The Song/Poem/Writing Thread

[MeLoN]

^Awww thanks you guys

[lifeisrandom]

SOmething I wrote like today in Frenchclass lol

 

The last great fall

 

Today is the day Im right back at the start

Stuck between lies and broken hearts

You’re right beside me whispering words

With every single breath you’re breaking down my world

 

Right where Im supposed to be then you came along

Inside my head screaming at the top of your lungs

Walking the road Im supposed to follow

But beside you it feels so hollow

 

*One day ill build a wall that everyone can climb

One day ill make myself make it all shine

But until Im finally there ill hide behind my wall

Standing in line for the last great fall

 

You made it seem so big

Made it seem so small

You made me feel like nothing

Nothing at all

 

I thought you were the key to everything broken

Thought you'd say those words that were left unspoken

I thought you'd save me like an angel should

You'd get me out of here like you said you would

 

*One day ill build a wall that everyone can climb

One day ill make myself make it all shine

But until Im finally there ill hide behind my wall

Standing in line for the last great fall

 

So where was your heart when I felt empty

Where were the stories you used to tell me

Where was the solution when the question kept questioning

Why weren’t you there when I couldnt stop running

 

You’re falling down trying to drag me with you

Remembering what you put me through

You know you cant fix it

Dont try to fix me today

 

*Today is the day I fixed what I believe was wrong

Im right back where my heart belongs

I found you..you're behind my wall

Standing in line for the last great fall

 

wow. that is amazing.

*claps*

[MeLoN]

^Thanks your stuff is amaziiing too =)

I really like "Soft Spoken"

[lifeisrandom]

^thank you!

[lifeisrandom]

wrote it for the yearbook:

 

i know it'll be sad to see you go but i know you'll be on your way to better days. so wipe the tears from your face, i cant stand to see you cry today. no this isnt a goodbye but more as a "see ya later". we wont split up, we'll be friends til the end. so wipe those tears from your face cause i wont ever leave your side. i'll love you til the day we die.

[Locomotion]

^ awsome

 

i wish all friendships were like that

[waitingxforxyou]

well this was weird' date=' the other night I was thinking about someone I'm really close to, but like as I was thinking about them, I had my eyes closed, so I was like half dreaming... I was seeing things while I thought. And then all of the sudden I found a way to write it. It's pretty boring but it was just weird how I saw it and wrote it within like a minute hahaha

 

Last night when I was dreaming

I built a bridge in my mind

it started in sections

and they slowly combined

One end was yours

one end was mine

and it broke right in front of you.[/quote']

 

it would be a shame if you did not add more verses to this...fantastic.

[waitingxforxyou]

wrote it for the yearbook:

 

i know it'll be sad to see you go but i know you'll be on your way to better days. so wipe the tears from your face' date=' i cant stand to see you cry today. no this isnt a goodbye but more as a "see ya later". we wont split up, we'll be friends til the end. so wipe those tears from your face cause i wont ever leave your side. i'll love you til the day we die.[/quote']

 

i like this a lot too, except for the 'friends til the end' part. then again, since you wrote it for the year book, i guess it worked. but if you did every did it for more than a yearbook, i'd take it out.

[lifeisrandom]

wrote it for the yearbook:

 

i know it'll be sad to see you go but i know you'll be on your way to better days. so wipe the tears from your face' date=' i cant stand to see you cry today. no this isnt a goodbye but more as a "see ya later". we wont split up, we'll be friends til the end. so wipe those tears from your face cause i wont ever leave your side. i'll love you til the day we die.[/quote']

 

i like this a lot too, except for the 'friends til the end' part. then again, since you wrote it for the year book, i guess it worked. but if you did every did it for more than a yearbook, i'd take it out.

 

my friend told me i should add that "cause we'll be friends til the end" part for the friends page of the year book.

[lifeisrandom]

pack your things and lets hit the road.

We're going to California where the sun always shows.

We'll drive through the plains of Texas

and concur the mountains of New Mexico,

we'll crawl through the deserts of Arizona.

California here we come.

Come on Come on

its time to leave home

pack your bags, we're hitting the road

to California, here we come.

[thorned_lilac_182]

Here is the song I'd written since 2002. It's about my classmate in high school who keeps rejecting me and only treats me as a friend such that her boyfriend is a total dickhead who keeps disrespecting. Sorry if it sucks but this is the way I write throug hmy personal experiences. This song is a punk beat that will end in 2 minutes and 40 seconds

 

VANESSA

 

Verse 1:

Why don't you accept the fact that your heart is my desire

But you always getting me upset and uptight

Take a look around and you're so blind

You need a sight to see how I'm anxious for you

So really girl

 

Refrain:

A stubborn girl like you will go nowhere so I'm the one who cares. The reason why I mentioning the hurting words is to help you. You're using another dude to make me coveteous.

 

Chorus:

Please leave him alone coz I know his attitude

I'm a total opposite of him, so face the truth

You always keep rejecting me, my broken heart comes crashing down

And stabbed from behind so as a friend is not enough coz I'm here to love you.

I keep relying on you but nothing happens in the end

 

Verse 2:

You have no reason to feel disgust to me

Coz your boyfriend is more disgusting than me

Look, he treats girls as a toy and I'm hurt if he

Always do it to you. Listen to me girl

Wake up to reality now, In fact he doesn't love you

 

(Repeat Refrain and Chorus)

 

Bridge:

He's so overboard so If my temper overwhelms

I gotta punch him in his face for you. My eyes

keeps swelling but I don't care. All I care is you

 

(Repeat chorus)

 

Coda:

 

My life was screwd up because of you

[thorned_lilac_182]

And this is another song titled DREAMING. This song is about daydreaming in first and really believeing that this dream will fulfilled with the girl that I love. In the end, A barrier came and she died unexpectedly caused to my inevitable frustration and hopelessness.

 

Verse 1:

 

I wish I could fly up into the sky

Like a bird who can travel different places

It's a great pleasure If I can fly

Because vehicles are not needed anymore

Just to see you in a distance of million miles away

And then when I'm with you, I'm satisfied for this day

 

Chorus 1:

 

You and me are supposed to be

No barriers can interefere us

Because of you my dreams achieved for this is what I believe

That's what we're deserving for, Together we open up the door

 

Verse 2:

 

No more maybes no more perhaps

I'm certainly blissful with you

How about you, Do you feel the same way with me?

I really think so, You gave me the key to unlock ourselves

 

(Repeat Chorus 1)

 

Bridge:

 

Suddenly, the barrier came to haunt us, which accidentally failed our mission

That barrier is the misfortune we don't expect, you've gone and passed away

I cried a lot because I can't do it alone without you, How can I get rid of this pressure with myself. I daydream a lot but in the end it doesn't matter. So should I quit or continue the game? Please tell me what to do.

 

Chorus 2:

 

You and me are no more

Tidal waves ripped you away from me

Should I regret that my dreams never achieved that in the end I beleive before

Is that what we're deserving for? All by myself hanging in an anchor

 

Outro:

 

Coz I can't fly anymore, who do you think will catch me If I fell to the ground

It's so disappointing to become hopeless so anyone could Take me Away

Take me Take Me Take Me anyway

[thorned_lilac_182]

This next song I wrote about this girl I knew about a year ago who meant alot to me. I wasn't certain about how she felt and left to go on holiday and never saw her again after that. If i'd had known that she liked me as more than a friend or a 'big brother' as she once put it, that will flatte me and things would have been different. So yeah, this is one of my cheesy love songs lol but the words mean alot to me

It's So frustrating

 

Verse 1:

I never thought i'd sink instead of swim,

I never thought I'd loose instead of win,

I never thought I'd be living my life this way,

I never thought I'd run out of things to say.

I never thought I'd get to see another night,

I never thought that things would turn out alright,

 

 

Chorus:

Isn't it ridiculous how things don't turn out as you plan?

Isn't it ridiculous how people always think they 'can'?

I've messed it up again, done it wrong once more,

Why am I suprised? By know should know the score.

I've stumbled and my grace had fallen,

And everyone ignored me when I was calling.

Well what a shame...they blew it all,

'Cos each and everyone failed to break my fall

I don't need them but think that I need you,

So c'mon and tell me what it is that I should do,

Now my life's ended up the way I never thought it would.

 

Verse 2:

I never thought I'd crash and then i'd burn,

I never thought I'd wait so long for my turn.

I never thought my life would suddenly all start to spin,

I never thought there's be no consolation prize to win.

I never thought I'd end up loosing everything,

I never thought I'd make it through anything.

 

(Chrous)

 

Verse 3:

I never thought I'd end up such a mess,

I never thought this could be life at it's best.

I never thought I could feel so alone all of the time,

I never thought I wouldn't have a thing to call 'mine',

I never thought I'd need 'crutches' to help me stand tall,

I never thought I'd be able to make it through it all.

 

(Chrous)

 

Verse 4:

I never thought I'd ever force myself to lie,

I never thought I'd feel such a need to cry.

I never thought my sign of life would fade,

I never thought this would end up being the only difference I made.

 

 

(Chorus)

 

Ending Verse:

Isn't it ridiculous how all the things I never thought,

Ended up being the only things I ever got?

Isn't it ridiculous how life changes every day?

Isn't it ridiculous that things have all turned out this way?

[thorned_lilac_182]

hey!!! this is my latest pathetic song WHAT IT FEELS LIKE. It's about how underdog I am when I was a kid. Sorry if this is a little sucky. I'm sure that some of you can relate to this one.

 

Verse 1:

 

I'm so crippled of exhaustion, noone is caring about me anymore

I feel like an island man who has no friends al lthe time

I'm so sorry for myself cause everyone hates what I'm doing

They are only there to bully and trip me

I feel so lame, I feel so useless

I should be a little egotistic to show my true skills

 

Refrain:

 

But those skills are useless if everyone is better than me

Should I do suicide or remain alive

I'm telling God that what is my purpose here

But I'm alwasy remain frustrated and pissed off

 

Chorus:

 

Don't you know what it feels like to be a pathetic boy like me

Everyone is making fun and trip of me

Even though my ideal crush but for her, she also hates me

like everyone else, like the sound of ring of the bells

 

Verse 2:

 

This is me, this is where I belong

Should I deny who is me? of course not

I'm only true to myself, I'm bearing this hurtest pain of ignorance

Even though I strongly dislike it, don't you know what it feels like

to hate this friggin life given to me

You're the one to decide if I should deserve to live or died long before

 

(Repeat chorus)

 

Bridge:

 

It's so frustrating that I'm so pathetic

Noone loves me not even my family

Not even the God above

I called myself an island man

I'm asking you this last question

Is there a chance for me to improve myself?

 

(Repeat Chorus twice)

[MeLoN]

^Awesome =D

[benzzz]

^You write lots of songs.

[lifeisrandom]

"i wish best friends lasted longer than high school. oh what fun that would be"

 

"her existance was about as sad as it gets, and we called her TRAINWRECK."

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never thought i'd get this far

never thought i'd learn guitar

never thought my life would be this way

i have great friends, yeah their great

roof over head, a warm place to sleep with something to eat

But some how it doesnt fill something thats missing inside me.

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i have a voice i'm scared to use.

yeah i speak my mind half the time

the other half is scared to shout out

in fear of being shot down by the gunpower of you.

[lifeisrandom]

hand in hand

heart to heart

your brown eyes are tearin me apart

you broke my wrist

and stole my soul

just so you know

the devil told

[Locomotion]

hand in hand

heart to heart

your brown eyes are tearin me apart

you broke my wrist

and stole my soul

just so you know

the devil told

 

thats very good

i like it

[Rogue Ninja]

My Gift, My Curse

 

My use of language, use of words

Often keeps me from being heard

For though they may try to pretend

Not all my words they comprehend.

 

The sense of logic I hold so dear

Is often the cause of my fear

For I am known to be afraid

When reasoning cannot be made.

 

My sharp, incisive, curious mind

Often puts me in a bind

For I am known to look too deep

Into things and so lose my sleep.

 

The knowledge of which I am so proud

Keeps me from joining in the crowd

For people fear, therefore resent

Those who are intelligent.

 

My point of view, mature, ahead

Seems to put me behind instead

For though I can, with problems great

With those of my peers I can't relate.

 

The insightful remarks that I make

May very well be a mistake

For people stare, glare, look away

Each time I have something to say.

 

My thoughts so deep and dark, yet bright

I will hold onto with all my might

For thought they leave me lonely, sad

They are the best things I have had.

[Thinzar]

Ah, I was wondering when you'd decide to post something, Claudia.

[Rogue Ninja]

I had to look for it. It's all the same stuff because I haven't done a lot of writing lately.

[MeLoN]

Wrote this today..again during french classs haha!

 

You would

 

I still don’t think I understand

I just hear the words

They hurt my ears like nothing can

They pull me back and forth

 

I’m staring at your empty smile

You pretend better than anyone I know

Holding onto your dying heart

Where did the sparkles go?

 

I’m sitting in an empty room

Cause nothing here is real

One by one we’re staring at you

We need to make you see

 

Even though you’re almost gone

You are still alive

In each and every single one

That carries around your smile

So don’t be scared to fall dear

Don’t be scared to lose

We know you cant fight now

But we know you would

 

The flames are joyfully dancing

They try to make me smile

But until you say that you believe

I wont even try.

 

We’re heading for the end now

Things slowly turn to grey

And with your last breath you tell me

“I believe in you no matter what they say”

 

Even though you’re almost gone

You are still alive

In each and every single one

That carries around your smile

So don’t be scared to fall dear

Don’t be scared to lose

We know you cant fight now

But we know you would

 

Even though you’re almost gone

We are still alive

You live you breath inside my heart

And inside my mind

 

I will smile because you said so

Live because you did

Ill treasure every moment every single dream

And especially for you dear granddad I will make them real.

[Locomotion]

My Gift' date=' My Curse[/b']

My thoughts so deep and dark, yet bright

I will hold onto with all my might

For thought they leave me lonely, sad

They are the best things I have had.

 

 

^This part is really kick ass.

That was very original and deep, i like it.

 

 

You would

 

Even though you’re almost gone

We are still alive

You live you breath inside my heart

And inside my mind

 

 

^ fav part

and that was very sweet mel

[Thinzar]

I had to look for it. It's all the same stuff because I haven't done a lot of writing lately.

 

Yeah, I noticed. That's why I didn't comment on the lyriics themselves this time. (See, I do remember some of your stuff! )

 

Mel, nice, I liked it.

 

 

*runs away from all these writers*