conspiracy Posted October 12, 2006 Report Share Posted October 12, 2006 I loved that. Don't change it. Personally I think it is pretty lame to change your writing because of what people say unless you are co-writing with them or performing with them. In my opinion I think the best writing is flawed and honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted October 14, 2006 Report Share Posted October 14, 2006 What's your conflict this time? I can always find you standing in the same place. What caused the tears crawling from your eyes? I can always recognize you by your dripping, empty face. Who's gonna tempt you today? How much for self-infliction will you scrounge to pay? This time, will you make it home okay? This time, will you make it home safe? If I could, I'd watch you I'm scared to walk the other way But I won't let myself watch you Cause I can't watch you throw your life away I see you sitting at your little black Ikea table. I see your school ID cutting off chunks of your life in white rocks I see you grinding it under that bill with your white lighter I see you putting more thought into making lines than you think at school half the time. I see you take it in over and over through that cut straw straight to your mind until you feel alright before your heart is pacing on your pillow and you suffer alone in your thoughts through the night. I see you, missing me and messing ourselves up to Rage Against the Machine and a Beatles Greatest Hits cd. Watch me admire you as you try on all your fancy clothes admiring ourselves with our new jittery, confident eyes and our numb, running nose I helped you into this and I'm trying to help you out Falling together isn't what friends are about If I could, I'd watch you I'm scared to walk the other way But I won't let myself watch you Cause I can't watch you throw your life away Somehow you get by You made it look easy So I tried not to try But my mind kept asking why We had to dig ourselves into this hole again And we built a burden that we could call a home a sad excuse for shelter in a well predicted storm with our own words, and our lifeless breath we tear the foundation shaking the walls of numbing sensation they crumbled down in clouds of white dust and the powder only sifts between our trembling fingers as we try to comprehend what will become of us I stood as the snow fell and I gathered myself I'm scared to walk the other way But I couldn't live like this another day I can't watch you throw your life away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SingMeASong Posted October 21, 2006 Report Share Posted October 21, 2006 ^I really love your songs, you have very raw talent. =) I think I posted this awhile ago, but I don't remember. This ones is about my friend Hailey. She died in a drunk-driving incident when she was 14. It's kind of about myself feeling guilty for her death, I guess. And...yeah..hah Verse One Shattered glass she swallowed whole Blood shed upon this broken road I want to close my eyes and see you there Nobody deserves this You didn’t deserve this Chorus We’ll build the walls They’ll break them down Catch us by the throat Leaving us with empty hands They robbed us of our dreams left them scattered along the road Verse two In this bottle The note that you signed Seeping through the top is cherry red dye The blood is on my hands Bitter guilt and remorse burned your words to the ashes Chorus we’ll build the walls they’ll break them down catch us by the throat leaving us with empty hands They robbed of us of our dreams left them scattered along the road Murderer was blinded By the alcohol on his breath A sheet covering his sober eyes A bump in the road a careless act caused Hailey silence that night Yeah. It still needs editing, I wrote it back in may. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarlequinGerhl Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 Aight Well my mate wrote this about me I just posting it because I think its really clever and well, amazing =]] Emily - Oh Star She's my hero. she knows how to make my day brighter and whoa is she a good friend she tells me when to "let this go" when i think theirs a conspiracy, rolls her eyes and says here we go again. shes great under pressure, and in an emergency. tells me when to breathe and when to rewind and knows when i'm stuck on you. she can tell when i'm stuck my heart is stuck in this circle, hallelujah she loves franklin, and thats all we know oh and i hope our friendship isn't temporary :)ha that must sound odd if you dont like paramore! (dottyconrad wrote it lol) =] 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 lol that's very cool!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ive seen love die_ Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 AightWell my mate wrote this about me I just posting it because I think its really clever and well, amazing =]] Emily - Oh Star She's my hero. she knows how to make my day brighter and whoa is she a good friend she tells me when to "let this go" when i think theirs a conspiracy, rolls her eyes and says here we go again. shes great under pressure, and in an emergency. tells me when to breathe and when to rewind and knows when i'm stuck on you. she can tell when i'm stuck my heart is stuck in this circle, hallelujah she loves franklin, and thats all we know oh and i hope our friendship isn't temporary :)ha that must sound odd if you dont like paramore! (dottyconrad wrote it lol) =] Lmao I LOVE that. Clever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire At Will Posted October 25, 2006 Report Share Posted October 25, 2006 Mel! I know you're reading this,post somewhere we missed you!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire At Will Posted October 26, 2006 Report Share Posted October 26, 2006 yeah ignore that last post I saw Mel online and I got excited because Mel is cool and we miss her Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted October 26, 2006 Report Share Posted October 26, 2006 Here's something new. I don't really like it but whatever. =) Secret Love What has this become? Nothing but secret love? What has happened to us? Something that we've lost control of. Where did this begin why do we pretend that this should end? Let's stop saying there's no hope for us in the road ahead Let's cross the line and forget the things that we'll end up to regret This is the way we should go without a fight to hold Let's stop saying there's no hope for us in the road ahead Let's cross the line and forget the things that we'll end up to regret [END] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest haunted_dreams55 Posted November 4, 2006 Report Share Posted November 4, 2006 Ok here is a story I wrote. It doesn't have a title yet. I hope you guys like it. A man woke up from a deep sleep. He feels his head; it’s throbbing, like if someone kicked him. He hears a scream from inside the forest. He jumps up in fear. He calls out, “Who’s there?” No answer. Another scream, it sounds like a little girl. The man runs in the direction of the screaming. He yells out, “Where are you?” The man runs faster and faster. Tree branches scratch his face but it doesn’t seem to bother him. The screaming gets louder and louder as he runs towards it. “I’m coming”, the man screams. Almost out of breath, he is determined to find the little girl. He comes to a place where the trees are surrounding a patch of grass. A little girl stands in the middle of green grass. He walks up to her, she seems to be crying. Her face buried in her hands. “Are you ok”, he asked, “Are you alone?” “Why did you have to leave me”, the girls asked him. “What does she mean”, the man questioned himself. “Do you know who I am” he asked. “Of course I know you, you are my father,” she said looking up at him with tears in her eyes. The man could not believe it, she was his little Mandy. He went to hug her but she turned away. “Why did you leave me,” she asked again. “What do you mean, I’m right here,” he said trying to comfort her. “No! You left me and mommy,” she yelled. “If I’m gone then where did I go,” he asked. She told him, “Mommy said you’re with God.” Mandy walked toward the trees and then she was gone. “What did she mean I’m with God,” he asked himself. Then he remembered his throbbing head. He touched the back of his head, and then brought his hand to his eyes. There was blood on it. Everything was clear to him now. He was shot in the head by a man robbing a mini mart. He sat there crying in his blood filled hands. He remembered kissing his wife before he left the house that morning. He remembered Mandy’s smile, oh how it always brightened his day. He was laughing now, thinking about all the great memories he had with his family. He was glad he had the chance to say goodbye to his baby girl. He stood up and looked to the sky. “I’m ready to be with you now,” he said to God. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Genetick Posted November 4, 2006 Report Share Posted November 4, 2006 Purely out of boredom... 2. Excuse me, memory But i think you have something i lost I haven't had a chance To remmeber what it was i forgot I think that it's slipping away And i can't make it stay I think it's something about How i used to love you I think that they're talking about Who we used to be A time back when, you had all of me I think that they're talking about Some things i can't take back And if only you knew How i used to love you Excuse me, sympathy But i think you've forgotten to care I don't understand Why you just left me stood there I feel that i've fallen apart Thinking back to the start I think i remember a time When i used to love you Excuse me, my enemy But i think i forgot how to hate I once said i was sorry But said it far too late I don't think we can survive this And i can't help but notice The way you're looking at me I think you used to love me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 Something new. I wrote it just last night. I kinda had writers block, so at times i would get something really good and then just stop thinking lol. but yay me i finished it. So i hope you guys like it. Stay with me Don't pack your bags just sit and wait i promise we'll be ok don't leave so fast please don't regret don't think of us as a mess This will pass and we'll forget the words we never meant we can't just leave and act like we were nothing but the wind that didn't last We Wrecked all we had lets just make it right and don't look back hold my hand and lets walk past the night we never meant to have Close your eyes and stop thinking of the things we messed up at just let go of our mistakes and not let this conspiracy last This will pass and we'll forget the words we never meant we can't just leave and act like we were nothing but the wind that didn't last Don't pack your bags just sit and wait i promise we'll be ok Just close your eyes and hold my hand please don't let this conspiracy last Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 ^ I like it. idn maybe stay with me idn if you like it but thats one that came up when i read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 I like that!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 ^ cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 Woo!! haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 ^haha got any other stuff you wrote? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 umm yeah heres a few Secret Love What has this become? Nothing but secret love? What has happened to us? Something that we've lost control of. Where did this begin why do we pretend that this should end? Let's stop saying there's no hope for us in the road ahead Let's cross the line and forget the things that we'll end up to regret This is the way we should go without a fight to hold Let's stop saying there's no hope for us in the road ahead Let's cross the line and forget the things that we'll end up to regret [END] HopeFull Dreamer Pack your bags and meet me out back we'll be gone Fast than you can catch your breath It's just me and you on this road tonight with the regrets we need to face and the mistakes we've made Lets not dream of what could be cause we'll never face the reality dreaming away wont help us with what we need to say Theres nowhere to run and nowhere to hide it's just me and you with this open sky We can't be hopefull dreamers for the rest of our lives so just take me hand and hold on tight cause it's time for us to face the regrets we made and the mistakes we try to hide Lets not dream of what could be cause we'll never face the reality dreaming away wont help us with what we need to say Theres nowhere to run and nowhere to hide it's just me and you with this open sky We can't be hopefull dreamers for the rest of our lives so just take me hand and hold on tight [END] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 ^ i like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 Thank you! I don't really like "Secret Love" though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 your welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 I have a few more in this thread somewhere but i have no clue where lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 lol so many pages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 Yes i know. It's crazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted November 5, 2006 Report Share Posted November 5, 2006 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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