SmithRawks Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 ^ I like it <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 Thanks but i don't think it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 Thanks but i don't think it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 The ending is what grabbed me. I thought it was done well. But im not a professional editer either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 The ending is what grabbed me. I thought it was done well. But im not a professional editer either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 I like the one you posted on here, i thought it was really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 I like the one you posted on here, i thought it was really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 I like the one you posted on here, i thought it was really good Haha, i thought it was bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmithRawks Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 I like the one you posted on here, i thought it was really good Haha, i thought it was bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 Nah, it's pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 Nah, it's pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 i am digging this thread a lot. and someday i will post something on here because i loveloveloveeee writing. sometimes i'll just get a random spark of inspiration from out of nowhere and write something small and mean to turn it into something, but i never do. you guys can be my inspiration/motivational 'speakers'(writers). haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 i am digging this thread a lot. and someday i will post something on here because i loveloveloveeee writing. sometimes i'll just get a random spark of inspiration from out of nowhere and write something small and mean to turn it into something, but i never do. you guys can be my inspiration/motivational 'speakers'(writers). haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Emergency+ Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 Good song!! 3 little words haha at first I thought it was 3 small words and I was like "Isn't that song in a movie?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_HereWeGoAgain_22 Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 Hey watsup? yeh i write songs. im planning on starting a bdn so heres one of my sucky songs. so if this is good then you'll like my others Am I really Your Mistake Faded smile on your face No love can help us now im your official enemy Cuz i never let you go standing in the darkness coming from teh shadows Now I tried to save us Your slipping off Your Letting go. I came back to let you kno... That Ive tried my best to hide All my strange but many cries confused & its hurting me.. how brutal can i be?? Cuz i never let you go standing in the darkness coming from teh shadows Now I tried to save us Your slipping off Your Letting go. I came back to let you kno... This is my sorry & my goodbye Let me go. plz let our love die I cant stand to watch you lie and forget everything you deny. Its time to let me go im your mistake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire At Will Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 ^i like the chorus(i think its the chorus) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emergency32 Posted August 20, 2006 Report Share Posted August 20, 2006 Ok well i don't relate to this song in anyway, but i wrote it about someone i know and they ask me to write something that shows how they feel, and this song pretty much just tells it's self, so yeah. Scars on your arms I've seen you get hurt so many time you put up with so much in your life You make it seem like everythings just fine when i know all you really wanna do is cry You take one last look at these city lights before you leave all your memorise behind It's like you can't say what's on your mind so blocking it out is all you could seem to do you act like none of this matters when i know it's killing you your always saying no one seems to care about it everyone just wants to ignore it you wont let your arms stop bleeding cause you think it's the only way the pain will go away you make it seem like everythings just fine when i know all you really wanna do is cry It's like you can't say what's on your mind so blocking it out is all you could seem to do you act like none of this matters when i know it's killing you Your scars on your arms wont fade So you take one last look at these city lights before you throw everything away [END] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 ^ i dunno why no one has posted a reply about that yet, but i love it. it's just straightforward and i think it's pretty touching. bravo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 haha so now i'm convinced that i should post some stuff. i dunno, i like to do metaphorical stuff and a little more vague, not so straightforward. i know some people don't like that, but that's how i do! hahaha. I TAKE CRITICISM WELL, so GO AHEAD! hahah. i wrote this a while back...in March, according to the LJ entry i pulled it from. (i originally wrote it down on the back of a paper from math class. hahah.) wrote it during the school day, 'cause the power went out, so we just had time to chill and do whatever. and this was the result: What a mess, this consequence Not for the faint of countenance (or failure to face the truth in it) Full of Freudian slips (into halls and doors; onto desks and floors) As the fountain drips… Fall as grace from lips So sick and swift To fill the faults With lies and surrogates To fail the final warning Heed the ailing excess ages Consider this empty word, The twisted cadence of philosophy (confidence of sages) Satisfy the impulses Conceal the conscience Of motivation We are wasting all Stolen air on The lies we live And the final breath to fall Speaks the fullest of all; The fool, the prayer, the call. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 oh and another one from not too long before that one in the last post. just because i also found it in my LJ. hahah. i was pretty sick at the time, and just kept thinking and thinking. . . here's to health (or lack thereof)- lonely days in waiting rooms and memories of the smoke and fumes that burned our mouths with glory, whether by chance or fate. well the waiting room can wait; i'm here for now, reclining in cold with the hope of tv screens and leather chairs. but it stings to know that three days ago i had stars in my eyes, now i'm seeing the skies in everything; fade in, fade out, the drought of consciousness. keep close for comfort, and breathe out of time with me, asleep with the sounds of idle electricity. Of all the thrills, none can cure the chills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted August 24, 2006 Report Share Posted August 24, 2006 sincerely, I just adore your writing. Beautiful. very new, too. I wouldn't be surprised if there were maggots crawling through my eyes as I dreamed myself away from this broken home And I, I wouldn't really mind If I stood outside watching it burn on... down, anymore This home's decrepid ancient ruins of my childhood torn down It's caving in on me somehow and what were we when we were happy? Mommy's gone and Daddy's gone I'm too dependent to hold on here alone in this mess I once called home Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sincerely_ Posted August 24, 2006 Report Share Posted August 24, 2006 sincerely, I just adore your writing. Beautiful. very new, too. aww thanks. i like yours, too, especially this part: This home's decrepid ancient ruins of my childhood torn down It's caving in on me somehow and what were we when we were happy? i really like that last line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 :] Well, this might be kind of scary to you guys... or funny, since I'm just a teenage girl. But yeah... Thirsty, dry minded and thoughtless a blank piece of paper and an empty glass Don't give a fuck about politics I always cheat the system when I feel it suits me best The Brain looks for patterns is that why we're all in a line? Is that why we forfeit faces for masks half the time?- Why we sleep, sit, sleep, sit, pay our fines? Is it the systems disregard for individuality behind the curtain of crime? Why we stare at boards glued to desks for decades at a time taking lesson after lesson but never making up our own minds? If after all this, the system declines me for what I want to be it's home, home on the road a drifter's life for me Sick of the blind eyes and deaf ears, won't hear what I see and the larvae we call people wriggling wreckless through society This is our home and we call it free so why the fuck are there chains on your hands and feet? Sick of the patterns and the lives on repeat and the premies who haven't opened their eyes yet to reality This is our home and we call it free so rip those self inflicted chains off your hands and feet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lanizzle Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 jeeez Megan, I love that. it's so damn good!<333 and you're right, you do sound sort of evil. but it's good. hahaha =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiracy Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 :] thanks for reading it, Lane. Love, evil Megan. hahahah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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