MeshiShay Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 I wrote a song. i kinda like it, idk. They will take her to unknown place They will make her forget the things she know about love They will hurt in her heart until she could not stop the pain And when she'll scream like a little girl with no way out They would cause her to be silent The best thing of getting lost is to find a new ways And you can just go No matter where Just go Ans those ways are right No the others ways, the ones ive got To be in place that no one knows Just to ly on the ground And say goodbye People keep their minds close Can not see other things They know 1 thing, and they think it's right And maybe one day They will find a new ways I cant see the lights I can see everyone They don’t do nothing Just make me feel bad I'm afraid to say those things Maybe I will lose everything I have But maybe I would get better life That’s what I think Maybe I wrong Maybe they're right And little poem: I broke my own heart while i was praying i went down on my kness while i was screaming my heart was our this time but no one saw it no one belive it no one understood it no one noticed that i had fake smile on my face Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 I wrote a song. i kinda like it, idk. They will take her to unknown place They will make her forget the things she know about love They will hurt in her heart until she could not stop the pain And when she'll scream like a little girl with no way out They would cause her to be silent The best thing of getting lost is to find a new ways And you can just go No matter where Just go Ans those ways are right No the others ways, the ones ive got To be in place that no one knows Just to ly on the ground And say goodbye People keep their minds close Can not see other things They know 1 thing, and they think it's right And maybe one day They will find a new ways I cant see the lights I can see everyone They don’t do nothing Just make me feel bad I'm afraid to say those things Maybe I will lose everything I have But maybe I would get better life That’s what I think Maybe I wrong Maybe they're right And little poem: I broke my own heart while i was praying i went down on my kness while i was screaming my heart was our this time but no one saw it no one belive it no one understood it no one noticed that i had fake smile on my face You know what you're writing about, And that's awesome. (Oh yes, Bolded part is my fave part ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hubabalou Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 ^ Wow, that's phenomenal! I wrote this during math. I titled it after an Ocean is Theory lyric: Don't Regret, Embrace The Day Give me another reason Tell me one last time I need to feel your energy Because I'm too fatigued to breathe And its all to quiet to be alone See me, with your calming vision And let me breathe as I continue to fall Fall into your arms And let me pray for you But its all too hard My eyes are to blind to see How much you mean to me I fall apart just as much as I piece myself together Just to know how I feel How I feel How I know to scream your name Scream your name Oh, I cant, I cant see no more See your face, with an opened door I love you and I cant choose Choose my way into your heart I need to feel forgiven I felt a little religious when I wrote this.... Thats really beautiful Ernie. And good job with the OIT lyrics as the title. I like it. hahah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeshiShay Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 You know what you're writing about, And that's awesome. (Oh yes, Bolded part is my fave part ) Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Thats really beautiful Ernie. And good job with the OIT lyrics as the title. I like it. hahah Thanks Faith! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Into the Leaders Plans It's said it's best to believe such counsel It's written somewhere that we'll rebel You fathered such innocence We fathered such angered ones Well I guess I'm going to hell The rest will come in time And the rest will be the tool Because we've lived his plan Well what the hell We were the leaders fool We've lived with pride so brain washed And we've endured with smiles so lost We let the sun's light look at us But we didn't look back We let the nights dark blanket us But we never ever went back Because we never left Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 We've lived with pride so brain washed And we've endured with smiles so lost We let the sun's light look at us But we didn't look back thumbs up, thumbs up. the way you looked at me mirrored the lights and the fights i fought for you i fought for you but i didn't ask for this the vodka and the pillowcase made me fall for you but i will never fall at your feet now what will you do for me ? everything ? i meant everything. the way you stood close and blocked out the light overshadowed and shocked me take it back and take me back the words you spoke meant nothing the jaws you broke meant nothing the heart i know has it all we had it all we had it all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 APATHETIC Look... Brown eyes bloodshot and glazed. She's been crying. Silver streaks still stain her face. Dried evidence of salene pain. Do you see it? Can you feel the salt burning behind her lids? Look... Soft lips half parted in a wordless plea. She's been shouting. Her anguished cries still echo in her soul. Even when her very voice goes silent. Do you hear it? Can you feel the skin inside her throat grow raw? Look... Bloodied hands extended out. She's been reaching. Trying to touch what she can't see. And searching for what she can't scream. Do you like it? Can you bear to see her crawling blindly in the dark? Will you help her up? Will you wipe her eyes and clean her wounds? Will you save her? Look... Brown eyes staring out unseeingly. She's been broken. Her soft lips cease to speak. Her hurt hands no longer reach. Did you want this? Could you have stopped it if you tried? If you had picked her up. If you had dried her eyes and healed her wounds. You could have saved her. Tell me what you think of course:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 ^ Wow, that's phenomenal! I wrote this during math. I titled it after an Ocean is Theory lyric: Don't Regret, Embrace The Day Give me another reason Tell me one last time I need to feel your energy Because I'm too fatigued to breathe And its all to quiet to be alone See me, with your calming vision And let me breathe as I continue to fall Fall into your arms And let me pray for you But its all too hard My eyes are to blind to see How much you mean to me I fall apart just as much as I piece myself together Just to know how I feel How I feel How I know to scream your name Scream your name Oh, I cant, I cant see no more See your face, with an opened door I love you and I cant choose Choose my way into your heart I need to feel forgiven I felt a little religious when I wrote this.... ERNIE!!!!!:hyper: This is the shiznit!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 thumbs up, thumbs up. the way you looked at me mirrored the lights and the fights i fought for you i fought for you but i didn't ask for this the vodka and the pillowcase made me fall for you but i will never fall at your feet now what will you do for me ? everything ? i meant everything. the way you stood close and blocked out the light overshadowed and shocked me take it back and take me back the words you spoke meant nothing the jaws you broke meant nothing the heart i know has it all we had it all we had it all. When I did that part I immediately thought "Georgie!" because I thought it was the way you do your thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 When I did that part I immediately thought "Georgie!" because I thought it was the way you do your thing. don't know how that's intended to be taken haha, but rad moonlight crossing shadows across your eyesight i'll see them pass, they fade away the clouds, drift rain dances in dismay i'll wash away i'll watch you fade you never left a trace of where you once had been of where you were of who you had seen with weather changing oh so easily it hardly seemed worth the effort i tried anyway, i tried always you threatened to blind me and i let you shine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Okay, so I was asked to write something.. so I wanted to know what you guys think of it? This is only the opening xD As he ran through the shadows he imagined the pleasure that he would feel. He gripped the handle ever tighter, and searched for the path that would lead him to salvation. His senses were overwhelmed by the smell of rotting around him, but he did not notice. He concentrated on finding his target, and making sure that she would not talk. It was essential that she did not talk, none of the others talked, but the others had been different. He hadn’t felt the same attachment to them as he did to this one. His heart was pounding, he rounded the corner, and then he saw it. A fist flew toward him. The pain was unbearable. He fought for his eyes to remain open, and they obeyed, just long enough to see a dark figure standing over him, pointing the barrel of a gun at his chest. Sarah rolled over, and as her clock came into focus she groaned. 6:16 Am. Far too early for a Sunday morning, but Jack had promised her a day to never forget. She glanced at the photo of them pinned to her ceiling. He’d bought it for her birthday. He wanted her to know they’d always be together, she found it slightly tacky, but every time she looked at it she got the same feeling the first time he set eyes on him, her heart raced and she felt slightly breathless. She felt so vulnerable around him, but at the same time so at home. His arms were where she always wanted to be. She fantasised for a while, but, eventually, hauled herself out of bed, and into her closet. It was what a young girl always dreamed of having, it was almost as big as her room, and packed with skirts, shoes and some slightly eccentrically coloured tights, but those weren’t for today. Today, she’d been told, she needed a dress. She wasn’t sure if it was because Jack found her eye-catching in a dress or if she was going somewhere that actually required one, but either way, she didn’t mind. After trying on what seemed like an endless amount of dresses she made her way out the door, she heard a voice shout out. “Yo Sarah! Where you going so early, and in a dress?!” She smiled, Jeremy lived in the flat below her, and was always enquiring about her life, but she didn’t mind, he had the ability to make even the most depressing of days lighter. “I’m off to see Jack!” A flicker of gloom crossed his face, she knew that Jeremy liked her, and it saddened her to see him upset, but they had an unspoken agreement not to mention it, thus he carried on regardless. “Not fallen through yet?” He teased, “You know who to ring when it does!” “Like you’d let me forget!” She turned back towards the gates as the gravel crunched beneath her feet, he was meant to meet her outside, at 7 exactly. She looked down at her watch, it was already 7:10, where is he? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 don't know how that's intended to be taken haha, but rad moonlight crossing shadows across your eyesight i'll see them pass, they fade away the clouds, drift rain dances in dismay i'll wash away i'll watch you fade you never left a trace of where you once had been of where you were of who you had seen with weather changing oh so easily it hardly seemed worth the effort i tried anyway, i tried always you threatened to blind me and i let you shine. See now this is the way I want to do things, Your stuff always has a past to it, And that makes it very easy to relate to it and such. And you always end it with something so cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 ^my day has been made. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 These are seriously bad. I never write lyrics, I've only written like one or two before so don't judge me too hard, hahah. Another day just passing by Is this life? Is it what it is? This is not what I want Nor what I need You said it wouldn’t change things You told me we would be the same I trusted you, but was it wrong or right? Wrong or right? I hide my face behind the lense Take the picture Say your name Do you still remember? Is this what have become of us? Basically strangers just passing by I need more than this More than feelings locked inside Can’t you see me? I hide my face behind the lense Take the picture Say your name Do you still remember? Never will I let his go One too many times I fought For my locked up feelings Just wanting to come out So you could see me I hide my face behind the lense Take the picture Say your name Do you still remember? I turn the lense the other way And show my face For you to see Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reptar Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 ^ that's truly amazing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Awh, thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Erin Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Omg seriously guro AMAZING work I wish I could write like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Thank you Erin <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Doublepost, sorry. Just wrote this. I can see the shadows of my past They’re reappearing in front of my eyes Will the sunrise wash them off? Are they here to change me back? Back to everything I am not Is this what’s meant to happen? I’m not asking for forgiveness I want these ghosts to go away And leave me behind as a better person Just let me live my life the way I want to I used to be so afraid to show the world Show them who I really were But now it’s over, I think the time has come For me to show them I’m something more And I won’t go back to being “just another girl” The sunrise didn’t wash them off But there must be something I can do I refuse to let them get to me I won’t ever let them change me back Back to something I am not I used to be so afraid to show the world Show them who I really were But now it’s over, I think the time has come For me to show them I’m something more And I won’t go back to being “just another girl” Finally the shadows disappears I get what I ask for and what I need I hope this is the last time I will feel my past It can now fade away, be nothing more than painful scars Dug into my heart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reptar Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Doublepost, sorry. Just wrote this. I can see the shadows of my past They’re reappearing in front of my eyes Will the sunrise wash them off? Are they here to change me back? Back to everything I am not Is this what’s meant to happen? I’m not asking for forgiveness I want these ghosts to go away And leave me behind as a better person Just let me live my life the way I want to I used to be so afraid to show the world Show them who I really were But now it’s over, I think the time has come For me to show them I’m something more And I won’t go back to being “just another girl” The sunrise didn’t wash them off But there must be something I can do I refuse to let them get to me I won’t ever let them change me back Back to something I am not I used to be so afraid to show the world Show them who I really were But now it’s over, I think the time has come For me to show them I’m something more And I won’t go back to being “just another girl” Finally the shadows disappears I get what I ask for and what I need I hope this is the last time I will feel my past It can now fade away, be nothing more than painful scars Dug into my heart <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myheartisurs Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Even though you weren't there for me, I still felt secure, But now you're gone, I feel lost and alone. Sometimes i just wish, wish that there was someone who could relate to me. And as selfish as that may be, its hard when there's no one who understands. Never have so many tears of mine been shed, It's like I'm drowning in a state of despair. The pain, the guilt, and the regrets. Too unbearable for anyone else to comprehend. I'm sorry that I abandoned you when you needed me, but I was afraid. Of finding you cold, and breaking completely. But now my heart is broken, broken beyond repair. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyTarget Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 That's beautiful Hayley. I'm so sorry. :hug: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 I aimed for this to be longer than it actually is. Oh well.... I dream in black and white My monochrome fantasy Night passes me so silently by then colour blinding me That day I see you. You dilute the confusing tornado Now I don't have to dream. There could be a million faces slowly changing over the years Aging creases, laughter lines, but just you would give me the same feeling. the butterflys will never die. Never die, will my monochrome dreams. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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