my.heart. Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 haha oh ok that's good :] well i'll finish up and post in few minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 i breathe cause it's necessary, but i dream to feel more alive than when i am seeing what appears before me, the moon says goodnight to my hope i reach for whoever is nearest, but the sky seems so far away i'm trapped inside these walls, where i'm turning my world upside down i'm so disarranged, imperfectly falling too far to be liberated so many hearts at the table yet mine is in front of me i wake up to feel something different, but i sleep to forget the time i've wasted in being so defying, unconsciousness could bring me hope and still we will lie here, somebody's head near mine i'll orbit still losing, in some downcast, pristine harmony i'm so disarranged, imperfectly falling too far to be liberated so many hearts at the table yet mine is in front of me i'm so disarranged, imperfectly falling too far to be liberated so many hearts at the table yet mine is in front of me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 i breathe cause it's necessary,but i dream to feel more alive than when i am seeing what appears before me, the moon says goodnight to my hope i reach for whoever is nearest, but the sky seems so far away i'm trapped inside these walls, where i'm turning my world upside down i'm so disarranged, imperfectly falling too far to be liberated so many hearts at the table yet mine is in front of me i wake up to feel something different, but i sleep to forget the time i've wasted in being so defying, unconsciousness could bring me hope and still we will lie here, somebody's head near mine i'll orbit still losing, in some downcast, pristine harmony Perfection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 this is the first thing i've written in a while at least a 15-17 months haha. i played around with the structure and form of the poem a bit. this goes out to my fellow insomniacs as i wrote this at 3 in the morning when i couldnt sleep Insomniac Oh, just leave me alone! But these thoughts in my mind just keep going on. On, like the howling wind, on and on, even the tiniest noise, the clicks and flicks, the drips, drops. And those lights, your red battery lights just glare at me and the street lights too. For every sense at its highest sense won't leave me alone, just itches, scratches me down to the bone, twisting, turning, just can't settle these thoughts. I hate you. You know what I want, but you stay ablaze, never leaving me alone like that annoying little flea. Flea?! What flea, oh that one inside of me! Buzzing throughout this empty space, the empty space filled with everything, but all I want is darkness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Avit insomnia. That's the only time i actually write anything, which is why i never make much sense Insomniac Oh, just leave me alone! But these thoughts in my mind just keep going on. On, like the howling wind, on and on, even the tiniest noise, the clicks and flicks, the drips, drops. And those lights, your red battery lights just glare at me and the street lights too. For every sense at its highest sense won't leave me alone, just itches, scratches me down to the bone, twisting, turning, just can't settle these thoughts. I hate you. You know what I want, but you stay ablaze, never leaving me alone like that annoying little flea. Flea?! What flea, oh that one inside of me! Buzzing throughout this empty space, the empty space filled with everything, but all I want is darkness. I actually really enjoyed reading that. The structure is quite wonderful, as are the words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 haha thanks. i really need to start writing again more. i really need to find my old book filled with stuff i wrote from 2-3 years ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Immortal We can run away Just us two No one else Run away forever and ever Take my hand Follow me We're almost there Under the trees In the moonlight Looking at the stars Its our time now We can be inivisible Just us two No one else We can stay here forever I wish we could be together Always No matter what Its our time now We can be invisible Just us two No one else Take my hand Follow me "...we'll run away, just us two, we can be immortal." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Perfection. thank you <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Fully Deserved Knocked off that podium of yours Just love watching you fall My breath remains baited Just to watch you hit the ground... You had it coming We all knew that You had it coming And yet you did nothing And now we laugh in your face... You set yourself up Just to take a fall You have an audience So don't disappoint them... *chorus* It was fully deserved So just accept the acts It was fully deserved So don't deny the truth It was fully deserved And you should just accept it! As the dust settles You're left broken and beaten A fate fitting for a scumbag Unlike any other in the known world... *chorusx2 to finish* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Fully Deserved Knocked off that podium of yours Just love watching you fall My breath remains baited Just to watch you hit the ground... as the dust settles You're left broken and beaten A fate fitting for a scumbag Unlike any other in the known world... :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 I assume that means you approve? ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Nah, means i hate it. I'm topsy-turvy, me. ...Naw, love it (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Fully Deserved Knocked off that podium of yours Just love watching you fall My breath remains baited Just to watch you hit the ground... You had it coming We all knew that You had it coming And yet you did nothing And now we laugh in your face... You set yourself up Just to take a fall You have an audience So don't disappoint them... *chorus* It was fully deserved So just accept the acts It was fully deserved So don't deny the truth It was fully deserved And you should just accept it! As the dust settles You're left broken and beaten A fate fitting for a scumbag Unlike any other in the known world... *chorusx2 to finish* thats how i feel about a friend of mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 bit disjointed and fuzzy, so probably won't make any sense to anyone but me. oh well. life goes on a new perspective of fear and what that means to you a damning disaster, right here and how i've ruined you it was always my mistake to make the delusions of your ideas were just a trick of the light masked by the dead of night i hope you've come prepared for anything i have in store for you and everything i've destroyed for you let's paint a brilliant canvas of catastrophe but get ready to leave without me my master plan ain't finished yet without the final touches of tragedy you're my hope, my heart and my honour toppling down in the arms of another i watched it all and i trembled i saw it all i hope you've come prepared for anything i have in store for you and everything i've destroyed for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 let's paint a brilliant canvas of catastrophe but get ready to leave without me my master plan ain't finished yet without the final touches of tragedy i love this stanza. i think i might know what its about but i cant seem to get the right words to explain it...like if i use the wrong words it might come off as something different. hmmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 Try, i'm curious to see what other people make of what i write (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 oh jorgi you are most intriguing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Haha, woman of mystery, that's me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 I watched the rain fall, As it hid my tears, I watched you go away, It was one of my fears, I asked If you could stay, You said maybe in a few years, I couldn't think of what to say, I as I watched you walk away. Crappy I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 oh dear i hope you get into hills Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted April 2, 2008 Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 I was kinda listening to some song on someones homepage or whatever, And they had this beautiful intrumental song. I was able to grab some inspiration and just type this out. Its kinda different for me, But oh well. I Dont Deserve You Imagine yourself with friends Imagine the reward you get In this life of mine There has been no reward I've met That made me happy or gave me pride I confess, Im a cheater Im a thief, Im a loser Yes I know Im a liar In the end after all of this The shame burns me like fire I feel so selfish Having you as a friend You're the greatest soul I've ever met Every moment, Is always happy There hasnt been a moment yet With you, I regret Edit: Im also pretty sure I made some mistakes and some dont even make that much sense, But you can get what I tried to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Chaos Theory Actions, they speak louder than words Well if that happens to be the case Look what we've gone and done Watch the world spiral out of control And hold on for the ride... Theorize this We're like butterflies and hurricanes You and I Let's make our own Chaos Theory And watch from the sidelines Our own Chaos Theory... The winds blow in the south Caused by the wings of one So very far away from the source We, the epicentre of chaos itself We are the root of it all... *chorus* *slow verse part* My Chaos Theory Utter perfection Our Chaos Theory Turns the world on its head... *regular tempo* Beat your wings and fly away Let's stir up a storm far away It's the order of things today It's our common cause my dear So don't be afraid and fly away... *chorus to end* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venus&Bacchus Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 I hate how I can't write good lyrics nor sing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 I was scared to post this but here it goes Music in front of me Verse1-All things must end all things must die Doors wide open, eager eyes There's nothing much to say, you're amzing in every way! Chorus- I don't care what they say, you're the music, (the musssiccc) I don't care anyway, You're the music in front of me Verse2- All things must go All things can grow Many things can change, It can't change if it's out of range! There's nothing to do I just care and love you (chorus x2) Bridge: We can't just walk away we can't just watch us fade we can stand tall In front of them all! (chorus x2) End: Don't care what they say, You're amazing...to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 blahblahblahblahlbah shall we sit and rejoice or regret they sound just the same when you say it like that so shall we speak with disdain or despair they felt just the same when you told me so it makes no difference in the end i asked if it'd be painless when you dropped a bombshell from such height and you assured me it'd be fine well, i lied quick and painless ain't my style you set me on fire i'll dance to forget and forgive a dancefloor of heartbeats that enver sounded to sweet and we'll drink to explain and experience your treachery and torment that i've heard so much about well you make no difference in the end i asked if it'd be painless when you dropped that bombshell from such height and you assured me it'd be fine well, i lied quick and painless ain't my style, you set me on fire you're quite the disaster and quite the smooth talker well if i fall any faster i'll love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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