Linney Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 You're very good! I'll tell you a secret, I'm jealous and I hate you for being this good. Thank you sooo much Haha, I think it's the other way around 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 There is almost no one who writes in this thread I just wrote a song and I wanted to share. Inside Herself She's Bound Voices echoing inside Screaming, saying: you're behind Walls built up around Inside herself she's bound Forced herself to open her eyes So she wouldn't see the bleeding soul inside People saying: You don't deserve to live She is trying hard not to see the ending [Pre-Chorus] Six more steps and she will fall Six more minutes and finished is all [Chorus] Whispers in the wind Telling her to jump down Failure, misfit, loser Not a single hand reached out Not a single tear shed for her Save me, she thinks, but doesn't say out loud Hopes that a miracle will pass by Waiting for a day when the sun will shine Surrounding peoples seem to adore Living to bully, that's what they're for Watches life through a linse Can not find the amazing things Patterns created to knock her down Echoes of the shattering sound She lives a retouched life Where whoever wants leaves a scratch inside [Pre-Chorus] Six more steps and she will fall Six more minutes and finished is all [Chorus] Whispers in the wind Telling her to jump down Failure, misfit, loser Not a single hand reached out Not a single tear shed for her Save me, she thinks, but doesn't say out loud Hopes that a miracle will pass by Waiting for a day when the sun will shine Sitting down, watching the sun But it never shines on her Soon to be, letting go In belief of a better place Where there'll always be someone Who'd like to be her rescue Her life is shattered like broken glass And someone needs to fix it fast Surrounding peoples seem to adore Living to bully, that's what they're for (x3) [Chorus] Whispers in the wind Telling her to jump down Failure, misfit, loser Not a single hand reached out Not a single tear shed for her Save me, she thinks, but doesn't say out loud Hopes that a miracle will pass by Waiting for a day when the sun will shine I used to write a lot a long time ago, not on here cause it was before i knew of this forum but i've had writers block for nearly 3 years. i do have things i've written on this thread but they're not good because they're forced. p.s. i like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
closesttoheaven Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 okay so i seriously wrote this 2 minutes ago in 5 minutes. please give me your honest opinions. i know it probably sucks. but i'm improving, right? He whispers in her ear The things she doesn't want to hear He tries to make her understand The things she cannot stand He wants to be her hero Though she's feared to be a zero He tries to make her love But she doesn't want to be his dove Even though, she is above. i might add on to it and change it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 I used to write a lot a long time ago, not on here cause it was before i knew of this forum but i've had writers block for nearly 3 years. i do have things i've written on this thread but they're not good because they're forced. p.s. i like this. Okay. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 alone is the last place that i wanted to be and well baby i'm sure there are things more addicting than you can give me but i'll take them anyway, just incase we hide our hearts under sheets but our guns in our sleeves with faith left forgotten but plenty of disbelief well, never mind, we'll survive eventually i listened well but heard nothing that told us we could be anything i could be everything if you asked, did you ask ? just incase i misheard, just incase light hearts, dark minds dirty hands, clean conscience is this all ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 alone is the last placethat i wanted to be and well baby i'm sure there are things more addicting than you can give me but i'll take them anyway, just incase we hide our hearts under sheets but our guns in our sleeves with faith left forgotten but plenty of disbelief well, never mind, we'll survive eventually i listened well but heard nothing that told us we could be anything i could be everything if you asked, did you ask ? just incase i misheard, just incase light hearts, dark minds dirty hands, clean conscience is this all ? That is just, great. Me like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 This is the last one I wrote, and that was over a year ago, here it is: My Silent Lullaby By Ernie W I am sitting here all alone My darkness is reigning over me Thoughts of her seem to cross my mind My wrists are bleeding But it's for you Only you I am not blessed by God He hates me and it's your fault What did I do for this? I am dying here And what a joyous feeling Now I don't have to think of you anymore O what a lifeless lie I hate you Everything I said to you was a lie I don't love you I hate you But I have to think... I'm about to die and your the last thing on my life.... Spare me the pity I bless over you And I forgive you This is my end, and you let go I love you (No, I'm not emo) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Untitled So the lesson starts today Teach me how to turn heads Get the attention I deserve Like the way you caught my eye From across the packed court... Gorged myself on your deep blue eyes Could never forget that gaze Would never want to leave you behind... I spent all of the night Trying to figure you out But your soul escaped me I spent all last night Trying to keep you sussed But you're still an enigma to me... Walked into my life As though you already owned it But that wouldn't bother me I wouldn't mind being your slave An experience like no other... *pre-chorus and chorus* I'll never figure you out As long as I walk the earth And I'd prefer that state We all love a good puzzle And you're the best there is... *pre-chorus and chorus again* Spent all last night Trying to figure you out (Trying to figure you out) But you always get away (Always get away) So I'm content to let you go Let you be my enigma girl... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Untitled So the lesson starts today Teach me how to turn heads Get the attention I deserve Like the way you caught my eye From across the packed court... Gorged myself on your deep blue eyes Could never forget that gaze Would never want to leave you behind... I spent all of the night Trying to figure you out But your soul escaped me I spent all last night Trying to keep you sussed But you're still an enigma to me... Walked into my life As though you already owned it But that wouldn't bother me I wouldn't mind being your slave An experience like no other... *pre-chorus and chorus* I'll never figure you out As long as I walk the earth And I'd prefer that state We all love a good puzzle And you're the best there is... *pre-chorus and chorus again* Spent all last night Trying to figure you out (Trying to figure you out) But you always get away (Always get away) So I'm content to let you go Let you be my enigma girl... Me like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Well I can't wait until I make you curious You've made me wish so long To be your friend I know once we actually become The way they are, The happy ones Our happiness will end And I'll hate you again Nothing ever made me ashamed Until you taught me how to be You showed me what to like and what to hate I'm tired of thinking of how to play your game Now I seem to want you back again Yes this is your game I'm stupid so I fall for it every single time And now you'll toy with me and you'll throw me insults You'll abuse my thoughts And you'll wreck my mind It Seems Every Time I Feel Good You're There To Ruin It When I'm In The Sunlight I Feel Alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 This is a song I wrote called: i need an angel. V1: sometimes i feel lonely, sometimes i don't care, and people talk about me, like i'm not there! but there are words inside me, that i can't bare, i need a friend, who really cares. C: Sometimes i feel like screaming, the words I hold inside, like i'm loosing courage, i'm loosing my pride, i want a friend, who really cares, who can help me, when no one's there! i need an angel...... V2: Sometimes i want to say things i can not say, but nothing goes my way, i feel so sad, most of the time, I want someone i can count on, someone to keep me safe, from dusk to dawn! C: Sometimes i feel like screaming, the words I hold inside, like i'm loosing courage, i'm loosing my pride, i want a friend, who really cares, who can help me, when no one's there! i need an angel...... B: sometimes i hurt inside...... i feel like i'm telling a lie i need someone, who will be there but who will that person be? can they take the dare??!!! C: Sometimes i feel like screaming, the words I hold inside, like i'm loosing courage, i'm loosing my pride, i want a friend, who really cares, who can help me, when no one's there! i need an angel i need an angel..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bsngr95 Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 i wrote this song like this morning(1 AM) and its called "in your arms" Hold me in your arms please tell me everything’s alright make the tears go away sing me to sleep Tell me you love me, no matter what tell me you’ll always be there for me hold me when I fall, carry me when I cant walk I need you, oh so ever help me to get through this I love you, you are my help you take all the pain away Hold me in your arms hold me tight and close Kiss me; make it go away just hold me Be with me never leave promise me everything give me the world make me better Hold me in your arms please tell me everything’s alright make the tears go away sing me to sleep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 Wrote this a moment ago, don't laugh at the title please. Coke Machine You've got a shiny car Nice ride, but that's not all A pretty face to match your smile A good reason to waste my time Pre-chorus You walked up to me, said, hey are you free What a stupid pickup line, but It is my time Thinking you're the one, yeah I've seen you around Chorus You said hey, let's go home So we'll be on our own Thought you were so smart But it would all fall apart 'Cuz I am who I am And you are who you are You're that stupid guy, with your shiny car You flashed your white teeth 'Cuz that's how you greet Smiled with your gorgeous eyes Showed me your soul inside Pre-chorus You walked up to me, said, hey are you free What a stupid pickup line, but It is my time Thinking you're the one, yeah I've seen you around Chorus You said hey, let's go home So we'll be on our own Thought you were so smart But it would all fall apart 'Cuz I am who I am And you are who you are You're that stupid guy, with your shiny car Bridge Before it was too late I stopped and said hey You might be hot on the outside But you're as cold as that coke machine inside Go show your smile to someone else I don't need your help I can take care of myself Chorus You said hey, let's go home So we'll be on our own Thought you were so smart But it would all fall apart 'Cuz I am who I am And you are who you are You're that stupid guy, with your shiny car Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Love! I feel so foolish trying to love you How you like to dis respect me But I won't place the blame on you Because I know you love me too The beauty I saw in you has left But your lovely face still remains And that's all you need to find another love But I know that the winds of change Will blow your way one day and when that day comes We can be friends once again And we can try to avoid our inevitable end All the things I've planned All were thrown away When you told me that you loved me Yes I still remember that day All the love that I can see Has filled both you and me And heres to you my sweet love Just because you rise above All the ones in my heart yes I'll hate when we break apart For now I'll forget you're rude And people will think we're both new But all they know Is nothing that can't grow Edit: I was just fooling around with different words and I didn't really think too long on this one...It was almost like practice I guess, Which is why it's so WAAACKY!!!! Ta-da! All the things that cost me my pride Definitely wasn't worth it if there was you I knew that you, Could leave me too But I think you think I need something So don't pity me or provoke me to pat my back Because I can't be bothered to do something So boring so begone and I'll be here No where near, The fear that you made clear To my eyes that were closed But unfortunately it's me I love most I don't love my friends, I would if I had some You can ask me to count them all But I have none It seems I'm too shy Or maybe no one likes me So I'll act like I don't care I've been doing that for so long Theres so many things wrong with me I cannot bear Another second living my plain life So there comes second thoughts about grabbing the knife but I don't want to be like them I want to stand out So I'll show everyone I'm sad While I'm out and about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Love! I feel so foolish trying to love you How you like to dis respect me But I won't place the blame on you Because I know you love me too The beauty I saw in you has left But your lovely face still remains And that's all you need to find another love But I know that the winds of change Will blow your way one day and when that day comes We can be friends once again And we can try to avoid our inevitable end All the things I've planned All were thrown away When you told me that you loved me Yes I still remember that day All the love that I can see Has filled both you and me And heres to you my sweet love Just because you rise above All the ones in my heart yes I'll hate when we break apart For now I'll forget you're rude And people will think we're both new But all they know Is nothing that can't grow Edit: I was just fooling around with different words and I didn't really think too long on this one...It was almost like practice I guess, Which is why it's so WAAACKY!!!! Ta-da! All the things that cost me my pride Definitely wasn't worth it if there was you I knew that you, Could leave me too But I think you think I need something So don't pity me or provoke me to pat my back Because I can't be bothered to do something So boring so begone and I'll be here No where near, The fear that you made clear To my eyes that were closed But unfortunately it's me I love most I don't love my friends, I would if I had some You can ask me to count them all But I have none It seems I'm too shy Or maybe no one likes me So I'll act like I don't care I've been doing that for so long Theres so many things wrong with me I cannot bear Another second living my plain life So there comes second thoughts about grabbing the knife but I don't want to be like them I want to stand out So I'll show everyone I'm sad While I'm out and about I looove this part: All the love that I can see Has filled both you and me And heres to you my sweet love Just because you rise above All the ones in my heart yes I'll hate when we break apart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Morning! Well I can smell the morning air The memories of my home town Come back to haunt and excite me Theres blue light all around And now I miss my old home And how everything used to be Sometimes I wish I could go back in time To the place where I never hated me I'll hide So You can't tell me What I'm doing wrong Or How to live And then you'll see That you were wrong But thats ok Because tommorows another day What I used to see Isn't here with me And How I used to live Is how I wished It'd be But You cant win in life So easily So I'll be sad for another day And The Voices Of Yesterday Spoke To Me Oh How I Miss Yesterday Where I Used To Play Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Well I can smell the morning air The memories of my home town Come back to haunt and excite me Theres blue light all around And now I miss my old home And how everything used to be that's the spot, right there. smile question mark i could start to run away from you and your arms and your eyes and the way you apologised so sincerely and the house that we had built could crumble most sincerely, to the ground and i'd mourn that loss more than i'd mourn you but what if we never know ? those stories aren't for us to hear or understand and i won't go straight away, i'll sit and imagine how much i'll miss you before your grip gets too tight and i leave without so much as a goodbye or a tear but maybe i'll wave as i drown, just incase you see through it all, but i'll keep my head down and my feet on the ground and hope for the best, in everyone except myself and i'll just smile because maybe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 eeemmmoooooo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Yup ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 write something happy you shhllaaaaag! also, im not going to reading anymore, so...come to cambridge! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted August 13, 2008 Report Share Posted August 13, 2008 I decided to use a subject to practice on and uhh, Thats where this came from. Greedy Kid Are you thinking about yourself Little child, You're the son of power Everyone will bend over backwards just for you Just because your dads the man of the hour When will you learn A soul destined for hell Well you live really well And theres nothing wrong with you That you can't tell And if you think you're the best Look at the kids They're all willing to learn And they're willing to wait But it's you that can't wait your turn And now you have everything Every other kids wants You were born on some money And you're the envy of everybody So people will haunt you Just because they jealous And they'll never tell us Why they're so immature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 I wrote this song yesterday or something, and it's about love at first sight Perfect You painted this rose to the color of my dreams Made the sun shine bright You created light You formed the smile on my never touched lips Erased all my tears Got rid of my fears You picked the perfect gift for my birthday Made the earth a special place Forgot about your own race Chorus Created a fairytale, with shimmering joy You are truly the perfect boy You delt with the pressure and the cold Showed me your hand for me to hold All you did was to say hello And I felt safer then I've ever known You made them stop fighting over nothing Stood there to defend Making sure it was the end You grew a path of truth and love Made me believe life Made me sacrifice You knew what was needed, the others was thrown You gave me your shelter Made it all better Chorus Created a fairytale, with shimmering joy You are truly the perfect boy You delt with the pressure and the cold Showed me your hand for me to hold All you did was to say hello And I felt safer then I've ever known Bridge Long years of waiting, for that special moment Finally found it, perfect without a single dent During the sun shone, you were the center Created a sign to your heart, it said enter Chorus Created a fairytale, with shimmering joy You are truly the perfect boy You delt with the pressure and the cold Showed me your hand for me to hold All you did was to say hello And I felt safer then I've ever known 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 That is massive! ^ I like it and I also thought I had the recent post in this thread... Anyways Another One!! Happily Alone Again I spend my days, Thinking what to say To please your ears, I never like it this way I don't feel I need to be, Something that you like Just to accept me Well I'm In My Room, Happily Alone Again I Wonder If This Loneliness Will End It seems that I want the friends, Who are kind and mean The ones who lie to everyone, The one who aren't who they seem Those are the kinds, That are always fun, Those are the kids who don't Like just anyone I give myself my own sympathy It's the only compassion I give to me Well I'm Here, Happily Alone Again With No Other Soul, To Happily Call My Friend I Need An Angel, For God To Send I Need Someone To Help Make Things Ascend GAJAHHH TOO RHYMING!! But it's kind of true 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Thanks Chris (Can I call you that?) I really liked this part: I give myself my own sympathy It's the only compassion I give to me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 "I give myself my own sympathy It's the only compassion I give to me" I never thought id ever read something like this on here. its extremely deep, i wish this was in a song so i could listen to it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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