you hold me down But Im sitting here letting you waste all of my power. "You seemed sad today I hope youre ok" Thanks for noticing love thanks for seeing my pain Now walk away love its not like youre any use You're the biggest cause of this thing called a bruise I hear you talking its lies and more lies You keep on talking like Im blind I see your games but you dont see Im trying just as hard to be like me Id love to push you away kick you around Hurt you for all the times ive been down But youre not the cause like id love to believe I ended up this way because of me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
benzzz Posted February 15, 2006 Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 ^ Great stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeLoN Posted February 15, 2006 Report Share Posted February 15, 2006 ^Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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