Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 I wrote this when I still had feelings for this girl, and she didn't want to talk to me anymore. It was good to actually get it off of my chest. Your love is just something I lack I never knew I needed you this much I want to get you back Though it will never happen with my luck I understand why you had to leave It was for the right reason Even though our love I did believe It still feels like my heart was a victim of treason Neither one of us has moved on We both haven't talked for a while Love is a battle that hasn't been won Ours has really been idle So, I don't know what to say to you Everything hasn't been the same I'd love to get back together with you But I'm afraid, nothing will ever be the same I wish things would change Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 ^thats really cool Justin and thanks Mike. Thats cool how you see the paramore influence. lol I hate when I can't write. I hope it will come to you. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Aw, thanks. I was a bit nervous, so I got someone else to read it before I posted it. I hate when I can't write anything and I feel like I want to write. I did see those Paramore influences that Mike was talking about. It was pretty neat. =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 haha thanks. You really need to keep writing. you've got some great stuff in that song/poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 =] Thanks. I think I have some more stuff lying around but I must find it first. I'd love to be able to put it in a song, but I'm afraid I'm not too hot with that. I need to find someone to play with and maybe they could help me. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 dude, you shouldnt be afraid. As long as your happy with it its the best. My friends make fun of me all the time cause i write songs and one of them is even in my band. Me and my guitar teacher play a lot together and it helped me with lots of my problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 ^ So correct. It like this one kid...teased me like crazy, He goes "This is so ridiculous! I cant believe you're using THIS in a song!" I go "You wait and see how its sung fool!!" and needless today...I still have to show him how its sung but its going to be GREATNESS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Haha, the problem I have is putting the music to the words! But how can one of your bandmates make fun of you writing songs? That's just a bit silly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 ^lol you go Christopher!! Show him how its done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Anyways, I think the way to sing it is the easiest part, The hardest part I ecounter is making the music, The guitar and ect. Thats the hardest part for me I usually dont even make a song for a week, then I finally start it. Those kind of kids are idiots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 ^ oh I couldnt agree with you more. I'll make cool lyrics and its so hard to make music and then I'll make cool music and come up with any stinkin lyrics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Well, when you get good music, and eventually get good lyrics, you should mix those and see how it turns out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 yeah i do that a lot. SOmetimes I think I have something special on the guitar and when I record oh man its horrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 ^ hahah yeah same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 I've got one thing on Guitar that I've written that I'm proud of, even though it's not finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NerdSaidWhat? Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 I relate to this one, Definitely. You're good. thanks =] i'll find something of yours and comment it tomorrow =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Please dont, they're terrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NerdSaidWhat? Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 i doubt it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 me and my friend are the same way with our music that you guys are. I think its some kinda thing you have to go through when you're just starting out until you find that one special sound you're looking for. we've had millions of bass lines and guitar riffs that we've thrown out cause they didnt sound good enough and twice as many lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Yeah, I guess it takes a while to get the hang of writing them together. It amazes how bands put out CDs in such a short amount of time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 I know! If my band ever makes it i would release an album ever 2-3 years 4 at the very most. and if any if any of your bands make it we should all tour together and then convince paramore that we all can open for them lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Haha, that was what I was thinking about earlier. 'What if I could get famous and tour with Paramore?" I'd be on here all the time and be like, "So yeah, me and Paramore just got done hanging out. =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 hahaha oh yeah definitely. If there was ever anything in my life i would want to brag about it would be that and i never brag. If i ever did "i never meant to...brag"(i had to lol im a superfan) id be like "yeah, me and paramore are just chillin'." just randomly start threads like that every few days. This is my new life long dream. I will tour with paramore and kill new found glory so i can be there best friend edit: wow i just read over that real quick and realized i cant kill new found glory it just wouldn't be right, they're a good band. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooks Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Well, I don't know about killing anyone to hang with someone. =o I just want to get with some musicians and start touring. That's what I would like to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 yes, in all seriousness thats all i want in my life is to spend it being in a band and touring. nothing in my life ever gave me the same feeling as music does. Im always listening to it. whether im at work or school or just walking down the street i always have something. plus seeing other bands touring they make it look so fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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