arrrrr x matey Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 omg there amazing. i love it. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mimidec1991 Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 Everybody gets m going. I'm not a good writer but here ya go, a poem written (by me) sometime last year. LOST I wake up in the middle of the night Walk down the street, wonder where I should go Suddenly get blinded by the street light Am I out of my own mind? I just don't know. Lying on the grass alone, I'd cry Everything I have done, everything I have seen It doesn't matter now since I'm high I'm awake again, wondering where I've been. Give me a little more time, give me a little more space I don't know where I belong, I don't know Give me a little more rain, give me something to face Until I wake up once again next to my window. Don't bring me down, don't let me go If you have my soul, don't let me know Until I figure out what I've lost I will find what I want the most. and this one is for the little lost girl named Madeline (I call her Maddie). It's been quiet long since you disappeared Everybody and I are waiting for you here We are praying We are hoping the miracle will happen We keep praying We keep telling eachother it will happen No matter where you are now, little girl You're always in our souls, little world We're singing you this song 'cause we all miss you Don't be away for too long 'cause that hutrs us too We all keep praying, keep hoping That the miracle will come No matter where you are now Maddie, come back home! How could something like this happen to you? Everything we make, everything we do Is to bring you back home, you know? No matter where we're from, where we go We'll still keep hoping and praying for you, our little world. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 24, 2008 Report Share Posted March 24, 2008 My apologies, I tried very hard to make it not sound like an 80's hair metal love song Edit: Actually I hate it, Im gonna do a new one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Intro To My New Story Make A Move I remember watching from my dance studio, as my sister was getting murderd, by someone, superhuman. It was one of those things I couldn’t explain. I’ll never forget, when the creature looked at me with his fierce red eyes, with an evil smile on his blood covered face. Not only was it fearful seeing the monster, it was fearful knowing exactly what it was. Knowing what killed my sister was a vampire. I knew I would have to tell someone, but it would be like crying wolf. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 ^ Thats good. I wrote this earlier. FOR A WHILE Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? You gave me your heart and I accepted For a while Then I just...gave it away. I blew every fraction away. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? You wrote me a letter and I kept it For a while Then I just...gave it away. I tore it through the centre right before your eyes. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? You gave me your apologies and I forgave For a while Then I just...gave them away. I could have screamed in your face for eternity. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? You gave me a child, and I was overjoyed For a while Then I just...gave it away. I abandoned you my sweet. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? I was lost and you gave me your warmth For a while Then you just...gave it away. Every last inch of love you had, you ripped in half. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? I gave you my tears and you wiped them For a while Then you just...gave them away. You pushed me down and didn't help me up. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? I gave you a second chance and you let it happen For a while Then you just...gave it away. You ruined your time. Left me alone. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? 3 months later, you came back. I gave you my heart but you never took it. Even after I took yours. For a while. Then I just...gave it away. I blew every fraction away. Why am I always the one the one who cares the most? I deserved it. For a while... so lemme know what you think. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 cried all the way through writing this it was written for my best friend who got in a very bad place because of her parents' divorce & alcohol problems. oh child, sleep tonight no hours turning in restless minds oh child, just close your eyes they're not waiting to prise them with their lies and we've got problems they'd never think we'd bear and we need shelter just like those, who've never been there but i will always be the most unselfish form of hope so don't turn away in want of wishing no one knew oh child, don't hold your own it's over now just watch the moon go by oh child, don't have to hear the shouts of being trapped between bottle and rock bottom and we've got problems they'd never think we'd bear and we need shelter just like those, who've never been there but i will always be the most unselfish form of hope so don't turn away in want of wishing no one knew how, many times, will you die, inside? before, they return to where, they belong? that's right, they're suffocating they deserve it, take them down i hope it's true we're gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 ^Aww, that was really...moving, if that's the word I'm looking for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 how, many times, will you die, inside? before, they return to where, they belong? that's right, they're suffocating they deserve it, take them down i hope it's true we're gone. Oh. oh. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 cried all the way through writing this it was written for my best friend who got in a very bad place because of her parents' divorce & alcohol problems. oh child, sleep tonight no hours turning in restless minds oh child, just close your eyes they're not waiting to prise them with their lies and we've got problems they'd never think we'd bear and we need shelter just like those, who've never been there but i will always be the most unselfish form of hope so don't turn away in want of wishing no one knew oh child, don't hold your own it's over now just watch the moon go by oh child, don't have to hear the shouts of being trapped between bottle and rock bottom and we've got problems they'd never think we'd bear and we need shelter just like those, who've never been there but i will always be the most unselfish form of hope so don't turn away in want of wishing no one knew how, many times, will you die, inside? before, they return to where, they belong? that's right, they're suffocating they deserve it, take them down i hope it's true we're gone. <3333333333333333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YellowBrickRoad Posted March 25, 2008 Report Share Posted March 25, 2008 Make A Move I remember watching from my dance studio, as my sister was getting murderd, by someone, superhuman. It was one of those things I couldn’t explain. I’ll never forget, when the creature looked at me with his fierce red eyes, with an evil smile on his blood covered face. Not only was it fearful seeing the monster, it was fearful knowing exactly what it was. Knowing what killed my sister was a vampire. I knew I would have to tell someone, but it would be like crying wolf. CHAPTER ONE After the murder of my sister Emilia, my mother got very frantic, and decided to move to a different city. I begged her not to, I mean, my dance school is there, my friends, I’ve lived there my whole life. As any mom, she said no, this is for the better, so now, I’m here, at a new school, against my own will. I have no friends, my boyfriend isn’t here, and I don’t know how I’ll get through this year. I walked into my first day of school not knowing what things were going to be like. After getting my schedule, I was a bit late for my first period, English. My teacher, Mr. James looked a bit irritated when I walked into the classroom, but softened. I showed him that I was in the class before he introduced me. “Everyone,” He said. The class looked up from their books, to me. “This is Delaney Lines.” He said. “Hi.” I said quietly. Usually I wasn’t really shy, I just didn’t know anyone. “Were did you move here from?” “Uh, Buffalo, New York.” “Please welcome her.” He said. “You’ll be sitting by Riley Kingston for the time being.” He pointed to a small pudgy blonde haired boy in the middle of the room. Riley waved at me, as I walked to my seat. Mr. James continued with his lesson over The Crucible. “Hey, I’m Riley.” He whispered. “Hey.” I said. “Want to share my book?” He asked. “Oh, um sure, I’ve read it already.” “It’s really boring.” He said, mimicking him sleeping. I giggled. “I know what you mean.” After the discussion was over, Mr. James gave people the chance to get to know me. “Why did you move all the way to boring Helena, Montana?” A boy asked, he had short brown curly hair, and dimples. “Well, something really bad happened back home.” I said looking down. “Its really a touchy subject for me.” I said, looking down at the desk. “What do you do for fun?” A girl asked me, she was really pretty. “Well, I Irish Step Dance, sing, play the piano and guitar, I also play the Cello.” I said, “To be honest, Im not very interesting.” “You Step Dance?” Riley said loudly, and laughed. “I want to see you step dance Delaney!!!” For a little guy, Riley was loud. “Well, I don’t know.” I said, Honestly didn’t want to dance in class. “Please please please!” Riley was begging. He’s like a big little kid. “I don’t have music, sorry.” I said, starting to laugh at Riley as he was still begging. “What song?” Riley asked. “Footloose, Like I said, I don’t have it.” “Mr. James, do you have Footloose on your computer, you listen to music in class sometimes.” Riley asked. “Yeah, why?” “Delaney volunteered to Irish Step Dance for us.” Riley said. “Oh really? How cool” He turned to his computer. I groaned and got out of my chair, to Step Dance. Once Mr. James turned on the music, and I started dancing, people were cheering, it felt good, yet awkward at the same time. Good, because I love to dance, awkward, because the whole time I was dancing, I could keep my eyes off of the guy in the corner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 blargghhhhh. i can't tell i can't tell what hurts the most your fists, your eyes your kiss no i can;t tell i expected everything i anticipated it all but you ruined me completely and everything i stood for i knew it would happen, sooner or later but i swear i swear it hurt more than i thought it would than i thought it could i'd made mistakes and bad decisions but never so bad as trusting you and those lies i fell for and those eyes i fell for you are my worst mistake and my best, and my last, and my first, and good riddance but i miss you but i miss you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 jorgi write a happy poem please also <33333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 Haha, okay Alex, next one'll be happy It's just much, much easier to write about being sad than it is about being happy. There are more depressing words available that merry ones ! Haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 good, cause everytime you write some depressing poem im like NOOOO jorgi's all depressed, and then im sad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 blargghhhhh. i can't tell i can't tell what hurts the most your fists, your eyes your kiss no i can;t tell i expected everything i anticipated it all but you ruined me completely and everything i stood for i knew it would happen, sooner or later but i swear i swear it hurt more than i thought it would than i thought it could i'd made mistakes and bad decisions but never so bad as trusting you and those lies i fell for and those eyes i fell for you are my worst mistake and my best, and my last, and my first, and good riddance but i miss you but i miss you. thats beastly right there. your so blunt with your words, i love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 thats beastly right there. your so blunt with your words, i love it. agreed. i always feel like i can relate to what you're writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 26, 2008 Report Share Posted March 26, 2008 hmm but different. not sure if i like it.. partly inspired by born for this/the city is at war (cobra starship) play with guns to pass the time but when you're young death feels just fine don't be surprised to see them crying bringing down the world by flying we'll shout, mouths open wide sing loud, fire burns inside hey there to the revolution we hope, we hope you'll be the solution see her daughter shot for believing see his son forced into leaving spend your nights by the bed on your knees this never ends but He never sees we'll shout, mouths open wide sing loud, fire burns inside hey there to the revolution we hope, we hope you'll be the solution woah, sing louder than they can hear woah, throw hands to whoever is near woah, woah you've had a good time don't let them stop you when you're fine we'll shout, mouths open wide sing loud, fire burns inside hey there to the revolution we hope, we hope you'll be the solution Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 unredeemable what lies ahead I know I can't face the Judgement of my soul the decision of my fate Everything I am and everything i can't be won't ever be enough and you'll judge without sympathy My wrongs cannot be corrected and now im condemned for them through your eyes deemed unworthy an angel i can never be I look up to the heavens with envy in my heart regretting all of my past all alone in the dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Im just gonna make this one at this moment! ... Look at your friends growing, Look at your love its going Leaving you alone to cry, sit alone and die She promised she'd stay forever, You promised you'd always remember Even if the love seemed it didnt fade, Just only one promise Here was made Your mind is tied, To all the thoughts and moments with her Your tears, They leave your eyes Because they failed to see through the lies and now you seem so weak stupid you thought all along, You thought you knew this That this girl would never leave You lied to yourself, But you didnt know Those yesterdays, Offered alot Its today, The pain was brought From the thought and the memory Now its her that you'll, never see Now you're strong, But are you strong enough From this experience, You think you're tough When you're the same person, Deep down inside She took your heart, And destroyed your pride .. ahh I dont want it too lengthy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notoriousfat67 Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 thats good dude^^^ no one ever likes my stuff anymore lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 look into my eyes, take hold of my hand and my heart and my mind and let's leave by sunrise, with carelessness and recklessness that'll make the morning burn with envy, we'll bring hope and some luck and a hint of stupidity, you'll find me, and it'll be perfect and you'll love me, and it'll be perfect and just as i planned, take my hand, we're leaving everyone behind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 I SAID HAPPY!!!! also <3 most excellent my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 It is quite happy ! It's not sad ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 with carelessness and recklessness that'll make the morning burn with envy, we'll bring hope and some luck and a hint of stupidity, don't even get me started on how you read my mind at the moment. amazing though i just started writing a pretty decent song but it sounds so familiar i don't want to carry on until i know what's up. what song do these lyrics belong to? i swear i've heard them before.. "i breathe cause it's necessary, but i dream to feel more alive than when i am seeing what appears before me, the moon says goodnight to my hope" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Read your mind ? Orly ? What a psychic i am haha, cheers And i don't honestly recognize any of that- sounds good though ! Perhaps you've astounded yourself with writing something so good that you think someone else must have written it, haha Post the rest ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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