Linney Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 Your best yet, imho. Love it. -- alone? all these years and we're still on our own secrets and hiding never meant so much, you hide and i'll seek. i'll find you by that old rocking chair, as it has been for always, still there the creak of its bones speak louder than words; the speech of young love is better misheard yesterday ? i've heard it's been abandoned after today with the drama that rose up and flew off, without permission or regard. it found us and we fought half-heartedly you gave in and it stopped and laughed at me; "poor child" said the dream and crept away, "can't convince nobody these days" memories ? if i recall they've best forgotten and tired just like the people that own them, so let's bury them at sunset. but they'll jump when we least expect it; they'll pounce when we most regret it i'd rather be left in pieces in peace, but choices mean nothing to fools. I just have one word to say. AMAZING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted September 16, 2008 Report Share Posted September 16, 2008 Alive I learnt the hard way Not to take life for granted Saw it all crumble around me Left at the bottom of the darkest pit Evil intent crushed my dreams... Selfishness and greed Like a dagger to my spine Left me broken on the ground Felt as though it were futile Temptation beckoned to me... *chorus* But here I am alive And I will continue to live Now here I am alive And I will never give it up... Wine and roses are a myth This world is a cruel one So much misery and pain surrounds us Why should we carry on? But listen to my words... *chorus* Brought back from the edge Brought back from the brink Brought back to this life By the love of another By the kindess of a stranger By the joy of her smile And so I give my eternal thanks And pledge my love to her... *outro chorus* Here I am I am alive Thanks to your love I am alive Thanks to your kindness Thanks to your care... (repeat) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 17, 2008 Report Share Posted September 17, 2008 Like A Ghost Another bad memory Barges into today When I thought it was buried deep down Way deep down, I find it around Theres nothing else to interfere here I'm alone with my mind Good, But more bad memories Come back to follow me like a ghost It's only been 4 hours And I hear him cry I can hear all of the hurt ones Beating me up today Another side comes to the rescue Then I think I'm good Then my own mind distorts my thought And then my intentions are left misunderstood And now I'm left talking to myself And I realize I am bad I can't find a way to make me better And I can't have back the love I had Ch-ch-ch-Chia! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 don't make a sound for me no one will hear and no one will notice if we sit silently remove all questions quickly, because my hands and my cheeks are burning and it's going to be too late wait, th-th-th-this isn't alright but i'm on fire tonight. it was all simple words that made the worst impression 'do not disturb' get your things and leave her, i'll wait here for a while at least, hoping that this isn't too late wait, th-th-th-that ain't right but i'm on fire tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the1 Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 meh, I write lyrics for the band, so here we go!: At least you let me down under clear skies, You can't blame your tears on the rain until the clouds come rolling in again By then I'll be long gone I'm taking my time on this (taking it on) *I believe we have a score to settle But talk is cheap, so I'm buying my time Don't waste it on me* I'm contemplating on borrowed dreams, Stuck writing poetry, Watching my hands fall apart at the seams Now if I just hold it together for long enough, I can make ends meet before I meet the end So tear me up- there's enough to go round I'll take another bullet in the name of a crowd. You light up my world- I'm the rabbit in the road Drive on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 18, 2008 Report Share Posted September 18, 2008 don't make a sound for meno one will hear and no one will notice if we sit silently remove all questions quickly, because my hands and my cheeks are burning and it's going to be too late wait, th-th-th-this isn't alright but i'm on fire tonight. it was all simple words that made the worst impression 'do not disturb' get your things and leave her, i'll wait here for a while at least, hoping that this isn't too late wait, th-th-th-that ain't right but i'm on fire tonight. ahahah, This gets me excited! You're good! meh, I write lyrics for the band, so here we go!: At least you let me down under clear skies, You can't blame your tears on the rain until the clouds come rolling in again By then I'll be long gone I'm taking my time on this (taking it on) *I believe we have a score to settle But talk is cheap, so I'm buying my time Don't waste it on me* I'm contemplating on borrowed dreams, Stuck writing poetry, Watching my hands fall apart at the seams Now if I just hold it together for long enough, I can make ends meet before I meet the end So tear me up- there's enough to go round I'll take another bullet in the name of a crowd. You light up my world- I'm the rabbit in the road Drive on. I hope your singer does good with this, Because this is too good to ruin. Edit: A New Leaf The winds of change Have blown over a new leaf for myself And I hope it stays that way So I can say I have changed and I'm glad I'm still here today It was a rough ride It's very difficult not to end myself I'm happy I'm not condemned Or anything along the lines I can feel confident in myself Because I knew I rode it out I sat and watched the storm pass by I was scared, But I stayed out there Sitting with the storm As if it was my friend Until the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 19, 2008 Report Share Posted September 19, 2008 So tear me up- there's enough to go round I'll take another bullet in the name of a crowd. You light up my world- I'm the rabbit in the road Drive on.[/i] The winds of change Have blown over a new leaf for myself And I hope it stays that way So I can say I have changed Win win win, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Wrote this today.. Beach for Liars Dry those drops of love And hope it won't Be the latest news Hide those heartbeats That are so Similar to mine Forced to close my always open doors Please forgive me I can't take it anymore These lies are killing me Our words are always ready to tremble in But God forbid, why, did I let you say it wasn't time No way, I'm going to be stranded with you on this Beach for liars ---- A Tape Piece Loud screams in the attic Closed in a box With a tape piece on That says broken things Forgotten pain Left on it's own Formed into lies that Came from my lips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Niiice You guys excite me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrLittleDecoy Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 you didn't treat me right i don't know what i've done you have born our fight my feelings are all gone. why does it have to hurt? my heart is bleeding you've broken my whole world this is the worst feeling. failure and deception these are left for me you have no reaction please just set me free. how did we come to this? you were so well known this isn't a honest kiss now our love is all blown. this is now the end i waited for long i used to be your friend but i guess i was wrong. ...craap. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Nice poem! Edit: Fool Something seems to bother you Theres nothing I did to disturb you What has made you so low You used to be the one who'd know Anything there is to be above everyone else You stupid fool, You're such a tool You're the person who loses in the end You're the person who never knew How to be a friend Or what to do When someone you love Has been hurt again, You stupid fool Well maybe it's not your fault Maybe it was someones else's But I can never stop thinking for you Or judging everything you do I owe you words Full of pain and hate You'll never know it's you I despise But it's my own opposite reaction According to my lies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 deceived or deluded ? what a line to walk behind, to walk along would be too daring; in front would be far too alone. did we build this city ? with my hands that tremble and terrible judgement that isn't fair, we'll all crumble eventually (i swear). disapointment or delight ? another fight you'll lose, once more (with feeling) i never considered such a disaster your fists could give and take (my mistake). shall i tear us down ? it's bound to happen sooner or later and the suspense is killing us all; we'll sing as we fall (i'll sing for you) (we'll scream as well fall and pretend we're simply out of key, you'll sing for us all) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 deceived or deluded ? what a line to walk behind, to walk along would be too daring; in front would be far too alone. did we build this city ? with my hands that tremble and terrible judgement that isn't fair, we'll all crumble eventually (i swear). disapointment or delight ? another fight you'll lose, once more (with feeling) i never considered such a disaster your fists could give and take (my mistake). shall i tear us down ? it's bound to happen sooner or later and the suspense is killing us all; we'll sing as we fall (i'll sing for you) (we'll scream as we fall and pretend we're simply out of key, you'll sing for us all) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 did we build this city ?with my hands that tremble and terrible judgement that isn't fair, we'll all crumble eventually (i swear). <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Alright, So this one I don't feel safe at all posting. But maybe I'm supposed to get over it. The Opaque Thoughts Well the simple passage here Seems to be so real The opaque thoughts and memories Has never had no feel It was all a ghost Living inside my dream It's what I really hoped for But my answers aren't what they seem There seems to be Another catch Just to please you You don't hold my love Nor my hate I'm just looking at you What do you think What do you bring That makes me scared Is there another one Another sun Another friend That ever cared You deserve my careful thoughts All the safe and dangerous We're blinded by the sun It's begun It's time to give back What was done for us There seems to be Another path To get you what you deserve It's impossible Even for you Or for anyone unlike me Then I see, You don't deserve Your semi looking autograph Has stayed here for so long Your presence and your essence Has never felt so real It was all a ghost An epic hoax The architect had no feel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 <3 (: Your semi looking autograph Has stayed here for so long Your presence and your essence Has never felt so real It was all a ghost An epic hoax The architect had no feel I don't understand "your semi looking autograph", but that stanza is just. Like. I just love it. It's amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 It's...One of those things that no one else would understand, But yourself. Savvy? Edit: Geez, Words and other things are pouring out my minds cup! Friend I'll argue with you But I'll get tired someday This isn't a warning Or a threat It's just that we haven't Been through the worse yet I know the day will come And we won't have no more fun And we'll hate each other Even before our "relationship" Is done Lets not keep scores Or be in debt to the other Lets forget about our hateful words And I'll tell everyone I love her Lets see what happens Even though we know whats to come Maybe it will be fun again Until we see the end Lets have fun while we can My evil friend We're nothing special We're nothing fun We're nothing to other peoples eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Chris, that was just amazing 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 24, 2008 Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 I'm guessing you don't check your CP often Linney, But we still need to trade the chicken for the laundry! Meaning the switcharoo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 ^Haha Sry, I've been really busy with school.. But yeah, I know! I've been writing lots of stuff lately but nothing that good.. I'm trying =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 25, 2008 Report Share Posted September 25, 2008 anything will do Linney. As long as it's by you ! Edit: The Music Here comes the rush Of empowerment I can do anything I can break cement Is everyone going through this Other than me I hear a voice, I've heard it so long Why do the older people say it's so wrong They say music will do this to you I won't let them take my thought I won't give up all the things I've fought I won't throw away my rewards I won't refuse what life has brought I'm walking on my own big journey The priceless inspiration of music Will do this to you Here comes a great big tidal wave It's going to destroy My big city of doubts With every single demon to wash away All of the friendly sound Invading my thought With no one around To say they've taught All the things music Will do to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 Wow....Jorgi and Christopher, they're...beautiful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 ^(: pardon me, but the imprint you left and the footprint stepped is not quite as perfect as imagined. traitors fell for your voice; i'll fall for your eyes and you'll fall at my feet. i swallowed your pride when your throat was too dry, i took the blow and the black eye when you asked, who's weaker ? don't ask who knows. the buildings that fell from your gaze, the lives you changed and helped and failed, you're not enough. i screamed so you'd hear; passion is voiceless, your voice is passionless we're all hopeless till we leave and the world will fall at my feet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 You're greatness, Jorgi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted September 26, 2008 Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 The Off Position Listen to yourself Love the sound of Your own shrill voice The one that drives me insane Drives me to distraction... *chorus* Shame that we're only human Shame that we don't have a power switch Cause I'd leave you in the off position For the whole of time... The whole world knows Yett you keep talking anyways Wish I could shut you up I'm sure I'm not the only one Pop that head of yours... *chorus* Just accept the fact No-one wants to hear Your illusion of grandeur At the least not me You're not wanted around here So just walk out that door And don't dare look back... *chorus* Left you in the off position Did a favour for everyone You still don't see it our way No more of your incessant drone Freed forever from you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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