Jorgi Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 this is what boredom and rubbishness sounds like when mixed together with a pile of words. times are hard and those words were difficult i could tell the way your heart beat i can tell i looked and i listened but it was nothing ordinary silences accompany extraordinary music and the noise that sparkled when you outshone us all i wished for it all but there was nothing an existance hinted by footprints left in the sand well we slipped away hand in hand i loved and we lost but it was nothing compared to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxbecksyxx Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 It was all blurry then as the rain blurred my vision. The drops hit my eyes slowly, smudging my makeup. I pulled my hood over my head and tightened the string until I could barely see. But that didn’t matter. What mattered was getting home. The loud, booming sound of thunder exploded above me and I picked up my pace. I wanted to get home before it got too bad. A heard a crash of lightning and I looked up, I could see if over in the distance, above the forest. I shivered; the cold was nipping at my exposed skin. I felt the material of my jacket cling to my skin as it was drenched with rain. It sent chills down my spine, and I was already cold. I started walking faster when I felt the rain fall quicker. The sounds of thunder and lightning crashed above me, and it made my ears hurt. The moon shone in the shape of a crescent, clouds floating nicely in front of it, making it brighter. It was my only light. The night was dark. My converse were too small for my feet, and my jeans were too tight for my liking. I clung to my purse beside me for a little warmth. It didn’t help much. I started thinking absentmindedly as I turned to cross the road. I didn’t bother looking left or right, it was late, it was night, it was raining, no car would bother to drive. Half way across the road, I was pulled out of my thoughts by the sound of a beeping horn and two bright headlights. I didn’t have time to move. My feet were glued to the tarmac and I panicked. But before I could do anything, I heard the crash before I felt it. Everything was black. tell me how bad this is please. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreRedSoxGurl Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 I hope this isn't horrible :\ please tell me what you think about it! "First Love" I sit and watch him, He's engulfed inside deep thought. His pencil quickly moves to and fro; Hopefully he remembers what I haven't forgot. We became much more than I expected, I never thought that I'd fall head over heels. He then tore my heart to a million pieces, But somehow, he seemed to know the pain I would very quickly feel. He claims I'm in his dreams, He's a figure in mine to. When I was with him I was always happy. Oh yes, that's very much true. I wish I could be her, To be blessed by his love day by day. He sometimes wonders if he made a mistake, I wonder if he realizes that he still takes my breath away. Now that we are close once more, I feel like the clouds have moved from the sun. "You will never forget your first love" forever rings in my head. Days apart may turn to months; but to me, he will always be that one. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
777 Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Well I definitely understand it and I like it ^ Repnessity for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParamoreRedSoxGurl Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Well I definitely understand it and I like it ^ Repnessity for you. thankss! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted April 17, 2008 Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 I have to admit i'm pretty shocked at myself, i really don't have any haha ! haha cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eefie Posted April 17, 2008 Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 I hope this isn't horrible :\please tell me what you think about it! "First Love" I sit and watch him, He's engulfed inside deep thought. His pencil quickly moves to and fro; Hopefully he remembers what I haven't forgot. We became much more than I expected, I never thought that I'd fall head over heels. He then tore my heart to a million pieces, But somehow, he seemed to know the pain I would very quickly feel. He claims I'm in his dreams, He's a figure in mine to. When I was with him I was always happy. Oh yes, that's very much true. I wish I could be her, To be blessed by his love day by day. He sometimes wonders if he made a mistake, I wonder if he realizes that he still takes my breath away. Now that we are close once more, I feel like the clouds have moved from the sun. "You will never forget your first love" forever rings in my head. Days apart may turn to months; but to me, he will always be that one. love that one alot (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STOPthissong! Posted April 17, 2008 Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 ok this is something I did really quickly just now. It's kinda cheesy so try not to laugh.... Our hands brush while we walk and I’m feeling butterflies I can’t help but smile when you look into my eyes. I gaze at you and you're looking at me do you feel what I feel? Those three magical words ‘I love you’ ring in my head Will those words ever come out of your mouth? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrLittleDecoy Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 I can't take it with these feelings inside It totally confuses me I hate it but he is on my mind And it's so sad he can't be here Why do i always love the wrong person? He doesn't know i am alive Forgetting him,that's the solution But i can't do it,he makes my fly It's killing me inside,i'm freaking out "I wanna go away!",that's what i shout I still hide my feelings,i still hide my tears I can't do anything,this heart slowly heals This life is unfair,he's so far from here I can't believe what i'm feeling is real He's just too similar to me I don't know who i am pretending to be That's when i realize this must be a dream When every second word i say is about him... ..i wrote it on tuesday at school haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammer Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I've been busy in the board's absence. Turned Your Back And so you’ve turned your back on us Shut us out and deal with all your issues Think you’re strong enough to help yourself But you just don’t realise the truth yet… You’re not strong enough To carry your burdens Let us share the load But not since you turned your back… Slammed the door behind you Shook the house to its foundations Your misery was so intense It’s tendrils felt by all around you… *chorus* Cut your heart open And let me inside If only you’d stay and listen But you’ve shown your back to us all So wallow in your own creation… *chorusx2* Cut your heart open Cut it open And let me heal it for you… Cut your heart open Cut it open And let me inside Cut your heart open Cut your heart open And let me inside! Dreamer *This song, in my head, is sung by two vocalists, so the parts highlighted in bold are sung by the other vocalist* Why don’t you dream yourself a dream? Come and stay by my side won’t you? We’ll dream ourselves a dream Throw your caution to the wind… I’ll enter your dream world And keep you company throw the joy and sorrow You shouldn’t have to enjoy it yourself So I’ll take your hand and let you guide me through… *chorus w/dual vocals* Cause I’m a dreamer So take my hand And let’s take a journey Cause I’m just a dreamer So let’s dream a new world… Woah… Woah… Dream yourself a dream Dream ourselves a dream… I’d like to sleep by your side Keep me safe during our slumber Let’s go far away from here And find our own dream to live through… *chorus* I’ll be your dreamer… Let me be your dreamer… I’ll be your dreamer… Let me be your dreamer… *chorus* *outro w/dual vocals* I’ll always be your dreamer So let me into you… Breaking You Down You’ve had it coming for so long So why try to resist me? I’m ready and steeled for battle So let’s lock horns Duke it out for the ultimate prize… I’m in the process of breaking you down I’m in the process of opening you up I’m in the process of cracking you open And consuming it all… Don’t try to run and hide Cause I’ll hunt you down I am the relentless hunter I’ll seek you out wherever you lie To the end of the earth if’s necessary… *chorus* I’m breaking you down Don’t resist me… I’m breaking you open Don’t resist me… So what are you gonna do about it? I’ll track you down and break you open You can’t escape from me So don’t even waste your strength… *chorus to end* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JadeIsRad Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I've been busy in the board's absence. Turned Your Back And so you’ve turned your back on us Shut us out and deal with all your issues Think you’re strong enough to help yourself But you just don’t realise the truth yet… You’re not strong enough To carry your burdens Let us share the load But not since you turned your back… Slammed the door behind you Shook the house to its foundations Your misery was so intense It’s tendrils felt by all around you… *chorus* Cut your heart open And let me inside If only you’d stay and listen But you’ve shown your back to us all So wallow in your own creation… *chorusx2* Cut your heart open Cut it open And let me heal it for you… Cut your heart open Cut it open And let me inside Cut your heart open Cut your heart open And let me inside! Dreamer *This song, in my head, is sung by two vocalists, so the parts highlighted in bold are sung by the other vocalist* Why don’t you dream yourself a dream? Come and stay by my side won’t you? We’ll dream ourselves a dream Throw your caution to the wind… I’ll enter your dream world And keep you company throw the joy and sorrow You shouldn’t have to enjoy it yourself So I’ll take your hand and let you guide me through… *chorus w/dual vocals* Cause I’m a dreamer So take my hand And let’s take a journey Cause I’m just a dreamer So let’s dream a new world… Woah… Woah… Dream yourself a dream Dream ourselves a dream… I’d like to sleep by your side Keep me safe during our slumber Let’s go far away from here And find our own dream to live through… *chorus* I’ll be your dreamer… Let me be your dreamer… I’ll be your dreamer… Let me be your dreamer… *chorus* *outro w/dual vocals* I’ll always be your dreamer So let me into you… Breaking You Down You’ve had it coming for so long So why try to resist me? I’m ready and steeled for battle So let’s lock horns Duke it out for the ultimate prize… I’m in the process of breaking you down I’m in the process of opening you up I’m in the process of cracking you open And consuming it all… Don’t try to run and hide Cause I’ll hunt you down I am the relentless hunter I’ll seek you out wherever you lie To the end of the earth if’s necessary… *chorus* I’m breaking you down Don’t resist me… I’m breaking you open Don’t resist me… So what are you gonna do about it? I’ll track you down and break you open You can’t escape from me So don’t even waste your strength… *chorus to end* .... Wowwwww they are seriously good! (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I was just thinking this thread was looking a little lonely ! Props James, lovely stuff "I'm in the process of breaking you down" made me shiver, for some reason. i never meant to get involved i should never drink on an empty heart or a wishful soul well regrets never got anyone anywhere and apologies never hurt but you hurt me anyway, i swear you'll be sorry, so sorry the last time i checked was the last time i closed my eyes and left and i didn't ask for what i saw and you never answered so i kept silent, but deadly serious you'll be sorry i won't get over this you built yourself up so high i can't reach and you're out of touch you'll be sorry you'll be sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clowdiaa Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 nice stuff jorgi and james i havent written much...but i have a poem in my yearbook that just came out...lemme find it and type it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 i have a poem in my yearbook that just came out...lemme find it and type it up do it. oh darling won't you save the last laugh for me i've watched and i've waited and i'll welcome any opportunity for retaliation with such glorious destruction i know you love it wasn't the disaster i expected but you destroyed me don't look down i'm climbing and i'm calling and i'm committing to what my future holds (without you) i'm grasping the concept of being alone i deserve everything it wasn't the disaster i expected but you destroyed me and you did it well don't explain yourself to me i believe every word you never said you never said a thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 jorgi!!!!! what have i told you about depressing poems?? also very good m'love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Haha ! Oh man, i can't write happy things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 fuckin emo kids Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_Sir! Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Haha ! Oh man, i can't write happy things. amen to that sister! I am not alone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrLittleDecoy Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Haha ! Oh man, i can't write happy things. neither do i. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaseyyann Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Haha ! Oh man, i can't write happy things. Me neither! Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarMaramore Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 ^ me either. and speaking of that... new stuffs! "Polyester Hearts" In my mind is concrete hyroglyphics everything is perminant and I'm afraid that I'll just be another page in your diary in my thoughts are pictures made Not for words you know that all of me Is still yours but I'm afraid that I'll just be another picture carved into your memory And here I am In the middle Dissagreeing with you and here you are on the edge of going way to far from "care" and we're afraid that there won't be anything left called "sharing and caring" and I'm afraid that I'll just be another page in your diary +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++MORE++++++++++ "Speaking of Victoria: Part II" - (there is no part I) [verse] I live so monotonously Afraid to break my daily routine and Any new ways of speaking Just bring down ways of treating myself To a nice moment Alone [chorus] But you lkove to make me hid eBut you know I can'e keep still But for you I'd try For you I'd try And Damaged describes me well A broken record I repeat myself But I can try (for you) I can try... [verse] This letter I write might be a rush to the head I've re-worded myself so many times I'm surprised it's something you haven't heard yet But you arn't speaking to me and I don't blame you because if you did You'd see [chorus] [bridge] to break me any further Might result without a consequence and I'd be taken by you If only you knew the Current circumstances "Sorry I'm not talking today" You say, with a grin But I'm still not amazed I'd fight for you I'd lie for you I hope you know that I hope you do [2nd Chorus] I'd love to make you hide But I know YOu can't keep still But I hope you'll try (for me) I hope you'll try (for me) and Damages describes us well broken records we repeat ourselves but we can try I can try... ************************ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linney Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 I love to write but I don't know if i'm any good at it Well, here it goes Like a cool summerbreeze, Like the sight of a rainbow, As pure as a waterfall, As innocent as a newborn babys smile, My love for you can be explained in many ways, Also in the simple way to say: I love you No one hears me when I cry, No one sees me where I stand They say that they get, How weak I feel But If they'd see me, when I feel it the most Then they'd turn around, like if I was some kind of joke Because there's no one who understands, that the only thing I wish Is for them to know that I excist The beautiful in your eyes, gives me strenght to stay The wonderful sight, makes me smile for several days But if you'd see me, see me as I am And not as an ordinary friend, because it's with you that I am I am more than anywhere else, I excist more around you But my heart is still torn apart, when you leave me alone to cry Please have some indulgence, since these poems are originally written in swedish, and I had to translate them. That's the reason to the bad rimes, they rime better in swedish I would love to get som constructiv critic from you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorgi Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 round of applause for all involved that was the most spectacular heartbreak i've ever seen and well i couldn't have done it without you take a bow and take a seat take away your attention from me settle down, settle in, i won't be here when you get home gather round and buy yourselves a drink and enjoy every last second you'll ever see i could've helped out an stepped in now step back settle down, settle in i won't be here when you get home drink up, drink it down your head'll hurt less without these memories drink up, fall down, fall down, i won't be here when you get home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defiance Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 its almost happy, i guess. its also most excellent. im expecting the next one to be fucking rainbows and butterflys tho. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
my.heart. Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 have i posted this? maybe, if i'm hurting, and leaning in to anyone you could save the day and, press on, press on to win tonight please don't get me wrong, but i don't want you seeing me right now. in our glory, we're nothing more than hopeless a dream without a cause a cause for your concern in our glory, i feel like our hearts touch yet, you're still nothing, now. for sure, if i'm losing and backing off to fear what's right i heard someone shouting press on, press on to win tonight i think you've got me wrong but it's the last time i'll be trusting you. in our glory, we're nothing more than hopeless a dream without a cause a cause for your concern in our glory, i feel like our hearts touch yet, you're still nothing, now. you said, nothing matters and i thought, i'd lose control you said, no one can fail and i thought, i'd lost control in our glory, we're nothing more than hopeless a dream without a cause a cause for your concern in our glory, i feel like our hearts touch yet, you're still nothing, now. ***** somehow i remember your face in a field or at least i remember the way i heeled i thought we reached heaven at quarter past eleven you dropped your coffee cup in time for me to make my mind up woah, don't you dare to stop i met my maker at the corner shop he held my hand there the way he touched my hair the way he smiled as if to tell someone they did good i skipped a season just to see how it felt holding my head above the world feeling senses melt i threw my laughs back to keep us on track i know that nothing ever feels the way abuse can woah, don't you dare to stop i met my maker at the corner shop he held my hand there the way he touched my hair the way he smiled as if to tell someone they did good an angel telling you to go back for your change Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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