MarMaramore Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 POST! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 POST! and goodmorning! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lahninja Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 hey christopher, good evening for moi ;D and im getting pictures of my new hair, hold on! haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 lemme see those too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 i really should start posting some of my stuff.! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 You should! I want to see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 hmmm just wrote something its a little cheesy and crap so not gonna post it lol maybe when i edit it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 well... NEW SONG.... +++++++++ [verse] i'm afraid of the dark and you leave me all alone like this hoping and dreamin for a new way to get over it maybe i want to cry maybe its true maybe im stuck to the lies and you too (and you, too) [pre-chorus] you know what you did way to go babe! and im not quite over it but im not so sorry to say [chorus] when i look around for excses to get away next time you always look for answers in me but this time im done sharin mine maybe if you'd stop breaking me id be at least "a little okay" (today) [verse] im torn between you and "who is there?" it's not like can even go anywhere (anyway) and i could never call this home my replies even i dont own [pre-chorus] [chorus] [bridge] you're a wonderful writer, you know but sweetie you have no idea where you wanna go im just another puppet in your tiny life just another love who isnt worth your time (im not really worth your time) ---anymore! [chorus] [chorus outro on guitar with last line of song] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 ^ thats really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 ^ I like it, deary! Good job! Can't wait to see more from you. I wrote this one right now, and promised Tasha I'd show it to her, so here 'tis. Hold On Tonight Hold on, hold on tonight Kill me, kill me I won’t let you leave I won’t let you die Let me get it over with Hold on, hold on tonight What are you searching for? I can help you find it. What are you running from? I can help you hide. I know you’re in pain And I want to hold you But you need to hold on too Just hold on, hold on tonight CH: I won’t let you leave I won’t let you die Let me in, let me in tonight I’ll hold you as you cry Show me you want your life Don’t go through with this All you’ll do is hurt me. Is that what you want to do? Do I mean nothing to you? I need you here, with me. I love you more than you’ll ever know We’ll get through this together Don’t give up, don’t give up tonight. CH I won’t let you leave And I won’t leave you. Go ahead and cry I’m holding you. Just let me in tonight Just hold on tonight. ----- As you have probably guessed, it's a person talking to someone suicidal. And the italics at the beginning are the suicidal person talking (kinda weird, so I may change that). What do you guys think? holy shitttt!!!!!!! AMAZINGGGGGGGG!!! <3 seriously wanna cry now lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arya Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Wow, thank you! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Those ones were amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 I haven't posted anything in here in a while.. This is the start to a story I wrote earlier. It was raining, the drops hitting my jacket. I didn’t bother to put a coat on. It wasn’t particularly cold; just wet. My head was bent, my hat covering my face. I wasn’t looking where I was going; I knew my way, I’d lived in this street for years. Thunder roared above me, but I didn’t look up; it was usual for it to rain and thunder in spring here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 thats really good for a start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Thanks x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 no problem... and it sucsk that your too young to go see sweeny todd.. that movie was awesome... i'll just say, rent it as soon as it comes out, or whatever... its so worth seeing, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 I was going to. I really wanna see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 a lot of people hated it *jorgi *cough* jorgi* but i thought it was good.. then again, i liked every movie with accents in it that i have seen so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 lol^ I think i'll check this movie out too. Just because im a fan of mr depp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 yeah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 I haven't posted anything in here in a while.. This is the start to a story I wrote earlier. It was raining, the drops hitting my jacket. I didn’t bother to put a coat on. It wasn’t particularly cold; just wet. My head was bent, my hat covering my face. I wasn’t looking where I was going; I knew my way, I’d lived in this street for years. Thunder roared above me, but I didn’t look up; it was usual for it to rain and thunder in spring here. That's really good And shitson ! Peterborough's nang ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 more randomness stop starin at me baby you're only hurting yourself you're draggin on this moment and it's hurting, you're so, well... (nevermind) i could say i dont remember or that i dont care but i can always feel you or rather this tension, it's never rare you cant just write a letter to me saying that we're through it'd be so much better if you could tell me face to face as you i cant keep straying away when you stare at me like that and i dissapoint you, always when you shove away like that ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++== heres some more depressing, non-rhymy, poetry about cutting and stuff **** Why? she came home, tears flowing from her eyes The razor is ner hand, she calls "best friend", makes the feeling seem like nothing, compared, The lies tossed around, the glances they steal make the bruises and the scars pull to the inside, hiding themselves. Bound to strings, barely holding her up, controlling her every movement, they'd know that she gave up. The beauty in her heart stopped radiating, making that heart seem, false and hidden beneath her many broken layers. The fire inside of her, turned to stone, to bare this alone is a burden she's stuck with, for running from home. The pain inside of her, doubled be her OWN actions, and the fact, that all she has is hatred for herself. She's covered the old scars with memories, and the strings that held her up, she cut them herself. Among other things, she'd cry not to reember, then, new hope erupted form the beaten, scarred girl. Feeling for a new smile, her new best friend... She calls her, "master." The Strings are back now... Her heart slowly stops... "Love?".. a new word. She fears it for some reason. Fears it with all of her being. Love. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
travel_hymn Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 we are the farro brothers we are the farro brothers and we're in paramore we are the farro brothers we are the farro brothers we're on our way we are the farro brothers we are the farro brothers we are the farro brothers and we're here to stay love, Zac & Josh xx XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 ^ wow... you sooo top me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Amazing Lara! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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