Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 haha he did x] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Busted_ROX Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Id like you to explain how? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 okay, i just finish writing a song!!! woot woo! it's mainly about how someone cheated on someone in a relationship. because i've been through that sadly... but it's ok cuz i vented through this song!!! please comment on it.. im not as good as the other song writers on these boards so yeahh.. it may suck... hahaha. oh well, here it is!!! "Town For the Liars" by: split second disaster [verse 1] you came here thinkin' that you'd make it past without getting caught but it was wrong to think that you messed up our lives just because u wanted more of the prize. you messed up you own life and now you pay the price [chorus] cuz you're the liar don't add fuel to the fire you'll just make it worse, you always make it hurt cuz you're the liar you put this town on fire it went up in flames so don't come back to blame... [verse 2] you thought you could get two, for the price of one but you thought wrong and now the game is done but we're left to clean up your mess while you leave cuz that's what you thought was best. [chorus] cuz you're the liar don't add fuel to the fire you'll just make it worse, you always make it hurt cuz you're the liar you put this town on fire it went up in flames so don't come back to blame... [verse 3] you played the game thinkin' it would be okay, to cheat and lie, you thought no one would cry and then it came to be the worst was happening you lost the game and now you're claim to fame... is... [pre-chorus] you're the liar that added fuel to the fire you made it worse, you made it hurt you're the liar that put this town on fire you made it go up in flames and now your back to blame... [chorus] cuz you're the liar don't add fuel to the fire you'll just make it worse, you always make it hurt cuz you're the liar you put this town on fire it went up in flames so don't come back to blame.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 That's really good Jana! I need to put something up here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 why thank you! i thought it sucked though... yeah, you should post something!!! i wanna see!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 i don't like it too much. heck, i don't like any of my stuff. but here's something i wrote. Goodbye [i think this needs a more creative title….] You’re always complaining about how I’m not there You must have mistaken me for someone who cares What about all the times you’ve let me down? I don’t know why I bother to keep you around It’s not like we ever stood a chance So when you’re walking out the door don’t give a second glance You can’t make this any better You can’t bring us back together And we can’t live this way forever… Chorus: So just give up, don’t even try It’s better to just leave this all behind Let’s make it a little less difficult this time Let’s just say goodbye This is where reality sets in Now we’re back where we began Don’t worry it’s almost over now Just pretend you’re not letting anyone down You can’t make this any better You can’t bring us back together And we can’t live this way forever… (Chorus) ‘Cause you can’t make this any better You can’t bring us back together And we can’t live this way forever… (Chorus Again.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 ^you're so wrong natasha! that song was AWESOME!!! and no, im not just saying that if that's what you're thinking... you're a great writter!!! more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 aw, thanks. x] The Brighter Side Of Things Tell me what happened to make things end up this way Why we have to do this now and what you’re trying to say Tell me what happened to the way things used to be And what I could do to make you see the brighter side of things Chorus: Maybe things won’t always turn out exactly how we wanted And all the memories we’ve had, happy or sad, some wished to be forgotten Though it may not seem true Things aren’t always as bad as they may seem to you. You say the party’s over when the party’s just begun You’ve gotta keep hope alive; we’ve got nothin but time, hun. I’ve tried all I can, but you don’t want to believe That there’s always gonna be a brighter side to things. (Chorus) You’re so unloving, So uncaring, So unbelievably numb, When are you gonna learn? (Chorus) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 ^wow.. that was AWESOME-TASTIC... i have nothing as good as that.. wow. it kindah reminded me of brighter.. even though their pretty different... idk, im strange like that.. hahaha. are you in a band? because you're stuff is really great! you should be in a band.. really. im in a band.. well, 2 actually.. cuz i have one at the school im at and the other at my old school so yeahh.. difficult but fun.. hahaha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 thank you! xD i'm sure your stuff is really great. and no i'm not in a band. me and my friends want to start one though.. ...just as soon as we learn to play instruments. xP yeah unless playing clarinet in the school band counts. haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 ^thanks! i need to post more.. i will soon.. yeahh, idt that school band counts... hahaha.. well, not really. but y'all should learn how to play instruments because you guys would be a kick butt band!!! really... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 14, 2007 Report Share Posted June 14, 2007 Jana & Natashaaaaa...you write radical stuff <3!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 THANKS JADE!!! my lovely billbecks sister... i haven't talked to you in a long time... THANKS again!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 I knowwww! no problem my lovely billbeck sisterrrr! :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 ok you've talked me into it. hehehe. this is a poem i wrote some time last year:There was nothing I could do to help her, She was in too deep and there was no cure. Nobody knows why she felt that way, Now nobody will ever know why she felt it everyday. I couldn’t stop her from doing what she did, Nobody could she was a real wild kid. She knew things were never quite what they seemed, She said she was stuck inside someone else’s bad dream. I just hope she knows we loved her a lot, Because she never tried to be something she’s not. I never understood why she would teased, They would punch and kick her whenever they pleased. Then one day she couldn’t take it anymore, I walked in and saw her lying cold on the floor. She slit her wrists so bad she died, I hope she knows we care and we cried. I’m glad you could all make it today, I know she would’ve wanted her funeral to be this way. awesome, but tragic!!! i love it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 i don't like it too much.heck, i don't like any of my stuff. but here's something i wrote. Goodbye [i think this needs a more creative title….] You’re always complaining about how I’m not there You must have mistaken me for someone who cares What about all the times you’ve let me down? I don’t know why I bother to keep you around It’s not like we ever stood a chance So when you’re walking out the door don’t give a second glance You can’t make this any better You can’t bring us back together And we can’t live this way forever… Chorus: So just give up, don’t even try It’s better to just leave this all behind Let’s make it a little less difficult this time Let’s just say goodbye This is where reality sets in Now we’re back where we began Don’t worry it’s almost over now Just pretend you’re not letting anyone down You can’t make this any better You can’t bring us back together And we can’t live this way forever… (Chorus) ‘Cause you can’t make this any better You can’t bring us back together And we can’t live this way forever… (Chorus Again.) *bows at feel*.... awesome!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 im gona post some of my things soon!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 15, 2007 Report Share Posted June 15, 2007 Jana & Natashaaaaa...you write radical stuff <3!!! *bows at feel*.... awesome!!!!!!!!!! Aw, thanks you guyyys. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 here's another song.. ick. i don't think it's too good.. so yeahh.. hope y'all like it. "Saying Goodbye in the Rain" it's raining outside. well, it's pouring actually im here inside, singing to keep me busy and this song, i supposedly wrote for you and i guess that, every word i sing is true... but i can't gurantee, that it won't hurt u to hear this song but i bet you'll get over it, soon before long and i will stand outside, in the pouring rain just to sing you this song and to ease this pain... i know this may hurt, i know you don't wanna hear these words i speak to you, but please do not fear the next few words im about to say because it's not forever i know it hurts but it's for the better... so goodbye. the sun is hidden outside, the clouds cover the sky and im still thinking why this messed up our lives. i know this is true, saying goodbye to you may kill at first, they're the most hated words. but i need to do this, before it just gets worse. i still love you, but loving you has caused all this hurt... so i will stand outside, in the pouring rain just to sing you this song and to ease this pain... i know this may hurt, i know you don't wanna hear these words i speak to you, but please do not fear the next few words im about to say, because it's not forever i know it hurts, but it's for the better... so goodbye. it's dark outside. well, it's lonely actually... i'm here inside, crying to keep me busy... and this song, i'm singing for you... and i know that every word is true... so i will stand outside, in the pouring rain just to sing you this song and to ease this pain... i know this may hurt, i know you don't wanna hear these words i speak to you, but please do not fear the next few words im about to say because it's not forever i know it hurts but it's for the better... so goodbye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 the sun is hidden outside, the clouds cover the sky and im still thinking why this messed up our lives. i know this is true, saying goodbye to you may kill at first, they're the most hated words. but i need to do this, before it just gets worse. i still love you, but loving you has caused all this hurt... i really like this part... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 ^thank you!!! i love your lyrics too! dang, your lyrics freakin' kick butt!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 aw thanks. i don't think they're that good though. hahah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 ^i think we all think the same about our own stuff. like i usually think my stuff sucks but then when people start commenting about it i feel so much better and less self-consious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 Haha yeah, that's always my case. hah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 yupp.. well, i think i have another song i'll post up here soon... im not quite finished yet though.. and again.. i think it sucks.. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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