xMake-A-Scenex Posted April 20, 2007 Report Share Posted April 20, 2007 ^^ Aww that's really good.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainyHeartsDark Posted April 20, 2007 Report Share Posted April 20, 2007 Aw thank you!! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainyHeartsDark Posted April 20, 2007 Report Share Posted April 20, 2007 Aw thank you!! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted April 25, 2007 Report Share Posted April 25, 2007 Wrote this a while back, its kinda like someones consience talking to them... Alright sit down Lets think this through She barely even knows you Would it be right to tell her? Who cares just get it over with Just do it right Don't screw up this time Don't worry about it You'll be just fine Oh how the human brain works Spinning worthless thoughts Making us become paranoid and obsessed Oh how the human heart beats in my chest Spinning worthless thoughts of you Making me do things i don't want to Alright pick up the phone Just tell her you're tired of being alone She'll understand Even though she never listens to you It will all be okay Things like this happen everyday That's it dial her cell It's okay to let it out It's okay to show how deep you fell Oh how the human brain works Spinning worthless thoughts Making us become paranoid and obsessed Oh how the human heart beats in my chest Spinning worthless thoughts of you Making me do things i don't want to Everything is going to be fine Just calm down So she got a little scared Maybe you shouldn't throw that word around There is something about it Something about the sound Did you really think you fell in love? You did didn't you? Well i guess i was wrong You shouldn't have done those things at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted April 26, 2007 Report Share Posted April 26, 2007 ^oOohh i likey. hehe it was good!^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted April 27, 2007 Report Share Posted April 27, 2007 this is just a piece of a story i had to write for english a few months ago. it's not that good. the assignment was to write a short fictional story about something important that happened in your life... but it's blahh. hehe. One Change we were sitting in the school hall, just us two. the place was deserted except for the janitor cleaning up in the far hallway. it was getting late and i knew i had to go home soon but i couldn't leave. i was in love with this guy, he was in love with me. how could i leave when my heart wants to stay? there was silence all around, all i could hear was the beating of my heart. then he spoke and broke the silence... "how did you get that?" he was referring to my arm "i- i uhh- i have to go." i mumbled and grabbed my stuff from off the ground. "so what?" he simply said "huh?" i said as i hurried myself to leave him there alone in the hall. "you're just gonna run away? like you do everytime, to everyone. you can't keep running. it's not gonna go away until you talk. that's the only way out. or it's gonna keep following you and bugging you." he said as i hurried off. Then i stopped and turned around, tears falling from my eyes and i started back to him. "i did it. but i've changed." i answered him. "that's what you want everyone to think. when you hurt yourself you hurt me too." he said and he left me there in that deserted hall, alone and crying. he was gone in a second, like everything else in my life. one year, one girl, one life, one story, one too many problems... all this meant something. but what meant the most was the one thing i needed and is just begining to happen.... one change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted April 28, 2007 Report Share Posted April 28, 2007 here goes nothin' Nostalgia Going back to the past to how it all began to how it all started how memories were created Pictures fade away memories remain in our hearts nostalgic moments bring warm fuzzy feelings Tears drop as the moment touches not only our hearts but as well as our souls reminiscing the good o'le days The moment stopped for that one moment nothing mattered except how i felt that day The images came rushing in my mind as i heard the sound of your voice the melancholic melody filled the room as i held you hand and said goodbye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted April 28, 2007 Report Share Posted April 28, 2007 i'll post some more as soon as i find my notebook of poems =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blu Posted May 2, 2007 Report Share Posted May 2, 2007 Aww I like that ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blu Posted May 2, 2007 Report Share Posted May 2, 2007 Tell me Why you don't dare to scream In the dead of night How do handle the pain of it all? Girl if it was me I would cry so hard You've got blood that is solid You make the best of it 'Cos it's a cruel, cruel life for you Your trips to nowhere God I'm just dam scared That she's not gonna make it No she's not gonna make it Start of a song I'm writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted May 4, 2007 Report Share Posted May 4, 2007 Aww I like that ^ thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted May 4, 2007 Report Share Posted May 4, 2007 here are the other poems i dunno if they're any good Why you told me you'll always be mine that no one could ever take my place that you'd rather be alone than without me but where are you now i guess you can't imagine what i'm going through right now what i'm going through without you here without your love you told me that no mater what happens you're there for me and whenever i cry you'll always be there but now i cry and you're not here how can you ease my pain how can you see the tears why did you stop loving me why did you leave e i gave you all my love how can that be insufficient wasn't it enough for you wasn't it enough to make you stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted May 4, 2007 Report Share Posted May 4, 2007 missing on the 13th day of november memories of you still haunt me at night the sound of your voice as it echoes endlessly in my mind trying to let go but i'm still not strong enough you forgot me long ago and i know you've moved on I can't believe hoe you made my heart whole and then broke it into pieces it hurts me to see you with someone else still can't believe that we're through all the lies you told me all along you've been playing with me can't believe i played your game feeling so stupid for believing you yet i wonder why i love you still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGstupid226 Posted May 4, 2007 Report Share Posted May 4, 2007 okay well I'm not a writer, but I wrote this 3 years ago. It's kinda dark but don't worry, it's not how I feel. The girl was always sad, she felt like crying. She thought she had no reason to live, she felt like dieing. She called all her friends, no one answered the phone. She was so afraid, she was all alone. She started to choke, she had no energy to spear. The rope clutched at her throat, she wished someone was there. When she was found, her body was hanging cold. There was a note near her hand, they thought she was trying to hold. When her family read the note, they started to cry. On the note she had wrote, "Your better when you die." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
breakablethread Posted May 8, 2007 Report Share Posted May 8, 2007 one last kiss too scared to pull away you know that at the end you'll be apart for days on end eyes tight shut lips collide over and over again in this long good bye. and with one fatal blow you blew apart my world and the walls come crumbling down. 'i think its time to say goodbye for good' you whispered helplessly. 'but you said this would last forever' im too heart broken to speak and these ears have walls and these walls have eyes and they know just how wrecklessly you shot me down. these walls are familiar we've been here before. when things were better thing were perfect. i think i recognise that alley or two. but this time we're walking away and our hands are nowhere near entwined in the other and the only thing im holding is my dignity for once. sometimes its strong to walk away. sometimes its right to give her time. maybe this good bye wont be the last. or maybe we'll just never say hello. i used to write a lot on my old my-diary. i honestly don't remember writing that. god im amazing its weird. i dont remember that, but i remember all the feelings attributed to it. strange! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted May 9, 2007 Report Share Posted May 9, 2007 wicked stuff guys =] Thanks to Jarrod for inspiring me like whoa, i wrote something new. falling short of growth: I can't wrap my head around to think my words aren't making sense to me my voice is slowly fading in the wind but do you care to listen? My whole world has changed everyone is fading away i can't open my mouth to have them stay Life happens that's what one would say to me i can't simply swallow a pill shatter and disapper cause i know i can't sleep the pain away so (let me know) it's not too late to change 2,000 miles i'm still at a crossroads with regrets flashing left and right my words are weaker as i apologize but my life wont fall into place if i close my eyes It's not the time to stop and take a break cause life happens and i'm up for the ride Life happens that's what one would say i can't simply swallow a pill shatter and disapper cause i know i can't sleep the pain away so (let me know) it's not too late to change me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcblinker Posted May 9, 2007 Report Share Posted May 9, 2007 Last Goodbye: Verse 1: For the last time let me kiss your lips the feeling of my hand on your hips we rush this into the night we act like everything is alright Chorus: Just one last time let me hold your hand Just one last time lets run away to a wonderous land Verse 2: Tonight's the night where it all falls apart We know our demise, We know its a mess Our time is running out lets make this quick and painless Before its too late and It hurts Chorus: Just one last time let me hold your hand Just one last time lets run away to a wonderous land The song can be heard here: http://www.myspace.com/jupitersfall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 Okay this is the first song i've ever written....so take that into account haha I only started writing on Friday, but i knocked this one out in 40 minutes last night It has a meaning behind it, i don't know if it's easy to figure out And every verse has an explanation, but yeah :] Here it is.... These concrete shoes They fit so perfectly Matching the weight on my shoulders I’m finally balanced and ready… Ready to plummet to the depths of oblivion You…you and your psychotic ways The deceit, the lies, the pain All dive deep into my back (Jagged rocks like daggers) Delve into my head, but i’m drowning Drowning because of you I never even marked my watery grave This final act ruined again (Thwarted) But you shall not be the one to push me With one last breath I hurl myself from this cliff of despair You…you and your psychotic ways The deceit, the lies, the pain All dive deep into my back (Jagged rocks like daggers) Delve into my head, but i’m drowning Drowning because of you My body in freefall You’ve already turned and said goodbye But it’s okay i said goodbye to the one… The one i loved a long time ago Is this what you call mutual? Is this a happy ending? You…you and your psychotic ways The deceit, the lies, the pain All dive deep into my back (Jagged rocks like daggers) Delve into my head, but i’m drowning Drowning because of you Bottle smashed Alcohol runs free Like the tide against a shore Just remember… I’m drowning because of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 Started writing Friday my foot. It looks to me like you have been writing for like, years, man! I have already told you that I like it, so you probably do not need to hear my love for it again, haha. GOOD WORK, MAN! KEEP IT UP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 Started writing Friday my foot. It looks to me like you have been writing for like, years, man! I have already told you that I like it, so you probably do not need to hear my love for it again, haha.GOOD WORK, MAN! KEEP IT UP! HEY IT WAS FRIDAY haha, i had only written a verse and chorus for another song before that Yeaaah you have and i appreciate it, seeing as you were the one that got me to start writing :] Annnnd i thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 HEY IT WAS FRIDAY haha, i had only written a verse and chorus for another song before thatYeaaah you have and i appreciate it, seeing as you were the one that got me to start writing :] Annnnd i thank you I believe you. But stiiiillllllll. And ooo, I did? Wow. And you are welcome! Noo problemo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperBrickDude Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 This is a really...creepy story that popped in my head recently. I was skeptic on writing it but, I felt I had to. Hope this doesn't scare anybody... Open Sores Jenny was a girl Of 15 Derek was a man Of 45 Jenny was alone one day Derek approached her She said stop He didn’t Jenny will never be the same Derek was arrested He went to jail Derek is alone Derek was a man Of 5’8” His cellmate was a man Of 6’4” One day his cellmate approached him Derek said stop He didn’t Derek will never be the same. ...yeah. The title's from a Nirvana song called...well, Rape Me. It pretty much has the same meaning as the poem I wrote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XMusicDudetteX Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 This is a really...creepy story that popped in my head recently. I was skeptic on writing it but, I felt I had to. Hope this doesn't scare anybody... Open Sores Jenny was a girl Of 15 Derek was a man Of 45 Jenny was alone one day Derek approached her She said stop He didn’t Jenny will never be the same Derek was arrested He went to jail Derek is alone Derek was a man Of 5’8” His cellmate was a man Of 6’4” One day his cellmate approached him Derek said stop He didn’t Derek will never be the same. ...yeah. The title's from a Nirvana song called...well, Rape Me. It pretty much has the same meaning as the poem I wrote. And the meaning: What goes around comes around Pretty well though up! Clever. Very clever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperBrickDude Posted May 15, 2007 Report Share Posted May 15, 2007 ^ Lol. Thanks. A story of karma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalas Posted May 16, 2007 Report Share Posted May 16, 2007 ^ Ah yeah...oooh i like that poem the meaning behind it is pretty clear, i like it...good job :] Okay i know i posted a song in here last night, but yeah seeing as i've only just started... Here's another i started writing it before the other one, and i finished it last night I'm pretty proud of it, because i didn't think i could write one as well as the one i posted yesterday Not sure which one i like more but i still like it haha Anyway it's called Twilight, the meaning may not be crystal clear But as evident from the last song that's the way i like it....a puzzle :] Here it is.... Was my life that worthless? As I faded out in the blink of your eye Mine glazed over as yours lit up You spoke so fondly of me after i had gone But i knew the truth… Better in life or death? Better alive or dead? So if i’m a sinner… Why did i spread my demonic wings in your heaven Your view is hazy, hate-filled and tainted It’s Twilight Eclipsed by your bliss starved heart (starved heart) In life, i was nothing to you Merely a stain, like a flame That was easily extinguished Your hazy view is all you knew It’s Twilight In death, i was placed among the stars Lit up like a hero That dormant flame came ablaze In fury, you will not be saved So if i’m a sinner… Why did i spread my demonic wings in your heaven Your view is hazy, hate-filled and tainted It’s Twilight Eclipsed by your bliss starved heart (starved heart) This veil of darkness (Allows no light) Like your heart (Shows no love) It’s forced and fake But i see the Twilight In my departed state As long as you’re alive I’m better off dead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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