STOPthissong! Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 something short...... Concrete Hearts Concrete hearts will never break But never love in the first place. You might as well have a stone face to match. So I’ll claw my way through, the incessant words, that could scar a person for life. Let tomorrow worry about itself, I’ll manage somehow. But tomorrow never really comes, So what’s there to worry about? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reptar Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 ^ that is really good. i'm gunna put it in my sig okay ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 okay, thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwik-silva Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Becks, you have such a way with words Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Midnight run Running blind, with you behind. Down this empty street. Vacant memories of our destinies at my feet. Faster now. Don't know how you can come away with me, when everything I've ever been is chasing intently. So don't look back. It might attack as we race into the night. Away from the past that will always last in pieces of my mind. And far away from fear that won't disappear with the times. So hold my hand tight as we try to take flight from this place. With a thousand ghosts that I never chose in my wake. __________________ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topaz Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 These are all amazing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSkeleton Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 that's good,Marjanne Thanks ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 civilised ? i can't believe my eyes with lipstick marks along your arms that said everything, everything before you began the effort you're taking, to give back what you took (admirable but mistaken) the dirt under your fingernails is proof of where you lost me i'm dropping out i'm losing out your heart gave out when you clawed your veins out i'm walking out (you're standing tall) you were everything i had it all. civilised ? i said my goodbyes fuck you, fuck off, fuck this you lied. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 YES!!! That is awesome!:hyper: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Jorgi is fierce. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 rawrrrrrrrrrr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Okey, so I wrote my first song every today. So here we go. It's about me losing touch with my very best friend. And it's all been really hard. I wish we could go back there To the time where everything Was exactly right Can’t we turn back time? And be the ones we were supposed to You made my days so special Your laugh, it made me smile Your thoughts was almost mine Why did it change? Was it me, or was it you? I miss the good days I miss the bad days I miss everything we used to be You changed my life, you made it better Will things ever be the same? The feelings I’m left with Can’t be described Is it sadness, disappointment? Or is it simply regret, Because I let us slide apart? I miss the good days I miss the bad days I miss everything we used to be You changed my life, you made it better Will things ever be the same? I don’t know if you know How much I love you, how much you mean We always stuck together Through everything You were there for me And because Matt is so awesome, he made a melody to it. So here's the video of Matt playing and singing it. He made it in like 10-15 minutes, he's amazing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anavi Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Okey, so I wrote my first song every today. So here we go. It's about me losing touch with my very best friend. And it's all been really hard. I wish we could go back there To the time where everything Was exactly right Can’t we turn back time? And be the ones we were supposed to You made my days so special Your laugh, it made me smile Your thoughts was almost mine Why did it change? Was it me, or was it you? I miss the good days I miss the bad days I miss everything we used to be You changed my life, you made it better Will things ever be the same? The feelings I’m left with Can’t be described Is it sadness, disappointment? Or is it simply regret, Because I let us slide apart? I miss the good days I miss the bad days I miss everything we used to be You changed my life, you made it better Will things ever be the same? I don’t know if you know How much I love you, how much you mean We always stuck together Through everything You were there for me And because Matt is so awesome, he made a melody to it. So here's the video of Matt playing and singing it. He made it in like 10-15 minutes, he's amazing ooo Beautiful Guro and Mat you ROCK Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reptar Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 yeah guro like i said before its a really cool song. Matt Rocks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guro Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Thanks guys. And Matt does indeed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Kinda lame but this is a song i wrote. Not who I wanted to be. Hold me down ... Hold me up and I'm sinking now. Down to darkness. It's not real. Drenched in a blackness that I can feel. And this is not who I wanted to be. This is everything inside I wont let you see, because believe it or not this is me! So now hold back the sickness. Don't let it in. I want you to know that this wasn't a sin. It was just make believe . It was only a game. Now cover the hurt and whisper my name. And please know... That this is not who I wanted to be. This is everything inside that you'll never see, because believe it or not this is me. Hold me close! Hold me now! I'm sinking away and I don't know how. Just let me lie . Leave me alone. No don't walk away baby, I want to come home. Just let me come home. And just know. This is not who I wanted to be. This is everything inside I don't want to see because you can't believe this is me. ______ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anavi Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Kinda lame but this is a song i wrote. Not who I wanted to be. Hold me down ... Hold me up and I'm sinking now. Down to darkness. It's not real. Drenched in a blackness that I can feel. And this is not who I wanted to be. This is everything inside I wont let you see, because believe it or not this is me! So now hold back the sickness. Don't let it in. I want you to know that this wasn't a sin. It was just make believe . It was only a game. Now cover the hurt and whisper my name. And please know... That this is not who I wanted to be. This is everything inside that you'll never see, because believe it or not this is me. Hold me close! Hold me now! I'm sinking away and I don't know how. Just let me lie . Leave me alone. No don't walk away baby, I want to come home. Just let me come home. And just know. This is not who I wanted to be. This is everything inside I don't want to see because you can't believe this is me. ______ awwww totally awsome...it sounds like could be for linkin park ...don't ask me why Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elbereth Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Lol. I LOOOOOVE Linkin Park. Thanx Anavi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reptar Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 awwww totally awsome...it sounds like could be for linkin park ...don't ask me why x2 very good Anne Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 everyone's stuff is really awesome! And now I'm baaack =) haha, jk. But, I wrote this to my vedry best friend. Vicki on here. Ehm.. it's up on youtube, got explaination and lyrics on there soo.. if you'd like, maybe you could check it out? It's called: Forgive me please Dearilee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 everyone's stuff is really awesome! And now I'm baaack =) haha, jk. But, I wrote this to my vedry best friend. Vicki on here. Ehm.. it's up on youtube, got explaination and lyrics on there soo.. if you'd like, maybe you could check it out? It's called: Forgive me please Dearilee. omg I watched your Almost Lover cover the other day and thought it might be you and it was haha you have an amazing voice :] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeshiShay Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Well, those are my first songs i ever wrote, |: I wrote this 2 songs in Hebrew and then translated to English, So it does not sound so good. Song 1# I can not see the light I just see them They did not do anything Only harmful Cause it to be more difficult I do not want to see the light Maybe it just causes me to turn off? Will cause it to be more painful? Everybody just harmless, I run away one day, Why? , Why can not I just be happy? Well, I guess it was only because of I guess it was only because of Only because, Everything is not okay anymore, Since grew up, life became more difficult Since grew up, life became more difficult Song 2# They try to be who they are not, dont try to be someone else, This is wrong, dont try to be someone, because someone else, Be yourself, only yourself. she is most normal kid in school, Neither this nor that, Trying to be one of them, Is not successful, but she tries. She indicates the nerve of all, Everybody hates her, But no one says anything, Something to get her to stop, Everybody just live with it, Let it be. Not finished the songs yet, I just want to see what you think .. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 stoked on that, Linney ! i can't say i'm satisfied with the way this turned out when the queen of hearts promised us our place, our time she said it would be fine as the house fell down around her as those hearts smashed down beside her the books we read and the songs we sang, in the evening now carry a different meaning well if they mean a lot to you i'll believe them the trees stand their ground outside it's colder in here, in here where the floors hold secrets our home, our lives that we built crashed down around us the dreams fell down beside us and it'll be fine if we believe them the shadows on the ceiling dance once more, with feeling i knew them once, i knew them once and i never stopped believing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildman Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Random Shit I am a cat I live in a hat I like dogs That look like warthogs I live in box I wear no socks I rule Because I am cool! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whooa Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Me And My Band Write Most Ourselves, But This One Was Written For A Road Safety Competion In School. Our Catergory Was Drink Driving So Here It Is :- The wife rings, where the hell are you? I'm in the bar just having a few. I pick up my coat, I find my keys, I'll be on my way as soon as I leave. Chorus: Don't You drink and drive. You could get killed or knock someone down! Don't you drink and drive. No no no nooo. My eyes are hazy, My mind is crazy and the road signs are a blur. Theres people walking, My radios talking But I don't see any more. Chorus Almost made it to the top of my street, There's a boy on a bicycle. Tried to avoid but the night was very diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiim Chorus x2 Fade :] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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