Jorgi Posted July 13, 2007 Report Share Posted July 13, 2007 go, cliché writing, go: \ I'm starting to feel a little nauseous I've lost my heart somewhere in my mouth So i'll speak in riddles and heartbeats And just hope you'll understand this time around. Fame and Fortune passed right on by So i better start dreaming again And hope that you'll remember my name 'Cause i'll never forget the way you said it Or the way you promised the stars like you meant it. So i'm not quite sure what love feels like But i've heard it's much like falling Well falling has never felt so good As when i'm falling in love with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xLaiamore Posted July 13, 2007 Report Share Posted July 13, 2007 THANKS ALI! Hehe you kids inspire me to write more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted July 13, 2007 Report Share Posted July 13, 2007 ^Its okay Natasha boo!I loove you. =) hehe I think I should write you a song. LOL "Natsha boo boo You're soo coo When we're bored, I have no clue, Other than that I go boohoo, Since I miss my Natasha boo boo" Wow I made that up just right now, less than a minute. =) Aha I love it! Now I have to put you in my sig cause you wrote a song for me. Pretty soon everyone on these boards is gonna be in my sig. o.0 go, cliché writing, go: \ I'm starting to feel a little nauseous I've lost my heart somewhere in my mouth So i'll speak in riddles and heartbeats And just hope you'll understand this time around. Fame and Fortune passed right on by So i better start dreaming again And hope that you'll remember my name 'Cause i'll never forget the way you said it Or the way you promised the stars like you meant it. So i'm not quite sure what love feels like But i've heard it's much like falling Well falling has never felt so good As when i'm falling in love with you. Wow, that's amazing. I wish I was half as good as you. o.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 14, 2007 Report Share Posted July 14, 2007 jana - i really like that last one you posted. lai - it did remind me of something shaant would write. and i love how shaant writes. so yeah, i like yours a lot, too. thank you soo much alison!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss_emergency Posted July 14, 2007 Report Share Posted July 14, 2007 "Brighter than the stars we are.Laying here, sitting. Goose bumps crawl. Bear some skin. Upon my cheek does yours rest. Oh boy does it feel good. Let's wake up once again, just to make myself feel better. Let's swear no one's taking a moment away. Drugs spreading throughout our warm bodies Let's make it work. Let's make it work. The adrenaline's rushing. Feeling like I'm getting a heart attack. Save me! Save me! Don't look back." Ehh I don't know what you consider what I wrote. But after reading it, it look like something Shaant would write. i love this!!! omg it's so good.. and the Natasha song.. AWESOME!!! hahaha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roxchick93 Posted July 19, 2007 Report Share Posted July 19, 2007 im not much of a writer. but idk. decide for ur self "[verse] To Broken to fight any more its not worth the sruggle or anything ive been through why cant i just be through with u we were so close once we've been so close still i sit here glaring out ON WHAT IVE MISSED was it important? i dont even knoww what i did [chourus] innocence is the biggest lie youve ever told innocence is the BIGGEST lie youve ever told... so crack open another smile give me another wink i know the truth and nothing can kill you [verse] the cruelty you give oh its umberable and i'll try so hard to hold it together and i'll still i sit here glaring out on what ive missed was it important? YOU KNOW WHAT U DID [chourus] innocence is the biggest lie youve ever told innocence is the BIGGEST lie youve ever told... so crack open another smile give me another wink i know the truth and nothing can kill you [bridge] i cant say.. i cant say.. i cant say im sorryy oh is it over? why wont it ever b over?? [chourus] innocence is the biggest lie youve ever told innocence is the BIGGEST lie youve ever told... so crack open another smile give me another wink i know the truth and nothing can kill you" it might make more sence if i said the story behind it. idk. if any one wants it let me know. i just really want to know if the lyrics are any good cuz im dying to make it into a song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neverment2brag Posted July 19, 2007 Report Share Posted July 19, 2007 i like it. i love the 1st verse and chours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tineke Posted July 20, 2007 Report Share Posted July 20, 2007 Oh man a writing thread, I lvoe this forum already. Here's an older one, but it's one that I'm still ridicolously proud of. Grace. Don’t worry, I don’t hate her. I don’t hate you. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I won’t cry. I won’t give up. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I’ll be fine. I won’t think of it. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I won’t hate her. I won’t have you. I have grace, And so do you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted July 20, 2007 Report Share Posted July 20, 2007 Oh man a writing thread, I lvoe this forum already.Here's an older one, but it's one that I'm still ridicolously proud of. Grace. Don’t worry, I don’t hate her. I don’t hate you. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I won’t cry. I won’t give up. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I’ll be fine. I won’t think of it. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I won’t hate her. I won’t have you. I have grace, And so do you. i'm in love with that <33 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted July 20, 2007 Report Share Posted July 20, 2007 im not much of a writer. but idk. decide for ur self "[verse] To Broken to fight any more its not worth the sruggle or anything ive been through why cant i just be through with u we were so close once we've been so close still i sit here glaring out ON WHAT IVE MISSED was it important? i dont even knoww what i did [chourus] innocence is the biggest lie youve ever told innocence is the BIGGEST lie youve ever told... so crack open another smile give me another wink i know the truth and nothing can kill you [verse] the cruelty you give oh its umberable and i'll try so hard to hold it together and i'll still i sit here glaring out on what ive missed was it important? YOU KNOW WHAT U DID [chourus] innocence is the biggest lie youve ever told innocence is the BIGGEST lie youve ever told... so crack open another smile give me another wink i know the truth and nothing can kill you [bridge] i cant say.. i cant say.. i cant say im sorryy oh is it over? why wont it ever b over?? [chourus] innocence is the biggest lie youve ever told innocence is the BIGGEST lie youve ever told... so crack open another smile give me another wink i know the truth and nothing can kill you" it might make more sence if i said the story behind it. idk. if any one wants it let me know. i just really want to know if the lyrics are any good cuz im dying to make it into a song so awesome. <3 Oh man a writing thread, I lvoe this forum already.Here's an older one, but it's one that I'm still ridicolously proud of. Grace. Don’t worry, I don’t hate her. I don’t hate you. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I won’t cry. I won’t give up. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I’ll be fine. I won’t think of it. I have grace, And so do you. Grace. Don’t worry, I won’t hate her. I won’t have you. I have grace, And so do you. love it <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted July 20, 2007 Report Share Posted July 20, 2007 Here's a little something I've been working on these last...oo...5 minutes. I can't remember the first time we met Has it really been so damned long? We were so inseperable for all that time How long was it? 10 years and more... But then....that all changed for the worse... You call me friend? You don't deserve to do so You called me your partner in crime? But in truth, you're just an S.O.B! Just an S.O.B.... Your house was like my second home And my house was your second home We shared so much in common And we taught each other to love new things... But then you changed for the worse... (Chorus) I remember you saying we'd know each other until the end But then you spat on that promise and turned your back on me So now I only have one thing left to say to you old friend I hope someone screws you over like you did to me Then you'd know just what you put me through... You're nothing to me.... Just an S.O.B.... As A.P mag said of Mis Biz, it's as lyrically direct as a kick to the teeth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 Love Is the Movement Don’t make yourself miserable Stop causing the pain It’s not the answer you know Hurting won’t solve anything Don’t push me away I’m here for you I’ll hear you out Let’s turn it around Do anything to feel alive Do anything to feel something familiar No one has to know No one has to know what you’re going through Don’t make yourself miserable Stop causing the pain It’s not the answer you know Hurting won’t solve anything Don’t push me away I’m here for you I’ll hear you out Let’s turn it around It’s not too late We’ll make things right It’s not too late We’ll end the pain right now -uhmm.what do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 ^ i like it. a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 ^ i like it. a lot. thanks!=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 an untitled song Is it jealousy mixing up with pain Maybe self pity and confusion When will it be When will I see clearly It’s not coming back Maybe I am selfish I just want someone to love But I didn’t see How much you cared about me Maybe I am selfish I just want someone to love But I didn’t see I’m sorry, I’m sorry Someday we’ll see How dumb we used to be Thinking that we were always right When that time comes I don’t know where I’ll be Maybe I am selfish I just want someone to love But I didn’t see How much you cared about me Maybe I am selfish I just want someone to love But I didn’t see I’m sorry, I’m sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninski Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 I told you not to change But you did anyway I don’t like where you’re going The girl you became I thought that you were different But you’re all messed up I don’t wanna pretend Stop telling me what to do This is my life I don’t wanna be you It’s everything I’m not How will I make you listen before its over How could you hide such things When I opened my heart How could you lie to my face When I knew what’s up I could’ve helped you out Now that it’s over and done There’s nothing we can do Forgiving you It won’t be easy to do You waited long enough But I won’t give in You’re tearing us apart Farther and farther each day When will you see The girl that you are Tore us apart/ will be the end of us Stop wasting your time Your plans won’t work the way you want it to -another one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tineke Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 I'm in a really good mood right now and this just sort of.... Came out. I can’t grasp this feeling that’s making me smile. Words fall away and I can’t help but relax and just… Grin at the joy of it all. I don’t even know what ‘it all’ is, But whatever it is it’s wonderful. I’m sitting here, by myself, and instead of… Complaining and moaning that nobody is beside me, I’m rejoicing that sometimes there are. That I know God is with me, My friends will stand by me, And my family will let me fall back on them. Even though some people will fade, or slam the door, Others will always be there to take their place. As long as I want them there I will never be alone. And this, contentedness, just wells up inside me, For the first time in my life I can think of nothing the take this smile away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 AOIFE... i don't even have to say anything.. because you know you're work is crazy AMAZING!!! i loved it.. the song and the poem.. but i kinda liked the poem a bit more, because i feel exactly the same way!!! hahaha.. but the song kinda reminded me of miz biz.. like another version of miz biz.. cool! aw thansk jana! i havn't been on here in ages... was at art academy!! ive just caught up and read a good few songs.... yall are freaking awesome!! yall blow me away!!! T-A-L-E-N-T-E-D !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 Aoife, i love the...the chours of it i guess ill call it. it reminds me of my ex BFF in middle school HAHA she like tried to control me and mold me into like a mini me of her then one day i told her im sick of your lies and all that stuff haha okay im done. thank you! yeah i pretty much felt like that too!!! i still hate the girl i wrote it about! shes a totaly bitch! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 one of my sleep-less nights... lying awake just thinking of random things.... and this is what happened... lol P.O. Box Heaven Dear God, I'm unable to sleep, I called, but you weren’t there, I left a message after the beep, But now, I need a favor not a prayer... Hello. How are you? It's been a while, It's just little old me again, I know you have better things to do right now, So, this letter to you I send. Tell the stars that watch down upon me That I'm grateful for their light, And that when they sparkle, I wink back Each and every night. Tell the unborn baby I never got to know That he's the brightest star in the sky, And that I hope to finally meet him one day And we'll play together, both him and I. When Grandma left in January 2007 Off looking for Grandpa she went, Can you please let me know if she found him in heaven? And if so, what was it like when they met? Well, it's getting late; It's time for me to go, It's just gone quarter to three, So as I sleep tonight please let me know, Your little friend, RSVP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natasha Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 ^ i really love that aoife! it's amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted July 21, 2007 Report Share Posted July 21, 2007 thanks natasha!!! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XslightaddictionX Posted July 22, 2007 Report Share Posted July 22, 2007 There's No Way There's no way we can turn back time When we were happy And you were mine There's no way we can make it better Because today we have to sever It's because we have grown apart And I can't see your heart I hope you understand what I'm trying to say I'm sorry, there's just no way. I was just typing words. Hope u ppls like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted July 22, 2007 Report Share Posted July 22, 2007 ^^ awesomeness!!! =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted July 22, 2007 Report Share Posted July 22, 2007 // So let's take a walk in the park To escape everyone else for a change, We don't have to walk all that far And my stomach's feeling quite strange 'Cause those butterflies just won't sit still. So i'll just stare at my feet And wait for someone to speak, Then your eyes to sparkle when you mention the weather It's pelting it down but we're together So it don't matter so much. And now my heart's having such a sunny day I think i'll just smile all day 'Cause i'm in love with the way you're holding my hand And i'm in love with the way that i love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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